【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《牛人英语作文》
进入正题之前，先教你们几个当时我最喜欢我最喜欢用的装酷小技巧，首先就是very这个单词，以后不要再用了，弄哪个那，extraordinary！这个单词高中生会用的不多，不用掌握什么用法，就记住用very的地方都可以替换成这个，绝对比用very拉风！ 然后那，however这个单词不知道你们掌握得好不好，教大家一个玩赖的技巧，一个句子+逗号+however+另一个句子，这里面however是没有实际意义的，就是表转折，但你可以用这招把两个简单句捏在一块啊！短句子成长句了！ 第三个，第三个，就是把很简单的句子，用一点小技巧，改成比较无耻的倒装句！举个例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么说？i not only sing, but also dance，改动一下，not only do i sing,but also dance.倒装句！（虽然简单且无耻，但谁敢说这不是倒装句？）此方法最适合倒装句掌握的不好的同学写出来骗批卷老师：大哥（姐）我会倒装句！
important？这是土人用的！牛人用什么？牛人用significant！由于怎么说？as a result？土人！牛人用什么？牛人用as a consequence. 所以怎么说？so？土人！牛人怎么说？牛人用therefore！（别看therefore这个单词简单，知道用它代替so的同学不多啊！）举个例子，I got up early，therefore i was late. 类似的替换的单词很多，比如以后set这个单词不要用了，替换成establish。 越来越好怎么说？ 土人也许会用better and better，牛人只用一个单词：enhance 造个句子 we need to enhance our English，就等于better and better。 好怎么说？土人用good，比他们强一点的人也许会用great
好怎么说？土人用good，比他们强一点的人也许会用great ， wonderful，但牛人用什么？牛人用gorgeous，更牛的人用fabulous，简单的替换一下，水平立刻显现出不一样了。不想要怎么说？土人会用unwanted，牛人用unsatisfactory。改变怎么说？土人用change，牛人用transform。类似的替换技巧有很多，但由于时间太长了多数都忘了，你们自己也可以总结积累一下，不要做土人，做牛人！
以上的问题解决了，我们来说一下语法，从句。相信很多同学掌握的不是很好，我教大家一些简单的技巧？首先弄清句子的最主要成分是什么？主语加谓语。不管大家写多复杂的句子，一定记住不管写多复杂的句子，没有谓语动词不叫句子！接下来具体地说语法的技巧： 有一个很简单的从句，叫宾语从句，I think that…… 没有人不会用吧，不过我奉劝大家尽量别这么用，老师批10张卷子看到了8张里面有I think that不烦吗？如果一定要用宾语从句的话换一种说法：I have a thought that……别看只改动了一点，同位语从句！同样I hear that谁都会用吧，不过同样谁都会用所以我们不要用！厉害一些的人会用：It is reported that…… 不过真正的牛人用There is a piece of news that 同样的意思，但明显比I hear that要帅！ 还有一种从句叫定语从句很多人也愿意用，不过我建议大家不要用，因为其实在英语里，定语从句是种挺白痴的句子，没人说的！（你们看美国大片时发现过有人说定语从句吗？）不过如果大家非要用我教大家一个必杀！很少有人知道的！其实定语从句是可以并列排比的！这招凑字数最好使，写出来也挺酷的。这招凑字数最好使，写出来也挺酷的。举个例子，我喜欢玩篮球，然后篮球有很多种特点，就可以把这些特点用定语从句的形式并列出来：I love basketball，which is……，which is……，which is…….其实在上千年前，我们的老祖宗就会这么用了，大家学过韩愈的师说吧，里面有句话：师者，所以传道授业解惑也。这就是个经典的定语从句，翻译过来就是teacher is a job who传道，who授业and who 解惑。这种定语从句你要是用出来绝 对能吓批卷老师一跳！
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还有种用法叫后置定语有人感觉挺难吧，其实记住个例子就行了，穿着比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini，变成a girls wearing a bikini就行了，这就是后置定语，很简单吧
语法的问题不也解决了吗，接下来就教大家一些细节地方上的技巧，首先因为什么怎么
说?because 绝大多数人都用这个单词，教大家一个很绝的用法，逗号+for 就可以代替because！举个例子，我总听李孝利的歌，因为我喜欢李孝利：I often hear the songs of 李孝利，for i love her 中间的逗号+for就相当于because，同样，掌握这个用法的同学不多！ 尽管怎么说？土人们although，而牛人用In spite of 举个例子，尽管你是女生你也不能欺负我！In spite of the fact that you are 女生，you can't 欺负 me！
时间状语大家掌握的都不错吧，一看到她妈妈，小女生一下就哭了，用when就是土人！直接写seeing her mother, the girl cried
还有首先是first吧，以后大家可以写first and foremost，和first一个意思，但看上去牛X的多，另外，用到这个用法时还可以用到一个简单的插入结构 主语，first and foremost，谓语这就是一个插入结构，我在前面还讲了一个however吧，这个单词放到句子中是没什么意义的，就是为了装酷！同样可以用到这：主语，however，谓语插入结构！
有一个句式说：“for the simple reason that”表示某种现象的原因是什么。然而，很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“because”如果要表示“总是能够”的概念，很多同学提笔就会写can always，但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定，用never fail to。
注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn’t”这样的略缩形式，而是 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词；如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore”“what is more”更为普遍
According to（根据）题目大意I believe that（我认为） 你的观点
2.As far as we know（我们都知道）题目大意from my point of view (我认为)你的观点First （首先）second（其次）at last (最后)
First（首先）and then (然后)in conclusion（最后，总之）
As far as we know（我们都知道）moreover（而且，此外）
specially（特 别是）in conclusion（最后，总之）表并列： similarly同样的 / in the same way 以同样的方式
表转折：however/but但是
表对比：not that but that不是而是/ one hand.on the other hand一方面另一 方面/ unlike与不同/not so much.as与其不如
表目的：for the为了
表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以
表例证：for example
例如
表假设：if如果
表让步：although虽然（注意：后不可接but！虽然但是不可这样连用）/of course 当然/clearly显然
All in all（总的来说）
By and large （总的来说）
+in my opinion（我认为）
No matter how（不管怎样）
On the whole（总的来说）
◆ 相关过渡语
1).表示时间顺序:first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last
2).表示空间顺序:near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side
3).表示比较、对照:like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise
4).表示因果关系:because, for, as a result, therefore, thus
5).表示递进关系:besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of
6).表示并列关系:and, as well as, also
7).表示总结性:in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude
1．occur 替换 think of
Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →
An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
2．devote替换spend
He spends all his spare time in reading. →
He devotes all his spare time to reading.
3．seek替换want / look for
They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.
4．average 替换ordinary{关于人人总是都看手机的英文作文}.
I ’man average ( ordinary ) student.
5．but替换very
The film we saw last night was very interesting. →
The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.
