【 – 高中作文】
篇一:《珍惜当下。高考作文》
阅读下面的文字，根据要求作文。
如果你因为错过太阳而流泪，那么你也将错过群星了。
泰戈尔
请根据阅读后的感悟和联想，写一篇不少于800字的文章。要求：①自定立意 ②自拟标题③除诗歌外文体不限 ④文体特征鲜明
佳作欣赏：
忘掉过去 把握未来
泰戈尔说: “如果错过太阳时你流了泪,那么你也将错过群星了.”其实,我们的人生之路布满荆棘,随时都有可能被刺的遍体鳞伤.这时,我们要学会忘掉过去,忘掉不属于我们自己的太阳.这样,才能把握未来,把握属于自己的群星.
当你还在为失去太阳忏悔、流泪时，别人已经勇敢的寻找群星了。 泛舟历史的长河，拨开岁月的迷雾，你是否看到了那个满头银发却可以称霸文学天空的老者？在那个唯有金榜题名、蟾宫折桂的年代里，他空有一腹才华却不被人们所赞许，屡试不第，失意落魄的他只能靠兼任私塾填饱肚子。但他没有因错过太阳而流泪，他在志怪小说的世界里写出了一片新天地。那一个个美丽多情的狐妖，那一场场感人至深的爱恋，他把我们带进一个个荒诞却同样精彩的世界。没错，科举场上他是一个失败者，但在文学的世界里他却可以傲视苍穹。
蒲松龄错过了科举这轮太阳，但他却把握住了《聊斋志异》这枚闪亮的星星。 曾经有一个女孩，她想成为体操冠军，由于身高突增，她不得不与自己心爱的体操场告别。但她并没有放弃，也没有流泪，而是勇敢地转向撑杆跳事业。从此一根杆，一个美丽的女子，演绎着体育王国的另一个美丽的神话。当无数的掌声响彻赛场，伊辛巴耶娃，一位撑杆跳女王，骄傲地绽放着她芬芳的笑靥。
当错过体操这轮太阳时，伊辛巴耶娃没有流泪，没有放弃，终于在撑杆跳的天地找到属于自己的群星。
失去太阳并不可怕，关键在于你能不能敢于忘掉，然后在努力寻到自己的群星，把握自己的未来。
巴尔扎克错过了待遇丰厚的律师工作，俯身民间，终用笔完成了拿破仑用剑没有完成的事业，成就了人间喜剧；曹雪芹错过了原本富裕的生活、显赫的家世，在贫困交加的生活中笔耕不错，完成了现实主义鸿篇巨制《红楼梦》。
忘掉过去，才能把握未来。那么就让我们忘掉错过太阳的遗憾，不要再错过群星。 ?
东隅已逝 桑榆非晚。
错过的终属于过去，哪怕曾经，山再青，水再绿，风再温柔。为未来而活，当是智者的选择。
“往者不可谏，来者犹可追。”陶潜如是说。活在失去的阴霾，如戴上沉重的枷锁，是风，也吹不起一层漪沦，是海，也掀不起半点波浪。错过能使人明智，更让人懂得珍惜。 失去了爱情，还有男儿的功名可以追寻，只要你眼里有未来的曙光。
陆游错过了挚爱的唐婉，失去了曾经的沈园情梦，徒留“也信美人终作土，不堪幽梦太匆匆”的慨叹。然而，他深知男儿宜立志高远建功立业，怎能埋没随百草！
于是，幽月下，凉风中，多了一个焚膏继晷的书生，少了个整日吟诗作对、纵情山水的浪荡才子。寒窗苦读，一朝梦圆，陆游终得第入仕，开始了辉煌的政治生涯??
若是他陷入失去唐婉的泥淖中不能自拔，又怎能功成名就，仕途宦达？若不是他从错过中拭去泪水，又怎能青史留名，煊赫于历史？在错过的遗憾中奋起，东隅已逝，桑榆非晚。
失去了生活的希冀，还有挚爱之人给你生活的勇气，只要你勇敢的迈向未来。 徐志摩，聪颖惊人而又勤奋上进，未来似乎是一马平川的坦途。然而，当他满怀希冀的从美国飞到英国，欲拜自己的偶像为师之时，却听到偶像被除名的消息。那一刻的天，仿佛也在同情这位追风的少年，怜悯他欲成大事的雄心。但未来是美好的，在父亲的鼎力支持下，他重整学业，梳理已紊乱不堪的心绪，从此走上人生快车道，成现代诗坛添资生色的浓墨一笔。
若不是在低沉之时重拾未来的信心，诗坛定不会有这颇负盛名的才子，这是在错过的悔恨中拭去泪水凝成的结晶，更是上帝对为未来而活者的犒赏。时光不会倒转，失去已成定局。错过会让人懂得珍惜，未来散发着诱惑力。向未来走去，活在希望的摇篮里比活在错过的泥淖中更让人心安。
如果错过了太阳，就不要再错过星星；如果错过了晨曦，就不要再错过夕阳。东隅之美虽已逝去，桑榆之亮丽等待你我去珍惜。
学生升格作文:
彼岸风景同样美好
既然你已经错过了大海的壮阔，就不要再错过溪流的潺媛；既然你已经错过了太阳的光芒，就不要再错过群星的闪耀。此岸的风景优雅迷人，即使错过，也还有彼岸的美好芳香。
错过了太阳的光芒，忘记遗憾于忧伤，撷一颗执着的心，拾起背囊，寻找属于自己的那颗璀璨的星。{完的当下作文}.
