【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《写字闯关》
第二单元 写字闯关 我最棒 姓名{作文写闯关}.
第三单元 写字闯关 我最棒 姓名
篇二:《雅思作文闯关必备精彩开头锦集》
智课网IELTS备考资料{作文写闯关}.
雅思作文闯关必备精彩开头锦集{作文写闯关}.
众所周知在 雅思 写作中如果原封不动照抄范文，这样会给考官留下非常不好的影响。有的学生甚至在写第一段的时候把题目照抄下来，这样也是不被计入统计的。那么究竟应该怎么做呢?实际上第一部分是情景的铺垫，大家在写第一段的时候一定要明确这篇作文要讨论的背景、观点。{作文写闯关}.{作文写闯关}.
1) 场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon。
2) 一些人的观点(some people’s opinion)，这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。
3) 个人观点，这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。
大作文要求字数至少达到250字，在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段最好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。因此总结出大作文开首的方式通常有以下几种情况：{作文写闯关}.
1) 题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon)，有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase)，可以做:
●主动语态<=>被动语态
●主谓宾<=>主系表
●某些近义词互换
Example:
At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?
→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可。
2)题目中包含了背景信息，有时出现一些人的观点，但题目中字数较少，若直接重新表达，字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下,推荐以下2种开首方式来保证字数：
◆把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year，millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生个人观点即可。
◆追溯历史，过去与现在形成对比。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes
international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生个人观点即可。