【 – 高中作文】
第一篇:《走出作文教学怪圈》
走出作文教学的怪圈
近来，作文教学似乎走进了一个怪圈，就是不少语文教师总是违背写作的规律，一味地围绕高考讲作文，钻研一些所谓“套路”，传授一些得分的“诀窍”。学生为考试对此视若至宝，所写文章循规蹈矩，很难有创新之举。长此以往，这将是语文教学的悲哀。 在教学过程中，为突破这个怪圈，笔者顺从写作的规律，多方面积极培养学生作文的内在素质，下面将做具体阐释。
一、培养学生的人文思想
一篇学生作文有没有积极的思想是其成功与否的重要标志。人文思想是文章以情感人的基础，是学生进步思想的根源。语文课文大多选自古今中外的名篇佳作，有着深刻的思想性，我们语文教师要善于挖掘课文中的人文思想，并结合学生实际和社会现实，娓娓道来，以美育美，让我们的学生树立起尊重他人、平等待人、尊老爱幼、热爱人民、勇于为正义事业而献身的人文观念。教学过程中在培养学生的人文精神的同时，还应建议他们把这种思想积极地体现到作文中去。
二、培养学生观察体验生活的能力
长期以来，受考试指挥棒的影响，我们的学生在作文中一直处于被动地位，教师命题，学生写作，教师批改、讲评。学生即使对要写的题目没有真情实感，但为应付考试，也要“为文而造情”，写出来的文章千篇一律、味同嚼蜡。试想，情感的荒漠怎么可能长出动人的花朵呢?那么作为教师，我们应该怎样做呢？
首先，要帮助学生揭开作文的神秘面纱。平时同学们在一起，叽叽喳喳，有说不完的话，可是提起笔来就觉得没什么可写。产生这种情况是因为学生对作文有神秘感，认为作文是非同一般的事情，一作文就端起架子，“我要写作文了”。我们要帮助学生消除这个障碍，让学生懂得作文不是堆砌词语，不是搜集或编造重大的或离奇的事件，而是要写自己最熟悉的事情和真实的思想感情，只不过是用笔来说话罢了。其实学生的材料并不少，小至学校和家庭，大至社会和世界，其中很多事情会引起他们的关注和兴趣。他们的喜怒哀乐、爱好、追求和思想，有很多可以拿来当材料，只要他们能细致入微地关注周围的人和事，不断充实自己的生活库存，作文时就不会感到没有东西可写，而是有话要说、有事要写了。
好的文章来自真实的生活体验，生活是创作永不枯竭的源泉，在生活中有无穷无尽的鲜活的素材供我们采撷。我们为人之师要解放学生的心灵，让作文教学走出课堂，培养学生热爱自然、热爱生活、热爱人民的情感，多给学生布置观察体验生活的作业，培养他们观察、体验生活的习惯，提高他们观察、体验生活的能力。
在教学过程中，首先要注意引导学生去观察体验亲情。现在，我们许多学生是独生子女，又大多娇生惯养，很难理解父母之情，动辄就和父母吵嘴斗气。我们布置了“体验亲情”的作文后，有个同学写了篇《母亲的目光》，文中写道：“他从母亲慈祥的目光中，体验到了母爱的伟大、母爱的无私、母爱的执着，他深深地忏悔自己曾用无礼的语言刺痛了母亲那慈祥的目光，并决心今后一定会发奋
学习，为母亲的目光增添无比的亮色。”读后使人不禁为之潸然泪下。
培养学生观察体验生活的能力，目的是缩小作文教学与现实生活的差距，为学生作文找到源头活水。刘国正先生曾说过，“语文天然是与生活联系在一起的”“语文一旦与生活联系在一起，马上就生动活泼起来。”是的，只要我们教师注意从这方面加以引导，我们的作文教学完全可能会成为另外一个样子，会变得丰富多彩起来。
三、培养学生积累知识的能力
苏轼曾言：“为学之道在厚积而薄发。”这句话是说，做学问的基础在于积累，其实写作也是一样。因此，要提高学生的写作水平，就必须培养学生积累知识的能力。我们认为让学生熟读、背诵和做笔记是积累知识的有效途径。
熟读和背诵是我国自古以来的传统语文教学经验。“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟”“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”讲的就是这个道理。主动读和背是训练语文能力和提高语文水平的重要方法。在读和背的过程中，学生能感知语言文字的知识和规律，历练文章的结构和条理，又在读和背的过程中，开阔了视野，训练了思维，增长了知识。因此，在教学过程中，应重视培养学生的熟读和背诵的习惯，每篇课文都给学生留熟读或背诵的作业。在教学过程中，还应注意指导学生阅读和背诵的方法，并引导学生从课内走向课外，进一步拓宽学生的视野。
俗话说，好记性不如烂笔头。在培养学生熟读背诵时，还应引导学生设立材料库，让学生积极记笔记，使学生习惯了圈点勾画和批注，并基本掌握了摘抄、做卡片、编提纲、写体会等做读书笔记的方法。笔记的过程是丰富知识的过程，笔记的目的是为了应用，因此，教师还要求学生笔记后要经常翻阅、记忆，只有这样才能将知识变为己有，运用起来才能信手拈来、得心应手。
四、培养学生表现生活的能力
