【 – 高中作文】
篇一:《新托福考试作文部分的判断标准》
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新托福考试作文部分的判断标准
摘要: 新托福考试作文部分的判断标准 ，当我们说到21分向30分进行攀登的时候，必须在这里找到一个标尺来给我们提供充分的例子。以前我们对于作文分数的判断，总是模糊不清的，到底什么样的作
其实新托福考试作文部分的判断标准，既可以被我们称为多元化，也可以被我们称为单一化。说多元化，是因为判断标准的细化，也就是要求我们能够清楚准确的表达自己的含义，并且逻辑清晰，用词准确。
当我们的作文达到21分的时候，其实句子里面严重的错误已经很少了，比如说一个句子缺少谓语，没有主语的情况已经很少了。最多也就是写写stop smoking这样的Chinglish。简单来说，很硬性的语病已经不多了,可是这个时候，是最令人茫然的时候，因为这个时候好像我们的已经达到了自己的极限，自己能做的全都已经做了，好像一下失去了前进的方向，更是因为作文是主观题，我们身边总是缺少一个判断标准。对于托福作文，一个很关键性的要求就是要用词准确，行文流畅。我们以前往往总是会陷入一个误区，就是要用大词，要写一些句式磅礴的句子。之所以这样就是因为现在中国95%以上的作文教师，尤其是托福作文教师对于什么样的作文才是满分作文缺乏一个概念，虽然很多人能考出高分作文，但是他们很难做出一个指向性，就像是他们杀鸡用牛刀，然后他们就认为杀鸡只能用牛刀，是一个道理。他们不知道，其实杀鸡的时候，只用一把菜刀就可以了，是一个道理。所以，这就是为什么现在很多国内的初中经常用博士来当老师，但是这些人一上课就发现，学生根本不喜欢听他在说什么，甚至这些教师还经常被学生赶走，就是这个道理。
我们来看一些真实的例子。
Nevertheless, it would not work either if everybody just keep to themselves without communicating. It is also essential for roommates to share their experiences with one another and thus get close in their relationship. In this case, a good sense of humor can be a such a valuable quality as a single joke may break the silence and open up a nice conversation.
从这段文字里我们就会发现，本段几乎没有什么我们以前很多老师推崇的长难句，复杂句，整段内容，几乎都是由简单句组成的。这对于现在的培训机构的老师讲课的内容是一个大大的嘲讽，但是反过来又能告诉我们考生很多信息。
这段节选告诉我们：
1 托福满分作文，要求的不是庞大的单词量，而是在已有的8000单词的准确应用。
2 想拿满分作文，不是靠单纯的堆砌复杂句就可以完成的，如果你还不相信这一点，请去中国各大留学论坛，看看一片哀嚎之音。
3 想要拿到30分，要求你写出更为具体化的例子，而不是单纯的泛泛而谈。
有时，“投机取巧”与“踏实肯干”的差别就在一线之间。同样一种方法，花1周的时间来研究，就是“踏实肯干”;只花一分钟，读完了事，就是投机取巧。{判断型作文}.
篇二:《新托福考试作文部分的判断标准》
智课网TOEFL备考资料{判断型作文}.
新托福考试作文部分的判断标准
摘要： 新托福考试作文部分的判断标准，其实新托福考试作文部分的判断标准，既可以被我们称为多元化，也可以被我们称为单一化。说单一化，简单来说就是要说人话。说多元化，是因为判断标准的细化，也就是要求我们能够清楚准确的表达自己的含义，并且逻辑清晰，用词准确。
当我们的作文达到25分的时候，其实句子里面严重的错误已经很少了，比如说一个句子缺少谓语，没有主语的情况已经很少了。最多也就是写写stop smoking这样的Chinglish。简单来说，很硬性的语病已经不多了,可是这个时候，是最令人茫然的时候，因为这个时候好像我们的已经达到了自己的极限，自己能做的全都已经做了，好像一下失去了前进的方向，更是因为作文是主观题，我们身边总是缺少一个判断标准。今天笔者就是要从这个方向解决你的疑问。
对于 托福 作文，一个很关键性的要求就是要用词准确，行文流畅。我们以前往往总是会陷入一个误区，就是要用大词，要写一些句式磅礴的句子。之所以这样就是因为现在中国95%以上的作文教师，尤其是托福作文教师对于什么样的作文才是满分作文缺乏一个概念，虽然很多人能考出高分作文，但是他们很难做出一个指向性，就像是他们杀鸡用牛刀，然后他们就认为杀鸡只能用牛刀，是一个道理。他们不知道，其实杀鸡的时候，只用一把菜刀就可以了，是一个道理。所以，这就是为什么现在很多国内的初中经常用博士来当老师，但是这些人一上课就发现，学生根本不喜欢听他在说什么，甚至这些教师还经常被学生赶走，就是这个道理。
当然笔者对于批评任何一位教师都没有兴趣，笔者只感兴趣怎么样来提升学生的成绩。说话太空泛，我们来看一些真实的例子。
“There are no perfect people in the world; otherwise he is not a human being, but a god”. This proverb is often said by people. I cannot agree with this claim any more. It is common for our students to make mistakes, we should forgive them, even help them when they are in trouble because of the errors.
