【 – 小学作文】
篇一:《作文》
任祎玮
Our School Students’ After-Class Reading
原文 As is shown in the chart, we can clearly see that students spend little time reading books. I think the reason is that the elder we are, the more homework we have. In the other word is that the less time we can read books. However, in my opinion, reading is actually a good way for us to learn many things. It plays an important role in our life. It can not only make me feel happy and relaxed, but also can makes me know the difference between right and wrong. I think we should save more time to read books, it is helpful for teenagers. Let’s read more books, enjoy the life and learn the world better.
修改：
内容方面后面两部分都不错，就是第一部分有所欠缺。要求简要描述图中信息。你没有把图表要表达的意思表达清楚，图中要反映的是随着年级的升高，每周花在阅读上的平均时间减少了，而不是你说描述的几乎在阅读上不花时间。
修改后：
As is shown in the chart, the Grade Six students spend seven hours in reading per week on
average, while hours spent by the Grade Nine students decrease to only half an hour. I think the reason is that the older we are, the more homework we have, in other words, the less time we have to read books. However, in my opinion, reading is actually a good way for us to learn many things. It plays an important role in our life. It can not only make me feel happy and relaxed, but also teach me how to tell right from wrong. I think we should save more time to read books, which is helpful for us teenagers. Let’s read more books, enjoy life and learn the world better.
篇二:《let's go作文》
Let’s go to the zoo
Danny , let’s go to the zoo.
OK, I like to zoo.
We can ride our bike.
No, my bike is broken
Oh,let’s take bus 42.
(Danny and Jenny get off the bus .But they get lost on the way to the zoo .They see the ludy)
Excuse me .where is the zoo?
Do you have a map?
Yes,here is.
Look,you are here.Go down this stright and turn left at the trffic light.You can see the zoo. Thank you very much.
You are welcome.
篇三:《作文》
凌洁蕙
Our school students’ After-class Reading
原文： As is shown in the chart, I think Grade Nine only have a little time to reading. It’s too short. I think we should let Grade Nine more time to read. If we can change. Give Grade six more homework and give Grade Nine less homework. I think it’s good because they are the same as the time to read. If we read, we can get more knowleged. We should read!
修改：
1. I think 多余了，文章给出的第一句就是“从图表中得知”，你只要简要描述即可，不必发表自己的意见。
2. Grade Nine是九年级，主语应该是学生，故改为“The Grade Nine students”。
3. to reading 应改为 to read. to +动词原形
4.let sb do sth；spend some time doing sth; 故本句改为：I think we should let Grade Nine students spend more time reading.
5. If we can change. 首先改变什么？条件不明确。其次，if引导条件状语从句，条件成立的情况下，要做一个什么主要的动作？if引导的句子不能独立成句。 可改为If we can change the present situation, we can give Grade Six students a little more homework and give Grade Nine students a bit less.
6. I think it’s good because they are the same as the time to read这句不知道你要表达什么意思。如果是要表达让六年级和九年级的学生有同样适当的阅读时间的话可以这样写：I think we can try this way because it allows the students of different grades to spend proper time doing after-classing reading.
7. knowleged拼写错误knowledge
内容少了对图表的简要描述 和分析产生这种结果的原因
简要描述如：
然后分析原因：The time spent by the students in reading decreases year by year because as they enter a higher grade, they have to spend more time on their homework.
修改后：
As is shown in the chart, The Grade Six students spend seven hours in reading per week on average, while hours spent by the Grade Nine students decrease to only half an hour. The time spent by the students in reading decreases year by year because as they enter a higher grade, they have to spend more time on their homework. I think we should let Grade Nine students spend more time reading. If we can change the present situation, we can give Grade Six students a little more homework and give Grade Nine students a bit less. I think we can try this way because it allows the students of different grades to spend proper time doing after-classing reading. If we read, we can get more knowledge. We should read!
篇四:《专项训练 英语作文01(中考)》
中考英语作文专项训练
（一）中考英语作文要求
中考英语作文要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：
（1）准确使用语法和词汇；
（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。要求考生根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语作文。提示或图表、或图文皆有。
（3）中考评分标准
*满分档（15分）：文本长度符合要求（70-120字），书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。
*第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。
*第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有2要点得给9-10分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。
*第三档(6-8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整（只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。
*第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
*第一档（0-2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。（白卷0分）
（二）写作要点
(1)细审题目，切中题意
在动笔之间，一定要把试题认真读两遍，明确作文的中心思想。
(2)拟定提纲，提炼要点
考生应充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出，但不用过于详细，只需根据短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，以免答题时间不够
(3)连词成句，扩展基本句型，连句成篇
尽量使用自己最熟悉，最有把握的句型和短语表达，尽量灵活变通，使用多种句型，避免使用句型的单调性。用英语思维和表达，切忌汉语式英语。所使用的词组、句型应该是自己见过或听过的，切忌生造词句，凭空捏造。
(4)通读文章，检查改错
总之，只有牢固掌握英语的句法和词法，学会运用英语的基本句型和结构，写作时应注意各项细节，才能提高书面表达的得分率。因此，平时的学习中英多注意累积好词、好句，全面掌握所学的句式及语法知识，多读，多练，认真总结书面表达技巧，最终做到有的放矢、有备无患。
（三）写好英语作文的秘诀
1.积累丰富的词汇量和词组
2.掌握语法
3.大量的课外阅读，累积好词和好句
4.背诵范文和经典句型
5.勤于动笔
（四）英语作文的结构：
很多考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均8~12个单词计算，用7~10个句子便能完成一篇要求在80词左右的作文。其基本模式为：
英语作文范文
*根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称，否则答案作废。
Notice
Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news.