学生有了人文精神，有了对生活的真实体验，有了丰富的知识积累，但要提高学生的写作水平，我们还必须引导学生运用所学知识去把自己的情感体验表现出来，养成勤写的习惯。勤写，这是提高学生写作水平的根本途径。在教学过程中，要求学生每天都要把自己生活中观察到的、理解到的、体验到的、自己认为有意义的东西写下来，哪怕只有几句也好，但必须坚持不懈。同时建议大家彼此交流，把“写”也开放起来，力争促成彼此学习、互相促进的局面。 要进一步丰富学生的生活。“课内打基础，课外求发展”是语文教学的最高目标。作文教学也应当走出课堂，让学生更多地接触社会、接触自然，从而丰富他们的生活内容。例如：参加喜欢运动，做有趣的游戏；同学聚会、知识竞赛；观看优秀爱国主义的影片、录像、电视剧；参加社会公益活动、文娱体育活动和参观访问记；参加旅游，访问老干部、老教师、英雄模范等，这就为学生的写作积累了丰富的内容，不仅有利于作文，而且对学生的德、智、体等方面生动活泼的发展也有很大的好处。
勤写，培养了学生表现生活的能力，激发了学生的写作热情，这对提高学生的写作水平有着积极的意义。教师面对学生进行作文教学，必须尊重学生的个性差异，充分发挥各自的创造性，坚持让学生表达自己的意思。
总之，走出作文教学的怪圈，培养学生作文的内在素质，这是素质教育的要求，也是我们每一位语文教师必须树立的观念。只有这样，我们的学生作文才会有所创新，我们的作文教学才会迎来一个充满生机的春天。
第二篇:《怪圈》
第三篇:《看图作文》
2010届高三看图作文训练
1. 下面的图表显示了某校高三学生周末放假的学习生活情况。关于看图作文‘’怪圈‘’。
Ways to spend the weekend
根据上图信息，请以 “Ways to spend the weekend” 为题，用英语短文。 要求如下：
1. 简要描述图中的信息；
2. 说明原因 （为了高效学习；锻炼身体；争分夺秒……）;
3. 谈谈你的看法。 户外运动
25%60%
Ways to spend the weekend
As can be seen from the chart, senior three students have different ways to spend their weekends. Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do, while 25% students choose to study at school during weekends. The least studnts , accounting for 15% , take outdoor activities to spend their weekends.
Various reasons are responsible for their different choices. Those who choose to go back home believe that a good rest does help them relax and work more efficiently during the school time. Outdoor-activity lovers hold the opinoin that taking exercise is a wonderful way to refresh themselves. However, a small number of students living far away from home tend to stay at school to save every minute to study.
Personally, despite the heavy study pressure, senior three year doesn’t necessarily mean studying all the time. Sometimes a good rest and proper exercise can be of vital importance.
2. 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信询问你们的学习情况。请你根据下图信息，写一封回信。谈谈自从你校实行新课改，尝试新的学习方法以来，你们学习情况的变化。
One possible version.
Dear Tom,
It is great to hear form you again. There are many things going on in our school. In fact, things have got much better since we started a different way of learning.
