【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《作文技能》
各类文章的框架结构
※说明报告类文章
说明报告类用于解释一种社会现象或是一个社会问题。
这类文章的特点:要先用引言引出需要解释的现象或问题,写出主题句;其次,指出造成这一现象或问题的原因,并用扩展句对此加以具体说明;最后提出解决的方案、展望或是建议。此类文章写作策略:
☆ 提纲:提出问题—分析问题—解决问题
☆ 第一部分:引题
描述现象:说明事实;对于现象作出评论。
☆ 第二部分:说明产生这种现象的原因或是这种现象的具体表现形式
承上启下解释这一现象的原因:从几个方面进行解释并可以总结全段。
☆ 第三部分:观点段
表明作者的态度观点:支持这一观点的理由;得出结论。
说明文的基本模式
段落一:Nowadays, people have to face __________.(引出话题) It is true that ________.(对现象作出评论)
段落二:There are many reasons to explain it, but in general, it lies in three aspects. First, _____(原因一). Next, _____(原因二). Last but not the least, ______(原因三). 段落三:As to me, ______(作者的观点). On the one hand, ______.(支持的理由一) On the other hand, _______.(支持的理由二) Therefore, _______.(结论)
参考范文
College Students’ Job-hunting
Nowadays, many college students find it hard to get good jobs. (本段主题句,引出话题,大学生找工作难) For one thing, students cannot find jobs that satisfy them. (指出表现1,难找到称心如意的) For another, the students find the companies’ requirements becoming more and more strict. They feel a lot of pressure. (指出表现2,公司的要求越来越高)
Many reasons lead to this situation. (产生这种现象的原因) First of all, the market has become competitive. More and more college graduates are hunting for jobs while the jobs are limited. (原因1:市场竞争激烈) In addition, the companies like to choose the best among the candidates while they have more choices. (原因2:公司挑选严格) After that, some graduates do not want to do the basic work in a company but to be a manager and so on and so forth. (原因3:大学生不愿从基础做起)
As far as I am concerned, firstly, college students should change their attitude towards the jobs. (提出我的解决办法1) Next, the school should give some lectures to the students about how to choose a job. (提出我的解决办法2) In conclusion, whether you can find a good job depends on yourself. (总结我的观点)
※正反和利弊类文章
正反和利弊类文章要求考生对两种不同甚至是对立的观点,比较其优缺点,做出分析并得出结论。
从模式上来说,第一段先从整体上说明有两种对立的观点(优缺点),并先提出第一种观点(优点或缺点)并说明持这种观点(优点或缺点)的原因或理由(也可以第一段只提出两种观点,而把两种观点的具体论述放在第二段介绍);第二段说明另一种观点(缺点或有点)并说明理由;第三段表明自己的观点。
注意:文章比例安排,你同意哪种观点,可以对该观点加重论述比例;对反方观点找影响小、轻的列,别找重点反驳自己,以免自相矛盾。
此类文章写作策略:
☆ 提纲:观点(优点或缺点)—观点(缺点或优点)—结论
☆ 第一部分:开题,引题(找出合适的方法引出话题);
☆ 第二部分:详写利弊的一端,或是利,或是弊,然后再通过转承句说出另一方面,举例或
分项说明;
☆ 第三部分:结尾,表明自己的观点,利大于弊,或是弊大于利,也可举出解决措施。
需要说明的是,如果一开始定调是利大于弊的话,则在篇幅上以及语气上应该注意加强利方的说明和论证,如果定调是弊大于利的话,则说明和论证要偏向弊端。
利弊类作文的基本模式
段落一:Recently, people have quite different views on ______.(引出现象) Many people assert ____.(一部分人的观点) However, others believe _______. (另一部分人的观点)
段落二:Those who hold the first opinion think ____. In their view, _____. (解释第一部分人所持观点的理由) Nevertheless, the objectors claim that _______. They believe that ________.(解释另一部分人所持观点的理由)
段落三:As for me, I stand on the side of _______.(我的观点) On the one hand, ______.(原因1) On the other hand, ______.(原因2) Therefore, ______.(结论)
注意:也可以在第一段引出现象,第二段再具体提出两种不同的观点。
参考范文
Reading Selective or Extensively
Dofferent people will offer quite different ideas about reading.(本段主题句,提出不同的人对此有不同的看法) Many people assert that students should read selectively.(一部分人的观点) However, others believe that students should read extensively. (指出另一部人的相反观点)
