【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《中考英语优秀作文范文》
1 . 演讲稿
当我们坐在又大又漂亮的教室里学习的时候,我们可曾想过那些贫困、没有学上的孩子当我们随手丢弃
多余的书本时,为什么不把他们捐给希望工程呢请根据此文所讲开头结尾的写法以及以上提示写一篇演讲稿,讲讲你是如何捐助希望工程的,并鼓励大家做些力所能及的事情帮助那些贫困家庭的孩子。要求:思路清晰,语意连贯。字数在80~100词。
Hello,everyone. Today my topic is about Project Hope. What a sad and serious topic it is!
When you sit in the big and beautiful classroom, have you ever thought of the poor children who dropped out of school When you throw away your useless books, why not give them to the poor children in the countryside
Maybe your answer is “Sorry, I’ve never thought of that.” To tell you the truth, I didn’t know anything about the poor children until my teacher told me last week. I was shocked when I heard of that. I realized that we should try to help them. So I went to the post office and gave away all my pocket money to Project Hope.
So my dear friends and classmates, let’s do something to help them. Then the world will be nicer and nicer.
That’s all for today. Thank you!
2. 中考英语优秀作文范文
某市今年举办主题为“把希望带给贫困孩子”的活动。现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书,内容要点如下(括号中的词汇可供参考):
1、许多贫困家庭无力负担孩子去上学;(afford)
2、孩子们没有足够的钱去买学习用品和衣物;(school things and clothes)
3、每个孩子都应该有上学的权力;(have the right to do something)
4、我们应该尽最大的努力去帮助他们,比如……; (try one's best to do something)
5、让我们一起给贫困孩子创造一个更美好的未来。(work together)
注意:
1、文章开头、结尾已给出,但不计入总词数; 2、词数80左右。 Dear students, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. Thanks for your joining! Students' Union 参考范文: Dear students, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. Because their family can't afford to send them to school. At the same time, children don't have enough money to buy school things and clothes. In myopinion,each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for them. So we should try our best to do something to help them, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We believe if we work together, we can make a better future for them. Thanks for your joining! Students' Union
3. 关于环境保护(水资源节约)的话题
Our environment is very important for our lives . We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on . In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees. Air pollution and water polloution are very serious . The environment around us becomes very terrible . We should protect our environment. First, we should plant many trees to keep water. Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.. Third , we shouldn’t throw
the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join us.
中考英语作文范文 人与环境
人与环境是和谐相处的,我们生存在地球上,人是自然之子,而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者,大家都知道,人类只有一个地球,地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞,如果我们把它损坏了,破坏了大自然的组织,等 于消灭人类。因此,环境要与社会公德联系起来,与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。
Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the
conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it. Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment
4. 中考英语作文范文 节约水
It’s our duty to save water(节约水是我们每个人的责任。)
As we know , water is very important to man, (我们知道,水对人类来说是非常的重要。)we can’t live without water. (没有水我们就不能生存。)The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. (适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。)But some people don’t care about it .(但是有些人却不关心或不在意。)They waste a lot of water in their daily life. (日常生活中他们浪费很多水。)Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.(更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。) They throw rubbish into rivers , too. (他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。)Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.(很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。) Something must be done to stop the pollution. (人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。)Only in this way can
we live happily.(只有这样,我们才过得幸福开心。) If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.( 如果我们不节约水,那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪)
5. 中考英语作文范文 保护我们的城市(Saving Our City)
It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly. Or it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute the air and water. People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.
Our city has started to face the problem. Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place .Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air. Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers.
People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.
环境保护问题是中考热门话题,出现频率高,难度较大,必须掌握。
典型句子
1. It’s our duty to save wate
2. As we know , water is very important to man,
3.we can’t live without water.
4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
5.But some people don’t care about it .
6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.
Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. It's our duty to protect our environment。
8. It is very important to take care of our environment
9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.
17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. it’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
例文
1.假如你是新华中学的学生,名叫MIKE。去年6月1日,我国已经禁止使用塑料袋,你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?
