【 – 写作指导】
篇一:《My Mother in My Eyes》
[英语写作3班]
My Mother in My Eyes
Name: Qin Danli(覃丹丽) Student Number:2009800449
Undoubtedly, ever since I was born, I’ve been closely bound up with a highly important person, a woman I call dear mom. Most of the time, actually, such vivid words like dear, darling or something like that aren’t directly used to name my mom; it is somewhat in deed more than I can tell.
My mother tends to be an ordinary woman; nevertheless, she is the very special one in my eyes. She is nearly 1.6 meters tall, and in her face are located two black and bright eyes, a high frame nose and a moderate mouth. Having no fair skin, she possesses a good slim figure that thousands of women dream of. Inheriting her characteristics, I can clearly remember people who know me or only get acquainted with her in my hometown, when coming across me myself, are shocked to discover my appearance that much similar to my mother’s, especially part of my eyes, nose and mouth. Interesting and funny, I never deem so. Every time I pick one picture of my mother’s, over and over make comparisons between hers and mine, only to find nothing in common. All I can explain about such a phenomenon, perhaps, is the onlookers are those who see most clearly.
Thinking back my childhood, mother was always strict with me, totally distinguished from my father’s. Once doing something wrong or not as what she expected, only blame or punishment was bestowed. Afraid of her, I was often filled with nervousness. Later I boarded to study in a middle school while she got to work outside far away from home. And seldom did I hear from her over that period. Not receiving enough care and love from a mother, more than once, as a little kid, I considered her a terrible mother. With misunderstanding of her, there came a number of quarrels and conflicts between her and me when I grew much older. However, I was too innocent then,
Stubborn and persistent, what she wants seems to be everyone’s respect and obedience, as is apt to me. Being two contradictions, we didn’t be on well with each other the time I was in high school. Even so, something is doomed to change little by little beyond my expectations. It was the last year, the most crucial year as well over the twelve-year-learning career in most people’s mind. In order to better look after me, she came back home and worked at my aunt’s factory. It was during the days that I found she was beside me, so close to me. Every two days of every week, regardless of bad weather, she would come to my school, bring me some delicious and nutrient food and do what she can for me, never putting pressure on my study. I know deeply in my heart that her love and concern is the biggest encouragement to me.
As is known to me, nothing can be done to help slow down the increase of her ages and resist the spread of wrinkles on mother’s face. But I want to be her good girl, and show her my care and love just like she does.
篇二:《My monther》
Hello! I am Amy. She is my mother. Her birthday is in June. We often eat birthday cake on that day. My mother likes spring best, because she can go on a picnic with us. She often washes my clothes on the weekend, and sometimes she goes shopping. I love my mother very much?
篇三:《My mother》
My mother
My mother is a ordinary women.She is a very very ordinary women,really.She looks like very ordinary;her age very ordinary;only her wears looks like very special.
My mother always wear a wide casual pants,a T-shirt (or a wide vest),and a pair of sunglasses.She always use toiletry,consequently shes skin was very good.
My mother is very benignant,and she was very love me.I with regard to these,I to be thankful.I love my mother , too.Because she gave me very very many.She civilize by education me how to do in world and knowledge.
My mother is a office workers.She everyday works hard,but she always not to get heighten.Ha ha~~~~~~~
I love my mother , because she gave me very many thinks.
I love my Mum . A ordinary and largeness mother.{my,monther}.
Dec. 7th
Dear mother,
I have been good at school. I often think of you when I go to bed because we always go for a walk before go to bed at home. So I miss you everyday. Do you miss me? Why dont you call me? Ive got a lot of things to tell you. One of the things is about foreign teachers daughter. Her names Skyler. She lives in Canada. She comes to our class to learn Chinese and English with me in my class. This afternoon, when it was art and craft class, our class were cleaning the gymnasium. And she did it with us too. So I usually talk to her when she doesnt know what to do? But when the class is over, I always havent got
enough time to talk to her. And I usually cant find her. So we dont have time to introduce to each other. But it is the first time that I have a foreign student. So Im very happy! Mum, you often tell me, “If you are happy, Ill be happy, too.” So you have to be happy, because Im happy! I like you when you are happy!
In the end I wish you everything is just fine!
(1) 以My Mother为题写一篇短文。(2003扬州)
内容要点:1.我的妈妈是护士,工作努力。2.上个月去北京,抗击SARS (fight against)。3.一个月没有回来。4.保护我们免受侵害。5.我爱妈妈,为妈妈自豪。 标题已给出，要求1.写清时间 2.要点要完整 3.可适当增加内容 4.字数在60个词左右{my,monther}.
(2)班会上,老师要求每位同学用英语介绍自己的一位朋友,请你根据所提供的要点为题写一篇短文。(2003南京)
要点:1. Who is he / she。2. When and where did you get to know him / her。
3. Why do you like him / her。
注意:1.文章的开头和结尾已给出(不计入词数) 2.词数60-80,须包括以上要点,可适当增加细节使短文意思通畅。3.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。4.文中不得出现真实的人名。校名等相关信息。
Yours,
Sophia.