Some may proclaim that selective reading is the best way to attain high efficiency.(具体说明第一部分人的观点) They maintain such an idea because students’ precious time for reading is quite limited.(扩展句:解释第一部分人的观点) In contrast, the objectors think that students cannot get a general view about the world without extensive reading.(具体说明第二部分人的观点) They argue that students should absorb all kinds of knowledge.(扩展句:解释第二部分人的观点)
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former opinion.(提出我的观点) Firstly, reading selectively is not equal to reading with discrimination.(陈述我的观点,原因1) In addition, students would have less time reading relevant books.(陈述我的观点,原因2) Last but not least, reading irrelevant books only wastes time.(陈述我的观点,原因3) In a word, reading selectively is the best policy in study.(结论句,提出我的观点)
※ 立论类文章
立论类文章在四六级考试中一般确立了要写的文章的主题,要求考生逐一说明,或用因果表示法,或者举例论证都可以,只需要最后得出与文章一样的结论即可。
实例考题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Don’s Hesitate to Say “No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1) 别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们应该说“不”
2) 为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
3) 该说“不”的时候不说“不”的坏处
﹡审题
问:Why should we not hesitate to say “No”?
﹡拟提纲
观点:We should not hesitate to say “No”.
分析: a. Some think it may cause the loss of face.
b. Some people believe that it shows their inability.
c. Some people are afraid that their refusal will end the friendship between them.
结论:We should learn to say “No”.
a. Lead to misunderstanding sometimes or even hurt others.
b. The friendship may break up because your friend will not trust you any more.
从这个思考过程中可以得出立论类文章的写作策略:
☆第一部分:引题。找出一个合适的引题方式,提出别人对这个问题的观点,提出自己的观点(同意或者不同意)。同时可以转承句子,引出自己的观点。
☆第二部分:具体阐述支持自己观点的理由,也可以从反面说不支持对方观点的原因。
☆第三部分:进一步说明自己的观点,可以指出观点体现在几个方面;也可以从反面说对方观点造成的不利后果。
参考范文 Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”
It is well known that in our daily lives there are many occasions for us to say “no”.(主题句:提出观点) On the one hand, when someone asks something that is beyond our ability, we should definitely say “no”. On the other hand, if we are asked to do something that violates the law, we must also say “no”.(具体指出两种情况)
However, there are many people who always say “yes” when they should say “no”.(举一个反例, 是文章“转”的部分) For one reason, they think if they say “no”, they will lose face.(原因1) what’s more, some people believe that it reveals their inability if they say “no”.(原因2) Furthermore, some people are afraid that their refusal will end the friendship between them.(原因3)
Above all, sometimes it is hard for us to say “no” when we need to.(指出有时我们会难以开口说“不”) As a matter of fact, it will lead to misunderstanding sometimes or even others’ hurt if we lie by saying “yes”.(造成的后果1) What’s more, the friendship may break up because your friend will not trust you any more.(造成的后果2) In conclusion, although we feel very sorry when we say “no”, we should learn to say “no” directly.(结尾句,得出结论)
此类作文的基本模式
段落一:It is well known that ___.(提出观点) As we know,____. No one can deny_____.(强调观点) Therefore, _____.(证明观点的正确性)
段落二:Many examples can be found to prove it.(提出事实,论证观点) Take as a typical example
that ____.(指出具体的例子) People____.(人们的习惯做法) In addition, ___.(其它相关事实)
段落三:As we can see, ___.(就自己的观点) There is no doubt that___.(再次强调观点) In conclusion, ____.(得出结论)
※ 综合类文章{技能作文}.