We are planning an outing. __________
例文
Notice
Good morning, everyone!
点评：
本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕“Notice”这一主题展开，把表格所提供的信息陈述清楚，要点齐全。文章中语句简练，语句变化多样，有简单句、并列句和复合句，也用上了祈使句，过渡自然，结尾表明作者自己对这次郊游活动的祝愿，增强了感染{let,read,more作文}.
力。
话题作文
怎样学好英语
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。{let,read,more作文}.
Brainstorm
Framework
(1)主题句{let,read,more作文}.
English is important and useful to us.
(2)过渡句
Here are my suggestions.
(3)陈述观点，巧用连词
First, second, third, at last
(4)增强修饰，美化文章
Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.
It’s good for us.
(5)总结中心思想
In a word
(6)复查作文，检查错误
We should do………
As+adj+as possible, as+adj/adv+as one can
Be afraid of doing sth.{let,read,more作文}.
you had better do
★范文
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
（五）实用英文表达方式
(1)提建议
1. had better (not) do 最好（不）做
2. how about / what about doing …怎么样?
3. I think you should do 我认为你应该…
I suggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做…
If I were you, I would do… 我要是你的话，我会做…
It's best to do 最好做…
Why not do / why don't you do…? 为什么不…
(2)表示喜欢和感兴趣
1. like / love doing
2. enjoy doing
3. be fond of doing 喜欢做…
4. be keen on doing 喜欢做…
5. prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
6. be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in doing
(3)表示想/希望{let,read,more作文}.
1. want to do = would like to do 想做…
2. hope to do 希望做…
3. expect to do 期待着做…
4. wish to do 希望做…
5. consider doing 考虑做…
(4)常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Third/Thirdly,
And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition
3.表转折对比关系的：However, On the contrary, but
Although+clause（从句）, In spite of+n/doing
On one hand… On the other hand…
Some…, while others…
4.表因果关系的：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：In other words
6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I know, In my opinion
9.表总结：In short, In a word. In conclusion, In summary, all in all,
★背诵范文
书面表达：（15分）
在今年“世界读书日”来临之际，为了了解当今的中
学生到底喜欢阅读什么类型的书，某教科院对 1000名初中生的课外阅读情况做了一次调查。请 根据下图提示的信息，给一家英文报纸做一个调查 汇报，并谈谈你对课外阅读的看法和感受。
提示：1.
2.对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
3.词数：80词左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
（参考词汇：课外读物collateral reading; 漫画书comic;学习参考学习参考书learning reference book）
背诵范文
forty-six percent of the students like reading popular science books and science fictions best. Twenty-seven percent of the students say that comic books are their favorite and sixteen percent of the students say they like reading learning reference books in their free time. Only eleven percent of them are interested in great books and other novels.
I like reading a lot. I think reading is helpful to one’s growing. It is also very important and
篇五:《英语作文Let It Go》
随它去吧 Let It Go
Sometimes, we may feel uncomfortable and unhappy. However, what makes us so upset on earth? There are different reasons for different people. When we are sorrowful, we should tell ourselves that there are still various beauties in the world. What we should do is that we must take actions to find them.
有时候，我们可能会感到不舒服、不快乐。但是，究竟是什么让我们如此沮丧呢？不同的人有不同的原因。在我们悲伤的时候，我们应该告诉自己这个世界上依旧还是有很多美好的。我们应该做的就是努力地寻找。{let,read,more作文}.
When we get into trouble, we always tell ourselves that we can't cry, because crying is not useful for us. And if we just cry and don't do anything, we will become more passive. Although crying can't solve any complicated problems, and maybe we will get a terrible mood finally, crying can give us a release, and it is helpful for us. So what I want to say is that we should follow ourselves emotions. When we indeed want to cry, we shouldn't limit ourselves to avoid crying. Please just give ourselves a space where we can be loyal to our heart and we don't need to think over any meaningless things. Thus, we can let ourselves get a peaceful environment. Don't suppress our inner emotions. Just let it go.
当我们陷入困境的时候，我们总是告诉我们自己我们不能哭，因为哭是没有用的。如果我们仅仅就是哭，不做任何其他事情的话，我们会变得更加消极。尽管哭不能够解决一些复杂的问题，而且最终还会让我们的心情更加糟糕，但是哭泣能让我们有所发泄，这是对我们是有所帮助的。所以，我想说的就是我们应该放纵自己的情感。当我们的确是想要哭的时候，我们不应该压抑自己而不去哭。请给我们自己一个空间吧，在这个空间里，我们能够忠于自己的心，并且我们也不要再去思考一些无用的事。这样，我们就能够获得平静心态。不要压制我们内心的情感。顺其自然吧。
Also, when we meet some situations that we have tried our best to solve, but the result is that we can't change anything, then we should have a consciousness of "Let it go". Maybe we are not willing to give it up, but we must realize that if we always make great efforts, but we still can't gain the satisfactory result, we should convince ourselves not to insist on it. Let us acquire a great mood, and just let it go. Because we are not regretful, we have experienced it.
还有就是，在我们遇到一些情况，这些情况是我
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