【 – 小学作文】
篇一:《改错,作文》
短文改错
I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down; almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor some day. 书面表达
Can money buy happiness? 有人认为金钱是幸福，有人认为金钱不能买到很多珍贵的东西，比如时间和友情。作为高中生的你一定有自己的理解。请认真思考这句话，然后按要求用英语写一篇短文。
内容要求： 1. 你的观点； 2. 议论说明； 3. 恰当的结尾。
词数：120左右
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短文改错：
1. recent→recently 2.去掉been 3.√
4. gave→gives 5. isn't→doesn't 6. 第一个in→to 7. 去掉a
8. with后加their
9. trembled→trembling 10.tail→tails
书面表达
Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinions. It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfort and security. However, it is equally true that lack of money causes great distress. It is a common view that "money is the root of all evil." The pursuit of money drives many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable. Money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness. Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly.
篇二:《改错作文》{改错作文}.{改错作文}.
篇三:《作文改错》
题目：Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?
ESSAY：
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned with the phenomenon that more and more parents go to overseas for working with their family. Some people hold the opinion that parents working abroad, in particular, is not good for their family even their children. Some others, in the other hand, advocate that parents taking their families is necessary when they work in other countries. However, as for me, a better way to accompany their families is to go abroad together.
Some people believe that parents should not go abroad for working, taking their family with them. In the first place, leaving their own country, they may face some situation what is too strange to understand when they reach other countries for the first time. In the second place, the competition in foreign company is cruel; they have to spend more time on working, so that they can not take care of their family as in their own country.
However, further analysis would make it clear that increasing number of income will be earned for improvement their life. In the first place, more money means that they can provide better educational resource for their children. Not only they will learn rich culture of other country, but also they experience the local customs and practices. For example, American born Chinese, in particular, they live in a traditional Chinese family but they study in the American high school or college. So, they got some advantages of those two entirely different culture.
In summary, I think that it is a good idea to work in other countries wit their family. Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?
这篇文章题目有一定的难度，但是他还是取得了7.5分的写作绝对高分。请大家重点看他的语言使用（Lexical Resources).
In the contemporary world, the pace of globalization is advancing at a meteoric speed. Accordingly, some people propose that a lingua franca should be contrived for individuals all over the world to conduct international communication; however, people hold divergent views when it comes to this issue. Personally, I tend to believe that it is meaningless to simply compare the merits and drawbacks of inventing a universal language as both sides are not ignorable.
Compelling arguments can be made that different languages, undoubtedly, cause obstacles and misunderstandings in conversation, restricting the native to communicate with foreigners. In contrast, a universal language may not only bring about convenience for individuals in their daily life, learning and working, but promote joint development the world over, smooth the talk between nations and drive societal advance as well. For example, college students are expected to no longer rely on mechanical translation software when downloading foreign essays and material and companies can economize their costs and budget because it is unnecessary for them to hire simultaneous interpreters. Meanwhile, foreign countries are accessible to travelers due to the fact that individuals no longer fret about cultural shock and linguistic obstacles. Consequently, contriving a fresh language is sure to produce profits for both the public and countries from all over the world.
However, admittedly, notwithstanding the reality that a lingua franca has a variety of advantages, we should still be consciously aware of its downsides. For one thing, on the basis of recent research and statistics, the vernacular and lesser-known languages are disappearing at a staggering rate. And it seems that under the huge impact of dominant languages, like the proliferation of English, the extinction of lesser-known languages are just around the corner. For the other thing, some experts and scholars are anxious about the phenomenon that cultural assimilation may give rise to global uniformity, rendering life become dull and monotonous. Traditions, rites, rituals, mores and the language of a culture are all unifying forces of a nation and the decline of them erodes the national identity and national pride of a country.
Overall, based on what has been discussed above, I feel whether to contrive a new language is a sophisticated issue which we are well-advised to take varying aspects into account before we make the final decision.
J9T2 TASK1
The bar chat gives the information about the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in United kingdom ,divided into three different call types, during the period from 1995 to 2002.
According to the bar chart,the minutes which used on fixed line local call type saw an upward trend gradually from 1995 to 1999 .In 1995 it coasted 72billon minutes on local-fixed line and it peaked at 90 billion minutes until 1999 .However ,in the rest 3 years , the figure experienced a downward trend , with 85 billion minutes in 2000, 79 billion minutes in 2001 and 72 billion minutes in 2002 . It is interesting that the figure in 2002 has fallen back to 72, which was as high as the figure in 1995.
As the other call types are concered , over the 8 years between 1995 and 2002 , the figure of national and international-fixed line and mobiles-all calls increased
respectively. We can see that in 1995, the figure of national and international-fixed was only 38, with the slight increase , in 2002 ,it reached its peak at 61 billion
minutes .As for the figure of mobiles , it saw an significant upward on the bar chart , with the figure only 4 in 1995 ,while it peaked at 46 in 2002.
