【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《劝告信写作探秘》
劝告信写作探秘
文体介绍
怎样用英文写“劝告信”是本单元的写作辅导内容。“劝告信”是书信的一种，属于应用文文体。“劝告信”的主要写作特点是表达得体、简洁，让人能够愉快地接受。人们常说“助人为乐”，能够劝导别人走出困境，给别人一些力所能及的帮助，是一件多么值得自豪的事情啊！
任务聚焦
假设你是李华，收到好朋友李明的来信，他在信上提到他挑食，吃饭不规律以及爱吃快餐等，现在经常头晕，请求你的帮助。请你给他回信并提出相应的劝告，词数约120。
激活大脑
要想写好一封“劝告信”，通常有以下几个步骤： 1. 发现问题 (discovering the problems) 收到对方的来信后，首先要仔细阅读信件，以发现信中提到的问题。通过阅读李明的来信，我们发现他的饮食习惯不好：挑食，吃饭不规律，而且特别喜欢吃汉堡、炸薯条等食品。
2. 分析问题 (analyzing the problems) 发现问题之后，我们紧接着就要分析问题。针对以上问题，我们逐条分析：挑食，不利于营养的均衡摄入，会引起营养不良；吃饭不规律，容易导致胃病；经常吃汉堡、炸薯条食品，容易导致各类疾病，严重的还会导致癌症。
3. 提出劝告 (offering practical advice) 在发现和分析问题之后，接下来就要“对症下药”。建议对方要养成良好的饮食习惯：按时吃饭，不要挑食，注意营养的均衡，不要吃垃圾食品。 范文参考
Dear Li Ming,
How are you doing? I’ve received your letter. I’m sorry to hear that you’re always feeling dizzy. Maybe it’s because you don’t eat properly.
In my opinion, people shouldn’t be picky about food, because this may prevent people from taking in various minerals that his or her body needs. Besides, not having
regular meals may result in stomach trouble. So one should have regular meals. As for junk food, it contains less nutrition than vegetables or fruit, and it may cause many diseases even cancer. So, for the sake of your health, stay away from junk food.
In a word, if you want to stay healthy, you should have a balanced diet. And I hope to hear you feel better soon.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
篇二:《劝说性的书信写作》
劝说性的书信写作
文体分析{关于戒毒的劝说信300字}.
劝说性的书信写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体。先提出建议，随后给出充足的理由劝说对方接受你的建议，提出的理由要合情合理，用词要恰当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。
基本结构和内容
首先点明写信的目的是提劝说性的建议，然后讲清楚建议的事项、理由、具体建议和措施，最后再一次提出希望，礼貌结束全文。
常用句型
1. I’m writing to persuade you to…
2. First of all, I think it would be better if…
3. Here I’d like to give my advice on … / I would like to suggest that…
4. If I were you, I would…
5. Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.{关于戒毒的劝说信300字}.
黄金模板
Dear _____,
I’m writing to persuade you to ______.
First of all, I think it would be better if ______. Secondly, ______. Last but not least, ______. I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.
Looking forward to your reply.
实战演练
假如你是李明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到很难过。请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长同意开通教室内的网络。 注意：
1. 信中要包括下表中的所有内容；
2. 词数：120左右；
3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。
1 Yours, ______
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.
…
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming{关于戒毒的劝说信300字}.
语法填空
阅读下面短文，按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求，在空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空，并将答案填写在答题卡标号为31-40的相应位置上。
(break) down near a remote and poor village. Cursing my misfortune, I was wondering where I was going to spend the night when I realized that the villagers who had gathered around me were arguing as to should have the honor of receiving a guest in their house. Finally, I accepted the offer of an old woman who (settle) into a tiny but clean room, the head of the village was tying up his horse to my car to pull it to there was a garage.
I had noticed three hens running free in my hostess’s courtyard and that night one of them ended up in a dish on my table. villagers brought me goat’s cheese and When the time came for me to say goodbye to my friends in the village, I wanted to reward the old woman the trouble I had caused
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范文欣赏
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom. We know you’re afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites. Actually every coin has two sides. We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages.
First of all, I think it would be better if we can surf the Internet, because there is a wide range of learning resources on the Internet. We should make good use of it. Furthermore, we can broaden our horizons by reading various news online. Last but not least, as high school students, we are building up our sense of judgment. Given chances, we are sure that we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites.
I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming{关于戒毒的劝说信300字}.
