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篇一:《My Hometown》
My Hometown
"My hometown, which is in the south of Shandong Province, is a very beautiful village. It lies on the east bank of a small river, surrounded by green mountains, In the past my hometown was poor, and people led a hard life. They couldn't afford to send their children to school.
But ,great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past twenty years. Many families .have not only color TV sets, but also telephones, fridges, computers, and so on. New roads, houses, schools, hospitals have been built. People in my hometown are working hard for a better life. ( 103 words)
我的家乡
我的家乡在山东南部，是一个非常漂亮的村庄，它位于一条小河的东岸，为绿色的大山所环抱。过去，我的家乡很穷，人们过着艰难的生活，孩子读不起书。但是在刚刚过去的二十年里，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化口许多家庭不仅有了彩色电视机，而且电话、冰箱、电脑等应有尽有。新修了公路，新建了房屋、学校和医院。家乡人民正在为过上更好的生活而辛勤工作。
Great Changes in My Hometown
I’m really glad to see what’ve happened in my hometown. In my memory, people around my neighborhood often chatted, played cards, or only watched TV at home. But now, things have changed. In the morning, the old often spend some time doing sports instead of only doing housework. They go dancing in the park every afternoon. It’s good for their health. The young not only work hard, but also begin to enjoy their life. Look! They are talking about their last trip to Beijing happily. Now they plan to visit Taiwan Island with QZTV next month.
What a happy life! I wish our life will become much better and better!
篇二:《My Hometown》
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My Hometown
In a Chinese map, my hometown Wenzhou can be found in the southeast of it. It is a charming city which belongs to Zhejiang Province but is near to Fujian Province.
Wenzhou is a city with good and steady development of economy surrounded by the mountains. The traffic was not convenient or fast which caused people in Wenzhou lack of communication with the outside in old days. Several decades earlier, Wenzhou was still a poor and backward city. But thanks to the reform and opening-up policy, Wenzhou now is a developing city with rapid economy. There are many enterprises, for instance, the well-known Aokang Group the leading enterprise of industry of Chinese leather shoe which boost Wenzhou’s economy
Wenzhou is also a busy but relaxing city. In the downtown, with the quick pace of people’s living and fierce and acute Social competition, people in Wenzhou are busy in making their livings. On the other hand, in contrast to the daytime, the night scene is tranquil, lights shinning like stars. In addition, there are many scenic spot for vacations relax to go sightseeing such as Yantang Mountain, Nanxi River and Taishun Hot Spring. By the way, local food is tasty.
I love my hometown, the home where I grow up. Although it isn’t good enough, as for me, it is my root which I have to go back finally.
Revised by the Group
My Hometown
In the Chinese map, my hometown Wenzhou can be found in the southeast of it. It is a charming city which belongs to Zhejiang Province whose capital is Hangzhou and is near to Fujian Province.
Wenzhou is a city with good and steady development of economy surrounded by the mountains. The traffic was not convenient or fast which resulted in people in Wenzhou lacking of communication with outside in old days. Several decades earlier, Wenzhou was still a poor and backward city. But thanks to the reform and open-up policy, Wenzhou now is in a great and rapidly developing economy. There are many enterprises, for instance, the well-known Aokang Group the bibcock enterprise of industry of Chinese leather shoe which boost Wenzhou’s economy, especially these private enterprises.
Wenzhou is also busy but relaxing city. In the downtown, under the quick pace of people’s living and fierce and acute Social competition, people are busy in making their livings. In the other hand, contrast to the daytime, the night scene is tranquil, lights shinning like stars. In addition, there are many scenic spots for vacation relaxing to go sightseeing such as Yantang Mountain, Nanxi River and Taishun Hot Spring. By the way, local food is tasty.
I love my hometown, the home to raise me up. Although it isn’t good enough, as for me, it is my root which I have to go back finally.
It is good enough and you write some details exactly. The content is suitable for the requirements of teacher. The language is also wonderful, but you must be careful. Some small mistakes should not have been made.
Revised by the Teacher
My Hometown
In a Chinese map, my hometown Wenzhou can be found in the southeast of it. It is a charming city which belongs to Zhejiang Province whose capital is Hangzhou and is near to Fujian Province.
