【 – 高中作文】
篇一:《关于成功的作文》
初稿
When it comes to the to the topic career success, everybody has his own idea. But an inspiring idea goes that career success is not a opportunity, but the ambition to achieve success, which reveals the quality of success. Career success will be achieved only by showing great ambition to confront challenge and developing the capacity to defeat them.
There is no denying that we may encounter many problems in our career life, but that does not mean we are deprived of success. If we have ambition to do it, we can succeed, just as a famous person said “Poor and stronger, not falling.” Please never lose our ambition at all times. Because it is the invisible path to success. In our lives no one is definitely immune to problems, but we may achieve career success through endeavoring.
Therefore, it is of great necessity to equip ourselves with the ambition. Only can we are proficient dealing with problems, can we fully success and live a meaningful life. In conclusion, ambition is important. It is not only a source of success, but also of pride and achievement. Many people go through lives with dreams, but with no honest ambition let them come true.
自评
When it comes to the to the topic career success, everybody has his own idea. But an inspiring idea goes that career success is not a opportunity, but the ambition to achieve success, which reveals the quality of success. Career success will be achieved only by showing great ambition to confront challenge and developing the capacity to defeat them.
There is no denying that we may encounter many problems in our career life, but that does not mean we are deprived of success. If we have ambition to do it, we can succeed, just as a famous person said “Poor and stronger, not falling.” Please never lose our ambition at all times. Because it is the invisible path to success. In our lives no one is definitely immune to problems, but we may achieve career success through endeavoring.
Therefore, it is of great necessity to equip ourselves with the ambition. Only can we are proficient dealing with problems, can we fully success and live a meaningful life. In conclusion, ambition is important. It is not only a source of success, but also of pride and achievement. Many people go through lives with dreams, but with no honest ambition let them come true.
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互评（李春霞）
When it comes to the to the topic career success, everybody has his own idea. But an inspiring idea goes that career success is not a opportunity, but the ambition to achieve success, which reveals the quality of success. Career success will be achieved only by showing great ambition to confront challenge and developing the capacity to defeat them.
There is no denying that we may encounter many problems in our career life, but that does not mean we are deprived of success. If we have ambition to do it, we can succeed, just as a famous person said “Poor and stronger, not falling.” Please never lose our ambition at all times. Because it is the invisible path to success. In our lives no one is definitely immune to problems, but we may achieve career success through endeavoring.
Therefore, it is of great necessity to equip ourselves with the ambition. Only can we are proficient dealing with problems, can we fully success and live a meaningful life. In conclusion, ambition is important. It is not only a source of success, but also of pride and achievement. Many people go through lives with dreams, but with no honest ambition let them come true.
互评（战越）
When it comes to the to the topic career success, everybody has his own idea. But an inspiring idea goes that career success is not a opportunity, but the ambition to achieve success, which reveals the quality of success. Career success will be achieved only by showing great ambition to confront challenge and developing the capacity to defeat them.
There is no denying that we may encounter many problems in our career life, but that does not mean we are deprived of success. If we have ambition to do it, we can succeed, just as a famous person said “Poor and stronger, not falling.” Please never lose our ambition at all times. Because it is the invisible path to success. In our lives no one is definitely immune to problems, but we may achieve career success through endeavoring.
Therefore, it is of great necessity to equip ourselves with the ambition. Only can we are proficient dealing with problems, can we fully success and live a meaningful life. In conclusion, ambition is important. It is not only a source of success, but also of pride and achievement. Many people go through lives with dreams, but with no honest ambition let them come true.
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互评（刘兴顺）
When it comes to the to the topic career success, everybody has his own idea. But an inspiring idea goes that career success is not a opportunity, but the ambition to achieve success, which reveals the quality of success. Career success will be achieved only by showing great ambition to confront challenge and developing the capacity to defeat them.
There is no denying that we may encounter many problems in our career life, but that does not mean we are deprived of success. If we have ambition to do it, we can succeed, just as a famous person said “Poor and stronger, not falling.” Please never lose our ambition at all times. Because it is the invisible path to success. In our lives no one is definitely immune to problems, but we may achieve career success through endeavoring.