In the past our teachers usually stood in front of the class talking all the time while
we
students listened, busily taking notes. After a tiring day at school, we always had so much homework to do that sometimes we even worked late into the night. Now we are active in class. We often have discussions in pairs or in groups. After class we enjoy all kinds of activities, such as going in for sports, doing experiments or surfing the Internet.关于看图作文‘’怪圈‘’。
We are extremely happy about the changes in our studies.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely
Lihua
3. 第三节 书面表达（满分30分）
假如你是某英文报的小记者，针对当前流行“偷莱”网络游戏这一现象了采访，请就他们的看法写一篇短文，内容要点如下：
观点一：
1．体验田园生活，享受乐趣 2．忘记烦恼，减轻压力 3．增长知识
观点二：
1．沉迷网络，影响健康 2．耽误学习、工作 3．可能影响孩子的价值观 One Possible Version
Nowadays,“stealin vegetables”on line is becoming more and more popular,
especially among the white collars in the cities．People hold different opinions over this．
Some befieve the game is popular for several reasons．First,people can experience farm life and enjoy the pleasure without going out．Second．it helps forget the trouble in life and reduce pressures in work and study．Third，by playingthe game，people can gain somen agricultural knowledge．
However,some other people dislike the game．In their opinion，gamers get addicted to “stealing vegetables” easily,which does great harm to their health because of lack of sleep and exercise．Besides．too much time on the game means less time on work and study. Last but not the least,if children join the games, their social values will be affected to a certain degree,which may lead to some social problems like stealing．
4. 近年来，在大学新生入学时，媒体对“父母护送子女上学”的现象作了一些报道，引发了许多讨论，赞同和不赞同的声音都有。假如某英语报记者对你进行采访，征求你对此现象的看法，请你根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达自己的观点，并说明理由。
注意：
1．只能选择写一种观点，赞同或不赞同；除提示外还可适当增加你认为重要的理由； 参考词汇：放心feel relieved；新生freshman
Possible Versions
For: I think it’s normal and understandable for parents to accompany their children to college.
Firstly, most students have never stayed far away from home until they are admitted to universities. Since this is the first time for them to travel to college, they need their parents’ company and help.
Secondly, being the only child in the family, they lack social experience, so their parents will not feel relieved unless they accompany them to college. Thirdly, parents can take the opportunity to travel with their children, relaxing and enjoying sightseeing on the journey.
Last but not least， parents can help their children to get used to the college environment sooner and make a good start of their college life. As far as I am concerned， I would be very happy if my parents accompany me to my university. Against：I don’t think it’s necessary for parents to accompany their children to college. We have grown up and can look after ourselves without our parents’ help. As far as I am concerned， I can manage to travel alone to college。 I may also invite some Other students as companions if possible。 I’m sure by relying on myself I can train myself to be more independent and gain more social experience。I believe the service for freshmen must be good enough and well organized. I can fit in with the new environment and make new friends very soon.
What's more, it's convenient for me to keep in touch with my family by phone or through the Internet whenever and wherever I need. If my parents want to accompany me to college, I’ll certainly try to persuade them not to.
5. 假如你是李华，从报纸上看到甲型H1N1流感 (A/H1N1 flu) 在加拿大流行。你很为你的加拿大笔友Kathy的健康担心。请给她写一封信，询问她的健康状况以及她们学校是否有甲型H1N1流感病例，并给她提出防护建议（至少三条）。参考词汇：感染
infect关于看图作文‘’怪圈‘’。
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6. 下图中欧阳的妈妈正在与老师交谈，请根据图画所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，发表自己的感想。关于看图作文‘’怪圈‘’。
注意：
1. 仔细品读图画中的文字，要突出自己的感想，不要作简单描述；
mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.
The picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life. The parents try to satisfy their children physically, arranging everything for their children. As a result, they expect their children should get good marks in return. They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children. However, when children don’t obey their will or can’t live up to their expectations, they will complain a lot. In a word, too much and little communication make the love selfish.
In my opinion, parents should communicate with their children as much as possible. Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. I believe mutual understanding and toleration can make them both happy.
7. Directions: Write an English composition in 120～150 words according to the situation given below in Chinese.
1. 学校都用考试成绩来衡量学生
2. 考试可能带来的副作用
3. 你对考试的看法
One possible version :
In most schools and universities the examination is used as a chief means of
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whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.
To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since students and teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to only training their students exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only standard for academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.
In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and adopt something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
10. 请根据以下提示，以“节约——从身边做起”（Save In Everyday Life)为题写一篇
One possible version:
As a middle school student , we should take an active part in creating a society that saves.
On the one hand , the natural resources are limited . We don’t have enough water , oil or forest in many places . On the other hand , people keep cutting down more trees and letting out more carbon dioxide . At the same time , everyone can see that the environment is getting worse , People suffer from more typhoons and tornados nowadays . What’s worse , air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious.
In my opinion , we students should do something to stop wasting . We can save food , water , paper ,electricity , etc . in our daily life . Meanwhile , we should take buses instead of cars ,refuse to use chopsticks which are only used once and don’t use plastic bags.
