【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《MY FRIEND 高分英语作文》
A girl named Marry always remind me of the happy moment in my life in senior high school. Several years passing by, however, I still remember the day on which we became desk-mates. She was in a blue dress with a sweaty smile when she comes to me, I felt that the smile beautify my world at the same moment.
I had great difficulty in English study before we recognize each other. To my surprise, she made every effort to improve my English. What impressed me most is that she is quite patient to me. As a result, I made great progress in English learning. Therefore, I was deeply moved by what she has done for me, but she holds the view that as friend of mine she is willing to do this for me.
As the saying goes, true friendship is like sound health; the value of it is seldom known until it is lost. I have not seen her for a long time, however, she is my best friend forever. In addition, I'm extremely appreciative of her support and help. To perceive a friend, therefore, is to perceive oneself. Each can be said to provide a mirror in which the other may see myself. Meanwhile, she gives me a lesson about friendship, virtuous friends should recognize each other's moral excellence, only in this way can we get along better and better.
篇二:《How_to_make_friends的作文》
How to get a true friend
As a saying goes, “ A friend in need is a friend indeed”. A true friend is the one who shares our happiness and sorrow. He or she stays with us through thick and thin.
Since friends are so important to us, we have to be careful when choosing a friend. We should choose friends based on good characteristics and great ability rather than appearance.
However, it takes time and efforts to make friends and keep friendship. So we should try our best to treat others very well. Firstly, we should be friendly to others and make others feel your kindness wherever they are. We should realize that a good person is not based on his appearance. What’s more, we had better try to remember others’ names. And when we have different opinions, we should discuss and understand each other. Last but not least, we can’t believe people who leave friends when their friends are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
As far as I’m concerned, after we get a true friend, we have to treat him or her sincerely, and learn how to trust and forgive each other. Only in this way can we keep our friendship forever.
2012 数学萃英班—张镠
篇三:《英语作文 My Friend》
My Friend
One of my best friends’ name is Molly. She is my classmates. She is very clever and friendly. Also, she’s a very slim and pretty girl. We have the same hobbies, such as reading, singing and dancing .
After class, we usually play games with our classmates together. Also, I sometimes ask her some questions about homework. She’s very patient to give me precious help.
At weekend, we usually chat with each other and share some delicious food and
interesting books. All of us are very interested in reading comic books. We often spend several hours reading them.
Molly is my good example. We are the best friends. We has been helping and encouraging each other. I believe our
friendship will be kept forever and become better and better.
篇四:《作文：A friend in need is a friend indeed》
Friends are very important for all of us. Nobody can live
happily without friends. Therefore, many people try to make as
many friends as they can, taking no notice of the quality of their
friends.
There is no doubt that friends can bring us much pleasure.
When friends sit together and talk about tings they are interest in,
they can easily feel happy. When you give a present to one of
your friends, he or she may thank you very much and speak
highly of you. But when you get into trouble, when you need to
share your pain with someone, you may find that nobody would
like to. They may refuse your request and some even don’t make
eye contact with you, which makes you feel very sad. And you
will be aware that it is a real mistake to make friends with them.
In fact, they are not real friends.
A real friend is a friend who can share your joy and pain with
you. When you meet difficulties, he or she can try to help you
and encourage you. When you feel sad, he or she can be with
you and remind you of good things. Don’t pay much attention to
the number of friends. A real friend means much more to you
than a lot of normal friends, if you still stick to calling them
friends. Please remember that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
篇五:《作文》
Everyone has his criteria in making friends
I have ever read a book that descried something about making friends. It said that before you are thirty years old, you can make all kinds of friends. As far as I am concerned, no matter how old you are, everyone has his criteria in making friends. Nowadays it is difficult to find true friends because less and less people are willing to devote himself to others.
The criterion of people in making friends is different. For me, I have two criterions in making friends. The one is that the person need to own a kind heart. The other one is that we can both feel happy and satisfied when we are together. As long as someone can satisfy the two criterions, we may become friend.
Everyone has his criteria in making friends, because everyone wants to find true friend. I hope everyone can find true friend.