Wenzhou is a city with good and steady development of economy surrounded by the mountains. The traffic was not convenient or fast which resulted in people in Wenzhou lacking of communication with outside in old days. Several decades earlier, Wenzhou was still a poor and backward city. But thanks to the reform and open-up policy, Wenzhou now is in a great and rapidly developed economy. There are many enterprises, for instance, the well-known Aokang Group the bibcock enterprise of industry of Chinese leather shoe which boost Wenzhou’s economy, especially these private enterprises.
Wenzhou is also busy but relaxing city. In the downtown, under the
quick pace of people’s living and fierce and acute Social competition, people in Wenzhou are busy in making their livings. In the other hand, contrast to the daytime, the night scene is tranquil, lights shinning like stars. In addition, there are many scenic spot for vacation relaxing to go sightseeing such as Yantang Mountain, Nanxi River and Taishun Hot Spring. By the way, local food is tasty.
I love my hometown, the home to raise me up. Although it isn’t good enough, as for me, it is my root which I have to go back finally.
篇三:《my hometown我的家乡》
Speech Contest: My hometown (演讲比赛：我的家乡)
活动目的：
1. 让学生了解家乡，观察家乡，热爱家乡。
2. 增加学生的词汇量，锻炼学生的书面表达能力。
3. 锻炼学生的表达能力。
活动内容：
一．了解我们的家乡。
我们的家乡——滦县，是一座历史悠久，底蕴厚重，风景优美的县城。如果把滦县看作是一块宝石的话，那么滦州古城就是镶嵌在这块宝石上的金钻。这块金钻以她独特的身姿，正在日益焕发出惊人的美丽。
滦州古城的主要景观有：东城门、迎宾广场、关帝庙、文庙，滦州衙门、接官亭、古戏台等明清风格中式古典建筑群，―青龙河‖、―九龙溪‖，北方风格水街古镇，小吃一条街、古玩一条街、玉石翡翠一条街、旅游商品市场一条街、四合院客栈一条街等。
滦州古城注意展现历史文化。以―巡滦大街‖这一条中心轴为载体，自东向西分别沿历史进程，选取有代表性的几个历史时期，用本土文化包装城门广场、崇贤广场、文姬楼、韶音广场、和园、戏院广场、西门广场七个节点，展现民族的交流、碰撞、融合与繁荣。
滦州古城还注意展现民族文化。以环形水系青龙河作为民族文化轴，展现―河‖文化的多元性。沿河建筑采用统一的建筑风格和形态，标志着中华民族的和谐统一。巡滦大街将青龙河环形河道分为南北两个部分，分别在南河道、北河道展示中国南方、北方不同的文化特点，在同区域文化的多样性中体现同一性―民族大融合‖——团结和睦，共存共荣，使整个建筑实现由自然―河‖向人文―和‖的文化升华。
现在的古城让人眼前一新，夜景非常美丽。许多人会大老远地跑来观看游玩，家住古城的人也是时不时的就跑到古城去玩一趟，见见朋友、看看美景，也是一种心情。
我爱我的家乡小县城，虽然它并不是非常繁荣，但却另有一番滋味——滦县。
Our hometown, Luan Xian, has a long history, its cultural heritage is thick and it’s a scenic town. If Luan Xian were a gem, the ancient city of Luanzhou is a diamond that is embedded in the gem. The diamond gives amazing beauty.
The main sight spots of the ancient city of Luanzhou are: the East Side Door, Yingbin Square, Guandi Temple, Confucian Temple, Luanzhou Government, Official Pavilion, Ancient Stage, Chinese classical Ming and Qing style buildings, such as "QingLong River", "Nine Stream ", the Water Street Town of northern style, the Snack Street, Antique Street, Jade Street, Tourism Commodity Market Street, Courtyard Inn Street, etc.{my,hometown.}.
The ancient city of Luanzhou pays attention to show the history and culture. On "Xunluan Street", it has Gate Square, Chongxian Square, Wenji Floor, Shaoyin Square, Garden Square, Theater Square, Ximen Square from east to west along the historical process. They show the national communication, collision, integration and prosperity.{my,hometown.}.
The ancient city of Luanzhou also pays attention to show national culture. With QingLongHe circular water system as national culture axis, it shows the diversity of culture "river". The buildings adopt unified architectural style and form along the river, it marks the harmony and unity of the Chinese nation. Xunluan Street divides QingLongHe circular water system into two parts of north and south, they show the different cultural characteristics of southern and northern China. The diversity in the same region culture reflects identity "national integration" – unity, coexistence, it makes the whole building change from natural "river" to the humanities "harmony" cultural.
