【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《The secret of success》
The secret of success
My aim is playing an important part in our life. living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.
As J·W·Goethe said：“The important thing in life is to have a great aim，and the determination to attain it”.Therefore, we must have brave and willpower to come true our dreams. Then there is a need for us to persevere . As Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence can have what he will”.What’s more，we should be unremitting when we face aim.And don’t be afraid of failure. If you fail，don’t forget to learn your lesson.
Keep on going，never say die！And you should also have a belief that you are sure to succeed as long as you keep your direction all the time.
In a word，success belongs to the persevering.
（Author：Huang ling）
【John·L·Gong点评】
1．行文逻辑严密清晰，引出了成功秘密的目标，并发表了自己的看法。能较好地运用Goethe所说的：“The important thing in life is to have a great aim，and the determination to attain it”。来加强文章的说服力。
2.写句子的能力很强，能运用一些多样化的句式和句法结构：Keep on going…….;as long as you keep your direction……..
3.文章结尾用了In a word，增加了亮点，表达了成功属于那些坚持不懈的人。
The secret of success
If we want to succeed，we should have own dream and a clear goal. If we don’t have a goal，we will lose right directions，it is like sailing without a compass. As an old saying goes the fire is the test of gold，adversity of a strong man. Though the way to succeeding is tough，we still have encourage and persistence to come true our dream，As Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence，can have what he will.”Then，we also face trouble bravely，and do well in learning from failure to search for experience. Believe in ourselves, success belongs to the persevering people.
（Author：Yang yong ting）
【John·L·Gong点评】
1.文章开门见山，引出了：如果我们要成功，就应该有梦想和目标。并发表了自己的看法，引用了一句古语：As an old saying goes：“the fire is the test of gold，adversity of strong man.”
2.写英语句子的能力强，文章结尾很有说服力：Believe ourselves，success belongs to the persevering People.
The secret of success
People should set up a dream and a goal. We know “Don’t have goal as if you don’t have a compass to go to slide into boat”，we should make a brave person，we needs to insist on our dream to achieve by ourselves。And what we want to succeed must have a long time. As Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence，can have what he will。”we are make good use of time，don’t waste time，insist on our goal。Don’t worry about failure，We are good at looking for experience from failure。Thus，I believe in myself，Come on!
（Author：Huang jia jia）
【John·L·Gong点评】
1.文章一开始写出：人生应该有理想、有目标。要点齐，能发表看法，并引用了Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence can have what he will。”增强了文章的说服力，点明了成功的秘诀。
2.并激励自己好好利用时间，坚持不懈地努力，树立自信，最终会获得成功。
The secret of success
If a person doesn’t have goal and dream as a sail doesn’t have a compass, So I think that everyone must set up a belonging to own dream and goal，they can take you still ahead, when we are ahead，not only must we still hard，but also we need brave to face and go over difficulties，sometime，brave is a power，only when we have enough brave，we can come true own dream，As Franklin said，he can have patience and persistence can have what he，From the words，we know that when we face difficult，we shouldn’t be afraid，we should be persistence own goal，we meet with difficulties，we don’t give up or run away，too。Don’t be afraid of failure，as the saying goes，failure is the mother of success，when you have a failure experience，you should feel happy，because experience is the best teacher。
（Author：Liqin）
【John·L·Gong点评】
1.文章逻辑：引出主题→列举要点→阐述观点。较好地运用了谚语：failure is the mother of success。
2.能写出一些复合句，增强文章的活力。
When you attain a failing experience, you should feel happy. Experience is the best teacher.
篇二:《六级热点作文30篇小册子》
14年6月（第1套）【现学现练】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to give a dog bread every time he wags his tail. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least words but no more than words.
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14年6月（第2套）【现学现练】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to do things by halves. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least words but no more than words.
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14年6月（第3套）【现学现练】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put off till tomorrow what you can do today. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least words but no more than words.
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13年12月（第1套）【现学现练】
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.” You should first express your opinion and then explain what you can do to enhance your confidence. You should write at least ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13年12月（第2套）【现学现练】
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on doubt by referring to the saying “Doubt is the key of knowledge.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain your own opinion on this topicwords.
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篇三:《中考英语满分作文必背句型》
中考英语满分作文必背句型
1.重点句型
1).It`s adj. for sb. to do 做…对某人来说…
2)….so…that 如此…以至于…
…too…to do 太…而不能…
such…that… 如此…以至于…
3).not…until… 直到…才…
例:I didn`t go to bed until my mother came back.
4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 …的原因是…
例:The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie.(他生气的原因是她对他说了谎.)
5).That is why + 句子 那是…的原因
6).That is because + 句子 那是因为…
7).It is said that + 句子 据说…
It is reported that + 句子 据报道…
8).There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问…
9).It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻,毫无疑问
10).There is no need to do 没必要做…
11).There is no point in doing… 做某事毫无意义
2.提建议
had better (not) do 最好(不)做
how about / what about doing…? …怎么样?
I think you should do 我认为你应该…
I suggest that you should do 我建议你做…
If I were you,I would do… 我要是你的话,我会做…
It`s best to do 最好做…
Why not do / why don`t you do…? 为什么不…?
