【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《英语四级模拟卷作文范文》
本篇作文属于果因分析型文章，要求探讨问题——酒后驾车行为屡禁不止的原因，并提出解决方法。基本思路为：描述后果→分析原因→提出解决方案。果因分析型写作模式是四六级作文中最常见的写作模式之一。一般要求第一段列出某种结果或现象，然后有针对性地分析造成该结果或现象的原因。本篇作文的第一部分要求概述酒后驾车的危害，这部分的概述可以通过陈述或举例说明的方式进行；第二部分要求分析酒后驾车行为屡禁不止的原因，可以从两方面入手：一是司机对酒后驾车的危害缺乏认识，心存侥幸；二是司机无视法律，没有责任感，这一原因与法律惩罚过轻、威慑力不够有很大的关系。第三部分要求给出对策，针对第二段的原因对症下药、提出应对方案。
My View on DUI Offences
Every year, thousands upon thousands of people are killed or injured in road accidents. A large proportion of these are alcohol related. Studies show that the use of alcohol results in decreased driving ability and increased risk of car crashes. People who drive under the influence of alcohol are nicknamed “highway killers” .
Unfortunately, DUI remains a serious problem in China today in spite of some progress. Why is it so difficult to stop “highway killing”? What makes the DUI offenders reckless of the risk? I think the first reason may be the drivers’ failure to recognize the consequence. When they drink before driving, they think “just one drink won’t hurt,” turning a blind eye to the danger. The second but more important reason is the drivers’ disregard for the law. They totally ignore their responsibility for road safety and are not deterred by the legal punishment because it is not severe enough.
It is time to take critical steps to prevent DUI offences. Apart from an education campaign to call for responsible driving and raise public awareness, there is an urgent need for more effective supervision, such as more frequent random breath testing to spot DUI offenders and stiffer penalties including revocation of driving licenses, heavy fines and even jail sentences. Only with these measures taken, can we prevent more tragedies from happening.
本篇作文属于因果分析型文章。首先要描述现象，即商品存在过度包装的现象，然后分析该现象可能产生的影响。基本思路为：描述现象——分析影响——给出自己的观点。因果分析型写作模式是四六级作文中最常见的写作模式之一。一般首先对某种现象进行描述，然后分析该现象导致的后果或影响。本篇作文在第一部分要求对商品包装过度作出概述，可以通过陈述或举例说明；第二部分要求对商品包装过度造成的后果和影响进行分析，可以从两方面入手：一是过度包装材料构成了浪费；二是过度包装可能会误导消费，甚至具有欺骗性。第三部分主要是提出自己的观点和看法。
On Over-packing
Nowadays, many manufacturers pay much attention to packaging of products so that their commodities can attract customers．
Over-packing, however，leads to many problems．Firstly，important materials for industrial production and daily life have been lavishly consumed by the packing industry. Secondly, over-packing also generates a lot of garbage， most of which is not degradable．It is reported that 20 percent of our annual garbage comes from excessive wrapping．Thirdly, over-packing has also result in an unhealthy consumption habit and become a cover-up for some businessmen to gain staggering profits，as wrapping sometimes takes up 70 percent of the total cost of a commodity．
To my mind， it’s the quality rather than the gaudy looks of the commodity from which the customers really benefit．Therefore, manufacturers should not over-pack but ensure the quality of the products in order to gain profits in the long run.
本篇作文属于阐述型文章。要求根据社会现象，主要是积极的现象，分析该现象的具体社会意义。基本思路为：描述现象——探讨社会意义——自己的做法。此类型写作模式是四六级作文中最常见的写作模式之一。一般要求首先描述某种现象，然后针对该现象探讨具体的意义。本篇作文的第一部分要求对越来越多的人从事志愿者工作作出概述，可以通过陈述或举例说明的方式；第二部分要求对这种现象的积极意义进行探讨，可以从两方面入手：一是对志愿者本人来说，可以提升自己的道德情操，丰富自己对某项工作的具体认识；二是从社会层面来说，树立好的社会风气导向。第三部分具体谈谈大学生如何积极从事志愿者活动。
On Volunteering Activities
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China.
Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this unprecedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games.
As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering actions. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow.
