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祝贺信同学的一封信200字(一)
祝贺信(Letter of Congratulations)：
各位可爱的同学：考题为应用文写作，所以要注意：
1.条理清楚，按照下列老师所列每种应用文的格式把内容写完整。
2.可以先用中文把提纲要求包含的信息都写下来，再翻译成英语。这样可以确保不会把应该包括的信息漏掉。
3.不要写错误的单词，宁可用简单易懂的单词代替，注意卷面清洁和工整。 预祝大家都考上心仪的学校，制定好复习计划，按部就班，调整好心态好好复习，你的心愿一定能实现，人生该吃苦该拼搏时就要拼搏！各位加油！
祝贺信的写作与普通信件没有什么大区别，但应注意：
1． 必须包括对收信人的称谓。
2． 必须包括对收信人的祝贺。
3． 必须包括写信人的姓名。
4． 措词真诚、轻松愉快，切忌言过其实。
Sample:
Dear Guojun,
I heard that you graduated with high honors from Southeast University last month. I know that all your family must be very proud of you, and as your friend, I feel the same. I wish you greater and more brilliant success in your studies and work in the future.
With best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Directions: You are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Congratulations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below.
1．获悉你考入XX大学，攻读XX专业，特此祝贺。2．你的成绩是你刻苦努力的结果，希望你在新的环境里取得更好成绩。3．再次表示祝贺。
29th March, 2003
Dear Xiao Wang,
I am writing to congratulate you on having been admitted to Tianjin Normal University and majoring in economics.
All that you have gained is the result of your hard work. I wish you would continue your efforts and gain further success in the new environment. Although we are separated now, our hearts are linked to each other. Please keep in touch with me. I often recall our high school life. In those days, we stayed, played and studied together. We enjoyed each other＇s company so much that we have maintained our friendship till now. I learnt a lot from you, and even today I often remember how hard you studied. You told me that you were determined to be an expert in economics, and now you are beginning to realize your dream. Your success tells me that hard work will pay in the end. Your example is a constant inspiration to me.
Congratulations again.
Yours,
祝贺信同学的一封信200字(二)
祝 贺 信
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祝贺信 (Letter of Congratulations)
1) 祝贺信的写法
日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业、还是订婚、结婚、
生日，都需要写上一封信表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当
充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。
祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋
友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采
用哪种方式，祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。下面将具体举例说明：
范例1
2) 祝贺信模板
Date:
Dear_______ ,
(1)I have learned with delight that you______. (1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，
说出祝贺事由
(2)I would like to extend to you my utmost (2)表达祝贺
__.
(3)You must be very proud of your ______. (3)描述对方的心情
(4)And I feel very happy for you. (4)表达自己的心情
_ is quite exciting news! (5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩 . (6)对对方的赞美
.(7)对方取得成绩的原因,被祝贺
人过去的努力
. (8)对对方取得成绩的肯
定,说出被祝贺人的优点 (9) 被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达
对对方的祝福
a success in whatever you undertake. (10)Kindly let me (10)咨询对方的情况和时间
_.
(11)表达愿望
(12)My best wishes for your further success. (12)表达自己真诚的祝福
Sincerely yours
Dear_____________,
①I have learned with delight that you_____________(祝贺事由)。②I would like to extend
to you my utmost congratulations on_____________.③you must be_____________.④And I feel
very happy for you.
⑤_____________(所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to _____________(被祝贺人过去的努力).⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your_____________(被祝贺人的优点)。
⑧Kindly let me know when you_____________(咨询对方何时有空).⑨I hope _____________(表达自己的愿望).⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
写作练习：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a good friend
John, congratulating him on his admission to a famous university. You
should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in
Chinese:
1. 对朋友进入大学表示祝贺
2．介绍大学生活和中学生活的异同
3．对如何成功地过好大学生活提出自己的建议
【审题】本文是封祝贺信。开篇首先要说明祝贺的理由，然后针对未来生活的注
意事项加以说明—这是文章的主要部分，可以分几点来说明，注意各个
事项之间的衔接。
【写作思路】第一段：向朋友表示祝贺，说明祝贺的原因。
第二段：指出大学生活和中学生活的异同。
第三段：建议朋友始终以乐观积极的态度面对大学生活，最后提出
对朋友的期望。
【范文及点评】
A Congratulation Letter
December 21st,2005 Dear John,
I’m very glad to hear that you have passed the (1) 首句说明写信的缘由 entrance examination and been accepted by a very famous
university. I feel very proud of you and I believe you really deserve the honor since you have been working so hard. As you have mentioned in the letter, there are both (2) 承上启下，总论大some similarities and differences between the college life 学生活与中学生活的异同 and the life in high school. On the one hand, you have to (3) 短语，“一方面” go on working hard as there are a lot of subjects for you to
learn. On the other hand, in high school, teachers will pro- (4) 短语，“另一方面” bably tell you what to learn and how to learn in details and
will also monitor your learning performance, while in college, (5) 转折连词，指teachers work like tour guides and you have to find out your 出大学生活的不同 own way to acquire knowledge and solve problems.
For you, I think to be optimistic is very important. If you (6) 总起第三段，指 hope to adapt yourself to the new environment, you’d better 出乐观的重要性 be positive no matter what difficulties you will experience in
your college life. May you adapt yourself to the college life as (7) 最后表示良好祝愿 soon as possible!
Truly Yours,
Carl
实战演练：
假如你的名字叫李华，你给自己的表哥写一封信。内容如下：
1.得知你通过高考被北京大学录取，特表示祝贺；
2.北京大学是我国的名牌大学之一，为我国培养了很多的专家、学者，希望你将来也能像他们一样优秀；
3. 你的成功给我极大的鼓励，我决心更加努力地学习，争取获得同样的机会。
4.期盼你来信告知在北京的学习和生活情况。
注意：要求包括上述要点，表达清楚，行文连贯 字数在100左右
范文：
My dear cousin ,
I have learned with delight that you have passed the college entrance examination . And you are