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【 – 写作指导】

篇一:《智课网：十天突破雅思写作三种神句式》

雅思写作考了N多次，是时候抛弃你的简易式啦!本文智课网小编跟大家分享3种使用的雅思写作句式，让你的写作瞬间逼格提高N多档次!

本文主要跟大家分享三种real实用的雅思写作句式。分别是前进式，倒退式以及中间式。这些句型在作文主体论证时都非常有用，熟练掌握能帮大家作文提升一个level！

一、前进式(用来论证advantage好的方面)

1. benefit from 从……当中获益

例句：Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure, while learning other language subsequently will be easier from them.(剑9例句)

详解：【注意】上面这个短语与is beneficial to……(对…有益)的主语和宾语位置正好相反，而且地道英文中有时还可以把它们放在文章的不同位置交替使用，以实现句式多样化。

【反义】suffer from… 遭受…… 【反义】be damaged by… 被……破坏

2. invest in 对…投资

例句：In many countries, employees are encouraged to invest in private pension (养老金)plans. 详解：【近义】fund sth.

例句：This affordability is further enhanced by the use of credit cards and loans in order to fund travel, especially for holiday purposes.(剑8例句) 【对比】be seriously underfunded资金严重不足的

【相关】impose a high tax on sth. 对某事物征收重税，例句：为了促进公民的健康有一些欧洲国家have imposed a high tax on junk food, 俗称“肥胖税”(fat tax)

例句：As well as physical activity, high tax penalties (n.处罚)could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol.(剑9例句)

3. promote creativity / environmental awareness / healthy lifestyles /gender equality / cultural diversity / economic growth / sustainable development / healthy competition 促进创造力/环境意识/健康的生活方式/性别平等/文化的多样性/经济增长/可持续发展/良性的竞争例句：(i)

Although the city has invested millions of pounds in museums and art galleries (美术馆，

画廊)，it has done little to promote the development of healthcare services.

(ii) Healthy life balance and exercise are strongly promoted by the NHS(英国的国家医疗服务体系).(剑9例句)

详解：【相关】stimulate creativity / imagination / economic growth 激发创造力 / 激发想象力 /

刺激经济发展

【反义】hinder the development of …阻碍某事物的发展【反义】is / are counterproductive 对达成目标具有阻碍作用

4. enhance the efficiency and effectiveness of …提高某事物的效率和效用(如果只是需要讨论效率或者只是需要讨论效用，则可以从efficiency 和

effectiveness 里选择对应的一个) 例句：The main question about distance education is whether it enhances the efficiency and the effectiveness of learning.

例句：Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.(剑桥例句)

【反义】deny ab. access to something 让某人无法获取或使用某种资源

6.enrich someone’s learning(or work / cultural / artistic /

life)experience 丰富某人的学习(或者工作的 / 文化的/ 艺术的/ 生活的)体验例句：Working for a period before going to university can enrich their life experience and make them more independent.

详解：【相关】improve their social skills 提高他们的社会交往能力

【相关】gain practical experience 获得实践的经验

7. is / are responsible for something (or doing something )有去从事某事的责任或者应对某事负责

例句: (i) Parents are responsible for teaching their children right from wrong (教他们的孩子分辨是非)

(ii) Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread

problem and I think that modern lifestyles are responsible for this. (剑桥例句)

详解：【反义】be exempt from doing sth. 被免除某种责任，比如You are exempt from taking IELTS. 不过当然这是不可能的。

8. help sb. to release stress and tension 帮助某人(例如)students / workers / employees /us )释放压力和紧张情绪。

例句：The program is designed to help people to release stress and tension caused by work or lifestyle-related activities.

详解：【相关】leisure time 休闲时间

例句：Today’s sedentary lifestyle(缺乏运动的生活方式)and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of

either our work or our leisure time.(剑9例句) 【相关】leisure activities休闲活动

【反义】increase(或者raise)their stress levels 导致他们/她们的压力变得更大

9.is / are both educational and entertaining 既具有教育性又具有娱乐性，寓教于乐的例句：Many museums offer a wide range of (广泛的)activities that are both educational and entertaining.

