【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《初二英语作文附答案》
第四板块 书面表达
【2011北京】十、文段表达（15分）
75. 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽的朋友，你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看
1. 回答她的问题
2. 提出建议
3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法
来信内容简要说明：
Alice表示自己的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给她，担心对方可能不能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题？请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。
【解题思路】
依旧牢记"结构、要点、逻辑、语法、亮点"五大要素，审题一定要仔细，看准题目中的要点为：回答她的问题；提出建议；对于此事谈谈你的看法。
1. 结构、要点
文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句" Do you have the same problem?" ，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have the same problem. / I have never met things like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为" I'm so sad."， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 " Don't worry" 或者表示理解对方的感受 "I can understand you."
文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：
If it's not a lot of money, you can lend it to her.（如果钱不多的话，可以借给她）
If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you, you'd better suggest her to ask her parents for help. （如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助）
If you decide to help her, then trust her, because she is your close friend.（如果你决定把钱借给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。）
文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答"why"，即：为什么要给出如上建议的原因。如：
Friendship is more important than money, if your close friend needs help, you are supposed to
give him / her a hand and trust him / her. （友谊和信任比金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮助，你应该帮助他/她，并且给予信任。）
We students don't have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some money, it's always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母要总比问同学借要好。同时，我们应该对父母要保持诚实）
2. 逻辑
如果考生能够找全题目要点，并且按照要点所给顺序写下来，结构清晰，那么逻辑应该是通顺的。因为全文基本是按照如下思路：现身说法，对于对方所遇到的问题表示理解 — 提出建议 — 说明感受，即说明所提建议的原因。其中，可以使用大量的逻辑连词和状语从句表示因果、条件、转折等逻辑关系。
3. 语法、亮点
根据题目要求，回信文体形式大体为说明文，议论参半，所以下笔前首先确定文章时态大体为一般现在时态。由于文章话题属于生活化细节问题，所以文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子，只要句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，语法完全正确，多用词组，向批卷老师呈现出扎实的语法功底和丰富的词汇量，也就是文章的亮点所在。
One possible version:
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.
I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid you may lose the friend.
I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I’ll get it back, or maybe I won’t.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求： 1. 词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
One possible version:
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join
the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as （只要）we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
74. 假设你叫张华，是美国中学生鲍勃的朋友。你收到了他的电子邮件，请给他回复，回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
青少年吸烟问题在我国是个严重的问题。据统计， 12-15岁的中学生约有35%以上的吸烟。一些学生只是好奇，而一些学生已经逐渐上瘾。请你对此谈谈看法同时说说吸烟的危害，并对那些吸烟的学生提出你的建议。
提示语：smoking, serious problem, among teenagers, It is reported, students from 12 to 15, curious(好奇的), used to, difficult, give up, harmful, pollute
One possible version:
Smoking is a serious problem among teenagers in China. It is reported that 35% students from 12 to 15 smoke. Some are just curious about it when they see others smoking. Unfortunately, others fall into the habit. And it is difficult to give up.
I think it is not right for the students to smoke. Smoking is bad for people’s health. Many smokers died of lung cancer. It also harms people’s mental development, especially for teenagers. Smoking pollutes the air around us, and it can even cause fire. Every year, some people die from the fire caused by smoking and at the same time many buildings are destroyed by the fire.
I hope those students who smoke should give up smoking as soon as possible, it is not only good for yourself but also for your family and people around you. You should put your heart into studies, and play ball games with your friends to make yourself a happy and healthy teenager.
75. 今天网络对我们生活和学习的影响无处不在。假设你是网名Free Dove网络冲浪手，Englishlearner.com是你时常浏览的一个网站。这次你在上面看到这样两份留言，请你选择其中一份留言回复，针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，并给出几点建议。
I had the same problem as yours. I don’t think you need to worry too much. I have some good ways for you.
First, why not write down the words on a small notebook and go over them every day? I tried it and now I find it difficult to forget the words. You can give it a try.
Second, try to use them. If you can use them when you speak or write English, you will remember them better.