综合类作文是目前四级作文的主要趋势,即记叙—描写—议论类作文。这类作文的写作方法是先记叙一种现象或事情的发展,进行描述;接着列举事情的某一个特征或现象的某一个方面;最后提出自己的观点;自己打算如何做,也可以给出解决措施。
☆提纲:现象或事情—分析—结论或是措施
实例考题:(2003/9)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Day My Classmate Fell ILL. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1) 简单叙述一下这位同学生病的情况
2) 同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的
3) 人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……
﹡审题
问:What happened on that day and how did you feel about it?
﹡拟提纲
事件:It so happened that one day my classmate Susie suddenly feel off the chair.
分析: a. What did the teacher do?
b. What did the students do?
c. What is the result?
结论:In my opinion, our society is full of love, the most valuable and beautiful thing in the world. 从这个思考过程中可以得出综合类文章的写作策略:
☆第一部分:引题。描述或记叙某件事情或是某种现象;
☆第二部分:列举事物的某一个特征,也可以列举现象的某一个方面;
☆第三部分:说明原因,或者提出解决措施,或是提出自己的观点。
参考范文 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill
It so happened that one day when we were having class, my classmate Susie suddenly fell off the chair to the floor. Her face was so gray that I can still remember it clearly.(交代事情发展的背景,也是文章的总起句)
First everyone was shocked, and then the teachers and the students crowed together to ask how she felt. Miss Gao called the hospital at once, while other boys helped her to stand up and put her on Li Lei’s back. Some girls gave her some water to drink, others opened the door and helped Le Lei go downstairs.(具体描写当时的情况,大家的不同反应) Fortunately, the hospital is not far and Susie was sent to it within 10 minutes.(当时的有利因素)
As far as I am concerned, such an incident reveals that our society is full of love and warmth, and everyone will give a hand to those who are in trouble.(本段主题句:提出我的观点) Love is the most valuable and beautiful thing in the world.(扩展句:进一步强调观点) Without it, the world is just like a desert.(话题“转”的部分) Therefore, we should love each other and make the world a better place.(得出结论)
综合类作文的基本模式
段落一:Nowadays, _____.(陈述现象) As we can see, ____.(进行扩展或举例说明)
段落二:It is true that _____.(提出本段的观点或描写具体事件) First, _____.(说明原因一或是事件的第一个方面) Next, _____.(说明原因二或是事件的第二个方面) Last but not the least, _____.(说明原因三或是事件的第三个方面) Therefore, ____.(得出本段的结论)
段落三:In my opinion, __.(提出我的观点) As a matter of fact, __.(对观点进行强调) Therefore, I __.(得出结论)
※ 图表类文章
图标类作文是令人相当头疼的一种作文类型,很多同学看到图表后,不知道该从何下笔,因为图表提供的信息直观而丰富,正事因为内容太多,同学们反而分不清哪些是该详细描写的,哪些只需要简单带过。
图表类作文的难点在于要求考生在第一段中用描述性的语言写出图表的内容,而且主要应该是描写趋势,而不是简单地引用数据。
☆ 提纲:总结图表,确定主题(对图表进行概括和描述)—分析—结论
图表包括:表格(table),曲线图(line graph),条形图(bar graph),饼状图(pie chart) 要求:根据图表上的数字,找出所反映的社会现象,并从中看出主要问题和发展趋势。注意要结合题目和所给的提纲。
图表类作文的基本模式
段落一:According to the figures given in the diagram/picture/pie chart, we can see that ___ is increasing in the past _____, while ____ is decreasing.(从整体上对事物发展的趋势作概括)
段落二:Possible reasons for this are as follows.(问题产生的原因) On the one hand, ____.(原因1) On the other hand, ____.(原因2) Furthermore, ____.(原因3)
段落三:From what has been analyzed, we can draw a conclusion that __.(得出结论) As a matter of fact, with the improvements in ___, the trend will go on in the future.(提出改进的方法或措施) Therefore, ___.(最后再强调观点)
实例考题
Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no fewer than 120 words on topic: The Problem of Piracy. Study the following chart carefully and base your composition on the information below.{技能作文}.