Now the ancient city has a new look, the night view is very beautiful. Many people from far away will come and watch it, the people who live here go to the city now and then, to meet friends, to look at the beautiful scenery, it is also a kind of mood.
I love my hometown, it is a small county town, it is not very prosperous, but otherwise a taste – Luan Xian.
二．范文赏析。
Here I would like to tell you something about my hometown—Luan Xian. It is a beautiful town with a long history and old culture. The ancient city of Luanzhou has a lot of sight spots, like Yingbin Square, Guandi Temple, Confucian Temple, Luanzhou Government, Official Pavilion, Ancient Stage, etc. People go to the square for fun, they dance and hang out there. Many people like coming here for vacation or weekends, because the scenery is wonderful. In addition, people can have different kinds of delicious food here. The people here are kind and friendly. Welcome to my hometown, Luan Xian.
三．以 ―My hometown‖ 为题写一篇介绍自己家乡的文章。
四．大声读出你的文章，全体同学进行赏析。
篇四:《My Hometown》
My Hometown
Welcome to my hometown! Haimen is my hometown. It is a modern and busy town. It has a long history. There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see green hills, big trees and nice flowers. There are many restaurants in Haimen. You can enjoy Haimen goat. It tastes very delicious. Many visitors come here to enjoy it.
There are many good places to visit. There is a park and a big Shopping Mall. You can see films in Renmin Theatre. My school is one of the best schools in my hometown. It is on Changjiang Road. It is very beautiful. I hope you can come and visit soon.
翻译 我的家乡
欢迎来到我的家乡！海门市是我的故乡。这是一个现代和繁忙的城市。它有着悠久的历史。有许多大型超市，美丽的花园和良好的工厂在这里。这是很容易去购物。你可以看到绿色的丘陵，大树和漂亮的花朵。有许多餐馆海门市。您可以品尝到海门山羊。它的口味非常可口。许多游客来到这里，享受它。
有很多很好的地方访问。有一个大公园和购物中心。你可以看到电影的人民剧院举行。我的学校是最好的学校在我的家乡。正是在长江路。这是非常美丽。我希望你能来到很快。
May Day
May Day is coming. We have a long holiday. We are very happy. Because we can play games or visit our friends during the holidays. I want to do my homework first. Then I can go shopping and buy many things for my grandmother. I want to go to the town by bus. There are many trees and flowers. There is less air pollution in the town. My grandmother is very friendly. She cooks dinner for me. It tastes very nice. Afterwards, my grandmother teaches me Beijing opera. She likes it very much. But I think it’s hard to study. Finally, my friends and I go to the library. There are lots of books in it. Many books are my favourites. I pay a little money for them. They are interesting. May Day is very good!
翻译： 劳动节
劳动节即将到来。我们有一个长假期。我们非常高兴。因为在节日期间我们可以玩游戏或探望我们的朋友。我要使我的功课第一。然后我可以去购物，买很多东西给我的祖母。我想去坐巴士。有许多树木和花草，少空气污染的城市。我的祖母是非常友好的。她为我做饭。她的口味很不错。后来，我的祖母教我京剧。她非常喜欢它。但我认为这很难研究。最后，我和朋友们去图书馆。有许多书籍中。许多书籍是我的最爱。书要一点钱。它们是有趣的。劳动节是非常好的。{my,hometown.}.
My First Flight
Last summer, I went to visit my uncle by air. I had never taken a plane before. So I was on top of the world at the news. I was too excited to fall asleep the previous night. On the day of flight, the crew took me from my parents to the seat in the plane. Luckily my seat was near the window. Before the plane took off, I imagined how nice it would be in the sky. But before long I was so tired that I couldn＇t help sleeping. When I woke up, the plane had just landed. Isn＇t it interesting?
翻译： 我国第一架飞机
去年夏天，我去访问我的叔父的飞机。我从来没有看过飞机。所以，，这是世界最大的新闻 。入睡前一天晚上我当时太兴奋。当天的飞行，在飞机机组人员把我从我父母的座位调换了。幸运的是我的座位靠近窗户。在飞机起飞之前，我想象将是如何很好的天空。但是，长期飞行使我非常劳累，我不能睡眠。当我醒来时，这架飞机刚刚降落。这不是很有趣吗？
Mid-Autumn Day
Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival in China. Almost everyone likes to eat mooncakes on that day. Most families have a dinner together to celebrate the festival. A saying goes, "the moon in your hometown is almost always the brightest and roundest". Many people who live far away from homes want to go back to have a family reunion. How happy it is to enjoy the moon cakes while watching the full moon with your family members.