To sum up , from the bar chart ,we can find that during the period from 1995 to 2002 , the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the United Kingdom saw different trend by three different categories differently.
TASK2:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity ,improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years , some high schools order their students must participate in the unpaid community service as attending a compulsory course which would be scored by their teachers . I disagree this totally , although some people belive that unpaid community service should be a required part of high school programmes.
Admittedly , participation in some unpaid community services such as working for a charty , improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children can bring some benefits to high school teenagers. It can forster students to become a kind person with sympathe mind , can help them to understand how to communicate with different people , can make them be exposed to other people’s harshtime by
witnessting the disabled children , poor person as well as many other disadvantaged groups .Besides , attending some unpaid community services can improve students practical skills as well as job skills.
Nevertheless , taking part in unpaid community services does not need become a
compulsory part of high school programmes .Undoubtedly, it is a excellent thing to do{改错作文}.
unpaid community service , while if students were obligated to do this , with the reluctant emotion to do this , the effect would be discounted .Specifically , some
students have too much workload on study to accomplish, it is difficult to ask them to throw away their major task ,then turn to help others with a happy mood . In
addition ,some teenagers are in some disadvantaged circumstance such as disabled or poor as well. How can we ask them to help others and who can secure them ?
From my perspective , it does not make any sense to put unpaid community service as a compulsory course.
J7T4Task 1:
The four pie charts compare the information about units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
From the two pie charts ,which show units of electricity by fuel source in
Australia ,we can see over 20 year period between 1980 and 2000, the total production increased by 70 units. The units of electricity by coal increased
significantly by 80 units, and the units of electricity by hydro power rised slightly by 16 units .By contrast, the usage of natural gas saw a downward during the 20 years by 18 units. In addition, the fuel oil also decreased by 8 unites.
According the other two charts, the total production of units of electricity by fuel source in France increased by 90 units during the 20 year period from 1980 to 2000. The usage of nuclear power only 15 units in 1980, while it increased 111 units to 126 units in 2000.Besides, the oil increased slightly by 5 units. In contrast, the usage of natural gas and hydro power decreased by 23 units and 3 units respectively. As for the coal, it remained stable at 25 units.
Comparing with the units of electricity by fuel source in Australia and France , these two countries ,the variant of total production almost similar , while the changes of the fuel sources was different in two countries.
Task2: Some people think that universities should provide graduates with knowledge and skills needed in the workplace .Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake , regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What , in your opinion ,should be the main function of a university?
Nowadays, it is not uncommon that many people dropout from universities or even go to career path after high school graduation. They think the university only can bring the theoretical knowledge to them, while that can’t help their employment prospects. From my perspective, the university should still mainly give access to knowledge for its own sake ,regardless of whether the course is useful to an employment.
In other words, I think the main function of a university should be enable students to acquire theoretical knowledge rather than the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace, because the adequate theoretical knowledge can lay foundation for practical knowledge, can open the door for better career prospects. In people’s job lives, the certification of their profession, the acknowledge of their degree, the high scores of their subjects and even the high speaking by students’ faculties are all contribute to their career path, whereas these factors all can be acquired by the theoretical knowledge’s study.
Furthermore, with the main function of a university to give access to theoretical knowledge ,the university should also provide some opportunities for students to training their job skills and acquire some practical knowledge of employment. The universities can offer some courses for students learning practical knowledge, the faculties of universities can recommend students to do some part-time job when their study schedule are not over-whelmed.
To sum up ,my point of view is that the main function of a university is to open a door for students to acquire theoretical knowledge so as to lay a solid foundation for their career prospects.
J7T4Task 1:
The four pie charts compare the information about units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
From the two pie charts ,which show units of electricity by fuel source in{改错作文}.
Australia ,we can see over 20 year period between 1980 and 2000, the total production increased by 70 units. The units of electricity by coal increased
significantly by 80 units, and the units of electricity by hydro power rise slightly by 16 units .By contrast , the usage of natural gas saw a downward during the 20 years by 18 units. In addition, the fuel oil also decreased by8 unites.
According the other two charts, the total production of units of electricity by fuel source in France increased by 90 units during the 20 year period from1980 to 2000. The usage of nuclear power only 15 units in 1980 ,while it increased 111 units to 126 units in 2000.Besides , the oil increased slightly by 5 units . In contrast , the usage of natural gas and hydro power decreased by 23 units and 3 units respectively. As for the coal ,it remained stable at 25units.
Comparing with the units of electricity by fuel source in Australia and France, these two countries ,the variant of total production almost similar , while the changes of the fuel sources was different in two countries.