1) 盗版现象日益严重;2)为什么在我国会有这么多盗版事件发生?3)我的看法
参考范文 The Problem of Piracy
According to the figures given in the picture, we can see that the problem of piracy is more serious in both the tape and video areas than the book area. In fact, there are more real books than pirated products in the book area.(从整体上对事情的趋势作概括:图书领域的盗版现象没有磁带和光盘领域那么严重)
Possible reasons for this are as follows.(问题产生的原因) On the one hand, the pirates can get a large amount of profit through these activities.(扩展句,原因1是利润) On the other hand, consumers lack consciousness to resist the pirated products.(扩展句,原因2是顾客的意识较差) Furthermore, the government has not paid much attention to it and no effective measures have been taken to stop piracy.(扩展句,原因3是政府的政策力度不够)
篇二:《综合技能作文》
四级作文框架结构
1提出问题——分析问题——解决问题
How I Finance My College Education
To study in college costs energy and time, as well as money. It is certain that college students should finance a portion of their own college educations. (说明现在的社会现象) However, it is hard for some students to pay their tuition and fees. (转折句,引出问题)
There are many ways to solve this problem. (本段的主题句,提出解决方法有多种) First of all, some can do part-time jobs to earn money. (建议的方法1:做兼职) Secondly, excellent students can get scholarships, which can reduce the burden from the family. (建议的方法2:拿奖学金) Finally, students may apply for bank loans. (建议的方法3:贷款)
In spite of all these, there are many ways for me to solve the problem. (对我适用的方法) First of all, I will try to get a scholarship. (方法1:奖学金) In addition, I can do part-time jobs to earn money and gain social practice. (方法2:兼职) Only in this way can I actually finance my college education.(结论句)
提出问题型作文的基本模式
段落一:Nowadays, people have to face _____________________.(引出话题) It is true that _________.(对现象做出评论)
段落二:There are many reasons to explain it, but in general, it lies in three aspects. Firstly, ___________(原因一) Secondly, ____________________(原因二) Thirdly, ________________(原因三)
段落三:As to me, _____________________(作者的观点) On the one hand, _________.(支持的理由一) On the other hand, _____________________(支持的理由二) Therefore, ________ _________________.(结论)
2 正反观点型:
Reading Selectively or Extensively
Different people will offer quite different ideas about reading. (本段的主题句,提出不同的人对此有不同的看法) Many people assert that students should read selectively. (一部分人的观点) However, others believe that students should read extensively.(指出另一部分人的相反观点) Some may proclaim that selective reading is the best way to attain high efficiency.(具体说明第一部分人的观点) They maintain such an idea because students’ precious time for reading is quite limited.(扩展句,解释第一部分人的观点) In contrast, the objectors think that students cannot get a general view about the world without extensive reading.(具体说明第二部分人的观点) They argue that students should absorb all kinds of knowledge. (扩展句:解释第二部分人的观点)
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former opinion.(提出我的观点) Firstly, reading selectively is not equal to reading with discrimination.(陈述我的观点,原因1) Secondly, students would have less time reading relevant books.(陈述我的观点,原因2) Last but not least, reading irrelevant books only wastes time.(陈述我的观点,原因3) In a word, reading selectively is the best policy in study.(结论句,提出我的观点)
正反观点或利弊型作文的基本模式
段落一:Recently, people have quite different views on ________________.(引出现象) Many people assert ________________. (一部分人的观点) However others believe ______________________. (另一部分人的观点)
