【 – 高中作文】
篇一:《作文常用语(正式)》
作文常用句型
(Writing is easy . I can write in English. Let’s work hard.)
1. name first/ given name (名) last/ family name(姓) My name is …Mary Brown. 姓和名分开写，首字母大写
2. age
I’m thirteen years old . (year 加s) My age is thirteen.
3. my hobbies like + 动词ing形式（表示喜欢干某事） I like reading books. Reading enriches the mind.
I like playing sports /volleyball/basketball/ping-pong…
It makes my body healthy and strong.
4. my favorite
My favorite subject is P.E. because it’s relaxing/interesting/fun… My favorite subjects are biology and history
I like English best.
He likes geography and math best.
My favorite color is green.
My favorite food is bread.
My favorite sport is soccer.
My favorite teacher is Mr. Smith.
My favorite day is Sunday. It’s the first day of a week.
5. my school day
I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have breakfast at 7:00.
I go to school at 7:30. I have four classes in the morning and four classes in the afternoon. My favorite day is Tuesday because I have P.E. and art on Tuesday. P.E. and art are my favorite subjects. My P.E. teacher , Mr. liu, is great fun. He often plays
sports with us. My classes finish at 18:00. After that I often, I go home and have supper.
6. birthday
My mother’s birthday is on March 4th .
My father’s birthday is on December 3rd .
My birthday is on January 2nd .
I have a birthday party on the evening of January 2nd .
Will you come to my birthday party?
7. breakfast lunch supper
I have bread , milk and some fruit for breakfast.
I have rice, eggs and vegetables for lunch.
8. my family members
There are four people in my family . They’re my father, mother, sister and me. My father is a teacher. He works in a school. He teaches math. My mother is a clerk. She is very kind. My sister and I are middle school students. We are in the same school. She likes playing ping-pong and I like playing baseball . We often play sports after school. I love my family.
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篇二:《我们家的常用语》
我们家的常用语
在成长的过程中，家人表达对我们的爱的方式有很多种，比如一个动作、一个眼神、一桌美味但我觉得，最直接、最常用的就是一句句话，或严厉，或温暖。
父亲的常用语
在大多数人心中，父亲就是一个严肃的形象，父亲所说的话也让人感觉不到爱。那是因为，他们没有去仔细地体会爱。
在取得一点成绩后，我兴高采烈的飞奔回家，将这个好消息告诉父亲，可是他却说：“才这一次就骄傲了？前头还有好多困难等着你解决呢！这只是一个开始而已！”在失败后，我垂头丧气，父亲却说：“这点小困难就把你吓倒了？那在以后，遇到了更大的困难，你该怎么办？”
是的，父亲的话总是能叫我保持清醒的头脑去面对成功与失败，进而迈向未来。
母亲的常用语
母爱如水，往往温柔细腻。母亲的话也如涓涓细流，滋润着我的心田。 在吃饭时，母亲总会说：“ 多吃点、多吃点，有了好的身体才能更好的学习。”在长时间的学习之后，母亲会说：“歇一歇吧，明天继续做，别累着了。”每当我将别人的缺陷当做笑话讲给母亲听时，母亲便会严肃地说：“人家有缺陷，又不是人家的错，他们也难过，不要嘲笑别人！”
是的，母亲的话总是温暖着我，它让我健康成长，教我做一个正直的人。 奶奶的常用语
提起奶奶，很多人心中会冒出一个词：啰嗦！有人甚至叫啰嗦的人“婆婆嘴”，可是，奶奶一句句啰嗦的话语中，却蕴含着对我的无限关爱。
奶奶常说的一句话就是：“孩子，这么冷，怎么还穿这样少？快去加衣服！受了冻要生病的！”然后就是：“你们过马路要注意车啊！要小心一点！”诸如此类，很多很多
家人的话一句句交织，最后成为了一个字——爱。在成长的道路上，因为有了这些充满爱的话语，我便能勇敢地面对一次次的困难，然后走向属于我的成功！
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篇三:《作文常用语》
1：The time flies, we haven’t seen each other for a long time. All the things here are going on pretty well, I just miss you so much!