11级英语2班桑晓婷
篇六:《Friendship 绝对靠谱的英语作文》
Friendship
Friendship is a kind of human relations which benefits us most.It’s a human instinct to make friends.A life without a friend is a life without a sun(an English motto).What is a friend? Some people say that a friend is one that is close to you, or a good companion to you. Some people think it one could spare no effort to help you when you’re in great need.In my view, a friend is the one that will stand by you, even through the hardest times. A friend shares the good times and helps out by listening during the bad times(from Molly Oliver ).Friendship is about believing in your friends and helping them no matter what happens.When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on. friends are quiet angels who sit on our shoulders and lift our wings when we forget how to fly（from Amanda Ford）.Meanwhile , with success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.Friendship is one of the most important things in everyone's life.
A friend actually is our necessity. Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. It implies loyalty, cordiality, sympathy and affection. No man can make the most of his life without conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along.We need help from, and also give help to, others, good friends are always ready to help you. A friend is a person who know what you are saying, even if you're not talking(from Sarah Bennett)Like the motto goes “ A friend in need is a friend indeed”, treasure is not always a helpful friend, but a helpful friend is always treasure.Friends are the most important part of your life. Treasure the tears, treasure the laughter(from Dave Brenner).Friendship is a treasure we can enjoy in our whole life.
A life can’t be perfect without a real friend.If there is not a good friend standing by you,supporting you and encouraging you, you are likely to be weak,helpless and confused.With friendship, life is happy and harmonious. Without friendship, life is sad and unfortunate. One of the greatest things about being a teenager is the sharing, the closeness and the great times you have with your friends(an English motto).With the same goal, we encourage each other to achieve our dreams.We all take different paths in life, but no matter where we go, we take a little of each other everywhere(from Tim McGraw)we should cherish our valuable friends for ever.Without friends,we do everything in our life on our own.How depressed and lonely we are!We need friends,so do them.
Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends.Bryon Douglas has said"If you have two friends in your lifetime, you're lucky. If you have one good friend, you're more than lucky." There are three steps to go. Talk to a lot of people,spend time together and make friends your priority.What I’d like to emphasize is the real friends ,who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart. Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys.Like a motto goes a friend indeed is a friend in need.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. Then we should treat our friends with courtesy, be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings. We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them. In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds. Only thus, can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life.
A life without a friend is a life without a sun.
篇七:《1994-1996考研英语作文》
1994年作文: Part Ⅳ Writing (15 points)
DIRECTIONS:
A. Title: ON MAKING FRIENDS
B. TIME LIMIT: 40 minutes
C. Word limit: 120 – 150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend.”
E. Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
OUTLINE:
l. The need for friends
2. True friendship
3. My principle in making friends
一、审题
本文题目是我们较为常见的关于交友的议论文。虽然关于友谊的文章很多，但要结构清晰仍需要解析友谊的真正内涵，指出友谊就是彼此帮助，互相促进学习。
二、谋篇
本文应按提纲所示分为三段：第一段为朋友的重要性。第二段解释友谊的含义。第三段说明自己的择友观。本文虽条理比较明了，但应注意呼应。
三、写作误区
1.跑题：本文虽与友谊有关，但不是单纯赞扬友谊的。有的考生忽略了“交友”，而把笔墨浪费在赞扬友谊的珍贵上，因此被扣分也在情理之中。
2.谋篇：本文应以说明议论为主，如果过多地举例描写，又无适当回扣主题，就会出现结构上的偏差，或者字数过多。
四、范文
评分标准1
15~13分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达清楚，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。
Sample 1 (14 points)
On Making Friends
As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend and the fact has been self-evident.
can share our joy and sorrow. Thus loneliness is the only ting left for us. So making friends is a very indispensable part in our life.
But not all who are friendly to each other and enjoy each other’s company, in the social true friendship must be sincere and unconditional. It consists in sincerity, mutual trust, and self-sacrifice, both in times of happiness and at moments of crisis. A true friend does not just tell us what we want to hear but will do what he thinks is best for us in the long run. False friendship, however, will flatter us when we are crowned with success while desert us when we are in deep a friend, I first of all make sure whether he is honest or wicked. As long as he is honest and sincere, I know that I find another a company in the way of improving.
