【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《一次旅游经历写作》
一次旅游经历写作
该写什么内容???（1）时间、地点、和谁一起、（2）交通工具、（3）天气情况、（4）做了什么事情、（5）吃了什么东西、（6）买了什么东西、（7）感受如何。
时间地点，和谁一起：{一次写作经历}.{一次写作经历}.
I went to_______（地点）with my_______（人物）______（时间）.
交通工具：
We took the train to there. / We went there by plane.
如何描写天气：
It was sunny and hot./ It was raining hard./ It was windy and cloudy, it was cool./ It was a beautiful day.
做了什么事？
We visited___________(地点)
We took quite a few beautiful photos.
We went boating（划船）./ fishing.（钓鱼）/shopping（购物）
吃了什么东西？：
For dinner, we had________（食物）. Everything tasted really good.
The food there was really delicious.
买了什么东西？：
The shops there were beautiful, but things were expensive. I didn’t buy anything because the things were too expensive. I bought something special for my mother.
感受如何？：
I really like the vacation, it was interesting and relaxing./ I was quite tired, but I was really happy.
背诵模板：
I went to ____(地点) with my _______(和谁) _______（时间）.We went there by_____(交通工具).The weather was ______（天气状况）.First we visited______（某地），it was great and we took quite a few photos there . Then we visited some other interesting places in _____ (旅游的地点). For dinner, we had _____（食物）. The food there was really delicious. In the evening, we went shopping. The shops there were beautiful, but things were expensive. I only bought something special for my mother and nothing for myself. I thought everyone in _______(旅游地点) was very friendly. I was quite tired, but I was really happy.{一次写作经历}.
运用模板写范文举例:
I went to Beijing with my my friends last summer. We went there by train. The weather was sunny and hot . First we visited Tiananmen Square, it was great and we took quite a few photos there . Then we visited some other interesting places in Beijing. For dinner, we had Beijing duck. The food there was really delicious. In the evening, we went shopping. The shops there were beautiful, but things were expensive. I only bought something special for my mother and nothing for myself. I thought everyone in Beijing was very friendly. I was quite tired, but I was really happy.
注意 1、写旅游经历的文章，动词用一般过去式形式（模板红色动词已标记）。{一次写作经历}.{一次写作经历}.
2、考试的时候根据题目要求，灵活变通。（上文模板100字左右，根据实际情况增减）
3、如果题目要求按照它的内容步骤，请根据题目意思写。
篇二:《我的一次经历》{一次写作经历}.
我的一次经历
阿堡寨学校教师 安雅平
每当我看到那个红色的小手包，发生在假期的那件令我难忘的事就会提醒我：做事一定要认真，不能马虎。
那天，我刚从泳池出来，开心和兴奋笼罩着我，让我觉得周围的一切都变得美好万千。我骑上自行车，哼唱着小曲往家赶，愉悦的心情使得阳光特别灿烂，就连道路旁边的树都比平时显得格外翠绿，店门前的花也显得格外的鲜艳。小鸟唱着甜美的歌。
就在我陶醉于这份幸福的甜美时，一个习惯性的动作让我的冷汗迅速遍布全身。小手包不见了！这是我摸到空篮子的第一反应。里面有好多东西啊！我急忙停下车往回跑，也不顾汗水打湿的衣服。在游泳场找了好几遍也没找到，我试图打开记忆的“宝瓶”寻找它的下落，可是没有用。我灰心丧气地推上车，心想：这下坏了，钱没了，手机没了，最糟的是连钥匙出丢了，这可怎么办呀？这时那灿烂的阳光似乎一下子黯淡无光了，路边的一切仿佛也在瞬间都变成了灰色，风也停止了吹动，树叶变得枯黄，花朵也无精打采的垂着头，就连小鸟也去向不明。“唉""”我长叹一声，“难道真的找不到了吗?” 我近似于哭泣的打电话给老公，告诉他我不小心弄丢了小手包的事，“别急嘛，你忘了，你的包在家里呀""”没等我说完，他便心疼的说。接下来就是一些他所谓的“善意”的批评。原来被我落家里了！我抹干泪水，这才发现周围的一切又恢复了之前的灿烂和甜美。“唉""”我又长叹一声，“我怎么这么马虎呀！”幸亏是虚惊一场。
这可真是难忘的一件事啊!这次小小的插曲，可是给我马虎的坏毛病上了生动的一课，为我前面的道路又点燃了一盏灯。
2013年7月