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篇一:《尊老爱幼征文》
我的偶像
泉港二中 刘刚强
我的偶像不是什么著名歌星、当红影星之类的人，而是一位普通农村妇女——林秀香阿姨。
她没有漂亮的脸蛋，也没有高挑的个头，更没有令人羡慕的身材。然而，一提起她，在我们村子里，无人不晓，无人不夸。她是乡亲们眼中的好媳妇，是我心目中的“酷”偶像。这到底是为什么，请听我为大家细细说来！
2006年的一天，秀香阿姨嫁进南埕镇蟠龙村的一户普通农家。第二天，她就脱下新娘子的光鲜衣服，挽起裤脚下地干活。原来，秀香阿姨的公公早年丧妻，一个人把三个孩子拉扯大，受了很多苦。她的小叔和小姑又患有不同程度的精神病，一家五口全靠丈夫打工、公公种地维持生计。她心想，自己嫁进门了，就该让上了年纪的公公减轻点负担。最令她烦恼的是，小叔、小姑时常毁坏邻居、乡亲的农作物、生活用品等，她得挨家挨户地道歉、赔偿。
“屋漏偏逢连夜雨”，2010年4月，秀香阿姨的公公因车祸导致全身瘫痪，给这个原本不幸的家庭雪上加霜。为了生计，秀香阿姨的丈夫只好长年在外打工。从此，她既要下地干活，又要照顾小叔、小姑，还要伺候公公吃喝拉撒。每天天刚蒙蒙亮，她就安顿好公公，再独自一人下田干活。为了按时给公公服药、喂饭，她一天得来回好几趟穿梭于田头和家里。有时，老人因长期病痛的困扰，性子很急，经常发脾气。为了能让老人减轻病痛、舒缓心情，秀香阿姨照料得更加细心、勤快了。每天除了给老人喂饭、翻身，坚持为他按摩半小时外，还定时帮老人洗澡、换洗衣服。“工夫不负有心人”，秀香阿姨用实际行动感动着公公，缓解了老人的心里负担，病况日渐好转。她的一片孝心也赢得了邻里、乡亲的尊重。 有人说偶像是虚无的；有人说偶像只会让人着迷，失去理智；我说偶像是实在的，是我心中尊老爱幼的楷模，是我们学习的好榜样——林秀香阿姨。
篇二:《2014届高三作文话题分类(尊老爱幼)》
2014届高三 作文 话题分类 话题：尊老爱幼
1. 2010年高考
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。 注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。
2．词数不少于60。
1) 范文
标准范文
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
学生范文
We firstly searched the Internet for some useful information on the location of the hotel and the weather condition there. With Baidu’s help, we checked the train schedule together and I offered to buy the tickets for them. some time, I managed to get two tickets. Wearing a smile and holding the tickets in hands tightly, I was satisfied that I contributed to preparing for my grandparents’ trip.
I began to help my grandma with her luggage. In the suitcase there were already some clothes and my grandma was going to pack an umbrella. It suddenly occurred to me that the map and a pair of sunglasses were also dispensable. My grandma thought it a wonderful suggestion and we quickly got them prepared. wished them a safe and pleasant trip from the bottom of my heart. I was pleased about what I had done for them in return for their care and love in my life.
（注意： On Saturday morning/afternoon, the next/following morning, the next/following day,
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2) 语言素材
在网上查找信息：（information是不可数名词） the information about sth. some relevant information about sth. on the Internet to find some information about/on….
排队等候买票： for a long time/
There were many people /Three were many people
帮他们打包行李：（luggage，baggage均为不可数名词）
到车站送行, 告别： my grandparents at the train station/ them the train station / them
祝愿路途愉快
表祝愿可以用：wish sb.sth/wish sb. +adj./wish sb. to do) （注意：不说I wished that they would have a good trip. 因为wish宾语从句只表达虚拟语气。可以说I hoped that they could/would have a good trip. (hope 可以接that 从句，但不能用hope sb. to do的结构)
3) 审题注意事项
(1) 审题：人称：I, they 时态：过去时 体裁：周记
(2) 时间线索：上周末 （周末两天的活动）
(3) 要点和可添加的细节：:
图1. 上网查找信息（ 细节：查天气情况，预定旅馆、车票）
图2. 去火车站购票（ 细节：排队，心情）
图3. 准备行装（细节：箱中的衣物、（奶奶）雨伞、 （我）地图）
图4. 去车站送行（挥手告别， 心情）
感受：为爷爷奶奶开心，希望他们过得愉快，为自己能为家人做事感到欣慰等。
(4) 注意事项：本文是以周记形式叙述利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行从准备到送行的全过程。四幅图中，前三幅图都是准备的过程，如何做的准备是需详写的，第四幅图是到车站送行，简写即可。四幅图的衔接，可以以周六、周日两天时间为线索，也可关注图之间的逻辑：1先提前先了解情况—2去购票—3临行前准备—4车站送行。本文是一篇周记，主题是自己为家人做事，可以贯穿全文的暗线一是出于对家人的关心和爱，二是自己能够独立安排了这次旅行，所加的情感细节应该着重于为爷爷奶奶开心，希望他们过得愉快，为自己能为家人做事感到欣慰。
2. 2013年高考：
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。
注意： 1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。2. 词数不少于 60.
