【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《中考英语作文背诵范文(带翻译)》
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三、精心审题，沉着写初稿 很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。
其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢？ 一、了解高分作文的特点 审题主要要做一下事情：
要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点： 1、审人称、时态、体裁等
1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。 审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。 犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，
3、要点齐全，不缺要点。 那还能得高分吗？
4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。 2、明确必须表达的要点
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。 高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点
6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。 勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。 3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个？
8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。 4、确定好如何分段
9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自 就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些？
然就对该作文有好感了。 四、耐心修改，提炼句子 10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕，高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实，这时候，不妨从以下方面去修改，相信会让 二、勤积累，巧准备 你受益匪浅的。
要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面： 1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等
1、牢记课标词汇是基础 当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后，在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力，你 一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。 务必要选择高级的。例如，就以今年中考的英语作文为例，它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达法，
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法 有old people和the old 。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理，作文中的“病人”的表达法有sick people ， 要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢？这就要求我们在平时的学习过程patients ，the sick ，你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢？当然是the sick了。
中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、 2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点
another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。 我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢？换为最简单的表达法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文题，
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式 就要求学生表达一个意思：帮助同学，可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”，面对这样的问题怎么办呢？怎么不 高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来？靠我们在平时学习过换个说法呢？你看，If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our friendship longer .不就程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动达到目的了吗？
词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏？假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to 3、大胆改变句型，使之生辉
somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢？ 例如，我们将一些句子改为感叹句，复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何乐 像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. 而不为呢？
I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。 4高度关注句与句 、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然，衔接紧凑。
表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old) . She is a girl aged 12. 5、适当引用个别谚语或警句，来提高作文档次。
等等。 五、一丝不苟抄誊作文 很显然，使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习，积累经验 一篇好的作文，经过审题、修改之后，务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上，再认真地仔细检查一遍，那才是大公告 学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。 成了。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢？首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词 或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。 另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。 6、背诵一些谚语和警句 作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。
一、Great changes in my hometown were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life. 四、我们周围的污染 产(出)废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在这块土地上只留下沙砾)。我们经常看到工厂将废物倒入河流或湖More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There 近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是我们的环境变得越来越糟糕。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在许多人有空调、汽车、生
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years. The people have found a lot of ways of making money. 泊。河里的水是很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水喝的城市。现在我们正处于危险中。这是非常必要的和重要的保护好环Now there are many tall buildings. They are very beautiful. Roads are wide and clean. People can take buses or drive 境。我认为,如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活会越来越好。
their own cars to go to work. Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot. Thanks to the government’s efforts. My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
一、在我的家乡发生了很大的变化
二十多年来,我的家乡只是个小,又老又穷镇。大多数人都是农民。有几个工厂。人们没有足够的食物吃,把旧衣服穿在
身上。他们有一个艰苦的生活。
发生了巨大的变化,在过去的20年。人们已经发现很多的赚钱途径。现在有许多高大的建筑物。他们很漂亮。道路宽
阔,又干净。人们可以搭公车或驾驶自己的汽车去上班。许多人有手机和个人电脑。人民的生活条件有了很大的进步。
由于政府的努力。我的家乡正变得越来越美丽了。 五、Make our world more beautiful ! Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans. It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us. Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them. We shouldn’t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home. We must plant more trees and grass, they can make the world greener. The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have. Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful. 五、使我们的世界更美丽!
环境保护是越来越重要的人类。这是我们的责任照顾我们周围的天性。动物和植物都是我们最好的朋友。,我们应该与
他们共同分享这个世界。我们不应该杀野生动物,我们必须保护森林,因为他们是动物的家。我们必须种植更多的树木和
草,他们就可以让世界环保。更美丽的世界,我们将会有快乐的生活。让我们尽我们所能使世界美丽。 二、Save the earth How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our
neighborhood clean and tidy. We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees
and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave
rubbish everywhere and spit in public places. We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better.
二、拯救地球
如何保护环境已成为世界上最大的问题。
这是我们的责任保护我们的环境。不管我们居住的地方,我们应该做些事情来保持我们的邻居整洁。我们可以收集废纸
或其他废弃物回收利用。我们应该种更多的树,我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。我们不应该
把垃圾随处可见,在公共场所随地吐痰。我们不能摘花、践踏草地在公众场合。如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护
环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活一定会越来越好。 六、Keep our school clean We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school. We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful. 六、保持校园清洁 我们在这所学校学习。这是我们的责任保持房间整洁。这并不是一个好吐唾沫在公共场所,如在图书馆,在课堂上。我们不应该把垃圾扔在这里和那里。不要在墙上乱画,他们影响看我们的学校。我们应该保持教室干净整洁。我们应该经常做些清洁。如果每个人都尽自己最大努力做些有用的事情对我们学校来说,我相信我们的学校也会变得更加美好。 七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I
can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud
early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s very quiet. What a nice place I live in!
七、我的乡村生活
我喜欢住在乡下。我住在一个小村庄。附近有一条河。许多树在房子的周围。我能看到很多农场和鸟类。有低噪音。这
里的空气清洁和清新。有私家车的减少。我念在清晨。当它变得黑暗,月亮在天空明亮。它很安静。一个好地方我住在! 三、Improve our environment Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life. What should we do to improve our environment? We should plant more trees. And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin. Don’t spit in public places.