Therefore, it is of great necessity to equip ourselves with the ambition. Only can we are proficient dealing with problems, can we fully success and live a meaningful life. In conclusion, ambition is important. It is not only a source of success, but also of pride and achievement. Many people go through lives with dreams, but with no honest ambition let them come true.
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篇二:《作文》
演讲稿-良好的饮食习惯
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.
To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we'd better have meals regularly.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
That's all. Thank you!
2 上网的利弊
The other day our class held a discussion on whether we teenagers should go on line in our spare time. the opinions vary from person to person.
Many students hold the view that we can go on line as much as possible in our spare time because we are free besides, Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest information at home and abroad. What’s more, network offers us a convenient way to communicate with each other. The Internet makes our lives outside class colorful and various.
On the other hand, a few students partly agree to this idea. Going on line is part of our daily life. But they suggest a time limit. They’ve found that more students are playing computer games or chatting instead of studying their lessons or looking up materials. There are a few students who are often absent from school in order to go on line for fun.
As far as I am concerned as a senior student ,we should spend more time in our study, as for internet,as for internet we can make use of it to have a relax in our spare time . \
3应英语老师的要求，你要在英语课上介绍小说《百万英镑》给你的同学。请你
根据以下内容，写一篇讲稿。
小说名：百万英镑 作者：马克吐温
故事梗概：本故事讲述了一个美国穷小子亨利·亚当斯在伦敦的奇遇。一次伦敦的两位富翁打赌，把一张无法兑现的百万支票借给亨利，看他在一个月内如何收场。一个月的期限到了，亨利不仅没有饿死或被捕，反倒成了富翁，并且赢得了一位漂亮小姐的爱情。 语言风格：幽默、讽刺
Today I am going to introduce to you a novel.This is a brief introduction to the story. Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.
Today, I am going to introduce to you a novel. This novel is called “The Million Pound Banknote” written by Mark Twain. Through humorous and sarcastic language, Mark Twain successfully depicted a fortuitous adventure of Henry Adams, a poor American lad in London. Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound banknote which couldn’t be cashed. A month later, Henry wasn’t starved nor arrested, but became a millionaire. What’s more, he even won the love of a pretty lady. This is a brief introduction to the story. Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.
3．旅行日记
I went on a trip to Hainan with my family on national day.We went there by plane. After we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swim there. There were other people there too. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.
We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go.
It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, I will be more happy to visit the place again.
1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most
effective ones.
2. I’d like to make some suggestions on ……. 3. It’s of great importance for sb to do sth.
It’s necessary for sb to do sth
4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if……. 5. It contributes /helps a lot if ……… 6. I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …
It’s suggested / advised / recommended that…… 7. You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sth
It’s better to do sth
8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth
We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. It’s high time that sb did sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth
4 建议信
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。 I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?
写作要点：
1.表明了解她的问题； 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因； 3.提出至少两条建议 要求：
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。
Hi,Sad Mother,
I have learned that your daughter told lies to you. As a peer of your daughter, I think the reasons are as follows.
To begin with, maybe the reason why your daughter told a lie is that you are too strict with her and she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she has no choice but to lie .
Here are some suggestions for you. First of all, you’d better have a heart-to–heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, don’tt be too strict. It’s suggested that you should allow her to make some minor(微小的) mistakes.
I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions 5,人物介绍
设你班要出一期关于“A Great Man”的英语墙报，请根据以下提示用英语写一篇关于“Nelson Mandela”的短文，刊登在此墙报上。
简介 1918年出生在南非；1943年加入ANC，领导黑人进行争取平等和自由的反种族歧视斗争；曾蹲监狱27年；1993年获诺贝尔和平奖；1994年被选为第一位黑人总统；2013年因癌症去世。
个人评价
注意：
1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3. 词数：120左右。 ……
参考词汇： anti-racial discrimination 反种族歧视
Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black
people.
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参考范文One possible version:
Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people. He was born in South Africa in 1918 and joined the ANC in 1943. He led the black
people in the campaign of the anti-racial discrimination for freedom and equality. As a result, he was in prison for 27 years.In 1993, he won the Nobel Peace Prize for his contribution. Highly respected by his people, he was elected the first black president of South Africa. Unfortunately, our beloved leader died of cancer in 2013.
