【 – 高中作文】
向老师道歉的话英语作文(一)
向老师道歉的话英语作文(二)
考研英语写作小作文之道歉信
在考研英语的Part A 小作文部分，书信作为考查的重点所在，种类繁多。在前面我们曾就以题目为例，详细地解析过前五种书信：即建议信、投诉信、咨询信、感谢信和祝贺信的写作方法及其注意事项。今天中公考研英语教研组的张玉环老师就对考研英语小作文中的第六类书信——道歉信——进行深入的分析。
道歉信，英文中称为 letter of apology，是由于某事向某人表示歉意的信件，通常是由于自己的过错或不能履行承诺等而做出的道歉。写作时，一定要态度诚恳，提供合理的理由，并需在解释完原因后，尽可能提供一个合适的补救办法。道歉信曾在2008年英语(一)的小作文中考查过。作为英文应用书信的一种，道歉信非常符合考研英语的考查要求，既可考查考生的英语书面表达能力，尤其是应用文的英语表达能力，又可考查到考生对内容要点的归纳、概括、表述能力。
一般来说，在考研英语中，道歉信主体部分的写作可按照三个步骤进行，即“三步走”策略。接下来就以题目为例，具体解析一下这个策略。
例题：
Directions：
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to
1) make an apology, and
2) suggest a solution.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address.
题目要求向你在加拿大时的房东Bob写一封信，为自己未能在回国之前归还音乐CD而向他道歉，并提出解决方案。根据上面所提的道歉信写作“三步走”策略，具体操作如下： 首段：I am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music CD before I came back.
在“三步走”策略中，第一步就是要表明写信目的并且简述事由。正如上面的首段，只有一句话，首先非常清晰明了地说明写信目的。既然这是一封道歉信，那么写信的目的自然就是向收信人表示道歉，而这也正是题目所给出的写作要求之一。此外，在这句话中，表明写信目的之后还简要陈述了道歉的事由，使书信的交流功能更加准确和有效，这也是写信的常识问题。对于以上两点内容，简单来说，可用一句话表达，即I am writing this letter to express my apology to you for my failing to""
中段：Several days ago, I borrowed it when I lived in your house. Unfortunately, just now I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you. I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary, I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.
在道歉信中，本段的主要内容就是首先就上面所道歉之事进行详细的陈述，包括事情是如何发生的以及自己为什么会犯这个错误而给对方造成不便。告知对方原因之后，接下来要做的事情就是为自己犯下的错误买单，也就是要为自己给对方造成的不便或损失进行补偿、提出解决方案。做补偿时务必要记住的是态度一定要诚恳、真挚，所以补偿方案需要实虚结
合：既要有具体的、实实在在的解决方法，还要为可能造成的损失做出将会弥补的承诺，以在最大限度上获得对方的原谅。
尾段：Once again, I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apologies. 本段中第一句话通过once again+I feel so sorry forany inconvenience caused的句型，再次表达了自己对收信人的道歉之意。之后，第二句话用一句非常简单的please accept my apologies表达了自己的期待，期待收信人接受道歉，进而原谅自己。
在考研英语的书信表达中，类似的首段或尾段的套用句式比较丰富，大家需要在复习过程中进行有意的积累，并在写作中加以运用：
1. I would like to give you my apology for…
2. I must apologize to you for"
3. I express my regret at being unable to do…
4. Please accept my sincere apology for…
5. I hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.
6. I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally.
7. We assure you that such a matter will never happen again.
8. I do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness.
因此，该题的完整范文如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music CD before I came back.
Several days ago, I borrowed it when I lived in your house. Unfortunately, just now I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you. I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary, I will compensate for any troubles it may cause. Once again, I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apologies. Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
向老师道歉的话英语作文(三)
考研英语小作文批改例文：道歉信
8分
同学你好，你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的"主将从现"。
第一篇
Dear Prof.Wong,
I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.
To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
Sincerely yours,
LiMing
Dear Prof.Wong,
I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(删除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (删除)prevented me from any activity.
To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
Sincerely yours,
LiMing
8-10分
第二篇
Dear David,
I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon. The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear David,
I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.
The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could(删除) send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check(用词不当) the record and send my feedback to you.
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
向老师道歉的话英语作文(四)
目录
英语作文模板】应用文：道歉信 …………………………………………………………. 1
Passage 1 …………………………………………………………………………………….. 3
Passage 2 …………………………………………………………………………………….. 5
Passage 3 …………………………………………………………………………………….. 6 Passage 4 …………………………………………………………………………………….. 7
Passage5 ……………………………………………………………………………………… 8 Passage 6 …………………………………………………………………………………….. 8
Passage 之口头通知 ……………………………………………………………………… 10
英语作文模板】应用文：道歉信
道歉信
道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。
首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。
主体段落：说明道歉的具体原因，应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。
必背模板句型
I would like to give you my apology for……
对于……我向你道歉。
Please accept my sincere apology for……
请接受我关于……的真诚道歉。
I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did，but believe I had no intention to insult you.
对于我说的话/做过的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非要故意侮辱你。
Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.
请原谅我的用词不当。
I feel badly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
我为此感到非常内疚，所以想让你知道实情。
Please accept my apologies for my oversight.
