【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《第一印象作文》
篇二:《九招小技巧提升文章的第一印象》
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【九招小技巧提升文章的第一印象】
more than ever before, COUNT（第一印象很重要）. We are We are information overload and are forced to find ways of what not to. First impressions increasingly determine what we read and The following list of tips should help you to avoid some of the most common slip-ups.
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【1.Capitals 大写】
Avoid the temptation to capitalize words in the middle of a sentence Just To Provide Emphasis Like This. If you want to be more emphatic consider using bold face, italics, color or larger text.
【2.Commas 逗号】
or, but, yet, for, nor, or so.
For example:
Notice that the sentence could each be sentences in their own example, need a comma: We have finished the work and are
【3.Ellipsis 省略号】
The ellipsis is a series of three — and ONLY THREE — full stops used to mark missing words, an uncertain pause, or an abrupt interruption. Avoid the temptation to use six
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or seven dots — it looks amateurish. For example, we write:
Niles: But Miss Fine's age is only …
Fran: Young! Miss Fine's age is only young!
【4.Excessive punctuation 避免使用过多的标点】
following over-punctuated examples:
Buy now!!!
Great bargains!!!!!!!!!!
Avoid it.
【5.Headings 学会建立阶级标题】
For long works, hierarchy of headings. Microsoft Word's heading styles are for (They also allow you to automatically create a table of
【6.Hyphenating prefixes 带有“-”的前缀】
Most prefixes don't need a hyphen; i.e. we write "coexist", not "co-exist". There are exceptions, though. The prefixes "self-" and "ex-" are almost always hyphenated.
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【7.Numbers（小于10的数字通常以单词形式出现）】
Numbers of ten or less are normally written as words.
【8.Quotation marks 注意引号的使用】
single quotes.
【9.Tables 制表】
clutter.
篇三:《我们都明白第一印象的重要性》
我们都明白第一印象的重要性，同样，一个好的作文题就是一块很好的第一印象的敲门砖，所以，花一点时间想一个让阅卷教师一见钟情的好文题，一定不是枉费心机。
一、好作文题的标准
1、简练
简练就是要简短而精练，简，要简得明白，练要体现干练。让人一看就觉得不敢多字也不得少字，且言简意赅。要注意的是，简练并不是用字数来衡量的，而是从字与词的结合中所表达的意义给人的感觉来判断的。简练的文题是用最少的字给人最明确的意义和感情倾向。
2、新颖
新颖是现代社会追求的一种潮流，无论什么时候，我们都不能忘了想出办法让自己的东西新颖，那就是用一种与众不同的视角，道出自己的 个性思考。但是，新颖决不是标新立异，必须合情理。应该说，我们所说的新颖只是别人想漏了的，或者说只是一时还没有想到的，而决不是怎么想也想不通的，想 不到的东西。
3、切主题{关于第一印象的文章}.
话题作文虽然没有一个明确的主题思想，但大都有一个主题意向，写作者在写作的过程中也会把这个主题意向尽量的明确化。这时，如果你 的作文题能够{关于第一印象的文章}.