词，而是作及物动词，指降低某事物的发生率)

例句：It could also possibly reduce the crime level in the high school age group.(剑9例句) 详解：【相关】prevent crime 预防犯罪(动宾短语)

【相关】crime prevention 对犯罪的预防(名词短语) 【相关】reform criminals 改造罪

二、倒退式(用来论证disadvantage消极的方面)

1. damage the environment (or someone’s health / someone’s self-confidence)破坏环境(或破坏

某人的健康/ 打击某人的自信)

例句：A regular diet of fast food can damage children’s health. 详解：

【相关】is damaging to…对某事物有害

例句：Some people think having school experience at a young age may be damaging to a child’s development.(剑桥例句)

【区分】国内同学们在IELTS作文里经常混淆damage 和destroy 这两个词，其实它们的区别很明确：damage sth. 是常规意义上的破坏，如果及时采取措施就仍然有可能去改变或者减轻这种破坏所带来的影响。而destroy sth. 则强烈地暗示该破坏已经到了beyond repair 的程度，无法再减轻或者修复了。比如说某种情况damage air quality ，它也许会导致PM2.5数值较高。但如果说某种情况destroy air quality，基本就要戴贩毒面具才能出门儿了。又比如你看到报纸上报导一座历史建筑被damaged，那么你可能会在这栋建筑里找到“×××到此一游”之类的不雅留言或者在墙上找到一些cracks(裂缝)，但是

如果你看到新闻里说一栋历史建筑被destroyed，那么你就只能通过照片区永久地怀念它了(拆毁建筑还有个特定写法叫demolish a building，咱们在Day3里已经学过了)。

2. cause anxiety (or stress / misunderstanding / resentment / climate change / traffic accidents /

safety concerns) 导致焦虑(或者压力/ 误解/ 怨恨/ 气候变化/ 交通事故/ 关于安全的担忧)

例句：Many scientists believe that global warming is mainly caused by greenhouse gas emissions (名词短语，对于温室效应气体的排放)from energy production，transport，industry and agriculture.

详解：【相关】result in …导致某种结果(动词短语) 【对比】prevent sth. 防止某事物的发生

【对比】prevent sb. from doing sth. 防止某人做某事

例句：Any kind of spare time charity work will prevent them from sitting and doing nothing.(剑9例句)

3. face fierce competition面对激烈的竞争(这个短语里的face 是及物动词，如果非要写得

更难则是be confronted with fierce competition)

例句：Fierce competition between companies means that consumers are better informed about the environmental impact of the products that they buy.

详解：【相关】…is increasingly competitive. (某一领域)竞争越来越激烈

【对比】depend on co-operation and communication要依靠合作与交流

4. lack practical experience (or social skills / motivation / team spirit / a sense of community

/funding /equal opportunities)缺乏实践经验(或者社会交往技能/ 动力/ 团队精神/ 社区感/ 资助/ 平等的机会)，请注意在这些短语里lack 都是作及物动词例句：Some employees lack the social skills needed to co-operate with their co-workers.(请注意这句话里lack the social skills 后面使用了过去分词短语作为后置定语，修饰social skills) 详解：【注意】lack 作动词时它的后面直接跟宾语，它和宾语之间不要使用任何介词;而当

lack 作名词时它和宾语之间则通常都要使用介词of。

例句：Those who believe teenagers are the happiest people cite their lack of

responsibilities as a significant factor.(剑9例句)

【反义】possess the skills needed to do sth. 拥有从事某种任务的技能例句：Many school are eager to hire employees who possess the organizational skills

needed to complete the duties associated with teaching.

5. restrict someone’s creativity / someone’s imagination / someone’s freedom / the development

of something 限制创造力(或者想象力/ 某人的自由/ 某事物的发展)

例句：They argue that school uniforms (校服)restrict students’

creativity and freedom of choice. 详解：【反义】encourage creativity鼓励创造力的发展【反义】offer sb. greater freedom 给某人更大的自由【反义】promote the development of…促进某种事物的发展【比较】satisfy sb’s curiosity 满足……的好奇心

6. find something frustrating 对某事物产生挫折感，感到很泄气

例句：Students will not commit themselves to learning if they find their school experience frustrating.

详解：【反义】find sth. stimulating 感到某事物很能激发自己的兴趣【反义】find sth. motivating 感到某事物能够给人动力【反义】find sth rewarding 感到某事物很有回报

【语法】这四个短语里sth. 后面的形容词都是作宾补，参见p.80，请记住find sth. +

形容词这个有用的结构。You’ll find it very helpful.

例句：(i) Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super

salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists.(剑桥金句) (ii)Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to

readopt to readopt to (重新去适应) an academic environment.(剑桥例句)

7. is / are treated unfairly 受到不公正的对待

例句：Employment discrimination occurs when job applicants and employees are treated unfairly based on their race, gender or age.