6. 初中英语热点话题作文 留守儿童
如今,在我们身边,父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童,事构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童,要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些?为了解决留守儿童的问题,请你向当地政府提建议
提示:1.缺乏父母的关爱,性格孤僻,学习压力大、自卑。
2.缺乏安全保障(家庭照官不力,容易犯错误甚至犯罪)。
建议:1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室,老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。
篇二:《2015届初三上英语单元考试优秀作文选一》
2015届初三上英语单元考试优秀作文选一
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题目:你对你现在居住的城市(乡村)满意吗?请从环境、人口等方面,说说你理想中的
家园。(80词左右)
初三1班 黄润萍
I live in a beautiful city, Quanzhou. My city has a long history and many places of interest. However, I am not pleased with it. The natural environments are becoming worse and worse because of the pollution in Quanzhou.
I dream about a home like this: first, it is close to nature and surrounded by trees. Second, it has a population of 500. People are friendly to each other like a big family. Last, people can be careful with garbage and discourage cutting trees to protect the environment.
I believe my dream will come true in the future. Do you want to live in my dream home? 教师点评:1、本篇文章条理清晰,巧用过渡句:“I dream about a home like this”。
2、 主次分明,结构合理,紧扣题目要求,更多地描述自己理想中的家园。
初三2班 杨浩
I live in Quanzhou, a small city in Fujian Province. Thanks to the excellent public transportation, it is very convenient for people to live in such a small city. So I am quite satisfied with the living conditions in my city.
But it is true that there are many problems in my city. So I dream that I can live in a quiet city. The environment should be much better. For instance, the trees and grass had better cover over 20% of the city. What’s more, the population there should never be too large or too small so that the traffic will not be heavy and I won’t feel lonely.
If there is a city like this, I will be quite happy to live there in the future.
教师点评:1、本篇文章行文流畅,很好地利用所学知识阐述自己的观点。
2、 善于运用一些复合句,关联词语,使文章显得更加充实和丰满。
C三3班 林滟雯 ①②In my opinion, a really great city should be like this. There is no pollution, just blue sky the whole city with green grass everywhere. The population of the city isn’t too large or too small. The traffic isn’t busy, so there won’t be crazy situations That’s what I It’s truly a great place to live.
教师点评:1、本文叙述流畅,衔接自然,巧用①句,委婉表达对所居住城市的态度,承上
启下。
2、第二段开头使用②句,引出自己的心目中的理想家园。
3想到,考虑到),这些词
增强了文章的表现力,使之脱颖而出。小小一篇文章足以证明作者丰富的词
汇量。
C三4班 许晓蕾
I live in Quanzhou, a small city in China, but I don’t like it because of the large population and terrible traffic .
I dream about living in a small town. In this town, the air is fresh. Rivers and roads are pretty clean. You can even see stars in the sky every night. But ①②③④No matter where we live, we should live in the present. Let’s do our best to make our dream place come true.
教师点评:1、本文条理清晰,内容紧扣主题,从环境、人口、交通等方面描述自己的理想
家园。
2、正确地使用了各种复杂句型, 如表语从句:①句;“the+比较级, the+比较级”
的句式:②句;定语从句:③句;让步状语从句:④句,这些都是亮点,为
文章画龙点睛。
初三年5班 王哲轶
My hometown is really different from it was before. It has made great progress. Anyway, I’m still not satisfied with it.
My favorite city should have a small population, because the noise caused by the large population always makes me mad. What’s more, 教师点评:本文紧扣主题,详略得当,观点明确。其中也出现不少优美词句,巧妙勾勒出
作者心目中的美好家园,给读者呈现一个美好画面。值得借鉴。
初三6班 曾鸿铭
I live in Cizao, a small town in Quanzhou. ① because the population is large and the roads are crowded there. What’s worse, the roads are not smooth at all.