翻译： 中秋节日
中秋节日是在中国传统节日。几乎每个人都喜欢吃月饼在那一天。大多数家庭有一起吃饭，庆祝节日。俗话说， “月亮在你的家乡，几乎总是最聪明和最圆 ” 。许多人生活远离家园，都想回去与家人团聚了。享受月饼看着满月与您的家庭成员是多么幸福。
My New Home
My family used to live in an old house. I.uckily, we moved into a new high-rise building in Pudong last month. the house is much larger and brighter than the old one. It has three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a sitting room, a kitchen and a big balcony. I＇m so happy that I have my own bedroom now. In front of the building, there＇s a big garden. there＇re many tall trees and beautiful flowers in it. In the afternoon, many children like to play games there. In the morning, you can see many old
people doing exercise.
I like my new home.
翻译： 我的新家
我的家人来生活在一个老房子。 I.uckily ，我们上个月进入了一个新的高层建筑在浦东。房子要大得多，比老的一个更光明。它有三个卧室，两个浴室，一个起居室，一个厨房和一个大阳台。我太高兴了，我有自己的卧室了。在楼前，有一个大花园。那里是许多高大的树木和美丽的鲜花中。下午，许多孩子们喜欢玩游戏的。上午，您可以看到许多老 人在工作。
我喜欢我的新家园。
An Unforgettable Holiday
I am ＇always busy with my lessons. What I have to do everyday is nothing but study.
Luckily, last summer my family went to my uncle＇s farm.We enjoyed a really interesting holiday. During the holiday, I didn＇t have to get up early, nor did I need to finish many exercises. I rode the horse in the fields. I milked the cows on the farm. To my GREat joy, my uncle invited me to go fishing. Life on the farm is quite different from that at school. I want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.
翻译： 一个难忘的假期
我总是忙于教训。我每天必须做的只不过是研究。
幸运的是，去年夏天，我的家人去我叔叔的农场.我享有真正有趣的假期。在农历新年期间，我没有早起，也没有我需要完成许多工作。我骑着马在农场里。在挤奶的奶牛的农场。我非常高兴，我的叔叔邀请我去钓鱼。农场上的生命有很大不同，在学校。我想要回去再度过我的暑假的。
A Sad Story
Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom, my monitor told us that our class teacher, Mr Sun, had passed away in a traffic accident. It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning. I couldn＇t accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.
Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher. He was full of sense of humour. We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching. His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class. He was an experienced teacher.
Mr Sun will always live in our hearts!
翻译： 一个可悲的故事
上周一的时候我走进我的教室里，我的显示器告诉我们，我们的班主任，孙先生已经去世于一宗交通意外。这似乎是不可思议的。我不能接受这样的事实，直到校长来告诉我们的真相。
孙先生是一位中年教师。他充满幽默感。我们都非常喜欢他，因为他出色的教学。他的经验通常是非常活跃和有趣.我们都喜欢他。他是一位经验丰富的教师。
孙先生将永远活在我们心中！
On My Way to School
Today I got up very early in the morning. After I finished breakfast, I went to school. On my way to school I saw something lying on the ground. I picked it up and found it was a mobile phone. I was afraid I would be late for school. I had no time to wait for the owner. So I gave it to the policeman.
Shortly after I reached my school, the headmaster came to my class and praised me in front of the class. How could he knew all about it? I guess it must be the policeman who told him what I did.
I am very happy that I have done a good job.
翻译： 在我通往学校的道路
今天，我起来非常早。早餐后，我去上学。在我上学路上我看到了一些东西躺在地上。我拿起它，并发现它是一个移动电话。我怕我会迟到。我已经没有时间等待失主。所以我把它给了警察。
不久后，我到达我的学校，校长来到我的班级表扬我。他怎么知道这一切？我猜想一定是警察告诉他我是这样做的。
我很高兴，我做得很出色。
The Sun and the Earth
the sun shines on us. It gives us light and heat. It makes everything grow. It gives the earth life.
the earth turns round itself. As it turns, we have day and night. It＇s bright by day and dark by night.
the earth also travels round the sun in an orbit. As it travels, we have four seasons. It is hot in summer and cold in winter.