这一段是一篇 新托福 真实满分作文的节选。从这段文字里我们就会发现，本段几乎没有什么我们以前很多老师推崇的长难句，复杂句，整段内容，几乎都是由简单句组成的。这对于现在的培训机构的老师讲课的内容是一个大大的嘲讽，但是反过来又能告诉我们考生很多信息。{判断型作文}.
这段节选告诉我们：
1 托福满分作文，要求的不是庞大的单词量，而是在已有的8000单词的准确应用。
2 想拿满分作文，不是靠单纯的堆砌复杂句就可以完成的，如果你还不相信这一点，请去中国各大 留学 论坛，看看一片哀嚎之音。
3 想要拿到30分，要求你写出更为具体化的例子，而不是单纯的泛泛而谈。
4 想拿满分，一定首先要多看满分作文是什么样子，这些作文一定是你要仔细研究的。
有时，“投机取巧”与“踏实肯干”的差别就在一线之间。同样一种方法，花1周的时间来研究，就是“踏实肯干”;只花一分钟，读完了事，就是投机取巧。
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篇三:《看图作文类》
Ⅰ. 看图作文类
2. 根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。注意：1．词数：100左右2．生词：通讯：communicate 互联网：the Internet{判断型作文}.
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In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can
communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different countries.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
3. 受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。
调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种 调查范围：湖北省的10所中学 调查对象：高中生
调查人数：1200 调查方式：访谈 调查结果：（见下图）
In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.{判断型作文}.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.
4. 目前，全区上下都在大力开展城乡清洁工程的活动。为了响应政府的号召，3月25日，{判断型作文}.
星期天，你们班参加了一次校外环境卫生清洁活动。请根据图画所提供的信息，用英语写一篇日记，并谈谈你的看法。 （为方便排版，图见下页）
注意： 1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、完整； 2. 词数：100左右。
Sunday, March 25 Fine
Today our class went out to do some cleaning. We gathered at the school gate and started out early in the morning. Some collected the rubbish in the park, some cleared the old posters off the walls, and others swept the street. We hoped to make our city more beautiful with our own hands. At the same time some of us went to the public places, where there were a lot of people. We kept on telling people not to destroy the beauty of nature so that we can have a cleaner world.
In my opinion, such activities are necessary and instructive because some people are unaware of the importance of protecting the environment at present.
7. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Paul来信询问北京2008奥运吉祥物。请根据以下福娃图案写一封回信，简单介绍其所代表的涵义，以及颜色意义等内容，并邀请Paul届时来京观看比赛。
注意：1．词数100左右；2．参考词汇：吉祥物—mascot；福娃（Fu Wa）—Friendlies There are 5 Friendlies , or Fu Wa in Chinese , to serve as the Mascots for Beijing 2008 Olympic Games . Designed to express the nature of Chinese children, the 5 doll-like Frinedlies are symbols of four popular animals-the Fish , the Panda , the Tibetan Antelope , the Swallow –and the Olympic Flame . Each of the Friendlies has a Chinese name-Beibei , Jingjjing ,
Huanhuan , Yingying and Nini. When we put them together , they say Beijing Huan Ying Ni, or “Welcome to Beijing !” in English . These lovely dolls show us the Olympic spirit of universal friendship , and they each represent one of the following-the sea , forest , fire , earth and sky . As you can see , their colours have something to do with the 5 colours of the Olympic rings .
I really hope you may come to Beijing in 2008 ! Certainly I’
ll be your company then !
Looking forward to your arrival !
Yours ,
Li Hua
8. 假如你叫王平，根据图表提示，给你的加拿大网友Smith 写一封信，介绍你的寒假生活（共20天），可根据自己的实际情况添加细节。
注意：1．词数：100左右； 2．开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away. Every day I did some English reading, practiced writing compositions, worked out a
number of science problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.
In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Ping
9．根据下列图示以 “The New Grading System in Our School”为题为你校英语报写一篇短文,说明这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识.
要求: 1.词数 100左右, 已给出部分不包括在内.
生词: 评分体制grading system 参与participation（n.）
① tests ④ class participation
② notes ⑤ team work
③ homework The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will come from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the
following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at
working together with your classmates.
In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves on all sides.
10. 下面的饼状图（pie chat）显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给
English Weekly写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数120左右。首句已给出（不计入词数）。
From be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.