Don’t draw on public walls. It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy.
三、改善我们的环境
好的环境能让人感到快乐。改善环境意味着资格我们的生活。我们应该做什么来改善我们的环境? 八、How to learn English well As we know, English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China. 我们应该种更多的树。我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。当我们看到垃圾在地上,我们应该把English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world. But how to learn it well?
The best way is to use it all the time. If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well. At school, we 它捡起来,扔进一个垃圾箱。不要在公共场所随地吐痰。别把公共墙壁。这是我们的责任,让我们的地球整洁。
should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully. We should spend enough time in practicing English. If we keep on 四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very
bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off) waste gas. More and more
trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand). We often see factories pour waste into
rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger.
It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the
environment, the world will become much more beautiful, and our life will be better and better . working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day. 八、如何学好英语 正如我们所知,英语已成为一种国际语言。它更受欢迎,比其他任何语言在中国。英语在世界上被广泛地使用,是全世界最有用的语言。但是如何学好英语呢? 最好的方法是使用它。如果我们可以一起说英语、用英语思考我们能把它学好。在学校,我们应该学会听、说、读、写的小心。我们应该花足够的时间在练习英语。如果我们继续努力学英语,我们将能够做得很好一天。
九、How I learn English 十二,我想成为一名发明家
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well. I like English very much. I 电视、电话、冰箱、汽车、飞机、计算机和其他许多事情是重要的发明。他们已经大大改变了我们的生活。许多人都有always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class, I listen carefully, speak loudly and write 自己的想法和愿望。他们想创造一些新的东西了世界。我就是其中一个。我想成为一名发明家在未来,发明能带来的乐carefully and take notes if necessary. After class, I do my homework carefully. I watch English movies and listen to 趣,对我们的生活,使我们的日常生活更方便。我们的生活越来越好。现在我是一个高中学生。我将尽我所能努力学习功English songs. I have booked an English newspaper. It’s Times English Post, I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of 课,使我的梦想成真。
remembering the new words because I master many good methods. I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day. That’s all.
九、我怎样学习英语
嗨,大家好。我很荣幸跟你们讲讲如何学好英语。我非常喜欢英语。我总是预览和主人的主要思想课上课前。在课堂上,
我仔细听着,大声说话、写,如果有必要认真记笔记。课后,我做我的家庭作业仔细。我看英文电影和听英文歌曲。我已
经预定了一份英文报纸。这是次英文帖子,我可以从中学到很多东西。我不是怕记忆新单词,因为我掌握许多很好的方法。
我希望你努力学习英语,天天向上。这是所有。 十三、I want to be a tour guide I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on, I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true. 十三、我想成为一名导游
我想成为一名导游,因为北京将举办2008年奥运会。将有许多人来中国的来自世界各地。他们中大多数人都不懂中文。
他们想去参观中国许多有趣的地方。我可以成为一个导游。我赚的钱,太。我将会多么幸福!所以从现在开始,我必须努力
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher 学习。我要每天都要学英语。我会尽我所能让它成真。
attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for
help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my
homework, I always read some English and magazines. Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十、我怎样提高我的英语
当我开始学习英语,我就不会它。我很担心在那个时间。后来我1 istened老师在课堂上专心,仔细地做着笔记。如果我
有任何问题,我问英语老师或同学帮忙。我每天早晨读英语文章,听着大声的英语录音带。在晚上,做完作业后,我总是读
一些英语和杂志。现在我是一个最好的学生在英语在我的课。 十、How I improved my English 十四、I like the Internet The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet. The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try?
十四、我喜欢上网{protect,the,earth作文8句}.
互联网是扮演着重要的角色在我们的日常生活中。它是非常有用的。我经常因特网上搜索一些信息。我可以读到最新的
消息,买些东西,并获得各种信息从它。我还可以下载的信息,我需要,我可以发电子邮件,打电话到朋友在网上聊天。最重
要的是,我能学习我所有的功课在互联网上。
互联网使我的生活更有趣和丰富多彩,有一个很宽的影响我的学习和生活。我非常喜欢上网。你怎么样/你来试试好 十一、The importance of English English is the most widely spoken in the world. It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in
English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge. English is used by travellers and business people around the
world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in
China are interested in learning English. 十五、The Internet The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go shopping
English is so useful that we must learn it well. Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with
our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of our class.
十一,英语的重要性 us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. It’s bad for our 英语是世界上使用最广泛的。这是说,对于大多数人来说,在美国、英国、加拿大、澳大利亚、新西兰等国家。它也是非eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.
常广泛地用作外语在世界上许多其他国家。这是广泛应用于不同国家之间的贸易。超过四分之三的因特网上的信息是十五、互联网
用英文写的,太。它是真的是通向如此丰富知识的桥梁。使用英语的旅游者和商人环游世界。它是世界上最重要的语言,互联网正成为越来越多的了解这一点对我们至关重要。没有它,我们不能做的更好的工作。我们可以去购物,就不能从我
们的房子。我们能听音乐或看电影在互联网上。它也能帮助很多学习。我们可以学到很多知识对不同的学科而言,尽快因为它是如此的广泛应用。这就是为什么中国有越来越多的人对学英语有兴趣。
英语真是有用,我们必须把它学好。现在让我们努力学习,学好它,看看谁更快、
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