错过了此岸的美好，不必伤心，我们还有左手倒影，右手年华的美妙彼岸。一篇翻身传奇的神话，一首十年抱负的慷慨豪歌，“苦心人，天不负，三千越甲可吞吴”。勾践卑事夫差，忍受耻辱，幸而你没有被亡国的苦痛迷离双眼。既然失败，坦然面对，韬光养晦，发奋图强,你十年磨一剑，拔以示君。终于一日，吴国的战旗被越军砍下。你也找到了彼岸的美好，你并未因错过太阳再次错过群星。 错过了太阳的光芒，不流泪，我看到了远方为我闪耀的群星。用独特的方式，《梦中的婚礼》何时更加动听？在维也纳金色大厅的中央，刘伟用灵活的“双手”弹奏最震撼人心的钢琴曲。在一次又一次的打击下，你依旧对自己残酷，“要么赶紧去死，要么精彩的活着。”终于，你做到了，你拥有隐形的翅膀，终于战胜了命运的束缚。
如果错过了太阳时你流了泪，那么你也将错过群星了。
奔跑的马蹄传递着不尽的硝烟，项羽带领江东八千子弟，挥金戈铁马，雄展楚汉之争，老谋深算的刘邦终于把他逼向死亡的悬崖。“力拔山兮气盖世”的英雄最后只能“虞兮虞兮奈如何”，在乌江边用剑把自己的鲜血映照了天边的那一抹残阳，他接受不了失败的现实，他没给自己留一点机会。他错过了太阳的光辉也因此错过了闪耀的群星，殊不知“江东子弟多才俊，卷土重来未可知”。
一个人需要这样，更何况一个国家呢？雄踞东方的巨龙沉睡百年，她错过新的革命的曙光，她也没有赶上工业革命的浪潮但是，几十年的改革开放，奋起直追，她抓住了机会，我们见证了巨龙的崛起。
我们要铭记：不要因为错过了太阳而放弃将来的希望。 此岸的风景已然逝去，彼岸的风景同样美好。
解析：
本作文题所提供的文字，是一句富含人生哲理的名句，表达的是一种积极的人生态度。要特别注意抓住这个句子中的三个形象词语，即“太阳”“流泪”“群星”，搞清楚三者所指向的理性含义，即所能比喻或象征的人生内涵，理清它们之间的逻辑关系，从而构成作文立意的内核，此即为判断是否切合题意的根本标准。 首先要弄清楚“太阳”和“群星”的含义，它们都是指我们所追求的东西。其次要弄清“流泪”的含义，是指面对“错过”表现出来的遗憾、悔恨、脆弱、萎靡、气馁、失望等消极心理和态度。我们有着许多远大而美好的理想，有着太多的追求，我们难免会“错过”许多美好的东西，人生自然也难免会有太多的遗憾。因此，当“错过”的已经成为过去时，我们不能沉溺其中不能自拔。正确的做法是坦然面对，用积极的态度向前看，去迎接美好的未来。
材料立意应从几个关键词入手：错过太阳 流泪 错过群星
最佳切入点应是兼顾两个方面：一方面是面对“错过”时我们应以什么样的态度来对待，是选择坚强还是坦然，就不要只是流泪;另一方面是在选择了坚强和坦然之后要把握现在、珍惜拥有、抓住机遇，也就是所说的不要错过流星。 如果只谈坚强或是单纯谈机遇和珍惜，那么应属偏题，理解材料不全面。
偏离题意的作文多数表现为不能反映句子的整体内涵，只有部分内涵的体现或无任何体现。对句中的三个形象不能作全面整体上关照，只抓住了其中一个或两个，或忽略了“错过”这个关键词，不能从以“错过”为纽带的条件和结果的关系的角度全面审视而提炼立意，导致只静止地看到一部分内容。如只写“放弃也是一种美丽”、“学会忘记”、“要有达观的心态”“坚强”“逆境出人才”“人生因错过而精彩”“错过是另一种美丽”“机遇”等方面的内容。
再如：乐观 机不可失失不再来 学会选择 换个角度 谈“时间”或一味谈“错过”都属于立意不正确。 最佳立意表述参考：{完的当下作文}.