The film we saw last night was anything but boring.
6．seat 替换sit
On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.
7．suppose 替换should
He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
8．appreciate 替换thank
Thank you very much for you help. →
We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
9．the case替换 true
I don’t think it is the case ( true ).
10．on替换as soon as
As soon as he arrived, he began his research. → On his arrival, he began his research.. Due to替换because of
He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.
12．cover替换walk/read
After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.
13．contribute to替换 be helpful/useful
Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →
Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.
14．round the corner 替换 coming soon/nearby
① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans? ② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby). 15．come to light替换discover The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →
The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.
Have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself
After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).
17．come up with替换think of
Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.
18．set aside替换save
Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.(2004天津卷)
19．be of + n. 替换adj.
The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.
20．refer to 替换talk about/of, mention
The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous
cannot but / can not help but替换have to do
I could not but (had to) go home.
22．more often than not替换usually
More often than not (Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.
23．lest替换so that /in order that
I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. →
I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.
belong for sth. / be long to do sth. 替换want to do sth./wish for I want to see you very much. → I am long to see you. 25．be caught up in/becrazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in He is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps 26．more than替换very ① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September. → I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September. ② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help
perfect(ly) 替换good/very well He speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ). 28．do sb a/the favor 替换help Would you please dome the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio? 29．the other day替换a few days ago The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. 30．in the course of替换during In the course of(During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety. 31．the majority of替换most
consist of替换be made up of Our class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students. 33．be worn out替换 be tired / broken ① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out(tired). ② My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair. 34．become of替换 happen What do think has become of ( happened to ) him ? 35．attend to替换
look after 36．on condition that替换as long as 37．nevertheless替换however
38．express one’ s satisfaction with替换be satisfied with 39．spare no effo
．be rushed off one’s feet 替换be busy in doing 42．a handful of替换a little / some
43．meanwhile替换at the same time 44．get to one’s feet替换stand up 45．beneath替换under 46．occasionally替换sometimes /once in while 47．for instance替换for example 48．seldom替换not often 49．wealthy替换 rich 50．amazing替换surprising 51．as a matter of fact替换in fact
篇二:《英语作文》
社交网络的影响 The Influence of The Social Network Service
As been popular in young peoples daily life, the social network service have influenced not only the ways we are socializing but also the culture and the tradition of the country. Take the spring festival as an example, traditionally, in the evening of the Chinese New Year eve, the whole family usually would have a reunion meal. Many of the family members are not really be at home quite often spending time with others especially with their old parents, so this reunion meal is very important for every family to have a chance to talk, enjoy the together time. But today all has changed. The most common look of the reunion meal now is that all young people eat quietly meanwhile the eyes are staring at their cell phone, checking out their “Friend Circle” to see if anyone update the status. They only make sounds when someone grab a red envelop with very lousy money in it. The old parents feel awkward when facing this weird situation, no one would even like to talk to them, the reunion meal turns out that there is just a bunch of strange people eating at the same table.