段落二:Those who hold the first opinion think ________________. In their view, __________________. (解释第一部分人所持观点的理由) Nevertheless, the objectors claim that ______________________. They believe that ____________________.(解释另一部分人所持观点的理由)
段落三:As for me , I stand on the side of ______________. (我的观点) On the one hand, ________________.(原因一) On the other hand, ____________.(原因二) Therefore, _________. (结论)
注意:也可以在第一段引出现象,第二段再具体提出两种不同的观点。
3 立论型
Practice Makes Perfect
It is widely accepted that “Practice Makes Perfect,” which means that if only you practice more, and then you can be more skillful and excellent.(提出观点并加以解释) Therefore, we have to keep practicing a lot if we want to be successful.(强调作者的观点)
There are many examples to prove this proverb. (本段的主题句,解释原因) Take learning English as a typical example. (以学习英语为例) We do not live in an English speaking country, so we do not have such an environment. Thus we have to practice more in order to speak English fluently. While learning new words and grammar we also have to do a lot of exercises to know them by heart, just as is shown by the saying “practice makes perfect.” (具体地讲述在英语学习中如何熟能生巧) In addition, if we want to be an expert on computers, we also have to practice this every day. (简单带过另一个学习计算机的例子)
In fact, not only in theoretical study but also in practical learning, we have to practice as many times as we can to achieve our aims.(结论句,提出自己的观点,在理论学习和实践学习中都是同一道理)
立论类作文的基本模式
段落一:It is well known that _____________.(提出观点) As we know, ______________. No one can deny _____________.(强调观点) Therefore, ______________.(证明观点的正确性)
段落二:Many examples can be found to prove it. (提出事实,论证观点) Take as a typical example that __________.(提出具体的例子) People _______________.(人们的习惯做法) In addition, _____________(其他相关的事实)
段落三:As we can see, __________________________.(就自己的观点) There is no doubt that __________________. (再次强调观点) In conclusion, _________________.(得出结论){技能作文}.
4.图表类
总结图表,确定主题(对图表进行概括和描述)——分析———结论
Changes in People’s Diets
In the past five years, we can see some changes have taken place in people’s diets.(本段主题句,也是对整个图表的概括) The proportion of grain which used to serve as the main food of Chinese people’s diets has decreased by 4% in total food consumption.(分析图表的一个主要趋势) On the contrary, the proportion of milk and meat in people’s diets has increased, respectively from 11% to 13% and from 20% to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables reduced a little to 21%.(分析图表的另一个主要趋势)
These changes show that there are some modifications in people’s food consumption and people’s lifestyles.(从图表中得出的结论) The main reason, I think, is because of the improvement of people’s salaries.(主要原因1:薪水增加) With the development of our society, people are becoming richer and richer, which enables them to purchase more healthy food such as meat and milk.(扩展句:补充说明原因1) Secondly, people realize that a good diet is good for their health, which can make them stronger.( 主要原因2:认识到健康饮食的重要性)
In my opinion, people are living a better life now than ever before.(我的观点:人们生活日益好) We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food.(扩充说明我的观点) However, this does not mean that people should eat meat and milk as much as possible. (本段转的部分,强调我的观点) We should keep a healthy diet, because a balanced diet is very important.(结论)
图表类作文的基本模式
段落一:According to the figures given in the diagram/picture/pie chart, we can see that __________ is increasing in the past __________, while _____________________ is decreasing. (从整体上对事物发展的趋势作概括)