例文分析
1．提纲
（1）论证并得出结论：朋友为生活中不可缺少的一别分；
（2）朋友的真正含义：真诚，互助互勉；
（3）交友之道：真心，真诚。
2．论点与谋篇
本文以提纲为依据，层次清晰。首段采用先解释首句，而后自然引出论题——交友的方式，内容自然流畅。第二段的优点在于以总—分—总的方法写作，并采用正反论证，条理清晰。第三段直接点明交友之道。
3．连贯性
本文连词使用广泛，比如：第二段末Therefore这一连词的应用，起到收尾的作用，自然引出该段的结论，使行文连贯。倒数第二句中while的使用，使句子前后既形成了鲜明的对比，又过渡自然。又如第三段的so使句子间因果关系更为明了，as long as顺接上文，并再次强调中心。
4．句式及用词
句式变化多样是本文另一特点，在文中已标出。
评分标准2
12~10分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达比较清楚，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。
Sample 2 (10 points)
On Making Friends
As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. We need friends to share our happiness and sad. We go to friends for help when we are in trouble. We consult with friends if there are problems we cannot handle alone. In a sense, friends are often more important to us than relatives.
good condition, they are happy for you, and hope you could be better. When you are in trouble, they help you without complain. Also, they should treat you sincerely and not cheat you.
When I choose friends, I do not care what work they do or where they are from, but I care those little things which shows one’s characters. I would make sure that we really care for each other. Sometimes we cannot see each other often. know my friends will always be there,
ready to help if I need them. And I know we are true friends indeed.
例文分析
1．论点与谋篇
题目的中心得到贯穿。结尾ready to help if I need them与we are true friends indeed既呼应全文，又暗指谚语a friend in need is a friend indeed，语意准确。
2．连贯性与用词 第二段的人称与其他段不一致，如能相同，语意更连贯。使用了一定的连词。短文中用词有一些错误，如：典型错误：动词complain的名词形式为complaint。
1995年作文: Part Ⅳ Writing (15 points)
DIRECTIONS:
A. Title: THE "PROJECT HOPE"
B. Time limit: 40 minutes{true,friend作文}.
C. Word limit: 120 – 150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country”.
E. Your composition must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
OUTLINE:
1. Present situation
2. Necessity of the project
3. My suggestion
一、审题
本题为提纲式论说文。由题目可知本文讨论的是有关“希望工程”的问题。
二、谋篇
按提纲所示，本文应分三方面展开。第一段应说明目前境况：一方面，贫困造成大量儿童失学；而另一方面，国家需要大量有知识的人才。第二段，由首段的陈述自然引出实施这项工程的必要性。分析必要性切忌写得过于空泛。这段可通过正反两方面进行论证。第三段提出自己的建议。
三、写作范文
评分标准1
15~13分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达清楚，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。
Sample 1 (15 points)
The“Hope Project”
Education is the key to the modernization of our country. Chain cannot achieve its planned economic growth and catch up with those developed nations without a well-educated population. more than 37 million primary and secondary school students in the poverty-stricken areas of the countryside are obliged to quite school. Many of them are joining the ranks of new life of illiteracy and ignorance.
The project, which brings the hope for children and promises a bright future for China, is quite necessary. being deprived of education will not only result in exhaustion of human resources in those poverty-stricken areas, but also hold back the economic development of the whole country. Developing education to arm youngsters with knowledge is an urgent task and a responsibility of the entire society. it is impossible for the Chinese government to afford such a sum of money for hundreds of thousands of school dropouts. a nation-wide drive, Project Hope, is the best solution.
As Project Hope aims to raise funds from all walks of life, we should finance the project with money. Moreover, it needs our love and strong sense of responsibility for those children. As it says, “knowledge is a lamp leading people into the world of brightness and beauty”, so is Project Hope.
例文分析{true,friend作文}.