本篇作文属于观点论证型文章。要求分析科技对学习的影响，同时提出观点，说明科技对学习的好处；接着展开论述。可以用阐述、举例等方法论证观点，说明科技对学习是有帮助的。此类型写作模式是四六级作文中最常见的写作模式之一。一般要求首先分析某种现象，然后针对该现象提出观点。本篇作文的第一部分要求针对科技对学习的影响作出简要分析和概述。第二部分提出观点——科技对学生的学习是有帮助的。可以具体提出哪些科技对学习有帮助，可以采用举实例、阐述等方法。第三部分要求对全文进行总结，呼应前文——科技对学习是有帮助的。
Technology’s Effects on Learning
In recent years, technology has advanced at an amazing speed. Never before have students had such a wide variety of resources to help them in their studies. Those who can take advantage of those resources have the opportunity to learn about more subjects and to acquire more in depth knowledge. In my opinion, students can indeed learn more with the help of modern technology.
The most important application of technology as a learning tool must be the computer. Together with the Internet, computers allow students to find information more quickly and, also to write down their findings more rapidly. Furthermore, some subjects are changing and developing so fast these days that it is impossible for textbooks to keep up with the advancement. Technology allows students to keep abreast of the latest developments in both science and society.
For all the above reasons, I believe that technology is of great benefit to students today. It is certainly possible for students to learn without the aid of technology, but those who are fortunate enough to have access to technological resources should take full advantage of them.
本篇作文可分为三个部分进行论述：第一部分概述网络教育形成的热潮，即阐明网络教育的现实含义；第二部分详细阐述网络教育热门的原因，如互联网、社会、科技的快速发展等；第三部分表明你对网络教育的看法，如网络教育是传统教育方式的有益补充，可为学习者提供灵活多样的学习方式等。
My View on Online Education
Being online is no longer something new or fresh in our life. To some extent, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends far away. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education.
Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the Internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with fantastic speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society, many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.
Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Best of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.
篇二:《大学英语四级真题作文范文+练习》
2014年12月英语四级真题作文范文
【题目】
①A course that has impressed you most in college;
most. state the reasons at least 120 No more than180 words
【范文】
Currently, students in mounting numbers pay attention to academic achievement, neglecting campus activities, like speaking contest , song contest and its like. However, from my perspective, we youngsters should take participate in more campus activities. I hold the notion that campus activities has lots of benefits on various fronts. At the top of the list, social activities, such as song contest could help us make more friends, expanding our acquaintances. In addition, students would widen horizon, increase knowledge during the period taking part in campus activities. Last but not list, just as a saying goes, “ all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”； therefore, students’ choice to join in some school activities would ease our mind and relief our burden, which will be beneficial to the study. In conclusion, youngsters should take part in colorful and meaningful activities at campus. Hence, I suggest schools can hold some activities to cultivate students ability, physically and psychologically。
【四级作文练习】
1.志愿者活动
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteering activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作
2. 志愿者工作的社会意义
3. 作为大学生，应该怎么做
范文：
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China.
Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games.
As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering actions. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow.
2.书信：毕业时就业还是上研究生
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend' s inquiry about Plan after graduation. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
假如你是李明，你的朋友石头来信咨询你的毕业之后的计划，考研还是就业，请根据自己的情况写封回信告知石头你的态度，并说明理由。
范文：
Dear Shitou,
So great to hear from your letter on May 1st, in which you inquired about my plan after graduation. Now, I am writing to illustrate it and my accounts.As is known to all, so many graduates are eager to set feet on their work-life road. According to a survey by National Department of Education, more than six million college students will leave the so called "Ivory Tower" this year. It is clear that the competition for job-hunting will be extremely furious. On the contrary, it seems advisable for me to further my study and get a master's degree. What makes me convinced is that a higher degree and better educational background will, undoubtedly, enable me to make full preparation for entering the society. Besides, if possible, I will get involved in social and practical activities in my spare time.
Taking all aspects into account, I choose to study as a postgraduate.
Many thanks for your concern. Best wishes!
3.大城市就业还是小城镇
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作；
2. 也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯；
3. 结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。
范文：
Want to be a small fish in a big pond or the other way round? Every graduate faces this question when he starts his career. A large number of college graduates prefer to stay in the big cities. To them, big cities mean more experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more space for career development. At the same time, higher salary is another temptation.
But some other graduates want to start in small towns. Even though there may not be many big companies, they can have a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is that they can be a big fish in a small pond. They can easily get the management's attention and may win promotion earlier. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to start in a metropolis like Shanghai. A good begin is half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures. I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks.
4.培训学校
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Private School?You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.当前，社会上有很多私立学校和培训学校；
2.私立学校的利与弊
3.你的看法
范文：
It can be noticed that a large number of private schools or training organizations become a new landscape in education. When you read newspapers, when you watch TV, when you walk on the road, you will inevitably see lots of advertisements about private schools. There are private schools mainly dealing with foreign languages, computers, music and sports.
