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篇一:《作文》
PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening. Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要领点评】
这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的
话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she
like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句
子，使读者眼前为之一亮。
Don’t be against the traffic rules
I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I
wait.
If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never
against the traffic rules.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很
形象。
小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意
行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。
I Love My Family
Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother,
my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by
plane.
I love my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？ 小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？
How to get to the science museum
We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum? The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office
and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the
science museum.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢？通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路
线够清吧！
小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑
等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。
Planting Trees
It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.
篇二:《六年级作文范文》
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六年级作文范文
A Field Trip
It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited.
Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over
there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.
Planting Trees
It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.
I want to plant a tree in our garden. Dad and Mum are very happy. They like green. Dad helps me plant the tree. First, we dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I
water it. I am so excited and I wait for the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. Now it has lots of leaves. It grows fast.
We should plant more trees. They make our world beautiful.
Tom’s Holiday
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
A Post Card from John
Dear Sarah,
This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back home.
John
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My favourite festival
My favourite festival is Spring Festival. It’s in January or February. People in China celebrate it, and there are many things to do. We often have a big dinner from the first day of Spring Festival to the last day. We often go to our relatives' home and have a big dinner and also we have a big dinner at home. We often have many things to talk and we are very happy. After dinner, we watch the TV programs of CCTV. There are many plays, and we often laugh at them. At midnight, we don’t go to bed but wait for the new year. We always let off fireworks. It’s very exciting and interesting! At Spring Festival, we always visit our relatives and friends too. Children are very excited to visit their relatives because they can get some red packets from their relatives.
Spring Festival is very interesting, isn't it?
篇三:《作文》
2015届中考英语作文各类话题汇总（精华版）
更新时间：2015/3/25 8:59:37 发布者：佚名
o1.学校生活
o例一要点：
o1.杰克是一名八年级学生，就读于伦敦附近的一所学校; o2.他喜欢的学科是中文课，他认为学习外语很有趣;
o3.学校每学期有一个“读书周”，他和他的同学们喜欢这个“读书周”，他们可以读到学校图书馆的许多书和杂志;他很喜欢他的学校。
oJack is a Year 8 student at a school near London. His favorite subject is Chinese. He thinks learning foreign languages is fun. His school has a Reading Week every term. Jack and his classmates love it. They can read many books and magazines from school library. Jack loves his school very much.
o学校生活
o例二要点：
o1.南希14岁，是7年级学生;
o2.她每周放学后打两次排球;她喜欢这项运动，花很多时间练习;
o3.每周一她去“同伴俱乐部”;在那里，老生给新生讲学校生活情况;同伴朱莉帮助她全面了解新学校情况;朱莉是她的好朋友。
oNancy is fourteen years old. She is in the seventh grade. Twice a week. She plays volleyball after school. She loves this game and spends a lot of time practising. Every Monday, Nancy goes to a Buddy Club. There, older students talk to new students about school life. Her buddy Julie helps her learn all about her school. Julie is her best friend.
o2.阅读 Reading
o例一要点：
o1.我喜欢看罗伯特.路易斯.史蒂文森的书，我认为它们真的太精彩了;
o2.比如，《金银岛》讲述的是一个小男孩的故事;他出海航行，寻找宝藏;故事给了我很大的信心;
o3.读完这本书后，我不再像以前那样害羞;将来，我还想去旅游，拥有一些令人兴奋的经历。
I enjoy reading the books of Robert Louis
Stevenson because I find them really exciting.
For example, Treasure Island tells the story of a
young boy. He sails the sea to look for hidden
treasure. His story gives me a lot of confidence.
After reading the book, I am not as shy as I used
to be. I also want to travel and have exciting
experiences in the future.
o阅读
o例二要点：
o1.我喜欢阅读;每周我花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书;我对历史题材的书感兴趣，但是我最爱看小说;
o2.朋友们给我很多读书建议;我们常见面，讨论读什么书;
o3.阅读总是段美好的时光。好书让我们忙碌一天之后轻松下来;同时也向我们打开了一个全新的世界。
I love reading. I spend over seven hours a week
reading different types of books. I am interested
in history books, but I like novels best. My friends give me lots of advice on books. We often meet together and discuss what to read. Reading is always wonderful time. Good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole world to me.
oMy cousin Andrew is crazy about DIY. He loves to repair things and decorate his house. But when he finishes, the house always looks terrible! He once tried to put in a brighter light in his bedrom, but he made a mistake. Then his whole house had a power cut. So I bought some books about DIY for him, and I also advised him to take some courses in DIY.
o自己动手做
o例二要点：
o1.这里有一些制作水果沙拉的小建议;
o2.首先，使用当季水果;其次，搭配不同颜色的水果;比如，把红色的苹果、青色的梨子和紫色的葡萄搭配起来会使沙拉看上去五彩缤纷;
o3.最后，在食用沙拉前再做沙拉;有些水果在空气中放置一段时间后快变色; oHere arre some tips for making a fruit salad. First, use fruit in season. Then, use fruit of differrent colours. For example, mixing red apples, green pears and purple grapes together will make the salad look very colourful. Last, prepare the fruit salad just before you are going to eat it. Some of the fruit will quickly turn brown when you leave it in the air for some time.
