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Passage 1：
Mrs. Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and was very tired during the day
to do anything, even the simple things that she was used to enjoy doing. She had
headaches more often, it prevented her from reading or watched TV. The more she
thought about her conditions, the more worse she felt. At last she went to see her doctor,
whom she had known for years. The doctor listened to his heart and said, “There is
nothing seriously with you, and I accept the fact that you don’t feel well. Now I’ll give
you some pills that will help. Come tomorrow morning and tell me how you felt.”
Passage 2:
My car just wouldn’t move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few
miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little
before accepting I’d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone.
Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field
with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when
a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had no
telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to
go to repair my car.
Passage 3:
There are advantages for students to work while study at school. One of them
is which they can earn money. In many cases, students working to earn money for
their own use. Earning their own money allow them to buy anything as if they please.
They need not have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by
the money. And some students from the poor families may also save the money for their
college education or another purposes. However, some teachers and parents against this
idea because they are worry that part-time jobs will affect their study more or less.
Passage 4：
Of all my teachers, Mr. Smith is one who impresses me most. Although he is 40
and ordinary, but he looks very young. And he is one of the most popular teacher in our
school. Comparing with other teachers, he pays more attention to his way of teaching.
He tries various ways make his classes interesting. In her opinion, we should not only
know “what” but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediate, he
encouraged us to think by ourselves when he puts forward questions. Under his help, we
have learned how to analyze and settle problems. How a wonderful world of “why” he
leads us to!
Passage 5:
One afternoon on my way to home, I stepped on something and fell heavy to the
ground. I stood up and found that it was the banana skin that caused my fall. I got very
angry and kicked it away. Suddenly I stopped and thinking, “If someone else steps on
it, they will also fall as me. I don’t want the same thing happen again.” So I quickly
went back to the place that the banana skin was. I picked it up and threw it into a
dustbin. While I got home, I told my parents what had happened. They praised myself.
And my mother said with a smile, “You have done all what you should do.”
Passage 6:
As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some
advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination
by surf the internet before you set out. You needn’t take too much cash. Though it can
be very convenient to pay in cash, use cheques is much more reliable. In additional,
it will be wise for you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to
travel abroad, you’d better understand the cultural diversity. Keep this in mind that being
polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.
短文改错答案
Passage 1：
Mrs. Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and was very tired during the day
asleep too
to do anything, even the simple things that she was used to enjoy doing. She had
headaches more often, it prevented her from reading or watched TV. The more she
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thought about her conditions, the more worse she felt. At last she went to see her doctor,
whom she had known for years. The doctor listened to his heart and said, “There is
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nothing seriously with you, and I accept the fact that you don’t feel well. Now I’ll give
serious but
you some pills that will help. Come tomorrow morning and tell me how you felt.”
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Passage 2:
My car just wouldn’t move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few
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miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided ∧walk around a little
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before accepting I’d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone.
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Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field
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with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when
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a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had no
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telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to
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go to repair my car.
Passage 3:
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