语法填空
Key: 31. broke 32. who 33. as
34. settled 35. a 36. where
37. Other 38. merrily 39. for
40. her
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篇三:《劝说性的书信写作》
劝说性的书信写作
文体分析
劝说性的书信写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体。先提出建议，随后给出充足的理由劝说对方接受你的建议，
提出的理由要合情合理，用词要恰当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 基本结构和内容 首先点明写信的目的是提劝说性的建议，然后讲清楚建议的事项、理由、具体建议和措施，最后再一次提出希望，礼貌结束全文。
常用句型
1. I’m writing to persuade you to …{关于戒毒的劝说信300字}.
2. First of all, I think it would be better if …
3. Here I’d like to give my advice on … / I would like to suggest that …
4. If I were you, I would …
5. Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision. 黄金模板
Dear _____,
I’m writing to persuade you to ______.
First of all, I think it would be better if ______. Secondly, ______. Last but not least, ______.
I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, ______ 实战演练
假如你是李明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到很难过。请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长同意开通教室内的网络。
注意：
1. 信中要包括下表中的所有内容；
2. 词数：120左右；
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Ming
谈旅游景点介绍
文体介绍
旅游景点介绍属于说明文。说明文写作要特别注意知识的科学性、准确性和行文的条理性。介绍旅游景点时，要对旅游地的位置、历史和景点等进行简要的介绍；也可介绍别人对旅游地和景点的评价。
写作步骤
第一部分整体介绍旅游地，可以包括基本地理信息、历史人文特色或旅游的重要性和必要性等。
第二部分具体介绍地方特色，可以从风景、人文等方面入手，突出特色，把握重点。
第三部分指导游客衣食住行等方面的信息，并充分考虑游客的需要。学以致用。
实战演练
名词：schedule, scenery, snack, transport, sight-seeing, entertainment, dynasty, Terra-Cotta Warriors (兵马俑), city walls, Bell Tower, Drum Tower, Huaqing Hot Spring (华清池), Big / Small Wild Goose Pagoda (大/小雁塔), shredded pancake in mutton broth (羊肉泡馍) …
动词：stand, lie, locate, head for, enjoy, witness, feature, range, explore, impress, be lost in, distinguish (显示……的差别), desire (渴望) …
形容词：remarkable, domestic (国内的), convenient, available, precious, unforgettable, unbelievable, be famous for, bold, steep, famous, attractive …
写作
Xi’an, the capital of thirteen dynasties, distinguishes itself from other cities in the world. It’s a must-see for domestic and overseas visitors.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________{关于戒毒的劝说信300字}.
The public transport is convenient for visitors to reach any of their destinations. Visitors will surely find their desired relaxation there.
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom. We know you’re afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites. Actually every coin has two sides. We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages.
First of all, I think it would be better if we can surf the Internet, because there is a wide range of learning resources on the Internet. We should make good use of it. Furthermore, we can broaden our horizons by reading various news online. Last but not least, as high school students, we are building up our sense of
judgment. Given chances, we are sure that we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites.
I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
范文欣赏二
Xi’an, the capital of thirteen dynasties, distinguishes itself from other cities in the world. It’s a must-see for domestic and overseas visitors.
There are many historical relics in Xi’an, such as Terra-Cotta Warriors, Big Wild Goose Pagoda, Small Wild Goose Pagoda, well-preserved city walls from Ming dynasty, and the Bell Tower and Drum Tower.
In addition, the natural scenery is also attractive to visitors, such as Mount Hua, Huaqing Hot Spring, Lishan, etc.
Any visitor to Xi’an cannot refuse the attraction of hundreds of local snacks, of which the “shredded pancake in mutton broth” stands out. Visitors are offered hotels of different rates.
The public transport is convenient for visitors to reach any of their destinations. Visitors will surely find their desired relaxation there.