2：It is so great to hear from you again.
3：Long time no see!
4：I hope this letter finds you in good health and good spirits. 5：I trust that everything is going smoothly for you.
6：It is a great pleasure for me to have this wonderful chance to put pen to paper and send greetings to you.
中间：
Give advice:
In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following action: I hope you will not find it too forward for me to suggest that you…
In my experience, it seems that _______ would make sense in your situation.
At the risk of overstepping my boundaries, allow me to suggest that you (refrain from pursuing this marriage.)
Gratitude
I truly appreciate your kindness.
I am grateful to you for…
I appreciate it more than I can say.
I can never thank you enough.
I wish there were a better word than “ thanks “ to express my appreciation
for your generous help.
It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and
I appreciate it more than I can say.
Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality.
Now we have arrived back home safe and sound.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for…
Thank you again for your kindness.
Apology
Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology.
I apologize most sincerely for…
I am truly sorry to have done…
Please forgive me…
I owe you an apology…
I regret to inform you that I am unable to do..
I am so sorry to have put you through so much trouble…
Invitation
The honor of your presence is requested…
It’s a pleasure for me to invite you to…
We sincerely hope that you make it.
We would be honored to have you there with us…
I will cover all the expense involved.
Sympathy compassion
I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and I want to extend to you my unwavering support.
Complain
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with\at…
I very much regret to have to inform you that…
I find it awful\appalling(surprising in a bad way)\ quite distressing that … I would like to draw the attention of the authorities concerned to the … I feel something ought to be done about…
I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible. Your effort to provide good services will be highly appreciated by all. We will appreciated your willingness to make up for the loss.
Inquiry
I would like to request some information about…
My first question is…
I am greatly concerned about…
Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.
Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.
结尾：Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.
I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
篇四:《作文常用语》
作文常用语
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者
3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
4.Where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
7.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。
11.More haste,less speed. 欲速则不达。
12.It's never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
18.well begun,half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。
20.Out of sight,out of mind. 眼不见，心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
22.Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
26.live not to eat,but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。
28.East or west,home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
29.It's not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
32.The older, the wiser. 姜是老的辣。
33.Do as Romans do in Rome. 入乡随俗。
34.An idle youth,a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
35.AS the tree,so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn,to learn is to better live. 活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。
篇五:《作文常用语》
英语作文常用语
比较 (comparison)
in the same way, likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison, just as
2.对照 (contrast)
whereas, in contrast, on the other hand, instead, however, nevertheless, unlike, even though, on the contrary, while
3.因果 (cause and effect)
because, because of, for, since, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result (of), accordingly, hence, so, thus
4.强调 (emphasis)
certainly, above all, indeed, of course, surely, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely, most imprtant
5.让步 (concession)
although, though, after all, in spite of, nevertheless, still, provided, while it is true….
6.例证 (exemplification)
for example, for instance, that is, namely, such as, in other words, in this case, by way of illustration.
7.总结 (conclusion)
to sum up, to conclude, in a word, in short, in brief, all in all, in all, to put it in a nutshell, in summary
8.推断 (inference)
therefore, as a result(of), consequently, accordingly, so, otherwise
9.时间和空间 (time and space)
afterward, after, first, later, then, soon, outside, near, beyound, above, below, on the right(left), in the middle, opposite, in front of
1. 启的常用词语（多用于引导主题句）：
first(ly), at first, first of all, in the beginning, in the first place, at present, to begin with, to start with, lately, for one thing(for another), on the one hand(on the other hand), in general, generally speaking
2. 承的常用词语（用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句）：
second(ly), in other words, in particular, in the same way, in addition, from now on, what is more, for example, as another example, at the same time, by this time, of course, for this purpose, equally important
3. 转的常用词语（用于表示不同或相反的情况）：
after all, on the contrary, but, in contrast, yet, however, whereas, nevertheless, unfortunately, though, despite, in fact, in spite of
4. 合的常用词语（用于小结段落中上下文的内容或引导结尾句）：
finally, at last, in brief, in short, in summary, in a word, to sum up, above all, for this reason
启段开头常用语：
A proverb says, …
Generally speaking, …
It is often said that …
As the proverb says (goes), …
It goes without saying that …
It is clear that …
Many people often ask this question, "…?"
