【 – 小学作文】
篇一:《An Exciting Trip》
An Exciting Trip
【Text】
I have just received a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is working for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different places in Australia. He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australia. He will soon visit Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. My brother has never been abroad before, so he is finding this trip very exciting.
I have just received a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is working for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different places in Australia. He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australia. He will soon visit Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. My brother has never been abroad before, so he is finding this trip very exciting.
I have just received a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is working for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different places in Australia. He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australia. He will soon visit Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. My brother has never been abroad before, so he is finding this trip very exciting.
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If we take a close look at successful language learners, we may discover a few techniques (技巧) which make language learning_for them.
First of all, successful language learners are independent learners. They do not _on books or teachers; they _ their own way to learn the language. They try to find the patterns and the rules for themselves, _ waiting for the teacher to explain everything.
Successful language learning is _ learning. Therefore, successful learners do not wait for a _ to use the language; they look for such a chance. They find people who speak the language and ask these people to correct them _ they make mistakes. They will try anything to communicate. When communication is difficult, they can _ information that is incomplete. It is more important for them to learn to _ in the language than to know the _ of every word.
篇二:《An Exciting Trip》
An Exciting Trip{an,exciting,trip作文}.
Last holiday I went to Beijing with my father. As we all know,Beijing is the capital of our country,and ther are many places of interest there. We went to the Great Wall first. It's so long,and it's really great! I neally couldn't imagine how it built!I took a lot of photos there. It's unforgettable. And then we visited the Tian'an Men Square,also,we had fun there.This trip in Beijing let me fell the excellent things in our country. I'll never forget this trip! I want to go there again!
篇三:《An exciting trip》
学优教育辅导讲义
This morning I received a bunch of flowers from a boy,but I didn't accept it.
take则是主动的“拿”、“取”
I received a beautiful pen from my uncle. My brother took it from me yesterday.
take 也可以作收到
take the exam 接受考试; take advice 接受建议
★firm n. 商行, 公司 = company n. 公司
★different adj. 不同的
① adj. 不同的,相异的(经常与from连用)
We are planning something different this year. 我们今年有不同的打算。
My room is different from yours.
② adj. 各种各样的,不同的
This department store sells a large number of different things.
这家百货商店出售许多各种各样的东西。
He has visited many different places in China. 他去过中国的不少地方。
★abroad adv. 在国外(副词, 直接和动词连用)
go abroad 去国外
live abroad 国外定居
study abroad 国外学习
【课文讲解】
1、I have just received a letter from my brother, Tim.
同位语:一个名词(或短语等)与另一个名词(或短语)并列而作为其说明或限定成分时称为同位语。同位语与它所补充说明的成分之间用逗号隔开。
在译成汉语时,同位语或者插入主句中,或者另译为一句,很少像英语中那样用逗号隔开。
This is John, one of my best friends. 这位是约翰。他是我最好的朋友之一。
Mrs. Smith, my neighbore, has never been abroad. 我的邻居史密斯夫人从来没有出过国。
2、He has been there for six months.
I have arrived in Beijing. (arrive 是瞬间动词不能和段时间连用)
has been in 地点
He has been in Beijing for one year.
He has been in America for tow years.
3、He is working for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different places in Australia.
work for 在……上班/任职,强调work
I am working for a school.
work in 强调地点(在哪个地方上班)
I am working in the New Oriental school.
work at 上班
She works at a department store.
a number of后面一定要加可数名词复数;通常number前有great,large,good,small,certain等形容词,数量大小
也随之改变。a great number of 类似于, 约等于a lot of;
A large/great number of our students are Danish.
There are a small number of spelling mistakes in your homework.
a lot of 可加可数名词也可加不可数名词
I have a lot of friends
I have a great number of friends.
4、He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice springs, a small town in the centre of Australia.
has gone to 去了某地没回来
has been to 曾经去过某地, 现在不在那个地方
Have you been to Paris?
5、From there, he will fly to Perth.
from there:从那地方起
from 即可以加时间又可以加地点
from half past 8 to half past 11
from Beijing to Tianjing
fly to Perth = go to Perth by air
6、My brother has never been abroad before, so he is fending this trip very exciting.
before在句子后是副词, 译为“在此之前”,是现在完成时态的标志
find作“发现”、“发觉”讲时宾语往往带补足语(一般为形容词),说明宾语的状况、性质等。
find 宾语 形容词做宾补
find the room clean
find her happy
be finding在口语中经常使用
I'm finding… . . We’re finding… …
下面表示状态、感觉、情绪、精神活动的动词不可用于进行时:believe,doubt,see,hear,know,understand,belong,think,consider,feel,look,seem,show,mind,have,sound,taste,require,possess,care,like,hate,love,detest,desire{an,exciting,trip作文}.
【Key structures】
现在完成时
现在完成时表示动作现存的结果,或者过去发生的事对现在的影响。常与现在完成时连用的副词和副词短语:before (now)(以前);it’s the first tiem(第一次);so for(到目前为止);so far this morning(到上午为止);up to now(直到现在);up to the present(直到目前);just(刚刚);recently(最近);already(已经);lately(最近);now(现在);for 一段时间;since 时间;still(还;仍);at last(终于);finally(最终);疑问句和否定句中常用ever,yet,never,not…ever等。{an,exciting,trip作文}.
I’ve planted fourteen rose bushes so far this morning.