②The town which I like must have a small population with fresh air and smooth roads. The traffic should not be too bad and (the)public transportation should be excellent. People can have a walk after dinner, enjoying the fresh air and we don’t have to worry about the bad traffic any longer.
③That’s the city that I really want to live in. I hope my dream can come true one day.
教师点评:本文结构清晰,内容完整,过渡自然;全文连贯、通顺;①句表明观点 ②二句的开头过渡到本文的主体。③句点题。文章语言朴实无华,但却清楚明了,不
失为一篇好文章。
初三7班庄煜权
My hometown is
That’s my dream city. 教师点评:本文条理清晰,过渡自然,不拖沓,重点描述理想中的家园。适当地使用了复
合句(划横线的句子)。
初三8班林益涛
I live in a well-known city, Quanzhou. But I don’t like it because the public transportation here is terrible. It’s not a wonderful place to live.
I hope the wonderful city to live in should be like this. The air there should be clean and fresh. I hope my dream will come true one day!
教师点评:本文明确地表达了自己的观点,在第二段的开头自然简洁地过渡到描述自己理
想中的家园。文中划线的句子比较精彩,用了because 引导的原因状语从句和
so that引导的目的状语从句。
初三9班 尤煜楷
I have lived in the city called Quanzhou since I was born .This city is full of culture and beautiful things. But there are also some problems. The traffic and natural environments have become much worse than before because the population here is growing faster. So now I am not so pleased with it as before.
My dream city is extremely pleasant, like the cities in European countries . It doesn’t have too many people and the traffic there is convenient. And the natural environments there are under the protection of government. Besides, everyone can enjoy good medical care.
I hope Quanzhou can become the city I’ve imagined.
教师点评:1. 文章结构合理,贴合题意。
2. 用词准确,适当使用连词,句子间调理清晰。
3. 在描述理想中的城市时,在题目所提供信息的基础上,适当添加自己的想法,
使文章内容更充实。
初三10班 吴颖雯
I come from Quanzhou,a city in Fujian Province. I have lived here since I was born. I love my city of Quanzhou , but I am not satisfied with it. The natural environments in Quanzhou have become worse and worse . People are not careful with garbage so it is not as beautiful as before in Quanzhou .
I have a dream city in my mind . First, we can live close to nature. The roads and streets will be surrounded by trees and flowers . Besides, it will be convenient for us to go out, both for work and tour. And I hope that people can live a happy life there and everyone is friendly to each other.
I hope my dream will come true one day.
教师点评:1. 善于使用连接词过渡。
2. 文章部分表达巧借课文内容,做到学以致用。
初三12班 庄伟思
I am not satisfied with Quanzhou. Because the large population causes many problems. The traffic is too heavy. And the roads are not very clean.
I want to live in a town with fresh air. And it must be quiet. It is surrounded by mountains and trees. What’s more, the population of the town is small so that the town is not too crowded. The local people are friendly. We help each other often and have fun together every day.
With our effects, I am sure that Quanzhou will be a place like this .
教师评语:1.文章条理清晰,结构合理,紧扣要求展开阐述。
2.合理利用一些形容词,使文章圆润,让人有身临其境的感觉。
初三(12)刘黎靓
I live in Quanzhou now. It’s such a beautiful place that many people like it. There are many places of interest. I’m satisfied with it. But there are too many people, and the large population has caused some problems.
I imagine that I can live in a small town. The air must be fresh and the town should be surrounded by trees. What’s more, it won’t have a large population. The traffic there shouldn’t be so heavy as that in the city. And people there will be kind to each other.
I hope I can live in a place like that some day!
教师评语:1.文章条理清晰,结构合理,重点展开自己理想居住地的描述。
2.恰当使用所学词汇,如:such a beautiful place, be satisfied with, cause, imagine,
be surrounded by 等,为短文润色不少。
初三13班 林一豪
Quan zhou is a beautiful city. I enjoy living there. But it is not my favorite.
I dream that I can live in a small town surrounded by many trees. It doesn’t have a large population. The roads are clean and there are l
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