3.表示喜欢和感兴趣
like / love doing
enjoy doing
be fond of doing 喜欢做…
be keen on doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
be interested in doing = show / take great interest in doing
4.努力做…
try to do 努力做…
strive to do 努力做…
try one`s best to do = do one`s best to do 竭尽全力做…
make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做…
do what sb. can (do) to do 尽力做…
spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…
do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做…
5.打算做…/ 计划做…
intend / plan to do 打算做…
be going to do 打算/ 计算做… 对…感兴趣
decide to do 决定做…
determine to do 决定做…
be determined to do 决定做…
make up one`s mind to do 下定决心做…
6.表示想 / 希望
want to do = would like to do 想做
hope to do 希望做…
expect to do 期待着做…
wish to do 希望做…
consider doing 考虑做…
7.只加doing作宾语的动词
finish 完成 / practice 练习 / suggest 建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢
*doing固定搭配
look forward to doing 盼望做…
keep on doing 坚持做…
dream of doing 梦想做…
can`t help doing 情不自禁做…
keep/stop/prevent sb.from doing 阻止某人做…
be busy (in) doing & be busy with+ 名词 忙于做…
spend time / money (in) doing & spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做…
have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing或with + 名词 做…有困难
中考必背的30个作文经典词句
初中英语写作能力包括:书写端正,语言通顺,无语法错误,层次清楚,内容完整 常用名言警句
1.Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩
2.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友
3.A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半
4.Where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成
5.All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马
6.Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难
7.Easy come,easy go. 来得快,去得快
8.Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点
9.Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母
10.Look before you leap. 三思而后行
11.Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人
12.A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳.
13.All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难{the,secret,of,success作文}.
14.Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪
15.As you sow,so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜种豆得豆
16.I might say that success is won by three things:first,effort;second,more effort;third,still more effort. 成功要靠三件事才能赢得:努力,努力,再努力
17. Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 有事莫推明天
18. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧
19. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里
20. Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本
21. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键
22. Don’t judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人
常用过渡语
23. 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far, as far as等
24. 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally等
25. 表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of… on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等
26. 表因果的过渡语:for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…, thus, so, as a result (of) 等
篇四:《英语作文1》
1、 What’s your impression on Charles Chaplin and his film ? What’s his secret for success ?
First recognize Chaplin because of his unique style of comedy movies. At that time I saw a series of his films , such as "Modern Times " Gold Rush " and " Tramp ".He gave me the deepest impression is he always with tiny moustaches ,huge pants or tail coats. he’ll struggle through snow, and fall from windows. He’ll fight men who are twice his size, fall in love with women who hardly notice him and try to hug them.
His films are unique because there is no sound. But every people who don’t understand English can enjoy Chaplin’s films, because they are mostly silent. It isn’t what says that makes people laugh. His comedy doesn’t depend on words. It depends on little actions which mean the same thing to people all over the word.
He used his unique comedy style to win the audience favorite, But his way to success was not always smooth. Chaplin makes all kinds of stupid mistakes in his films, but he is always in excitement, and never give up. He once said : "You have to believe in yourself , this is the secrets”. So I think this is the secret of Chaplin’s huge success.
2、What are the secrets for success in your mind ?
There are many secrets of success, I think that to be successful, we must first have a firm belief, believe in yourself, because Self-confidence is the first step to success , believe in yourself first , then others will believe you. Give yourself a clear goal, to know yourself, to know what you want to be, do you mind master. Success depends on our own, so we need recognize our potential. At any time , we should have the courage to say to ourself : "I am not afraid failure, because my goal in front, because I have the courage to start again." If we walk towards the prearranged direction, know where to go, we have taken the first step to success.(如果我们朝着预先订立的目标努力着)
The idea is worthless unless we act. We are not a hot-headed approach to the action, but the attitude of can not fail to act. There is no shortcut to success. Therefore, we need to work hardly. In addition, we also need the chance. The achievements of people in this world , all try their efforts to find the opportunity they want . Success also need cooperation，So we need to deal with the relationship between partners, we can exchange experience with each other, and learn from each other, this can let us faster succeed. That is what I think the secret of success.
3、please define “success” by giving example
Generally speaking, when we talk about success, we will first think of Li Jia cheng, Bill Gates, because they are generally recognized successful example. Even be defined as the standard of success. I believe that success is when you want to do one thing, in the best 1
state of mind truly make it, whether it is big or small, can be called success. For example, Before the university I didn’t dare to speak in public places, not even do a simple self-introduction. But, I look for all kinds of opportunities to exercise myself, for example, when have a class meeting I will try to stood on the platform(讲台) express my opinions, to participate in school activities, such as putting on a play. Also by doing part-time jobs to enhance my ability to communicate with others. Now in the face of many strangers, I no longer fear and nervous. Because I do it, so I think I succeed. I have seen many programs about the disabled, some of them are blind, some lost both arms and legs. In my view it is hard to survive, but they are very optimistic(乐观), positive, life is full of confidence. They do not rely on any people, only by their own strength to complete all of things, even do better than we do, so I think they are very successful.
5、When do you feel lonely? please describe your experience and feelings of being lonely
Most of the time I will feel lonely, especially when I came to an unfamiliar environment, there was no family, no friends, at the time the loneliness will multiply(倍增) . Just when I was first to the University that was I feel the most lonely time. Because it is my first time to leave home, leave my parents, to a distant and unfamiliar city. Although there are a lot of people in the campus, but are unfamiliar faces, let me feel only me. I feel so alone, so that a little scared. Another is my last summer vacation work time，That is alse the time that I feel lonely. After all, the school is different from company, in the company we not only need to work well, but also need deal with the relationship with colleagues, in order to better cooperation. The first day to go to work, I was in a torment. Fortunately colleagues are very enthusiastic, so relieved me of loneliness more or less.
6、please list advantages and disadvantages of living with your roommates There are advantages and disadvantages of living with
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