1． 提纲
（1）现状：从国家需要人才和大量儿童失学两方面说明目前中国教育状况；
（2）需要：上学的障碍为学生与政府都没有钱；
（3）建议：捐钱及爱心等。
2．论点与谋篇
本文中心突出，结构严谨。从国家与个人两方面进行论述是本文的一大特点。它使得文章脉络非常清晰。第二段，作者用了总——分——总的方法展开，使文章简短有力。第三段的特点是呼应主题，以俗语作总结，并采用对照，起到了画龙点睛的作用。
3．连贯性
本文流畅不仅来自于思维的连贯，并且归功于诸多连词的应用（已在文中标出）。
4.句式及用词
经典句式：Developing education to arm youngsters with knowledge is and urgent task… As… aims to do sth., we should…
评分标准 2
12~10分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达比较清楚，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。
Sample 2 (10 points)
The“Hope Project” Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country. In rural areas millions of children have no chance to go to school. Helping their family in the field or doing endless housework at home, they do not even know how to write their own names. These new illiterates are impossible to catch the change of the world. So the Project Hope was established to help the poor children.
The Project is quite necessary. On the one hand, these children are too poor to buy the books
and go to school. On the other hand, as a developing country China is not likely to spend a huge amount of money on education. Only through the love the project can provide more and more education chances for the poor children. Thus, everyone should do what he can for the Project Hope.
I think this project is great important to our country. So my suggestion is that people should donate our money and the government should more of the public to participate the project. And I’m sure the project will be fruitful.
例文分析
1．提纲
（1）儿童失学，提出希望工程；
（2）从两方面说明工程的必要性；
（3）提出建议。
2．论点与谋篇
本文论点突出，按照提纲所示将文章按三段展开。第一段的缺点在于：第一句与第二句间缺乏过渡。第二句应展开说明教育对中国的重要性，然后再进行转折衔接第三句，这样内容较衔接。但此段的描写较为生动。不是直接讲述，而是通过形象地描述，用干活、做家务及不会写名字的对比生动展示失学儿童的现状。
3．连贯性
段与段之间衔接比较自然。
4.句式及用词
典型错误：
倒装：Only through the love the project can provide more and more education chances for the poor children.
Only开头的句子应为部分倒装。应为：and more education chances for the poor children.
1996年作文: Section Ⅳ Writing
36. Directions:
A. Title: GOOD HEALTH
B. Time limit: 40minutes
C. Word limit: 120—150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
D. Your composition should be based on the “OUTLINE” below and should start with the given opening sentence: “The desire for good health is universal”.
E. Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Outline:
1. Importance of good health.
2. Ways to keep fit.
3. My own practices.{true,friend作文}.
一、审题与谋篇
本文命题形式为提纲式控制性写作，提纲有三点要求：健康的重要性；保持健康身体的方法；我自己的实践。并给出了起始句The desire for good health is universal。
篇八:《How to make friends的作文》
How to make friends
Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is of great importance to everybody.
Here are some suggestions. you must be friendly to others. A smile is like a magnet(磁铁) which draws people. If you give a smile to others, you are always sure to get a smile in return.you should do your best to make a stranger feel at home, no matter where he happens to be. , think as you are in his position and make him feel welcome. And don't judge a stranger only by his appearance. try to remember others' names, which will make them feel that they have made an impression on you., if you don't agree with others on a certain matter, don't argue but discuss with them.you should think more of others than of yourself. don't believe a friend in need is a friend in deed.
I'm sure you will make true friends of your own.
we should be friendly to others and make others feel your kindness wherever they are. we need to think for others and we mustn’t laugh at them. We should realize that a good person is not based on his appearance. we had better try to remember others’ names. , we should discuss and understand each other. , we can’t believe people who leave friends when their friends are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
We shouldn’t laugh at others. we should think for others. we are supposed to manage to remember others’ name and discuss with others if there is disagreement. ,…
People all need friends because nobody wants to be lonely and a friend can help you in good and bad times. However, it takes time and efforts to make friends and keep friendship. So we should try our best to treat others very well. First, we should be kind to others. And it will make them feel warm and
comfortable. So however they are, they will always remember us. Second, if we and our friends are in disagreement with each other, we should discuss with them. What’s more, we should understand others because friendship always needs nursing with understanding. Third, we can’t judge people only by their appearance. An ideal friend must have goodness rather than beautiful appearance. Forth, we should try to remember others’ names. Last but least, we can’t believe the person who never spare time for us when we are in trouble. As we know, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Making friends is a skill. Like most skills, it improves with practice.
