【 – 小学作文】
篇一:《改错作文》
In order to make use to learning materials, the Students’ Union of our school are planning an activity. The school leavers are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the student in the lower grades. The idea, that is intended to encourage a low-carbon lifestyle, is praised and supported by the teachers and students. The activity will be hold on the first floor of the school library and so it will last for eleven days , from June 10 to 20. As student , I strong support the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. I hope this activity would continue every year in the future.
假定你是李华，想提高自己的英语听力和口语水平。你想请在一家英语培训中心工作的美国朋友Nancy 为你推荐一位辅导老师。请按下列要点写一封邮件：
1. 介绍自己的英语水平
2. 说明对辅导教师的要求
3. 约定上课时间
注意：1.词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使英文连贯
3. 开头已为你写好
Dear Nancy，{有关出错和改错的作文}.
I’m writing to ask whether you could recommend a tutor for me. Yours, Li Hua
篇二:《作文改错》
Some are in favor of the ideas that English should be cancel.
English can let us to save so much of english.
The number of the students for the opinion are 60percent.
It is useful that study english well for us.
Some are for favor of the idea that you can reduce the burden on our learning.
There are 60% students agree, they thinks cancled english can decrease students burden and we can pay more attention in chinese that we don’t spent time on studying english.
篇三:《改错和作文》
Fast food
Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.
There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Second, you can either eat it there or take it away. Third, the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable. However, in{有关出错和改错的作文}.
terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value. Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. It’s good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.{有关出错和改错的作文}.{有关出错和改错的作文}.
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
Some of us held it important to research the outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new
resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life.
However, others think very differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous fro astronauts to do such work.
In my opinion, people should be pioneering and therefore such explorations
into the outer space are worth trying out.
篇四:《作文改错1》{有关出错和改错的作文}.
Two kinds of people who choose to live alone on purpose
Listing:
The first group: artists seeking inspiration
example: story of a writer
The second group: people being disappointed with life
example: story of a woman
Thoughts on Living Alone
Everyone hopes to live a way of life decided by himself. And in the modern society, it’s easy to find that there are two kinds of people who choose to live alone on purpose.
The first group is artists who would like to seek inspiration for their works. To take the story of Tao Yuanming as an example, he looked forward to living alone so that nobody else could interfere with his creativity and he could experience anything in the nature with the whole body and soul. He thought being alone might be a key to his success.
The other group is people being disappointed with life. To cite the story of a woman as an example in support of this purpose, she was hurt by her former lover, and cheated seriously by someone in her community. Being hopeless about the society, she was gratified to learn that living alone could calm herself down and provide her with a comfortable place for her heart.
Thus, all the people have rights to choose their own way of life which does no harm to others. The only thing we can conduct is to understand and respect their choice.
篇五:《作文改错》
1. As the development of computer and Internet, e-education…{有关出错和改错的作文}.
2. Following the internet progresses day after day, e-education becomes more and more popular.
3. Following the society’s progress, more and more people will accept it.
4. As knows to everyone, … /As it is known to us, …
5. In my opinion, It is only a good supplement that it can lead to a better education.
6. As it is coming, many new things come out.
7. But others say that it is bad to our society, students learn by E-mail don’t have the chance to
cooperate with each other.
8. As the streets are becoming more and more crowd, study at home is quite a good way to …
9. Others argue that e-education has not been understood easier than the old education.
10. It is only when people don’t want to study that e-education lead to helpless of study.
11. They think it you don’t change, you will get left behind. As the same of now university can
afford not to be on the Internet.
12. I’m agree of the former view.
13. Students don’t need to go around to study as the rise of this new kind of teaching.
14. It is not sure that education is instead by e-education.
15. E-education is necessary as the development of society.
16. They are of the opinion that any college won’t be on the Internet can’t carry on.
17. Others argue that e-education make people can’t communicate with the other people.
18. Other argue that how do we make certain that …
19. But too many laid off teacher have nothing to do may lead to society problems.
20. As the world developing, education of the internet is becoming more and more widespread.
21. As is know to all, …
22. It is known to everybody, Internet is changing our lives.
23. As known to everyone, e-education is becoming more and more popular.
24. +