篇二:《新托福综合写作满分答题步骤》

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新托福综合写作满分答题步骤

摘要：下面介绍的是新托福综合写作满分答题步骤，供大家参考。

托福写作一共有两篇作文，第一篇作文是综合写作，第二篇作文是独立写作。所谓综合写作就是要求你在3分钟时间浏览一篇材料阅读，然后听一篇材料，这篇材料和刚才看的是一关于一个话题，一般是相悖的观点，然后根据这两篇材料写一篇大概200字的文章。最后你写的作文主要内容就是概括这两篇材料，分别描述它们的观点。说了这么多，就和小编一起来实战吧。我们以2011年12月17日北美新托福考试的综合写作真题为例，小编将按时间顺序一步步地将同学们带入托福综合写作环境中。

在考试前,考生会看到关于托福综合写作的英文题目说明，大意是要你用3分钟扫读一篇文章然后听一段听力材料，最后用20分钟写一篇150 to 225 words的作文。

接下来屏幕上会出现一篇文章，左下角会出现一个3分钟的倒计时时间显示。考试正式开始。

第一步扫读文章

Passage：

A recent new incentive program implemented by a major corporation aims to foster healthy lifestyles among its workforce. The potential benefits are numerous, though this article will focus on three of them.{healty,lifestyles的英文作文}.

The first benefit is obvious: the incentives will be a material aid in helping employees quit smoking and lose weight. The most commonly cited reason for failure to break bad habits is lack of a support network, because smoking and an unhealthy diet are quite common. But if an entire workforce is made of non-smokers or people who eat healthy food, every employee can break their bad habits.

Another powerful set of incentives for developing good habits is that the company will partially cover the payment of the insurance for those with healthier lifestyles. In effect, the amount saved from paying for insurance is a raise in salary. An added benefit could be offering them additional vacation days.

The third benefit should accrue to the company. Most workers with a healthy lifestyle are not absentee workers. Likewise, workers with good health tend to work far more efficiently. They take no smoke breaks, are less susceptible to nagging coughs and colds, and generally have more energy than their unhealthy counterparts. In turn, the company can make more profits and save the health-related costs. All in all, this incentive program for employees’ health is a win-win proposition for company and staff alike.

阅读文章时，应注意：

1)进行“扫描式”阅读，把文章主题和每段中心论点快速一扫而过，并随时准备速记重点，切忌“精读”，否则时间不够。

2)把握好每段重点，这可以帮助你从容地推测后面听力材料的要点。这种方式尤其适用于听力不够好的考生。

第二步记录文章重点

假说

【原文摘要】 3 benefits: incentive program / healthy lifestyles ← corp~

【笔记转述】 The reading passage mainly discusses three benefits of an incentive program carried out by a company to promote healthy lifestyles among its employees.

根据1

【原文摘要】 company → part~ $ → insurance→↑ vacation → healthier

【笔记转述】 For those with healthier lifestyles, the company will pay part of their insurance and provide them with additional vacation time.

根据2

【原文摘要】 ×smk & ↓ wgt

【笔记转述】 The first benefit of the program is to facilitate employees to quickly quit smoking and lose weight.

根据3

【原文摘要】 health √ → ↑ 率 →↑ 利 → company

【笔记转述】 Employees with good lifestyle habits work more efficiently and make more profits for the company.

记录文章重点时，应注意：

1)重点一般分布在每段的首尾，前后呼应，逻辑性强：段首陈述每段主题，段尾得出结论。

2)笔记重点可按照“假说→假说根据1 →假说根据2 →假说根据3”的模式记录，这也是答题模板，建议大家熟记。在新托福考试听力部分结束后的10分钟休息时间内，考生最好在草稿纸上面先写好这个模板。

3)笔记内容要短而精，切忌抄句子。考生开始写作时，文章会再次出现在题目和答题区旁边。

本文主要讲解如何做好托福综合写作中的阅读素材的步骤和注意点，帮助大家在托福写作考试中把握好答题重点和方法。关于听素材的部分，笔者建议参考托福听力的技巧。

以上就是小马小编为大家搜集整理的新托福综合写作满分答题步骤，希望考生们可以认真学习。如果想了解更多最新托福考试资讯，请关注小马过河国际教育官方网站托福频道，关于本文有任何疑问，都可以和小马过河专家联系。

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