篇四:《改错作文》
In order to make use to learning materials, the Students’ Union of our school are planning an activity. The school leavers are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the student in the lower grades. The idea, that is intended to encourage a low-carbon lifestyle, is praised and supported by the teachers and students. The activity will be hold on the first floor of the school library and so it will last for eleven days , from June 10 to 20. As student , I strong support the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. I hope this activity would continue every year in the future.
假定你是李华，想提高自己的英语听力和口语水平。你想请在一家英语培训中心工作的美国朋友Nancy 为你推荐一位辅导老师。请按下列要点写一封邮件：
1. 介绍自己的英语水平
2. 说明对辅导教师的要求
3. 约定上课时间
注意：1.词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使英文连贯
3. 开头已为你写好
Dear Nancy，
I’m writing to ask whether you could recommend a tutor for me. Yours, Li Hua
篇五:《改错与作文》
改错一
Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attentions, please? Now we are looking for a passenger, Mr. Brown, he is
from America. And he’s now leaving Beijing to America on Flight 2748. But we were told Mr.
Brown left his passport as good as his wallet in Friendship Hotel where he had stayed in.
The manager of a hotel telephones to tell us about it. He has just sent his secretary to bring
the passport and the wallet here, but she will come soon. Will Mr. Brown please go the gate
of our airport and wait for his passport and wallet? She'll arrive in ten minutes.
答案：attentions→attention he→who to→for good→well 去掉in a→the
telephones→ telephoned but→and go后加to his→your
改错二：
Our city changed a lot in the past 5 years. More highways have been built, that makes it
very convenient for people to travel. Many high buildings have been appeared, which are
modern and beautiful. As the result, people’s living conditions has been greatly improved.
Many families have got cars of their own. And they can enjoy them when traveling on holidays.
They lead a rich and colorful life. Mobile phone and computers are very usually now. But it is
easier for people to keep in touch with each other than before. More and more foreign
companies have started factories here. How a happy life it is, I think.
答案：
changed前加has that→which
usually→usual Howwhat
去掉been the→a has have them→themselves phone→phones But and
作文一
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike 写信给你，想多了解“星光大道”这个电视节目的
情况。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信，并鼓励他去参加这个节目。
1. “星光大道”在中国是家喻户晓的节目。
2. 大众节目，想展示才艺的人都可参加。
3. 表演形式：唱歌、跳舞、演奏乐器或其它才艺表演。
4. 一个叫“郝歌”的外国朋友在2006年还获了三等奖。
5. 鼓励他也去参加这个节目。
注意：1.字数在100字左右。2.可适当发挥。3. 开头的句子已给出（不计入总字数）。
参考词汇：才艺表演 Talent Show
Dear Mike,
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One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I am very glad that you are interested in the CCTV programme “Avenue of Stars”. This programme is a household name in China, which is intended for ordinary people who want to show their talent in performance, including foreign friends. There are various forms of performance, such as singing, dancing, playing musical instruments and other kinds of Talent Show. Many people have become famous through this programme, especially an African singer named Hao Ge ,who loves music. He can sing Chinese songs very well, which makes him stand out and win the 3rd prize in 2006.
I know you have a gift for singing and dancing, and why not have a try?
作文二：
假如你在台湾当导游，有几个美国游客问起来钓鱼岛的事情，请你用英语来对钓鱼岛做一下简介。包括一下要点：{改错作文}.
1. 钓鱼岛是钓鱼岛群岛的主要岛屿, 自古以来是中国的领土。
2. 它位于中国东海。距离温州356公里，距离基隆市190公里。
3. 它占据4.3838平方公里水域，周围水域17平方公里。
3. 由于周知的美国和二战的原因，中日开始就钓鱼岛产生争端。
4. 2012年9月10日，中国政府开始对钓鱼岛进行监控。{改错作文}.
字数：100字左右
参考词汇： 领土：territory 基隆: Keelung 争端：dispute
答案：
Diaoyu island is the main island of Diaoyu islands, which has been China's territory since ancient times. Lots of evidence has proved it. Diaoyu island, which is located in the East China sea, lies about 356 km away from Wenzhou City as well as about 190 kilometers from Keelung City. It has（occupies） an area of 4.3838 square kilometers with the surrounding sea area of about 17 square kilometers. Due to the fact that In the WWII, the United States "gave" the Diaoyu island to Japan, the Diaoyu islands dispute arose between China and Japan. On September 10, 2012 , the Chinese government began to carry out monitoring it.
篇六:《作文改错》
改错：
1. After school go home, our parents ask us do homework.
2. I haven’t time play.
3. I feel don’t happy.
4. My parents is help me.
5. They are take pride in me.
6. We don’t very understand them
7. We should study more harder.
8. 代词使用
ask me to do our homework 动宾
take pride in us 介宾
9. 上下文人称混乱
When we are in trouble, they can help you.
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