On Mothers Day
In the early morning, my sister went out and brought home a bunch of pretty flowers. Right after my mother got up out of bed, we said "Happy Mother's Day"! to her and gave her the flowers. My mother was very happy; she smiled and said, How wonderful the flowers look! Thank you! Also, we told her we were going to do all the housework for our beloved mother, and she could take a rest for a day. In the beginning, we were excited about all the work we can do at home. Before long, we found that the housework seemed to be endless, There was cooking and washing, and cleaning to do, and there was shopping to do, too . During the dinner hour, the kitchen seemed so busy. My father was making a salad, my sister was baking a pie for dessert, and I was washing rice and vegetables, and there were many other things to do. Finally, the dinner was ready; it was two hours behind the usual schedule. The food was not as delicious as my mother's. Nevertheless, my mother and father enjoyed it, and felt very proud of their daughter and son.
篇四:《My mother我的妈妈》
My mother
"M" is for the million things she gave me .
"O" means only that she's growing old ,
"T" is for the tears she shed to save me,
"H" is for her heart of purest gold , "E" is for her eyes ,with love light shining ,{my,monther}.
"R" means right, and right she'll always be.
Put them all together, they spell "mother".{my,monther}.
A word that means the world to me.
I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. Undoubtedly, for me, that's my mother, the one gave me life and teaches me how to conduct myself. My mother looks younger. She is a teacher and she is teaching Chinese in a primary school.
Since I came to the world, my mother has been showing her great love to me. When I was a baby, she patiently fed me with milk and washed nappies. And when I became older, she ferried me to and from school everyday and helped me check my homework. When I met failure in text, she would always encourage me instead of the punishment. Of course, sometimes, I might
quarrel with my mother for her keeping on clacking, however, I would always feel regretful for what I said, and I would say sorry to her every times.
My mother worked with determination and heart to make sure I had what we needed. They give something to us and ask for nothing in return. I think parents are those who sacrifice, take risks, or do the extraordinary for the benefit of me. She always persuades me to do something in the right way and taught me try to do my best to deal with the troubles. For example, my mother always told me that there may be people with more talent, but there is never an excuse for anyone to work harder than I do.
Time is always fly, and don't wait for anyone(maybe besides me).What's more, there are something I want to tell my mother, however, I was having difficulty getting it out. I would thank my mother for all the wonderful things they had done for me over the past twenty years.
As for me, my mother sees what I see, knows what I know, so sometimes she is my friends, sometimes they are my foe. No matter what they are, they will run my life forever.
My mother also influenced me about my habit. She influenced me about my mind. She changed my way to communicate with other people. Those are really important for all the ways in my life, my personality, my habit, and even my test score, I really going to thank her about the entire thing that she done for me. When I was a young girl, I was a really loud girl, and careless about everything except my study and myself.
She also changed my communication with people; this influenced helped me made better friends. Once she told me there are 5 things we have to be careful when we communicate with someone. One, we will never ask about the questions that we think that person would not want to answer. Two, don’t tell anyone about the people that we hate until we know that person really well. Three, think about the things before we say that. Four, never get angry on someone, or think someone is odd after we know that person. Five never laugh at other people because of their family and behaviors. Those five things I read again and again in my mind, and I remembered that, it really helped about communication.
As time goes by, my mother is getting older and older, and it's time for me to take care of her as a reward. However, I am always a child and have never grown up in her mind. Therefore, I will always be her dearest little child, I love my mother.
Those five things I read again and again in my mind, and I remembered that, it really helped about communication.
篇五:《My mother》
Hello, dear friends! Today, I want to talk about a person who loves me.
There is a women, she brought me to the world and look after me every day.
There is a women, she gives me lots of helps in my study and my life.
There is a women, she is the most beautiful person in my mind.{my,monther}.
There is a women, she is my mother.
My mother is not too tall or too short. She has long straight hair with a pair of glasses. She often tells jokes to me and cooks food me on My classmates always said that my mother gave me so much love.
“Don’you can do your best! Come on!” Then, I studied harder and harder, I got good grades.
My mother music, when was young, she sang beautiful songs for me, she wants me to love music like her. So I started playing the piano four years ago.
Do you know what I want to say now? I want to say:“My dear mother, I love you! And I want to love you forever! Forever!
Thank you for listening!
Class One Grade Eight Claire
篇六:《写作答案 Thank you to my mother》
写作答案 Thank you to my mother
I want to say thank you to my mother. My mother is kind and friendly. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of my daily life. For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me. When I’m in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up. With her help, I became a top student in my class. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. 。I believe she is the best mother in the world , I believe she will be proud of me in the future.{my,monther}.