段落二:Possible reasons for this are as follows. (问题产生的原因) On the one had, _______________(原因一). On the other hand, ___________.(原因二) Furthermore,
_________.(原因三)
段落三:From what has been analyzed, we can draw a conclusion that _____________.(结论) As a matter of fact, with the improvements in _____________, the trend will go on in the future.(得出改进的方法和措施) Therefore, ____________.(最后再强调观点)
5综合类文章
综合类作文是目前四级作文的主要趋势,即记述—描写—议论类作文。这类作文的写作方法是先记述一种现象或事情的发展,进行描述;接着列举事情的某一个特征或现象的某个方面;最后提出自己的观点;自己打算如何做,也可以给出解决措施。
The Day My Classmate Fell Ill
It so happened that one day when we were having class, my classmate Susie suddenly fell off the chair to the floor. Her face was so gray that I can still remember it clearly.(交代事情发生的背景,文章的总起句)
First everyone was shocked, and then the teachers and the students crowded together to ask how she felt. Miss Gao called the hospital at once, while other boys helped her to stand up and put her on Li Lei’s back. Some girls gave her some water to drink, others opened the door and helped Li Lei go downstairs. (具体描写当时的情况,大家的不同反应) Fortunately, the hospital is not far and Susie was sent to it within 10 minutes.(当时的有利因素)
As far as I am concerned, such an incident reveals that our society is full of love and warmth, and everyone will give a hand to those who are in trouble.(本段主题句,提出我的观点) Love is the most valuable and beautiful thing in the world.(扩展句,进一步强调观点) Without it, the world is just like a desert.(话题“转”的部分) Therefore, we should love each other and make the world a better place.(得出结论)
综合类作文的基本模式
段落一: Nowadays, ___________________(陈述现象) As we can see,_______________.(进行扩展或举例说明)
段落二: It is true that______________.(提出本段的观点或描写具体事件)Firstly,_________________.(说明原因一或是事件的第一个方面)Secondly,__________.(说明原因二或是事件的第二个方面)Last but not the least,_________.( 说明原因三或是事件的第三个方面) therefore, ____________.(得出本段结论)
段落三: In my opinion, _______________.(提出我的观点)As a matter of fact,___________.(对观点进行强调)Therefore, I________.(得出结论){技能作文}.
6应用文:
1)几种书信的模板
1投诉信
Dear ____,
I am __________ (自我介绍). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about _____________.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is _____________(总体介绍). In the first place, ________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, _________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___________(感觉) to ______________ (抱怨的方面给你带来的后果). I appreciate it very much if you could ________(提出建议何请求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____ (设定解决事情最后期限).
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2询问信
Dear ____,
I am __________ (自我介绍) . I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding _____________(要询问的内容).
First of all ,what are________?(第一个问题) Secondly, when will _________?(第二个问题)Thirdly, is ______________? (第三个问题)
I would also like to inquire ________(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming{技能作文}.
3请求信
Dear ____,
I am writing to formally request to ______(请求的内容).
The reason for _____ is that _____________ (给出原因). I _________, so I ___________(给出细节)。
I would also like to request _____________ (提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ___________(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
4道歉信
Dear ____,
篇三:《专项技能作文批改(1人)》
再 向 前 跨 一 步
昆德拉说过:“生活是一棵树,上面结满了不可能的果实。”转身回望,当青春被岁月逐渐褪去了喧嚣浮华的颜色,我们是否曾因为自卑而不敢迈出人生的那重要一步,我们是否因为懦弱而与梦想擦肩而过?