o4.大熊猫
o例一要点：
o1.人人都喜欢大熊猫;大熊猫温顺且安静，吃一种特别的竹子;
o2.野外现仅有大约一千六百只大熊猫，他们的数目越来越少;
o3.大熊猫生活的地方正在变为农田，而且人们在为取其皮毛而猎捕它们;如此下去，世界上很快将再无大熊猫。
Everyone likes giant pandas. Giant pandas are quiet and peaceful. They eat a special kind of bamboo. Now, there are only about a 1,600 giant pandas in the world. Their number is going down. Their living areas are becoming farmlands. Also, people hunt them for their fur. If this continues, there will soon be no giant pandas in the world.
o大熊猫
o例二要点：
o1.熊猫宝宝名叫“希望”，出生时重约90克,每
o 天喝母奶;6个月时，开始吃竹笋和竹叶;
o2.可悲的是，大熊猫在野外很难存活;假如人们砍掉树和森林，大熊猫将无栖身之处;
o3.我们应当尽力保护它们。
The baby panda is called Xi Wang. When she was born, she weighed about 90 grams. She drank her mother"s milk every day. When she was six months old, she started to eat bamboo. Sadly, it is difficult for giant pandas to survive in the wild. If people cut down trees and forests, giant pandas will have nowhere to live. We should try our best to protect them.
o5.饮食
o例一要点：
o1.为了更加健康，我已改变了饮食;
o2.以前，我很少吃水果、蔬菜，喜欢糕点、糖果和可乐;
o3.现在，早餐时我总吃一根香蕉、一些面包，喝一杯牛奶;午餐时，通常吃鱼和蔬菜;
o4.我现越来越健康，学习情况也因此而大有改善。
I have changed my diet because I want to be healthier. Before, I seldom ate fruit and vegetables. I liked cakes, sweets and cola. Now, I always have a banana, some bread and a glass of milk for breakfast. I usually eat fish and vegetables for lunch. I"m now becoming healthier and healthier. Because of this, my studies have greatly improved.
o饮食{the,nature,park作文}.
o例二要点：
o1.以前，汤姆喜欢薯条和汉堡包，吃很多甜的零食，但很少吃水果和蔬菜; o2.现在，为了更健康，他已改变了饮食;早餐通常喝点牛奶，和吃点面包;正餐时常吃米饭、鱼和蔬菜;饭后常吃些水果;
o3.汤姆现在健康多了，他知道改变不健康的饮食很重要。
Before, Tom loved chips and hamburgers and ate a lot of sweet snacks, but he seldom ate fruit and vegetables. Now, he has changed his diet because he wants to be healthier. For breakfast, he usually has some milk and bread. He usually has rice, fish and vegetables for dinner. After meals he often eats some fruit. Tom is much healthier now. He knows it is important to change an unhealthy diet.
篇四:《Unit 6 In a Nature Park》
Unit 6 In a Nature Park
【重点词汇】
grass（草） cloud （云） sky（天空） flower（花朵） river（河流） lake（湖泊） forest （森林） mountain（山脉） path（小道） park（公园） house（房子） bridge（桥） villiage（村庄） city（城市） building （楼房） tree（树木） road （道路） clean（干净） farm（农场） holiday（假期） air （空气） any（任何的）
【重要句型】
听、说、读、写以下句型，能够用这些句型询问自然公园及村庄的基本情况并作答。 Is there a nature park in the city? 城市里有自然公园吗？Yes, there is.是的，有。
Is there a river in the park? 公园里有河流吗？No,there isn’t.不，没有。
Are there any pandas in the mountains? 山里有熊猫吗？No,there aren’t.不，没有。
Are there any fish in the rivers? 河流里有鱼吗？Yes, there are.是的，有。
【核心语法】
1. 在Are there any pandas in the mountain？这个句子中出现了单词any,它表示一些的意思，
在疑问句中“某地有些…..吗？”和否定句“某地没有一些…..”要用any。但是在肯定句中，表示“某地有些….”时，要用some.例如：
There are some bridges in my village.我的村庄有许多桥。
There aren’t any bridges in my village.我的村庄没有桥。
Are there any bridges in your village?你们村里有桥吗？
在上面的例句中，我们不仅可以区分some和any的使用，同时可以发现在肯定句和否定句中的my, 放在疑问句中要改为your。
2. The water is clean.水是清洁的。 The sky is blue.天是蓝的。
The air is fresh.空气是新鲜的。 The clouds are white.云是白色的。
Practice1
一、翻译下列单词
1.天空______________2.云____________3.山；山脉___________
4.河流_________ 5.花____________ 6.草 ________________
7.湖泊__________ 8.森林__________ 9.路；小道___________
10.公园_________ 11.照片__________ 12.乡村；村庄 ________
13.城市__________ 14.房子__________ 15.桥 ________________
16.树_________ 17.公路 __________ 18.建筑物_____________
19.干净的________________ 20.农场______________________
二、根据中文写单词
1.There is __________(桥) near the _________(房子).
2. A: Are there any tall _________(建筑物) in your _______(村庄)?
B: No,________ ________(没有).
3.There are many __________ (树) along the __________ (公路).
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