1、不要为过去的遗憾而后悔 ，否则会错过许多美好的东西。
2、在错过一次机会的时候不要沮丧而不进取，因为那样可能再次失去 机会。让我们珍惜每一次机会。
3、错过了的东西就不要再去为它而后悔,否则你将会失去更多。
考点：本题考查学生写作的能力，能力层级为E级。
点评：考场作文的立意，最重要要的是准、稳。如果没有十足的把握，尽量不要标新立异。要做到“准”“稳”要善于找到命题人在立意方面有相关暗示的关键词语或句子。这些关键性的句子往往在材料的结尾处，往往以议论句的形式出现。关键的词语可能是出现次数较多，且有象征意义的词语。材料作文的开头，最好能够将材料简述一次，然后依据材料提出中心论点。在作文的开头将材料简述一次，可以保证自己的观点的确源于材料，不会脱离材料。且能够明确地体现从材料中提炼自己的中心论点的过程。
篇二:《当下话题作文》
当下话题作文
明星代言问题
On the Celebrity Spokesperson
Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media. This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.
There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product. A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items. This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized. Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides. Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior. In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public. To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.
关于选秀节目
Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth. This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.
There are a couple of reasons behind the tide. To start with, young folks need role models to learn from. So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs. This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences. Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves. Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.
This is a divisive topic. On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains. As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies.
食品安全问题
On the Food Security
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.
There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.
As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.
社会不文明现象
On Uncivilized Behaviors We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth. All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of. As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of. Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.
As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves. We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them. There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend. To name only one: the lack of moral education. The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently
in our daily lives. As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.
感恩
On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.
Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere. I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache. As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause. Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude. This kind of world is doomed to failure. Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our
awareness of fostering a graceful heart. Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one. My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.
大学生使用信用卡现象
On Credit Card
At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders.
Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests.
Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments. On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and
excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.
On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond
heavy dependence upon our parents
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2008 年 6 月——Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?（现象说明型） 1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图
书越来越多 2. 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是… 3. 我的看法
【范文一】{完的当下作文}.
Recent decades have seen the rapid development of information technology.As a
result,many electric inventions,including E-book,have found their way into our everyday life and have gained increasing popularity among common people.
It’s no wonder that some people hold the idea that E-book will replace traditional books
sooner or later because E-book have various advantages over the traditional ones.To start with,all the E-book can be downloaded from the Internet directly,most of which are free of charge ,while the traditional books in bookstores are much more expensive .What’s more,E-book can be stored more easily in our computers and are more convinient for people to carry around.Last but not the least,reading E-book has become a fashion in our life,which is particularly appealing to our young people.
As far as I am concerned,nowadays traditional books are still the leading means of
reading. However,with further development of information technology and the popularity of computer and Internet,E-books will surely take the place of traditional books in the near future.
一、结构：现象；原因；我的观点。二、句型用法： 1、定语从句：……which is…../ ……, most of which…..
2、区分wonder
和 doubt 的句型：It's no wonder that../ There's no doubt that…. 3、with引导的状语从句三、
短语与词组的用法 1、避免重复使用：replace
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2008 年 12 月——How To Improve Students' Mental Health（对策类） 1. 大学生心理健康很重要
2. 为此，学校可以… 3. 我们自己应该…
【范文一（推荐熟读或背诵）】Mental health is becoming an increasingly troublesome issue for
undergraduates. We can easily get all kinds of information about college students’ pressure or emotional problems on the Internet. Solving the problem needs collaborative efforts between universities and students themselves.
On the one hand, authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin
with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the students to ease their tension.What’s more, some are physically strong, but mentally weak in terms of coping with difficult situations. Teachers may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time.{完的当下作文}.
On the other hand, students should try to face the reality and figure out the causes of
depression so that they can better understand it. They should also learn how to identify unhealthy behaviors or thoughts and make changes accordingly.
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三点并列 二、句型用法： 1、动名词做主语：(Solving the problem) needs collaborative
efforts ….2、插入语：To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide…… 3、be to do结构：这里表示“应该”，另有“必须”、“将要”、“命中注定”之
义。 三、短语与词组的用法 1、同义替换，尽量避免过多的低级词汇：issue 比 pr
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