朋友,别在犹豫了,再向前跨一步吧!等待你的将是铺满鲜花的康庄大道。 人生是一朵常开不败的花,一路走来,樱花伤逝,红莲绽放,或许纯真,或许伤痕,或许梦想,或许懦弱。当风雨袭来,荆棘刺来时,我们是否能坚持住心中那份执着,再向前跨一步?是的,只有再向前跨一步,才能通往胜利的征途。
还记得那个囚车上披头散发的谭嗣同吗?他大义凛然、昂首高傲的头颅,绝不向顽固派低头,他毅然跨出了戊戌变法的那一步,用鲜血换来民族的觉醒;还记得那漫漫黄沙路上的弱奇女子王昭君吗?她怀一幽怨琵琶,毅然跨出了出塞和亲的那一步,留下无语亲冢,却为华夏民族和平添上了熠熠生辉的一笔。他们面对那些难以预料的弯道,没有畏惧,再向前跨了那不平庸的一步,铸就了人生的不屈的辉煌。试问,不勇敢跨出人生那一步,等待我们的又是什么?我们终成为平庸之辈,富贵者沦为纨绔子弟,求名者堕落为虚妄之人,英雄者落为草莽之辈.我们终将被无情的时光抛弃在衰草残垣之中,遗憾无以明志。
让我们追逐那些名人的脚步,毅然迈出那一步吧,他们会为我们演绎如何迈好那一步。
首先,要怀揣那一份自信,自信是万丈的光芒,拄着自信的拐杖勇敢向前吧。他,城市忍者,自由奔跑者,跑酷第一人—-大卫.贝尔,在外界的质疑声中,依然坚信能在没有任何保护措施的情况下自由奔跑,跳跃于障碍物丛生的街头,无数的失败和受伤,他向前跨了一步又一步,终于换来了成功。试想,
少了那份自信,何来“跑酷?”
其次,我们要奋斗不止,拼搏不断。狄更斯说过:“顽强的毅力可以征服世界上的任何一座高峰。再向前跨一步,意味着饱受磨难后的再次出发。”哈佛小子’林书豪遭受的埋没,经历的挫折还不够多吗?然而又是什么造就了他DNA四连胜的惊人神话?是他日复一日的坚持和永不放弃的信仰啊!挫折过后没有再向前迈一步,何来“东部最佳球员”的响亮称号?
一星陨落,黯淡不了星空灿烂;一花凋零,荒芜不了整个春天;一次挫折,又怎能阻塞人生之花的芬芳呢?下一次,站在风雨交加的黑夜,仍然洋溢着自信,拼搏不止,再向前跨一步,等到你的将是黎明的灿烂。{技能作文}.
升格作文:
再 向 前 跨 一 步
昆德拉说过:“生活是一棵树,上面结满了不可能的果实。”转身回望,当青春被岁月逐渐褪去了喧嚣浮华的颜色,我们是否曾因为自卑而不敢迈出人生那重要的一步,我们是否因为懦弱而与人生中最甜的果实擦肩而过?
如果你还在犹豫中,那么朋友,请别再犹豫了,再向前跨一步吧!采摘属于你的最甜果实。
人生如花,一路走来,风吹雨淋,荆棘遍布,经历绽放与伤逝的轮回,有过伤,有过痛。然而,我们还有梦,只要我们坚持住心中那份执着,再向前跨一步,迎接我们的便是涅槃后的艳压群芳。
还记得那个囚车上披头散发的谭嗣同吗?他大义凛然、抬着高傲的头颅,绝不向顽固派低头,他毅然跨出了戊戌变法的那一步,用鲜血换来民族的觉醒;还记得那漫漫黄沙路上的奇女子王昭君吗?她怀一幽怨琵琶,毅然跨出了出塞和亲的那一步,留下无语青冢,却为华夏民族和平添上了熠熠生辉的一笔。他们面对那些难以预料的弯道,没有畏惧,再向前跨出了那不平庸的一步,铸就了人生不屈的辉煌。试问,我们在逐梦路上遇到挫折的时候,如果不勇敢跨出这一步,等待我们的将会是什么?是碌碌无为,是堕落虚妄,抑或是一介草莽——我们终将成为平庸之辈,被无情的时光抛弃在衰草残垣之中,空悲切!
那么,就让我们追逐那些名人的脚步,毅然地再向前跨一步吧!
再向前跨一步,我们需要怀揣一份自信。自信是万丈的光芒,拄着自信的拐杖勇敢向前吧。他,城市忍者,自由奔跑者,跑酷第一人—-大卫.贝尔,坚信能在没有任何保护措施的情况下自由奔跑。他跳跃于障碍物林立的街头,经历了无数的受伤和失败。在外界的质疑声中,他依然守着心中的信仰,自信满
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