对作文的主题有一定的暗示或提示作用，那当然是最好不过的了。这样，阅卷教师可以很快地抓住你的作文的主题思想，给阅卷者一个先入为主的阅卷 思考，有利于考分的提高。就算你的作文对主题的表现不是很突出，但有文题的补充也是相得益彰的。
4、有文采
阅卷教师大都是一些很有文采的人，他们对文采是非常敏感而且也很看重的，如果你的文题能拟出一定的文采，无疑会一下子唤出阅卷教师心中那份珍藏的美感，让人产生作者也一定是一位有一定文采的人的猜想，从而获得高分。当然，作文的内容也应该有一些文采。
5、有内涵
文题还应该有一定的内涵，应该是耐寻味。当然，考场作文在阅卷的过程中由于阅卷教师时间的关系，这一点很可能被忽略，但，真正有内涵的让那些阅卷高手们落眼就见的东西，还是可以起到很重要的作用的。
二、拟好题的方法
这里介绍几种常用的拟题方法。
1、添加
所谓添加，就是在话题或者话题中心词前或者后也可以是前后添加一定的词语，组成一个完整的意义整体。这样的文题可以使作者时时紧跟话题，也可以让阅卷教师一目了然，有一种先声夺人的效果。
2、借用
借用就是借名句、警句、古诗文的句子以及流行歌曲中的句子等等。因为这些句子有生命力，影响力，如果借用得好，也是可以让阅卷教师眼前一亮的。
3、修辞
这种方法就是在文题中运用比喻、拟人等修辞格。这样的文题如果用好了，自然显得生动而形象，而且有一种让人耳目一新的感觉。
三、好题展示
1、以“时间”为话题的作文题
《时间，带不走我心中永恒的记忆》《爱我 追我 别浪费我》《午餐1800秒》《时间在晨雾中飘落》
2、以“牵挂”为话题的作文题
《剪不断》《藤》《她，还好吗?》《门前那条小河》《那双冻裂的手》
3、以“把握”为话题的作文题
《一切就在我手中》《握住，不放》《机会，请你把握》《柳暗花明又一村》《青春无限好》
4、以“春”为话题的作文题
《点燃生命的季节》《与春共舞》《在春天成长》《春的向往》《春的脚步》
5、要求文题中含有“美丽”二字的作文题
《汗滴，诠释着一份美丽》《带上你的美丽跟我走吧》《梦不再美丽》《今夜如此美丽》《美丽，就这样脆弱》
6、以“美好亲情”为话题的作文题
《风雨中那把伞》《懂你》《慈母手中线》《母爱无价》 《悠悠亲情》《亲情伴我行》
7、以“美在夏天”为话题的作文题
《燃烧生命的季节》《三十八度的美丽》《夏天的微笑》
8、以“感受青春”为话题的作文题
《为青春歌唱》《激情燃烧的岁月》《多梦的季节》《飘逸时代》
篇四:《我对XX大学第一印象英语作文(英语)》
Two weeks ago, I came toLiaocheng University withfull of joy, which is a beautiful place. When I first saw Liaocheng University, I fell in love with it. She is located in the beautiful water city in the northern china –
Liaocheng, which is famous for Dongchang Lake. The gate of Liaocheng University looks like a pair of wings, which means she welcomes students from all around the country to come to learn.
Liaocheng University is made of two campuses, and they are linked up by a long bridge, whose name is Rainbow Bridge, with many photos and profiles of some famous people related to Liaochenghanging on the railings. There are rows of teaching buildings and students’ dormitories, and all of these buildings are bright and clean, which provide a good living and learning environment for students.What is more, there are also well-equipped laboratory for teachers and students to do research. There's plenty of books in the library, where students can surf in the ocean of knowledge and broaden their horizons. We can enjoy delicious food in the dining hall, and one of the peculiarities of the dining hall in Liaocheng University is that you can eat something that comes from other provinces of China.
The roadway outside the west gate is narrowed byshopes where goods of every kind are sold. Fried chickens and fried tofu are so popular that you can see a lot of students who are eating while walking and thingkingwhat to buy.There are also some shops full of clothes. Though quality of these clothes is not good enough, the price is acceptable. In this shops, some girls try their best to choose from the variety of stlyes.
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篇五:《2017考研英语作文：第一印象重要与否》
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2017考研英语作文：第一印象重要与否 2017考研复习倒计时进行中，英语最后两个月复习，大家一要抓阅读，而要突击作文提分，而对于作文的训练，大家要多练习话题，多积累素材，背背模板，看看范文，争取拿高分，下面是凯程考研频道分享一些常考话题及范文，大家多看所思多总结。
Topic(题目)：
Some people trust their first impressions about aperson’s character because they believe thesejudgments are generally correct. Other people do notjudge a person’s character quickly because theybelieve first impressions are often wrong. Comparethese two attitudes. Which attitude do you agreewith? Support your choice with specific examples.