I have lived here for several years now and I’ve made many new friends since I have lived here.
现在完成时还可和表示频度的副词连用,表示反复和习惯性动作,如often(经常),frequently(屡次),three times(三次)等。
I’ve watched him on TV several times.
【Multiple choice questions】
3 Tim is in Australia. He went ___a___ Australia six months ago.
a. to b. in c. at d. into
at… 表示位置 (be at是典型表示位置的介词短语)
go to… 只要有to这个感念, 它的后面一定要有宾语, go to the theater
go in… (in 做副词)很少加宾语 He went in.
go into… 有去向的动作, 还有进入的动作 go into the room
move常用的意义是“动”、“移动”,在表达“搬家”这个意思时move可以单独使用,也可组成短语move to,move into,move in,move out。
move in:搬进来
move to the new house:正在搬
move into :搬进去了{an,exciting,trip作文}.
move out 搬走
Jack has moved out. John will move in the day after tomorrow.
4 Tim is in Australia. How long _____ there?
a. is he b. has he been c. has he d. was he
how long…对段时间提问, 跟现在完成时相连
11 He will soon visit Darwin. He will visit Darwin_c_.
a. quickly b. for a short time c. shortly d. in a hurry
quickly 指的是动作上的快
He went quickly .
for a short time 不久, 表示动作延续一段时间
soon = shortly 不久以后, 表示在这段时间之后,强调的是时间上的快
in a hurry:匆忙的(指动作)
篇四:《An exciting trip》
An exciting trip 激动人心的旅行 small town in the centre of Australia. He will soon visit Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. M
Further notes on the text
1. He is working for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different places in Australia. 他正在为一家大公司工作,并且已经去过澳大利亚的不少地方了。
(1) work for指“在""上班/任职”:
表达“上班”这个意思时还可以说work at: She works at a department store. 她在一家百货商店上班
(2)a number of只能接可数名词的复数形式。通常,number前有
great, large, good, small, certain等形容词,数量大小也随之改变:
A large/ great number of our students are Danish. 我们的学生中有许多是丹麦人。
There are a small number of spelling mistakes in your homework. 你的家庭作业里有少数几个拼写错误。{an,exciting,trip作文}.
2.He will soon visit Darwin. 他不久还将到达尔文去。 will 表示将来要发生的事。这句话的时态是一般将来时。下一句话From there, he will fly to Perth也是一般将来时。
3.My brother has never been abroad before, so he is finding this trip very exciting. 我弟弟以前从未出过国,因此,他觉得这次旅行非常激动人心。
(1)这句话由两个简单句组成,后一句由连词so引导,为表示结果的状语从句。
(2)find作“发现”、“发觉”讲时宾语往往带补足语(一般为形容词),说明宾语的状况、性质等:
I find the film very interesting.
我觉得这电影很有趣。
She found Ton's room very dirty. 她发现汤姆的房间非常脏。
She has already found herself wrong. 她已经发现自己错了。
需要注意的是,find一词很少用于进行时态,一般用于过去时、完成时及一般现在时等。
4.My brother has never been abroad
Have you ever been to Hong Kong?{an,exciting,trip作文}.
Have you ever been there?
区别 He has been to the south.
He has gone to the south.
Grammar in use
1.现在完成时与现在进行时
现在完成时的时间概念有时是不确定的。我们所关心的是现存的结果,或者过去发生的事对现在的影响。现在完成时不能和明确表示过去的副词(如ago, yesterday等)连用。经常和现在完成时连用的副词和副词短语有:before(now)(〈在此〉以前);so far(到目前为止);up to now (直到现在);just(刚刚);already(已经);lately(最近);now(现在);疑问句和否定句中常用ever, yet, never, not" ever等。现在进行时经常用于表示在短期内正在进行
的动作或存在的情况,因此往往不需要和时间状语连用。
I have just received a letter from my brother.
He has been there for six months.
He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs.
My brother has never been abroad.
试比较:
He has just finished his homework./He is doing his homework.
他刚写完作业。/他正在写作业。
I have learned how to spell it./I am learning how to spell it.
我已经学过怎么拼写它了。/我正在学习怎么拼写它。
2. 同位语 (Appositives) 一个名词(或短语等)与另一个名词(或短语)并列而作为其说明
或限定成分时称为同位语。同位语与它所补充说明的成分之间用逗号隔开。课文中有两句话含有同位语:
I have just received a letter from my brother, Tim.
我刚刚收到弟弟蒂姆的来信。(Tim是my brother的同位语。它们指的是同一个人。Tim用来补充说明my brother的名字)
He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australia.
他刚买了一辆澳大利亚小汽车,现在去了澳大利亚中部的小镇艾利斯斯普林斯。(在这句话中 a small town in the centre of Australia是Alice Springs的同位语,补充说明这是个多大的镇子,在什么地方)
在译成汉语时,同位语或者插入主句中,或者另译为一句,很少像英语中那样用逗号隔开。请参阅课文中两个句子的译文。同位语如果太长,可以另译为一句。如课文中第二个例句的后半部分可以译为:“现在去了艾利斯斯普林斯。这是澳大利亚中部的一个小镇。” 同位语的其他例子如:
This is John, one of my best friends.
这位是约翰。他是我最好的朋友之一。
Mrs. Smith, my neighbour, has never been abroad. 我的邻居史密斯夫人从来没有出过国。
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