Last Monday,…
1) 范文{尊老爱幼的作文高中}.
标准范文
Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning, I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her, with my special care. My mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened he praised me for what I had done. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.
学生范文
Last Monday, my father would be on a business trip for a few days. Before he left, my mother and I waved goodbye to him and wished his a safe journey.
I thought everything would go well, but unfortunately, my mother caught a cold and had a fever the next morning. Seeing her lying in bed with a pale face, I was very worried. However, I told myself to calm down and look after my mum, as I promised to my dad. I got her some medicine and cooked some noodles for her to eat. Soon she recovered. I felt quite relieved.
When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened when he was away. Both my father and mother praised me for what I had done. Hearing their praise and seeing bright smiles on their faces, I really felt happy that I managed to take good care of my mother by myself when she was ill.
2) 语言素材
跟某人道别：say goodbye to sb./ 挥手道别wave goodbye to sb.
出差 be (away) on business / go on a business trip
我发现妈妈身体不舒服。 I found (that) my mother wasn’t feeling well.
感冒 catch a cold/flu 发烧have/suffer from a (high) fever
看到妈妈躺在床上脸色苍白，我感到很担心。Seeing my mother lying in bed with a pale face, I felt really worried/concerned/anxious.
让自己冷静下来 tell myself to calm down
照顾我妈妈 take care of/look after/attend to/care for my mother
给她拿来药 get her some medicine 让她吃药 ask her to take some medicine
为她做面条吃 prepare/cook noodles for her to eat
妈妈很快痊愈了。My mother recovered quickly. / 很快妈妈好了起来。Soon my mother got better.
爸爸妈妈竖起大拇指为我所做的事情表扬了我。My father and mother praised me for what I had done with their thumbs up.
自己独立照顾了妈妈 manage to take good care of my mother on my own/by myself
3) 审题注意事项
(1) 审题：人称：I, my mother, my father 时态：过去时 体裁：周记
(2) 要点和可添加的细节
本文要求写爸爸出差期间照顾妈妈的过程，四幅图中，图1图4应该略，图2图3应该详写。 图1：爸爸出差，道别
图2：发现妈妈生病（病情，我的心情）{尊老爱幼的作文高中}.
图3：照顾妈妈（拿药，做面条）
图4：爸爸回来，我受表扬 （心情）
感受：很高兴能够独立照顾了生病的妈妈，为家人做事等。
(3) 注意：细节要为要点服务，一定避免机械描图，否则就会造成添加多余细节。如没必要去描写爸爸提着旅行箱打车离开。结尾的感受应侧重于说自己能够独立照顾妈妈感到很开心，扣关心照顾家人的主题，不宜大肆渲染突出自己做了值得骄傲的事。
3. 2012石景山一模
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。今天是你父亲的生日，你给父亲买完生日蛋糕后，在回家途中做了几件好事。请根据图片的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，介绍事情的全过程。
注意：1．日记的开头已为你写好。
2．词数不少于60。
March 23, Friday Sunny Today is Dad's birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift. …
1) 范文
March 23, Friday Sunny
Today is Dad’s birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift. So after school I hurried to a bakery and bought a big birthday cake. Imagining the delighted look on his face when Dad saw the cake, I couldn’t wait to go back home.
When I got on a bus, I was pleased to find a vacant seat, so I sat down with the cake on my legs. When the bus got to the next stop, an old lady got on, carrying many bags. Without hesitation, I offered my seat to her and I was standing until arriving at the destination. I got off the bus and was about to cross the road when I saw a blind man waiting by the crosswalk. I walked over quickly and led him across the road safely.
Arriving home, I gave the cake to Dad as well as my best wishes. And then, I told Mum and Dad what I had done on my way home. Hearing my story, Dad smiled and told me it was not the cake but my deeds of helping others that was the most valuable gift for him. I was very happy that I lent a hand to those people in need of help.