篇四:《煤矿安全劝告信》
劝告信
尊敬的矿工叔叔：
您好！
我听爸爸妈妈说，你们为了生产煤炭，向国家提供能源，常年劳作在地层深处，非常辛苦，“安全你我他，幸福千万家”，这句话，您一定觉得很熟悉吧，今天我为这句话所以给你们写封信，谈谈我的想法。
您是矿工应该和您的工友时时刻刻都团结起来，互相帮助，互相进步，为了矿山能够更快的发展进步，您们用自己的智慧和汗水造就了现在的辉煌。众所周知，在井下采煤是一件不容易的事，危险无时不在伴随着你们的左右。你们是家中的顶梁柱，是父母的心，是妻子的天，子女的山，工作当然要注意安全，否则梁折家遭殃，父母妻儿都会哭成一片，谁要是遇了难，岂不是妻儿无靠，人见人心酸呐，如果少伤了一个工人，那么就多了一个幸福的家庭，井下工作联系紧密，一环扣一环，不能有半点疏忽，否则可能会酿成大祸，谁的心里又会舒畅呢？只有注意了安全才会“矿福，家福，人福”，生命只有一次，对于我们每个人都十分重要，你们的生命更重要，安全健康永远是人生第一位，安全是生命的呼唤，安全是痛苦的呐喊，安全是血泪的写照，安全是亲人的期盼。
是啊!安全是我们的左手，健康是我们的右手，只有双手紧握，才能创造出幸福的家园，但是有些事都不尽人意，发生在我们身边的事例有很多，2004年逢春煤矿由于瓦斯突出，死去12人，那就有12
户人家都不能团聚，在不能说说笑笑，欢乐无比了，岂不让人心疼么，我知道您工作在充满烟尘，煤粉，积水，潮湿的环境中，经历的辛苦在随着时间的流逝消磨着你的生命，而且，在井下安全系数比较低，只要稍有不慎，就会引发事故，但您却毅然担起这个职责挑战生命，扭转经济，在平凡的岗位，做出不平凡的业绩。
多少年您用青春热血换来了家庭的幸福，矿山的繁荣，日日夜夜履行着安全规程，实践着人生价值，在您身上，我看到了“煤矿工人特别能战斗的精神”我祝愿您和其他矿工叔叔的生命与安全有保障，祝愿每一户人家团团圆圆，幸福常在！
祝：工作顺利，身体健康，平平安安
篇五:《劝廉信》
尊敬的各位公仆：
你们好！在生活的道路中，有人追名逐利，勾心斗角 ；有人信奉“人为财死，鸟为食亡”；还有人为民请命，鞠躬尽瘁。人的生命只有一次，如何实现人生的价值？
作为和平年代的平安卫士，上海好兄弟钱凌云、刘杰，赴汤蹈火、生死无惧、“手拉手殉职”，用年轻的生命演绎了这个时代的英雄赞歌！生与死之间，他们选择了死，选择了光荣，践行了“责任担当”，重于泰山！
社会主义的价值观不断教导人们要选择“对人生有价值的东西”。然而，一旦面对现实，我们好公仆的心理天平就会倾斜。尤其是当收入水平的高低差距超出了他们心理承受能力时，牢骚满腹。在他们眼里，腐败就像闹市里的臭豆腐，在别人嘴里固然臭不可闻，一旦塞进自己口里，顿觉香气扑鼻。
正是站在这样的高度，习近平总书记在工作会议上曾指出，要把为民务实清廉的价值追求深深根植于全党同志的思想和行动中，夯实党的执政基础，巩固党的执政地位，增强党的创造力凝聚力战斗力，使保持党的先进性和纯洁性、巩固党的执政基础和执政地位具有广泛、深厚、可靠的群众基础。这一重要论述深刻阐明了新形势下共产党人的崇高价值追求，科学揭示了党的群众路线的本质要求。如果每个人都站在道德的制高点要求官员，把维护公平正义的责任推给他人，自己却恣意破坏规则，视腐败为生活方式，政风不可能好转，社会风气也会江河日下。所以，开展社会领域防治腐败活动，早已成为一些西方法治国家的通行做法。我国香港特别行政区设立的反腐机构“廉政公署”里，就设有专门的“社区关系处”，负责全民的廉洁教育。
习近平总书记首次到广东考察调研时强调：“面临改革大潮，我们要做改革的弄潮儿，要有强烈的历史担当精神”。敢于担当是习近平总书记提出的新时期好干部标准的重要内容，是领导干部的基本素质和职责要求。领导就是责任，领导就要担当。担当的背后是品格，是能力；担当的本质要求就是坚持原则，认真负责。我们要向焦裕禄同志看齐，贵在艰苦朴素、严于律己，就是要牢牢拧紧世界观、人生观、价值观的“总开关”，坚持在其位、谋其政、尽其责，坚持立身不忘做人之本、为政不移公仆之心、用权不谋一己之利，坚持慎独慎微、慎言慎行，始终保持共产党人清正廉洁的政治本色。
俗话说：“精诚所至，金石为开”。在检讨中推行党的群众路线教育实践活动中，实行“知无不言，言无不尽”“ 言者无罪，闻者足戒”“惩前毖后，治病救人”。走对了路，那是充满阳光的平坦大道，走错了路，那将是充满坎坷困境的曲折之路，甚至误入歧途，难以自拔。
各位公仆，我们从清风阵阵的改革中，把好“廉”关，有则改之，无则加勉，祝大家工作顺利，万事如意！
作者
2014年5月