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to live in the city(一)
to live in the city(二)
Live in the city or the countryside Nowadays people who often read articles will be exposed to the topic about live in a country or in a big city which has been brought to the hub of public attention. As far as I am concerned I would like to choose living in a county although the statement has some downside in it.
First of all I think the people who live in the country will be more heather than the one live in the city. In this day and age more and more people work at the office all days and don’t have any chance to take exercise. If we living in the country we can use our spare time to take a walk and running in the morning.
Second from my point of view the air in the city is not fresh. With the development of the city more and more industries built near the city which is the reason to air pollution. Also with the crease of the cars, the pollution of flue gas is more serious in the city. So if people always stay in the city and cannot breath to the fresh air, I think it will affect their live qualities.
Last but not least, since the space in city is limit and the price of the apartments are more expensive. A lot of people can’t afford expensive rent. So for many young people they would choose to live in country rather than live in the country. I think it is a wisdom choice which can let their live more comfortable and save more money.
In a conclusion, living in the country is not only good for the health but also good for the young people to save money. In my opinion I would like to live in the country rather than live in the city.
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2015高考新课标卷I 短文改错解析
山东郯城第一中学 徐保国
【高考真题】
第二节 短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
【答案及解析】
1. think –thought 时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”。
2. 在in和countryside之间添the。考查冠词习惯用法。in the countryside固定短语，必须用定冠词。
3. or改为and 连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词and。
4. on改为with 短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着……的发展。
5. 删去been。考查时态语态。此句不含有被动的意思，studies和show之间存在主动关系。
6. seriously 改为serious。考查形容词。修饰名词problem，应该用形容词形式。
7. airs改为air。考查名词复数。air是不可数名词，没有复数形式。句子中谓语动词是第三人称单数is。
8. much改为many。考查名词修饰语。 修饰复数名词animals，应该用many， much只能修饰不可数名词。
9. found改为find。考查动词。情态动词之后应该用不带to的不定式，不能用过去式或过去分词形式。
10. your改为our或者the。考查人称代词。人称不一致错误。“环境”是我们共同的。
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HomeTown
Where are you from,which part of your country?
I am from a small town of Taian city of Shandong Province in China.It locates on the northeast of China and southwest of Shandong.
1.what do u like about your hometown? (What would you say is the best thing about your hometown? What's your favourite part of your hometown?Do u like your hometown? ) I love my hometown's beautiful natural scenery[si:neri] very much.My hometown is an inland agricultural region.It is famous for its peach.Most farmers in the town plant peaches ,although they also plant other fruits,but mostly peaches.In the spring,the peach trees are blooming.Without a real look you can't imagine how beautiful the peach blossom blooming all over the moutain is .It is gorgeous.And cos it's not an industrial town,the environment is good ,the air is clear,the sky is blue,and I also enjoy the peace and quiet there.
2.what do u dislike about your hometown.
I guess the answer would be the economy.
Cas my hometown is not near the centre of the city,its economy is bad.Some area are pretty run-down.Pepole in my hometown are not rich and the living condition is not very good.Even worsely its economy is shrinking instead of growing cas the peaches sell not very well in recent years.I think maybe the quality of the peaches drops is the reason,you know,its taste is not as good as before,so less and less people buy peaches.
3.Do u think your hometown is good for young people?
No.cas i think my hometown is kind of falling behind the times.it lacks of opporpunity and changes which is very important for the young people.Most old people in the town didn't get the high education.That's why most parents in my hometown try their best to support their children to the college.They think only knowlege can change your fate.
4.what's the nightlife like in your hometown?
Most pepole in my hometown don't go out at night.After dinner,Children may do homework in their room while the parents watching TV outside.This reminds me of my childhood.cas my parents are not stict with me,so I can watch TV while i am doing homework.That's a reward for my good scores in the exam.Parents in my hometown don't care how u study,they just want the result. You give them what they want ,you can get the freedom.Oh Sorry,i go too far.
5.what would u change about your city?
The economic system i think. People in my hometown they just plant the peaches and sell them to the dealers.The money farmers can get is very limited.If they can be the dealers themselves or the government of my hometown can open bussiness such as peach juice factories,dried peach factories,i think things may go very differently. And they must improve the quality of the peaches firstly of course.Because in my memory the peach of my hometown are very big and delicious and also have numrous varieties.I am very confused why the quality drops year by year.I just can't get it.
6.What types of public transport can be found in your hometown?
The bus and bike.If people in the town want to go to the market or the shop and students want to go to school ,they often go there by bike or motorcycle.But if they want to go to the city,bus is the first choice.Few people have private cars in my hometown.And if people has some hurry things to do ,and they don't have a motorcycle and no time to waiting bus ,they may take a taxi.(But the taxi
is not a real taxi.I mean it's not like the taxi in big cities.It' kind of a mixture of motorcyle and car.It has three wheels and a carrige shed.In small cities and towns of China you can see this kind transportation everywhere.)But few pepole will do that cas most pepole are penny-pinching ,they think taking taxi is a luxury.
Where do you live at the moment?
I’m not living in my hometown right now.I am living in my university .It is in Dongying city of ShanDong Province.
How long have you been living there/here?
I am living there about 6 years.cas I study in my university for about 6 years.4 years for my undergraduate course,2 years for my master’s degree. I am back to my hometown only on vacation.
Do you like _____? (The place you are living in now) (Why?/Why not?)
Actually I don’t like it.cas its climate is harsh.It seems like there are only 2 seasons in this city,winter and summer.You may wear a down coat yesterday and today you only need to wear a T shirt because of the hot weather.
Where is your hometown? (Or, what part of China do you come from?) What kind of place is your hometown? Is that a big city or a small town (or, a village in the countryside)? (Similar to above) How big is that place? * (For you,) what benefits are there from living in a big city? (Similar to above) Tell me something about your hometown. Has your hometown changed much in the past few years? (e.g. 20 years)
yes.There
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