However, is it a good or bad thing to have so many private schools? As a coin has two sides, so are the private schools. On the one hand, private schools can meet the special needs of the society or the particular requirements of people. On the other hand, they often bring people extra burden because of comparison and competition.
When asked to decide whether we should have a society without private schools or a society with private schools, I will not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.
Although attending a training course will result in the extra cost or burden, it is of tremendous merits in preparing my work and cultivating my skills.
篇三:《On Volunteering Activities》
On Volunteering Activities
Looking back the days during the Beijing Olympics, the volunteer activities attract me most, I think.
In recent years, the volunteer activities have been becoming more and more popular and many people are working on this kind of career. Therefore it’s necessary to know something about what do the volunteer activities mean to the society and what we college students are supposed to do.
As we all know, there are many poor regions in our country. In these regions, many children can’t go to school because there is no teacher or school. So being a volunteer teacher here will help improve the conditions. In other words, the volunteer activities will bring happiness and hope to the people in need and this will surely make our society better.
As a college student, we should be the pioneer of the same age. We can start an advertisement, asking the students to take part in and do something good to the others. What’s more, we can also form a group to propagate volunteer activities. In a word, we can do many things, and we should believe we should something because we are something.
篇四:《专接本英语作文范文》
石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中！
Salary or Interest？
1. 有的人找工作的时候选择兴趣，有的选择工资
2. 你的看法
这是一篇要求考生评判找工作时所持标准的文章。开篇需阐述两种不同的观点，有人认为兴趣重要，有人则把工资摆在第一位。对于大学生而言，结合自身的情况，可以表明自己的观点。第一段，分述两种不同的观点，稍加展开；第二段，就自身谈谈看法。
Salary or Interest
Upon graduation，virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice. It is truly a tough choice. Students’ opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to their interest in jobs，but others take the attitude that salary is the most critical factor influencing their career choices.
As to myself，I prefer the latter view. A well paid job exerts on a great number of people，value of one’s job in terms of money，view，，shoulder the burden of supporting my family. In shortmy choice of career.
◇第一段思路点评：
◇语言点提示：
（1）此句式（应优先考虑……），牢记。
（2）这样可以避免重复，如： hold，
◇语言点提示（1）exert … on 对……施加
(2) finance my tuition 承担我的学费
Certificate Craze on Campus
1．近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”
2．产生这一现象的原因
3．你的看法
大学生热衷于考证这一话题一直是社会的热点，为什么会出现这样的现象。对于大学生而言，结合自身的情况，可以表明自己的观点。第一段，简要描述现象：大学校园内出现“考证热”；第二段，探究产生这种现象的原因；第三段，结合自身情况，阐述自己的观点。
石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中！
【范文】
Certificate Craze on Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing; quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make
himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are er to increase certificates do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Beinnothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus ona certificate of no practical value.
◇第一段思路点评：
简要描述现象：大学生们热衷于考证。
◇语言点提示：
此句Why does this craze appear?◇第二段思路点评：
first, second。
◇语言点提示：
the admission
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3. 你对网络依赖症的看法
●审题概述●
网络给人们带来了丰富便捷的生活，但有些人却因此离不开网络，本文要求考生对网络依赖症简述自己的看法。第一段，简单描述网络为人们提供了丰富而又便利的生活；第二段，很多人觉得离开网络就寸步难行；第三段，对网络依赖症，阐述自己的观点。
石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中！
【范文】
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20 century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, banking and shopping.
For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to own world than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In to use the ◇第一段思路点评：
◇语言点提示：
一句话中连用三个动词
◇第二段思路点评：
，一气呵成，让
：
阐述自己对网络依赖症的看法。
◇语言点提示：
(1) online pornography and violence，网络色情和暴力。
(2) Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence.网络欺诈每天都在发生。
Knowledge and Diploma
1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香
2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识
3. 你的观点
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石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中！
●审题概述●
本文针对时下一种流行的说法：文凭越高越好，要求考生结合实际阐述自己的观点。第一段，简要描述目前社会上流行的说法：文凭越高越吃香；第二段，有些人却持不同的意见，认为文凭不等于知识；第三段，结合自己的实际情况，阐述自己的观点。
【范文】
Knowledge and Diploma{on,volunteering,activities,英语作文}.
It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidatesocial reality—the higher diploma one gets, the more popular he becomes.
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesnknowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the experience rather than a guarantee of one’one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides’t have he is one of the world’s most learned men.