承段开头常用语：
It can be easily proved that …
It is true that …
No one can deny that …
We must recognize that …
Therefore, we should realize that …
What is more serious is that …
There is no doubt that …
转段开头常用语：
But it is a pity that …
But the problem is not so simple …
However, …
People may find this to be true, but I do not. I believe that …
There is certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem with regard to … Yet difference will be found, that's why I feel that …
On the other hand, …
合段开头常用语：
In a word, … In conclusion, … To sum up, …
篇六:《作文常用语》
phenomenon（现象）——manifestation /sight people———resident the sudden arrival of audience(观众的突然到来)
表示缺点和不足的词语：shortage，drawback; curse neighborhood=people around=people in community
常用的谓语动词替换
can—–get (a great chance/great chances) to do/never fail to Must—be bound to
think——it is my view that
Make promise= commit oneself to (承诺sth)=assure to =swear to Want=plan to=intend to Think =consider =deem
常用的副词形容词替换
only（仅仅）-merely
many（许多）-mountainous（far too many 最好应用于否定的 观点前面） countless
multiple(a multiple of )
a large number of
a vast majority of
a chain of 一系列
great-valuable
of itself （放于be动词之后，表示就是的含义）
代替not的否定副词：barely ，rarely，scarcely，hardly，less(高手写作文是不出现not的)
all-round 圆的
normal 正常的=regular 规则的=not weird不奇怪的
Available =feasible（可利用的，可行的）
标志性的转折词
In addition to this (除此之外)
程度副词短语
在 很大程度上——to a (large)/(some) extent(2009年mba例题)
to a great degree,in a large part
结果，因此 as a consequence what's more significant
时间副词短语{作文：我家常用语}.
a long time
in the process of…（在…的过程中）
图画作文中，的开头语 It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that
其中，vividly 可以替换成 subtly微妙地；symbolically象征性地
In time of need（万不得已）
地点副词短语
In the everywhere in our country(全国各地)
常用来表达观点的句子
I support/oppose the plan (choice behavior trend )for multiple reasons listed below it doesn't help that …这么做是没有用的{作文：我家常用语}.
与…有关
七个层面来思考问题
money ； time ; mental;pressure(release/put an outlet for pressure); widen one's their horizon
person-to-person relationship;away from(be alienated from) people around ;parent /firends have a damaging influence on their children ability physical health
the social conditons mass media (大众传媒)mislead people by carrying message that
几种修辞文章的结构
1 欲扬先抑形式
让步
frankly，there is a no denying that（同意句型替换，there is little doubtthat） a few disadvantages persist in (先点名，现象的存在的瑕疵) the privilege of this plan /trend/behavior/statement/choice
好处递进式
the privilege of building a move theater is , of course,obvious 递进关系 what's more siginificant
However , the weekness of this plan/…should not be taken lightly Neverheless,fortunately,a feasible solution has been found that (同位语从句，solution的同位语。同位语后置)
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作文的几个大方面
诚信（honesty）:
职业道德：professional ethics（职业道德）；abnormal trend（不正之风）;all walks of life (各行各业) fake commodities (伪劣产品) take bribes （受贿）all walks of life(各行各业)