请原谅我的疏忽。
Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再次表示歉意。
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my
situation.
我真心希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。
Once again，I''m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
再一次，我为所有的不便表示歉意。
必背经典范文
Dear professor Jackson：
I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination you gave on Moby-Dick last Wednesday. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.
On my way to class that day，I had a flat tire，and I had to go with the mechanic when he repaired it. It took me more than one hour to get it done. A copy of the bill is enclosed.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make up examination. I will #e to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again，I''m sorry fro any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours，
Alice
译文
亲爱的杰克逊教授：
对于上周三错过了《白鲸》一课的考试我深表歉意。我很内疚，所以希望您能知道到底发生了什么。
那天上学的路上，我的汽车爆胎了。我不得不去找汽修工一起修理，花了一个多小时的时间才修好。我已经将账单放在附件中。
我真心希望您能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。我希望你能给我一次补考的机会。星期一上班时间，我将到您的办公室和您谈这件事的可行性。我为造成的不便再次表示歉意。
您的学生：艾丽丝
练习：
对于我说的话/做过的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非要故意侮辱你。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ .
我真心希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ .
再一次，我为所有的不便表示歉意。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ .
I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did，but believe I had no intention to insult you.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my
situation.
Once again，I''m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
(10·山东) Passage 1
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：1. 词数120~150；
2. 可适当增加细节。
One possible version:
Dear ,
I was far too happy that we made an appointment to visit together next weekend. How I appreciate the opportunity to be your guide in ! But I’m afraid we’ll have to make it another time,because I’ll be meeting my uncle at the airport. He is on business from Australia, and will be home for only two days. It’s a rare chance for our family to get reunited since he left home ten years ago. I hope you’ll forgive me for not keeping my word. If it’s convenient for you, we can make it the weekend after next, or you may make the choice, OK?
By the way, my family and I will be overjoyed to have your company when my uncle is home. If you have no plan, please let me know, and I’ll fetch you upon my uncle’s return.
Have a happy weekend.
Li Hua
Dear ,
I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised. I feel sorry for it and want you to know what happened.
Just now, my cousin, Li Qing, who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we haven't seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my appreciate your allowing me to make
another date to show you around Beijing. Once again, I'm sorry for any
inconvenience caused.
Dear Tom,
I feel terribly sorry to tell you that our trip to Beijing next weekend will be rearranged due to my personal reason.
I was informed just now that I entered the final of the CCTV English
Speech Competition. And the final is to be held next week. The winner of this competition will get an opportunity to study in Harvard University. Sounds fantastic, doesn’t it?
For years, I have been dreaming about studying abroad as an exchange student to learn/experience different cultures. Now the chance is coming. I think that if you were me, you would grasp it as I do.
Is it possible for us to make another time to visit Beijing? I sincerely
hope you can accept my apologies and understand me. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
I’m sorry that I can’t keep my promise that I’ll pay a visit to Beijing with you next weekend. My uncle is returning home from America,
who is aged 70 years and in poor health. I have no choice but to meet him at the airport next weekend.
To be honest, Beijing is a most popular tourist attraction to me, Not only is it the political, economic and cultural centre of China, but it is also rich in beautiful scenic spots. Besides, I’ve been planning to accompany you on the trip to the beautiful city. I wonder if it is possible for us to go there the weekend after next, and if so, I’ll make more preparations for it and we’ll enjoy a more pleasant trip there.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Passage 2
【2004年全国卷1】
假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点：
*表示歉意
*理由：去机场接人
*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座
注意：1. 词数：100左右
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Miss Morgan, Yours sincerely Li Hua One possible version:
向老师道歉的话英语作文(五)
老师向我道歉
考试的日子终于来了。
今天，我正高高兴兴地上学，突然，听到邻居的救喊声，我什么都不管的走出门，去看一下什么事我发现了几个贼子拿着刀子想向张大娘的勃子里刺，想张大娘交出钱来，可是张大娘宁愿死了也不交出钱来，贼子正想去拿那保险箱里的钱，张大娘就奋不顾身的从贼子手里走了出来去挡住他们取钱，这时，警察来了，把几个贼子包围了。在千钧一发的时候，那几个贼子被警察抓了出来，这时候我看了看手表，心里像吃了苦那样快地跑回学校，在跑回学校的时候张大娘对我说：“啊芳，这次非常谢谢你，如果不是你的话，我就没命了。”我对张大娘说：“不用谢我了，这是我们小学生应做的事情，我不跟你说那么多了，我要上学了。”
到了学校的时候，我慢步的走进教室门口，看见没个人都在写着试卷。可是，我只迟到5分钟而已，为什么老师的眼神会变得那么严肃呢？我知道5分钟是对于学生来说非常重要的，但是老师不知道人家的痛苦呀？如果老师知道每个人的事情就好了。我不好意思的走进去，老师对我说：;刘佳，等你考完试的时候到我的办公室里去。”考完试的时候，我就到办公室里去了，进了这个可怕的办公室里，我的心里非常害怕，老师对我说：;你为什么迟到？我就把事情告诉老师听，老师听了之后，不