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篇一:《2014届高三二轮专题强化训练：短文改错(模拟)》
2014届高三二轮专题强化训练：短文改错（模拟）
高考模拟
(2013·宁波市二模)
Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
答案：
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a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually
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left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in ∧ local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel atravelled
on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He before
would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully,
or
but＼ I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
patient
(2013·许昌平顶山新乡三市三调)
My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
答案： My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I ∧ had the dream of becoming a have
teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There progress
is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on thatchildren's
knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other
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jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They
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make me to＼ feel young forever. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
So
(2013·昭通市统检)
I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.
I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late? If you are available that time, please inform me.
Thank a lot!
答案：
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I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what hersee
has great changed in our city. greatly
I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I apology
can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks chance
late？ If you are available that time, please inform me. later
Thank a lot!
Thanks
(2013·绍兴市二模)
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
答案： I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior
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high school student.
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and I almost lost my＼ heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, importance
recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and recitedexercises
classmates for better ways to learning English.
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Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.
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Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
(2013·东北三省三校第二次联考)
Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
答案： Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she
went
got there，she ∧ refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt.
wasunless
Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard
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stopped her and began to search for＼ her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many
carefully
eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and
whichembarrassedthe
she was allowed to go.
(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce
China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.
答案： I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that aged
your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for great
them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written itlikescan
English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce
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China to other students from all over ∧ world; for another, I expect to learn from＼ more about other
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countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward
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to your approval.
(2013·琼海市质监)
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.
答案： When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in＼ ran
that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me everything
to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy aand{in,the,world,of,,my,dream}.
talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little talkingmyself
story and showed ∧ to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the itread
story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.
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(2013·石家庄市二模)
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival,{in,the,world,of,,my,dream}.
they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
答案：
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to ∧ nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival,
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they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started warmly
working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard sweepingsat
chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for
volunteers
their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of＼ what they did bring joy to others. It brought
also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly
theirthat
whenever they were free.
(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)
It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
答案： It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the die
widely attention of the public. Many rules have ∧ made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for＼ widebeen
the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily
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life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers usingourselves
should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
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篇二:《2014届高三英语二轮专题强化训练 短文改错(真题+模拟) Word版含答案》
2014届高三二轮专题强化训练：短文改错（真题+模拟）
(一)
(2013·全国Ⅰ)
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
答案： I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing hold
old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for
passed
me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a well/clearlyshoulders
beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which to/into
set himself apart from others in our small town, ∧ he was strong and powerful. In
himand
＼a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework when
with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
ever
(二)
(2013·全国Ⅱ)
The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案：
The book I'm reading of＼ talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between
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lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon which
becomes another meal of ∧ day. Interesting， it had a connection by the British becametheInterestinglywith
porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without drunk
handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with cups
handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
growth
(三)
(2013·浙江)
Dear Diary，
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained，“He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.
Good night and remember you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours，
Rosemary
答案：
Dear Diary，
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far＼ away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained，“He was moved
lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate， anotherclassmates
my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad， now
andworse
I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is ∧ first day of the/my
school. I am awfully tiring， but I know I'll never fall sleep. tiredasleep
Good night and remember you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life
are
and my only friend.
Yours，
Rosemary
(四)
(2013·辽宁)
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.{in,the,world,of,,my,dream}.
答案： Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with
on
his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so＼he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about
hashealth
him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid ∧ visit to Mr.
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Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself his
down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the stepped
picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed picturesmuch
him.
(五)
(2013·陕西)
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
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