For all his life, Nelson Mandela has striven for the liberation of African nations. He ,who played an important role in the anti-racial discrimination struggle in South Africa, made great contributions to the develoment of China-South Africa relations. Althouth the great man has left, Mandela's thought and his spirit will live forever. He is the pride of the African people as well as the world.
篇三:《真题作文 曼德拉简介》
假设你班要出一期关于“A Great Man”的英语墙报，请根据以下提示用英语
写一篇关于“Nelson Mandela”的短文，刊登在此墙报上。
简介 1918年出生在南非；1943年加入ANC，领导黑人进行争取平等和自
由的反种族歧视斗争；曾蹲监狱27年；1993年获诺贝尔和平奖；1994年被选为第一位黑人总统；2013年因癌症去世。
个人评价 ……
注意：
1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3. 词数：120左右。
参考词汇： anti-racial discrimination 反种族歧视
Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people.
__________________________________________________________________
______________
参考范文One possible version:
Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people.
He was born in South Africa in 1918 and joined the ANC in 1943. He led the black people in the campaign of the anti-racial discrimination for freedom and equality. As a result, he was in prison for 27 years.In 1993, he won the Nobel Peace Prize for his contribution. Highly respected by his people, he was elected the first black president of South Africa. Unfortunately, our beloved leader died of cancer in 2013.
For all his life, Nelson Mandela has striven for the liberation of African
nations. He ,who played an important role in the anti-racial discrimination struggle in South Africa, made great contributions to the develoment of China-South Africa relations. Althouth the great man has left, Mandela's thought and his spirit will live forever.
He is the pride of the African people as well as the world.
语言提炼：
1.Highly respected by his people, ……….这一句中使用了过去分词respected 来做原因状语，同时用副词highly (高度地)来修饰过去分词
2.He ,who played an important role in the anti-racial discrimination struggle in South Africa, made great contributions to the develoment of China-South Africa relations.这一句是非常值得学习的经典长难句，用who引导一个非限制性定语从句，同时使用了短语make great contributions to 对。。。做出巨大贡献
篇四:《祖国的骄傲Chinas Pride》{关于pride的作文}.
祖国的骄傲Chinas Pride
祖国的骄傲（Chinas Pride）
"…5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ignite! Go!" On October 15, 2003, China launched its first manned spacecraft into orbit from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in Northwest China's Gansu Province.
Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and China's first astronaut Yang Liwei soared spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball betore vanishing into deep space.
As the world's largest developing country, China is more than proud of making its own contribution to human beings' outer space exploration. Meantime, it will turn out to be an important driving force for the country's economic and social development.The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter in space history.
祖国的骄傲
"5，4，3，2，1。点火!发射!"删3年10月15日，中国在其西北部的甘肃省酒泉卫星发射中心首次发射了载人宇宙飞船，进入了轨道。
喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后，巨大白色的长征Ⅱ一F火箭运载神州5号宇
宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起，颇为壮观，慢慢地变成一个亮球清失在茫茫的太空中。
作为世界上最大的发展中国家，中国为其对人类的空间探索做出自己的贡献感到非常骄傲。同时，这一事件将证明对中国的经济和社会发展起到重要的推动作用。神舟5号宇宙飞船的发射成功揭开了太空历史的新篇章。
篇五:《core pride》
生（せい）を受（う）け それぞれが人生（じんせい）を讴歌（おうか）
脳（のう）のブラックボックス(black box)を知（し）る それは幸（こう）か？ 要（よう）はリミットライン(limit line)をすべて凌驾（りょうが）
さぁ行（い）こうか 踏（ふ）み出（だ）す それは今日（きょう）だ
やっぱ日々（ひび）は如何（いかん）せん こう
そつなくこなしてちゃ NO NO bonus！
ストップ（stop） 流（なが）れを见（み）极（きわ）めな
まずものともせず行（い）こうぜ Here We Go
届（とど）かぬ物（もの）や限（かぎ）りあるものに 热（あつ）くなる胸（むね）を押（お）さえつけるのは
理解（りかい）もせず 押（お）さえつけようとしてきた
嫌（きら）いで许（ゆる）せな