照顾我的日常生活 take good care of my daily life
醒来 wake up be in trouble
encourage me to face difficulties a top student
I believe that 从句 be proud of
向同学和朋友介绍你的学校
My school is not very big ,but I love it very much ,my busy school life always makes me happy . I not only have all kinds of classes ,but also take part in colorful activities after classes , our teachers are so friendly to us that I’ve got encouragement from my teacher . Once I failed in my exam ,my teacher told me not to give up easily when difficult work lies before you ,I was so moved that I made up my mind to catch up with my classmates .Now my study has greatly improved. ，I thank my teacher for her help . I’ leaving my school , I will never forget the days I’ve spent here . not … but .. 不是 …而是… Thank sb for (doing) sth 感谢某人做某事 make sb happy 使某人快乐 take part in activities 参加活动 get sth from 从某人得到某物 not only … but also .. 不但….而且… tell sb not to do sth 告诉某人不要做某事 catch up with sb 追赶某人
So … that … 如此…以至于 … make up mind to do sth 下定决心做某事
处于困境之中 鼓励我面对困难 一个尖子生 我相信 以…为骄傲
建议 —— 关于学习的一封回信！
You are a good girl .Don’t worry too much .Every student has the same questions like you . As a teenager ,it is the best time to learn knowledge now . here is some of my advice for you .
First ,you must listen to your teacher carefully , and try to understand what they say in class, it is useful for you to do your homework quickly and finish it at school ,if you do it like that , you will have more time to rest .
Second , you should talk with your parents about your outside school ,if you do well at school ,try to ask your parents to agree with you !. Hope you have a good school life 。
it is the best time/way to do sth 做某事是最好的方法/ 时间 It is useful for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说是有用的
listen to sb carefully 仔细听某人说
try to do sth 试图/努力做某事 ask sb to do sth 要求某人做某事 talk with sb about sth 和某人谈论某事 agree with 同意某人做某
About my study and computer games
I think it’s right for your parents to stop you from playing computer games. My parents do the
same as your parents! I hope you can understand your parents as early as possible .
Nearly all the parents hope their children can study hard and go to a better school., You shouldn't play computer games after school. If you spend a lot of time playing computer games ,it will have bad effects on your study and health
You can choose other ways to relax yourself, such as playing basketball, watching TV, listening to music. I hope you’ll get out of the trouble as soon as possible and make progress
响 stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事
the same as 和… 一样
as early as possible 尽可能早的 as soon as possible 尽可能快的
spend 时间 doing sth 花费时间做某事 have bad effects on 对… 有坏的影
get out of the trouble 走出 困惑 make progress 取得进步 It is right for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来 说是正确的
About birthday present
Li Lei is my best friend. On his birthday, I want to give him an English dictionary. Because he is good at English, and he says that he wants to be an English teacher when he grows up. But he doesn’t have enough money to buy an English dictionary. I think it is very important for him to own an English dictionary. I hope that he will become a good English teacher in the future.
He says that … I think that ….. I hope that ….
It is important for sb to do sth be good at ..
About our school life
I am a middle school student. I am very busy because I have a lot of lessons to learn every day. But we also have lots of fun after class because we often take part in different school activities. I'm interested in computer and I often go to our school computer group . I think it's very important to learn to use the computer because they are useful in our life ,I want to work for our country with computer when I grow up.
have a lot of lessons 上很多课 It is important for sb to do sth
have lots of fun 有很多乐趣 be interested in 对…感兴趣 take part in activities 参加活动
About my marks
I’m very glad to hear from you . I understand you and I am also worrying about you. I think I can
give you some advice .
First of all you should believe no one will be angry with you or laugh at you because sometimes it's very common to get low marks in Grade 3. Then I’d like to say it is the most important thing to believe in yourself.
Finally It”s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class , you can say something in
English with your friends after class . And when you feel tired and sleepy you’d better relax or have a rest. I'm sure you can be successful if you try your best.
it is the most important thing to believe in yourself. 相信你自己是最重要的事情。
It's very common to get low marks in Grade 3 在初三得低分是很普通，很一般的 。
It’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class .在课上仔细听讲是很重要的
You’d better relax or have a rest 你最好放松和休息
How to learn a kind of language
I”m glad to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese , I don’t think learning Chinese is so difficult., Here are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese course and listen carefully in class . Then, you should watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese when you are free ,
Besides, it is one of the best ways to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so
you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will help you learn Chinese .
I don’t think that 从句 ，我认为…不….
it is important to take a Chinese course and listen carefully in class . 上汉语课并且在课上仔细听是重要的 。
You should do … 你应该…… It is one of the best ways to learn and sing Chinese songs .make friends with foreigners 和外国人交朋友
help sb do sth help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
My name is Tom ,I used to listen to music ,but now I am used to learning English everyday ,I
think it is very useful to listen to music and learn English .
My name is Mary ,I used to play computer games ,so it is bad for my eyes and study ,now I like paying basket ball ,I am used to sleeping early and getting up early . I think it is good for me to have a good habit