2) 语言素材
去面包店买生日蛋糕 go to the bakery to but a birthday cake
等不及回家把这个礼物送给爸爸 can’t wait to go back home to present Dad with this gift 上车 get on the bus 下车 get off the bus
找到一个空座位 find a vacant seat
把座位让给一位上了年纪的老奶奶 offer my seat to an old lady
到达目的地 arrive at/get to/reach the destination
过马路cross the road 一位盲人在人行横道旁等候 a blind man waiting by the crosswalk 带领他安全过马路 lead him across the road safely
为爸爸庆祝生日 celebrate my father’s birthday
爸爸告诉我最珍贵的生日礼物不是这个蛋糕而是我帮助他人的行为。Dad told me it was not
篇三:《考场作文资料：尊老爱幼(整理精校版)》
考场作文资料：尊老爱幼
作文辅导
0121 2028
考场作文资料：尊老爱幼
【名言警句】
1.子曰：孝，天之经，地之义，民之行也。——孔子
2.老吾老，以及人之老；幼吾幼，以及人之幼。——孟子
3.子孝父心宽 。——陈元靓{尊老爱幼的作文高中}.
4. 无情未必真豪杰，怜子如何不丈夫。——鲁迅
5.教育的技巧的全部奥秘也就在于如何爱护儿童。——苏霍姆林斯基{尊老爱幼的作文高中}.
【运用思路】
敬老爱幼是我们的传统美德，在物质文明高度发达的今天，我们更不能忘记，孝敬老人，爱护孩子，这是我们的责任和义务，是每个人的天职。
【精彩素材1】
田世国捐肾救母{尊老爱幼的作文高中}.
田世国是山东
枣庄薛城区人,他不仅是一名好父亲,更是一名好儿子。2004年3月26日，田世国接完弟弟打来的电话后，顿时脸色大变。在妻子的追问下，他才声音颤抖地说：“妈被确诊为尿毒症，已经到了晚期！”当天晚上，田世国就往枣庄赶。下车后，他直奔 医院，田世国从透析室出来后，立即奔向医生办公室。他决定把自己的肾献给母亲，给母亲进行肾移植。9月30日，上海 复旦大学附属中山医院给这对母子做了一个非常特殊的手术：医生先从年仅38岁的儿子身上摘取一个鲜活的肾脏，然后移植到身患绝症、年过花甲的母亲体内。38岁的他毅然为身患尿毒症晚期的母亲捐肾,延续母亲的生命,演绎了一段当代孝子的佳话。{尊老爱幼的作文高中}.
【素材点拨】
“谁言寸草心,报得三春晖”这是一个被追问了千年的问题。一个儿子在2004年用身体做出了自己的回答,他把生命的一部分回馈给病危的母亲。小羊有跪母之意,乌鸦有反哺之思。从古代的“黄香温席”到现代的“捐肾救母”，演绎得是人间的正道孝。
【适用话题】
“孝敬”、“爱”“亲情”“家庭”等。
【精彩素材2】
好人林秀贞
30年来，林秀贞夫妇先后义务赡养的6位老人，虽然原本非亲非故，但他们没叫过累，嫌过烦。把它们当作自己的老人对待。冬天，他们给老人买煤、生起炉子；夏天，他们不忘在雨季来临之前给老人修房子；冬春时节，老人想吃羊肉暖身子，林秀贞就抽空赶集去买；老人天凉易闹肚子，她就买来红糖让老人暖胃。1983年10月，86岁的朱书贵老人不小心摔了一跤，卧床不起，老伴也因担心过度而病倒。林秀贞夫妇抱着铺盖搬进了老人简陋的小屋，炕太小，就在炕边加一条木板，凑合着睡，一住就是两个半月。十几年来，除了义务照顾孤寡老人，林秀贞还捐款给学校修建校舍、资助十多名贫困家庭子女走入大学校园，帮助8位残疾人实现就业考上大学的贫困孩子筹不齐学费，林秀贞送去了学费；残疾职工要结婚，她一下子“赞助”了3000元。
【素材点拨】
现实生活中，不愿意对子女尽抚养义务的父母大有人在，面对生活困境，他们不惜抛弃自己的亲生骨肉；不愿意对父母尽赡养义务的子女也大有人在，他们为了追求自己小家的所谓“幸福”，都不愿意对父母尽孝心，林秀贞的事迹启发着我们：尊老爱幼的传统美德不能丢。
【适用话题】
“人间真情”、“赡养老人”、“深灰责任”等。