Last but not least(最后), organize a list of words in a song or a story. It will help you remember them better.
I’m sure you’ll find these ways helpful. Hope you’ll have fun memorizing English words. 115 w
Hi! Zhang Hua,
I have a big problem these days. I spend much time watching TV in the evening after doing my homework. So I often stay up and get up late in the morning. As a result, I usually have no time for breakfast and feel tired all day. My parents don’t allow me to watch TV now and force me to go to bed before 10:30. That makes me unhappy. I don’t think they understand me. Do you have the same problem? What should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Bob
Hi! Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I used to have the same problem. Cheer up! I’d like to give you some advice.
First, stop watching TV and go to bed earlier. Watching TV too much is bad not only for your eyes but also for your study. Second, you’d better get up on time and have breakfast. Breakfast is the most important meal of the day. Finally, you should understand your parents. All parents love their children. If you listen to them, I’m sure you will become healthier and won’t often feel tired. I think it’s important for everyone to keep healthy and good living habits help a lot.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
书面表达（9）
假如你是Daniel。请你根据下面的提示内容，给你的笔友Kitty写一封电子邮件，向她倾述你的烦恼，并请求她的帮助。词数要求：80词。
1. 着迷于网上聊天，并花费很多时间；
2. 经常回家很晚，不能按时交作业；
3. 父母和老师不喜欢这样，要我放弃这个爱好；
4. 为此常感到有压力，也不知怎么办才好，希望给出一些建议
Dear Kitty,
How time flies! I haven’t seen you for a long time. I am in trouble now. Could you help me with my problem? I love chatting on the Internet. I spend a lot of time talking with others so I go home late every night. I’m too tired to do my homework and I can’t hand it in on time. Both my teachers and parents don’t like me to do so. They hope I can give it up. I feel stressed and don’t know what to do. Could you give me some advice? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Daniel
74. 某英文报纸的“English Study”专栏向中学生征稿，要求同学们介绍一下自己英语学习的现状，谈谈对英语学习的感受，以及进一步提高英语水平的打算。请你投稿。
提示词语：talk about, learn English, useful, important, work hard, improve
Dear Li Fei,
I’m lucky to have you as my host family. I will stay in Beijing just for two days. I hope to go to your school and study with you. I’m interested in your courses and after-class activities. I also want to know more about Beijing? Could you please show me around Beijing? Would you mind telling me the two-day life and activities? I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours, Jack
某英文报纸就中学生带手机（cell phones）上学话题征文，请你投稿。
手机在人们生活中扮演着重要角色，许多同学带手机上学。请你谈谈同学们经常用手机做什么，你有什么体会，你对正确使用手机有哪些建议。
daily life，convenient， keep in touch， pass notes, during the class， affect
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Cell phones are very important in our daily life. More and more children bring their phones to school. At school, students use cell phones to pass notes, read novels and listen to music. Sometimes cell phones ring during the class. Some people think it’s convenient（方便的） for students to keep in touch with their parents, so schools should allow students to take cell phones to school. In my opinion, with a cell phone to school will affect the student’s attention, students shouldn’t bring cell phones to school. They should focus on the lessons and other activities in the school. ( 98 words )
英语老师要组织一个经验交流会，他要求每位同学写一篇发言稿。内容包括：谈谈你对英语学习的认识，介绍你是怎样学习英语的，你希望英语老师在课外活动方面开展哪些活动。 提示词语：important, useful, read, listen, speak, English film…
English is used widely in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well.{以,friendship,is,the,most,important,为题写一篇80字的英语作文,初中水平}.
English is one of my best subjects. But at the very beginning, I am not good at it. Then I did a lot to improve my English.
Firstly, it's very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that I can go over my lessons later.
Secondly, I try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class. I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more in English. I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.
I am so interested in English that I hope my English teacher will hold an English party or English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and see interesting English films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in English.