Model Essay(范文)：
Any opinion is, in fact, a judgment. I feel that as Americans we would do well to judge othersless often. Still, we must be able to decide whom to spend our time with and whom we’d ratherforget. In my opinion, this type of judgment is best after we get to know other people. Firstimpressions are not always accurate impression.
Judging a person based on a first impression does save time. There are more people thananyone could possibly get to know in one lifetime. It is frustrating to waste time getting toknow someone, only to find out that your first impression was correct and that you reallydon’t like him or her. So is it a waste of time getting to know people your probably won’t like?That seems to be a valid point of view, but I believe that it is not the best attitude to take.
It’s more humane to spend time getting to know people before judging them. I know that Idon’t always make a good first impression even when I truly like the person with whom I aminteracting. We all have bad days, I wouldn’t want to lose a job or a potential friendship simplybecause I picked out the wrong clothing or said something wrong. I think everyone deservesthe chances make a second impression.
If we all base our final opinion of others on first impression, it would be hard to get to knowanyone. There is always more to people than meets the eye. If we don’t give someone a chance,we may be missing out on meeting a life-long friend. That would truly be shame. 第 1 页 共 1 页
篇六:《作文》
小升初英语考试中，作文占据了不可忽视的地位。如何写好小升初英语作文？其实写作都是从模仿开始的，而优秀的英语范文是英语写作模仿的优质对象。今天给大家提供一些小升初英语作文范文给大家参考，希望对提高大家的英语作文能力有帮助。
开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相，它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味着有了良好的开端，也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done，我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?
1. “开门见山”式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
①. 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
②. 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never for get_r(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unfor gettable_r(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、
surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is 再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore？
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a story.
小升初英语作文范文集（一）：My Good Friend
Zhang Ying is my good friend. Shes in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. Shes a model student. Shes clever and shes helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesnt like playing basketball, football, table
tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.
小升初英语作文范文集（二）：How to be a Model Student I want to be a model student. What shall I do?
I should be polite. I should study hard. I should capful and helpful. I should walk in the
corridors. I should throw rubbish in the bin. I should be quiet in the library. I shouldnt walk and run on the grass. I shouldnt throw rubbish on the floor. I shouldnt run in the corridors. I shouldnt fight. I shouldnt be noisy in the library.
小升初英语作文范文集（三）：我的假期
Im going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.
Then Ill pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.
At eight oclock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. Ill pilot the spaceship to the earth.
This is a good holiday on the sun.
小升初英语作文范文集（四）：My New Teacher My new teacher is science teacher. Hes very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes.
My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isnt he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? Hes a Mr. Zhou .
小升初英语作文范文集（五）：自我介绍 I am a 10 years old boy. Smart and handsome. I am proud of myself. Because I can get perfect scores in Chinese, math and English. It is not good enough, I am also proud of being an elder brother. That is a Friday evening, my baby brother was crying all the time. My parents were both cooking for dinner. I said to my mum, let me look after this little thing. My mum said, “Are you sure you can?” “ Yes ,believe me I can.” I answered. Then mum went to the kitchen. I went
towards my baby brother. “ Oh baby, dont cry. I will sing a song for you…” I carried him and sing songs for him. After a while, he was asleep. I was so tired. My parents were happy and praised me a good boy. This is my first time to look after my baby brother and I feel proud of myself. 小升初英语作文范文集（六）：我的小兔子{关于第一印象的文章}.
One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. Im very happy.
From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat boby. Theyre marvellous.
Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldnt find them. I asked my
mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didnt know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again. I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever.
小升初英语作文范文集（七）：Happy day Today I'm very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.
It's a sunny day ,the bird is singing,I'm singing too.When I get to park,I see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.what a happy day!{关于第一印象的文章}.
小升初英语作文范文集（八）：My holiday
My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening. I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, " Thanks a lot. " I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says, " There are beautiful !"
I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum.
小升初英语作文范文集（九）：My Doll
Today is S