道德沦丧:dishonesty (不诚实)
文化（culture）：
教育：education for all-round development(素质教育)
大学生活：学费问题
健康
人生观（outlook of life）
拼搏精神determined spirit（拼搏精神）；striving spirit（奋斗精神）： Make constant efforts (做不断的努力)；never stop making process（永不止步）；
创新（innovation）
篇七:《批改作文常用语》
作文修改点评角度及惯用语
作文开头：
1、文章开头简而得当，通过环境描写来衬托人物心情，十分艺术化。
2、开头简明扼要
3、文章开头新颖，具有先声夺人之效。使读者一见面就能对人物产生…的印象。
4、文章开头引人入胜，吸引读者。…点面结合，使文章生动，具体，详略得当。
5、文章语言生动丰富，可读性强。
6、开头出手不凡，吸引读者
7、开头打动人心，具有真情实感。
8、文章开头交待得十分清楚，起到总领全文的作用。
9、文章选材新颖，激起读者读下去的欲望
作文过程：
1、以饱满的激情，描写了……
2、重点突出，详略得当，内容具体。
3、比喻贴切，用词生动。
4、文章语言通俗易懂，贴近生活实际，读来令人倍感亲切。
5、…以轻松愉快的语气，向我们娓娓道来，令人回味无穷。
6、叙述自然生动、结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。
7、对于景色的描写，语言简练而准确，联想则为触景生情，情景自然融合。
8、通过丰富人物的语言和动作，衬托出人物的思想品质。
9、文章边叙事边抒情。
10、充分运用动静结合的写法，并辅以比喻、拟人等手法
11、小作者观察仔细，叙述时井然有序
12、一些精妙词语的使用，无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。
13、文章清逸婉丽、流畅连贯，尤其人物语言幽默风趣
14、文章想象合情合理，
15、通过生动、形象的语言的描绘，使读者仿佛置身于梦境一般。
16、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行。
17、细节描写颇具匠心。极富功底。
18、对人物的语言、神态、动作等，进行精心细腻的描绘，这是本文的一大特色。
19、描写细腻，生活气息浓厚，遣词造句准确传神。
20、，语言准确，鲜明、生动，内容极其丰富具体，
21、事例叙述得生动具体，人物的言行符合各自身份特点。
22、文章来源于生活，因此语言虽然不怎样优美，但却真实有趣，写得入情入理
23、文章将…写得细致入微
24、语言活泼明快，富有情趣。
25、大量采用生活中的口语，使文章更显自然亲切。
作文结尾：
1、结尾恰到好处地点明中心，语言朴实而含义深刻，耐人寻味。
2、以感受开关，以感受结尾。这样便使文章前后照应，首尾连贯，同时又使文章主题回环复沓，感染力极强。
3、结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深。{作文：我家常用语}.
4、文章含蓄的结尾，既点题，又耐人寻味。
5、结尾处集中表达情感，既照应开头又总结全文。首尾连贯，一气呵成。
6、对细节传神的刻画，恰恰相反到好处地揭示人物的内心世界，这是本文的成功之处。
7、文章以…为结尾，言简意赅，其味无穷。
8、文章最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力。
9、结尾令人饱含期待与热情，言已尽，意犹未了。
10、文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读、爱读，不忍释手。
11、虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地突（）现了文章主题。
12、故事虽平凡，感情却真挚、充沛、感人。
13、文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉。
14、结尾以…点明中尽，含蓄隽永，意味深长。
总评：
1、文章杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出。
2、文章对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对文章重点 …作了细腻而传神的刻画。
3、…切合实际，蕴含着朴素而深刻的哲理，读来令人精神振奋，情绪激昂。
4、这篇文章充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情。全文层次清晰，语句流畅。
5、事例叙述生动、具体、趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的情感，令人感动。
6、文章前后连贯，形成完整的形象。
7、文章语言清新活泼，描写能抓住事物的主要特征，篇幅短小精悍，值得一读。
8、本文内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。
9、文章有详有略，言之有序，内容生动具体，不失为一篇佳作。
10、特写镜头别开生面，情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣，读来倍感亲切。{作文：我家常用语}.
11、文章能过清新有趣的语言，描写了…的事。字里行间，充满童年真童趣，欢声笑语不绝于耳，不失为一篇佳作。
12、详略得当，虚实相生，是本文的两大特色，……内容更丰富、更生动。
13、全文清新秀逸，亲切委婉，朴素而不落俗淘，值得借见。
14、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。
15、全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。
16、全文眉目清晰，生动紧凑，趣味性强。
17、注意观察具体事物，并展开合适的想象，这是本文的成功之处。
18、文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章生动具体
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