某英文杂志正在举办以“How do you get on well with your classmates?”为主题的征文比赛，
篇二:《初中英语作文题库》
初中英语作文题库
（一）2012年初中学业水平测试练习（二）
初中生活即将结束，新的生活即将开启。回首往事，让我们感触颇多，因为我们的成长离不开老师的培养、父母的支持和同学的帮助，请以“we should say thanks to…”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求： 1.将题目补充完整，60—80词；
2.句子流畅，无语法错误；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名，否则以零分计算。
We should say thanks to my teachers
How time flies!My junior high school lives will come to end.
In the past three years,I have studied in a beautiful school which prodivedes me with a good study place.Teachers in my school also give me lots of help.Whenever I was in trouble,my teachers always stood around me to comfort me.They taught me how to be a good man and gave me the courage to face difficulties.They are my friends.So,I want to say thanks to my dear teachers.Thanks to them,I have grown up happily.I hope they will be healthy forever.
提示：在生活和学习中许多人是很重要的。在我们困难时，真诚地帮助我们，我们真地要感谢他们，我们要学会感恩。请你发挥想象以“The person that I want to thank most”为题写一篇短文。
The person that I want to thank most
In my life,Miss Zhou is one of the teachers that I love most.She is my third English teacher.She is of medium height and has long hair.She always wears a smile and is kind to us.She also teaches very well and makes the class lively.Whenver we make mistakes,she asks us to correct and do it again.My English used to be poor and I once wanted to give up learning English.Miss Zhou encouraged me to begin my new study.She said to me,“I believe you can do it”Now though I’m not the best student in English,I really have improved a lot.So the person that I want to thank most is Miss Zhou.
提示：假如你叫李红，即将结束初中阶段的学习生活，请你用英语写一封信，对老师和学校表示感谢和祝愿。
Dear Mr.Li,
Thank you so much for teaching me so well.You are very kind to me.During the last three years I have learnt a lot of knowledge from you .I’ll keep on studying hard as usual in the senior middle school.
Wish you success in the future teaching work.Wish you a healthy body for ever.And wish you a happy life in the future.And I also hope that everything will go well in our school!Best wishes for you and for our school.
Your student, Li Hong
提示：在生活中，每个人都难免会做错一些事，这些事总会让人感到遗憾或后悔。每当回想起这样的事情，你的内心会有什么感情和触动呢？你是否曾用适当的方式向你的家人、老师、同学和朋友…..表达过你的歉意呢？请以“I Should Say Sorry to….”为题，写一篇英语短文，记叙你亲身经历的一件小事，以表达你的真实情感。
I Should Say Sorry to My Mother
Everyont has kind of experience in a life.Some make us enjoyable,some make us moved,some make us regretful….
I always feel sorry for a thing in my heart.
One Sunday afternoon,my mother asked me to help her with housework.I refused her.I told her I was busy studying for a math test and I needed money to buy a book.She gave me 20yuan at once.Then I left home,but I didn’t go to buy the book.I spent all the money playing computer games in an Internet bar.When I got back home,my mother had cooked delicious food for me.I couldn’t say anything,with tears in my eyes. When I think of it,I’m always so sorry,my heart is full of regret.I should say sorry to my mother.I’ll sincerely say:“Sorry,mum!”
（二）2006年云南中考题
你能与人相处和谐吗？你能理解别人吗？在生活中难免有误会，你会如何处理呢？请以Understanding为题，用英语写一篇短文来记叙你生活中经历的一件小事，通过这件事使你对友谊、亲情或师生情有了更深的理解。
要求：1.根据所给提示写一篇短文，60—80词；
2.意思连贯、语言流畅、符合情理、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实名字、校名、和班级名称，否则以零分计算。
Understanding
Understanding is a bridge between teachers and students.Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an exam and handed it in.The next day,my teacher told the whole class about it.I lost face,I hated the teacher. Days later,the teacher had a heart-to-heart talk with me.He said he could understand that I would like to be good.But to be good should depend on hard work.From then on,with his help,I became so interested in study that I made great progress.
I think understanding is an important part of our life.Understanding can make us sucessful,knowing that,I understand my teacher better.
（三）
爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你校的“English Garden”正举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动，请联系自己平时的爱心行动和感受写一篇文章投稿。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2.80～100词。标题和文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：help,c
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