篇九:《外研版八下作文指导》{true,friend作文}.
Module1
人物印象
1.话题词汇
(1)look 看起来
(2)generous 慷慨的
(3)sense of humor 幽默感
(4)keep secrets 保守秘密
(5)true 真实的
(6)encourage 鼓励
(7)cheer up 喝彩,加油
2.常用句型
(1)…is tall with …hair 是高的,长着色的头发
(2)he/she/I…nice/kind/generous.他/她/我是好看的/心地善良的/慷慨的
(3)I/she/he…willing to help …when they need help.当朋友需要帮助的时候,我/他/她愿帮助朋友。
(4)…can keep secrets…能够保守秘密
(5)…encourage me to do better next time.鼓励我下次做得更好。
(6)when…,…always cheer(s) me up.当,总是为我加油。
3.过渡词
(1)并列连词 and
(2)转折连词 however (3)instead
1.写作要求
假如你是Sally,请根据以下提示给你的英国笔友Tony 写一封电子邮件,介绍一下你自己。
你有一双大眼睛,圆脸,但长相普通;对朋友很慷慨(generous),总是在别人需要帮助的时候伸出援助之手;有幽默感(a sense of humor), 和你在一起大家总是很开心;为朋友保守秘密,是一个真正的朋友。
2.思路点拨
(1)体裁: 记叙文(2)人称:第一人称
(3)时态:一般现在时
(4)写作提示:
①介绍自己的外貌 ( …look …;…have …on my …face)
②介绍自己的性格(…generous to…;I am willing to…; …have a sense of humor…;…can keep secrets…) ③总结 (…can believe …a true friend)
④发出邀请 (What about…?…look like? I hope…) __________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Sally
暑期英语学习交流中心将举行感恩活动,要求用英语介绍你的至亲、恩师、好友或学校。请你根据以下内容要点,介绍你可亲可爱的妈妈。
内容及要点:(1)年龄,外貌(自由发挥)。(2)个性品质。参考词汇:kind,
friendly,wise,patient(耐心的),honest,chatter(唠叨)about every little thing,get on well with
Module 2
个人经历
1.话题词汇
(1)experience经历 (2)favorite最喜爱的 (3)visit 参观、访问 (4)take
(5)places of interest 名胜古迹
2.常用句型
(1)I have been to…我已经去过
(2)I think …is my favorite …我认为是我最喜爱的
(3)I have done …我已经做过
(4)I think it’s very helpful to…我认为是有帮助的
(5)I hope I can go there soon.我希望不久后能够去那里。
3.过渡词
photos拍照
(1)转折连词but
(2)并列连词and
(3)因果连词because
1.写作要求
北京在中国的北方,是中国的首都,每年有许多人来北京旅游。你到过北京吗?请以“My holiday in Beijing”为题,介绍一下游览北京的经历。
提示:颐和园(the Summer Palace);故宫(the Palace Museum );北京烤鸭(Beijing roast duck)
2.思路点拨
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)人称:第一人称
(3)时态:一般过去时态、现在完成时态
(4)写作提示:
①简单介绍北京 ( …in the north of…;…the capital…;
…visit it every year.)
②介绍自己的旅游经历(…have been to …many times;have climbed …;visit …;…have taken …photos…;have talked to …)
③感受体会( Beijing is …;I am proud of …)
My holiday in Beijing
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 你班下周要开一次以“ My experiences”为主题的英语班会,请你准备一篇80词左右的发言稿,主要内容包括以下几点:
1.你曾经去过什么地方?
2.给你留下深刻印象的地方是哪里? 为什么?
3.你没去过而又很想去的地方是哪里?打算什么时候去?
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Module 3
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