11. 三年的高中即将结束。请你以“I will remember my school life forever”为题，为英语校刊投稿。
注意：文章应包括下面四幅图的内容
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第四篇:《探索怪圈（1）》
20xx年，我和万贝拉、蒋伟来到英格兰南部，这里有一个让世界科学家为难的怪事：这里的人们每天早上起来，都会发现自己的麦地里有一个个美丽的几何圆圈，圆圈里的庄稼都倒在地上，而1991年的3个怪圈更令人费解，他们的摆放位置显示出相当深奥的模糊数学知识，在20世纪，这种事很少发生，而现在，这种事愈来愈平凡，平均每天晚上会出现5到6个麦田怪圈。我们到这里来，就是为了揭开这个谜。
早上，我们几个搭上了一艘轮船。“真倒霉，这么破烂的船，速度慢死了……”蒋伟大声埋怨道，“请肃静，请肃静！”船上的播音器打断了他的话，蒋伟马上把声音压低了，“回去坐飞机吧？”万贝拉为难的说“不一定，如果考察没有成功，我们的钱只够乘船到土耳齐首都安卡拉了，连回中国都有问题……”“没想到船票涨价了，”我也对自己的任务不满，“真不知道当时我有多笨，竟答应你们来这里！”“埋怨也没用，反正我们已经摊上了这破事！”万贝拉把自己背包里的东西西里哗啦全倒了出来“望远镜、放大镜、尺子……”这时，蒋伟也把他的旅行箱打开，“我拿的东西最多，你们也不来帮我！”“里边有啥东西呀？”“烤箱、饭桶、铁锅还有……”“你怎么没把马桶也带来？”我白了他一眼，“你这是搬家呀！”蒋伟听了，红着脸笑了。
三天后，我们到达了目的地，租了间茅草屋住了下来。
草屋不算太小，凹凸不平的墙壁，天花板是半露天的，（还有一半是石头搭的），一个扑满灰尘的石桌边，有一张很大的茅草床，够我们三个睡了，床边还有一道破旧的木梯子。房子的四面八方是一望无垠的麦地，里面有七八个怪圈。毫无疑问，这里是观察怪圈的好地方。
蒋伟一进门，就叫了起来：“这儿是什么鬼地方！”“怎么了？”万贝拉背着沉甸甸的行李，在外边问道。“这种床谁能睡几天算他厉害！”“我看看。”我扔下行李，跑过去，一下子躺了上去，“真舒服！就是草太多了，加上被单就行了。”我对这张床有了评判。“是吗？”蒋伟也跑过来躺在了上面，“还行，我去拿被单。”蒋伟跳下床，把自己的行李打开，铺了上去。
晚上，我们一个个爬上天花板，在梯子上架了一个望远镜和一盏照明灯。
我们几个每天晚上的值班方案是一个人值班，另外两个在一边玩自带的手提电脑，遇到紧急情况值班的人立马叫另外两个人过来看，四小时换一个人。
我们这样已经过了三天，个个眼睛红得像核桃似的，想睁开都难。于是今天，我们抓住机会，好好睡了半天，可下午，一个小孩跑了进来，说他家着火了，请我们帮他去灭火，我们听了，半信半疑，连忙跑到两三百米外的一栋别墅，发现真的起火了，急忙撒起脚丫子飞快地往一、两公里外的池塘去打水，再跑回来浇水，发现水太少无法灭掉火时，又跑回去，打了水再跑回来扑火，我们就这样跑了整整两个来回，最终，大火总算扑灭了。那个小孩感激万分，他说他叫马克，叫我们有空到他家去做客，他要带我们去钓鱼，我们高兴地答应了他。
这回，我们可累得不行了，万贝拉呼哧呼哧地喘着粗气，蒋伟弓着背，耷拉着手，指尖差一点就碰到地面了，在远处看好像一直瘦瘦的猩猩，我一边抹汗，一边往喉咙里灌水。
总算到家了，蒋伟“身手敏捷”地跳上床，大字型躺在床上，如果这是在奥运会上的话，他保准能得跳高第一。万贝拉不管石桌擦没擦，一屁股坐在石桌上，叫道：“王家齐，把水拿来！”“哦。”我灌了太多的水，喝饱了才发觉自己快不行了，我缓慢地把水杯递给了万贝拉，转过身又打了一个饱嗝，“今天晚上还考不考察呀？”蒋伟问我们俩，万贝拉点了点头，又开始灌水了。
晚上，我们准备了十二杯咖啡，我一口气喝了