And the TV shows are pushing this more far ahead. They will set some interactive sessions to encourage people use the social network service on their cell phone to get some bonus. So even TV time people still stick to their cell phone and have no word for others sitting around.Seems like the social network service is completely replace the normal communication offline. That will obviously ruin the relationship with family.
I wouldnt say the social network service is all bad, but somehow, I prefer to communicate face to face with someone I really care.
翻译：社交网络的影响
自从社交网络在年轻人的生活里变得普遍，它不但影响了我们社交的方式，也影响了这个国家的文化和传统。
就拿春节来说，传统上说，在除夕的晚上，全家人通常会在一起吃团圆饭。许多人也没有真正经常呆在家里跟家人在一起，尤其是跟老人们在一起，所以团圆饭尤其重要，大家可以一起聊聊天，享受在一起的时光。但是如今一切都变了。团圆饭最普遍的画面就是，年轻人们都安安静静的吃饭，眼镜死死的盯着手机，查看他们的“朋友圈”有没有人更新状态。只有在他们抢到一个红包的时候才会发出声响，而红包里的钱少得可怜。老人们在面对这种怪异的场面时异常尴尬，没人愿意跟他们说说话，团圆饭变成了只是一群陌生的人在同一张桌子吃饭而已。
而电视节目也在推波助澜。他们会设置一些互动环节，鼓励观众用他们的手机上的社交网络服务获取一些奖励。所以即使是看电视的时候，人们也始终跟手机粘在了一起，不跟周围的人说一句话。好像社交网络已经完全代替了正常的线下交流。这显然会破坏家庭关系。
我不是说社交网络有什么不好，但是我想我更喜欢跟我在乎的人面对面进行交流。
广告
Advertisements are forcing their way into peoples lives. People refer to
advertisements in their daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are usually manufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every product is advertised in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.
There are many ways to advertise and ads come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience. Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms.
However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he
misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim to such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them。
翻译：Advertisement
广告正以它们的方式进入到人们的生活中。人们在日常生活中与广告有关因为他们是消费者。广告商通常是制造商，零售商和批发商。他们的商品需要通过广告以引起消费者的关注。因而机会每种产品都以某种方式被广告。在很大程度上来说，好的广告带来成功，而差的广告意味着失败。
有很多方式可以打广告，广告的形式各不相同。报纸可以承载广告。有些产品在电视或者广播中宣传，这样能引起大众的注意。广告牌也可以承载广告。现在广告是一个大产业，并设立了很多机构提供各种形式的广告。
然而，广告并非总是真实的。一种产品通常是被歪曲呈现的。广告商夸大了他想销售的商品的好处。这样一来，他就扭曲了事实。消费者就成为了这类广告的受害者。数百万人们买了广告商品又对它们不满意。
The Most Impressive Classmate in My College
The first time for me to go into the campus, I was so excited about the college life, at the same time, I also worried about the person I met. Now the fact is that I meet the good guys and I make a good friend. She is my classmate and she is so brave and never hesitates. I am so impressive about her.
In the college, I meet my roommate, her name is Lily, she is also my classmate. As we live together, we always have some contradictions, but Lily considers me in the first place. She will let me do what I want and what she does will never make me uncomfortable. I am older than her, but in front of her, I just like a kid. Lily is fearless and I admire her so much. When there is the performance or competition, Lily takes no hesitation to be part of it, while I am afraid of losing face. Lily said she is enjoying the moment and that is the youth, she doesnt want to regret when she is old.
Lily is such a brave friend, I am so lucky to be her friend.
大学印象最深刻的同学
我第一次走进校园的时候，对大学校园生活感到很兴奋，同时，我也担心要见到的人。现在事实就是我遇到的都是好人，我交到了一个好朋友。她是我的同学，她勇敢和果断。我对她印象很深刻。
在大学里，我遇到了舍友，她的名字就叫丽丽，她也是我的同学。由于我们住在一起，总会有矛盾