So I must say no one should ever , because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term needs one’s lifelong devotion.
◇第一段思路点评：
◇语言点提示：
(1)句型众所周知。
(1) ’s educational experience 对一个人的教育经历的认可。
(2) 特别注意本段中所使用的连接词语：on the contrary, besides。
◇第三段思路点评：
以己为例，阐述自己的观点。
◇语言点提示：
(1) equate a diploma with knowledge 将文凭和知识等同
(2) nothing but a proof of a short-term study 只是对某一短期学习的证明
石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中！
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On VolunteeringActivities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作
2. 志愿者工作的社会意义
3. 作为大学生，应该怎么做
范文：
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, were rs who offered service for Olympic Games. become volunteers every year in China.
Volunteering is of tremendous the society. Olympic Games are a good example. played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. those volunteers who ensured the success of these games.
As should get actively involved in volunteering actions. By to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, take this chance to learn and to grow.
篇五:《volunteering activities》
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Volunteering Activities
Now, more and more people work on volunteering activities. They have been trying their best to offer help those men who need help. For example, they provided those who suffered the loss of hometown and families with food and clothes.
These volunteering activities have been beneficial in two aspects. On the one hand, volunteering activities show humanity. What volunteers did was good to make the society healthy-going. On the other hand, as volunteers, we can open our eyes to outside by bringing sufferer help. It can give them the silences of their soul and make them happier.
As a college student, I should get more done. We college students should take the lead in response to the appeal for offering aid to other people.
篇六:《作文》
1.志愿者活动
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled OnVolunteering activities. You should write at least 120words following the outline given below:
1、越来越多的人从事志愿者工作
2、志愿者工作的社会意义
3、作为大学生，应该怎么做
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially amongyoungsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers whooffered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become
volunteersevery year in China.
Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. OlympicGames are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in BeijingOlympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent OlympicGames.
Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of thesegames.
As modern college students, we should get actively involved in
volunteering activities. Byparticipating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skillsand organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, weshould take this chance to learn and to grow.
2.私立学校
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Private School?You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.当前，社会上有很多私立学校和培训学校;
2.私立学校的利与弊
3.你的看法
It can be noticed that a large number of private schools or training organizations become a new landscape in education. When you read newspapers, when you watch TV, when you walk on the road, you will inevitably see lots of advertisements about private schools. There are
private schools mainly dealing with foreign languages, computers, music and sports.
However, is it a good or bad thing to have so many private schools? As a coin has two sides, so are the private schools. On the one hand, private schools can meet the special needs of the society or the
particular requirements of people. On the other hand, they often bring people extra burden because of comparison and competition.
When asked to decide whether we should have a society without private schools or a society with private schools, I will not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter. Although attending a training course will result in the extra cost or burden, it is of tremendous merits in preparing my work and cultivating my skills.
信息安全
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition on the topic : Information Security. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 信息安全问题日益重要
2. 信息安全事故可能导致的危害
3. 如何做到信息安全
Information Security
The human beings are stepping into the information society. The information industry develops very rapidly, so do the hackers,
trick-playing teens, exploring children, fraudsters, and serious
white-collar criminals. Thus, information security becomes an impending important issue.
In case of information breach, the victims—–government department, an organization or an institution, or a company will
inevitably suffer great or small loss. Government may be threatened with national security. Companies may lose opportunities to develop new projects. And the public’s and users’ confidence will be damaged. Then how to deal with this issue? Technology is only a partial solution to information security. What’s more important is that organizations and companies should promote the awareness on
information security to its staff. However, since no system can ever be 100 percent secure, a prevention-only approach to information security management is not enough. Companies and organizations should adopt a dual approach to information security management by combing prevention and detection techniques.
跟人打交道还是跟机器打交道
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Work with a Person or Work with a Machine? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)一些人喜欢和人打交道多的工作
2)然而也有一些人更愿意和机器打交道
3)你更喜欢哪种工作?为什么?
Work with a Person or Work with a Machine?
When asked about work preference, different people will give different answers. Some people like working with people. However, others prefer jobs which mainly involve objects or machines.
Those people who have the first preference believe working with people usually makes one feel interesting and efficient. In addition, they maintain people can be inspired to bring forward new ideas by
communicating or consulting with those around them. However, still others have different preferences. In their opinions, working with objects or machines can make one enjoy more peace and quiet. Besides, they
篇七:《四级英语作文预测》
1. 志愿者活动
Part I Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteering activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作
2. 志愿者工作的社会意义
3. 作为大学生，应该怎么做
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to
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