【 – 初中作文】
第一篇:《Miss Q 中考作文》
给大家挑了一些作文，希望大家考前读一读，并仔细看看范文在已给要点比较散的情况下，是如何丰富内容并使句式比较多样的。
中考作文
假定你是李明，你的外国朋友Bob想过一个特殊的周末，你打算带他去农村一日游。请你用英文给他写封信，内容要点如下：
1. 去兰山村张大爷家过周末；
2. 上午采摘蔬菜；
3. 中午吃农家饭； 4. 下午钓鱼；
5. 晚餐吃鱼，然后看农村歌舞。
***本篇文章给出的内容逻辑性不强，要在向对方详细说明此行的具体安排的情况下，再使用多样化的句式会比较困难。下面看看给出的高分范文。
Dear Bob,
city and tedious （boring）life.
I am wondering that a day’s tour to the countryside might be recommendation is that I accompany you to Lanshan Village for the weekend and we will be the beautiful scenery there.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Sue。 请给Sue写一封信，内容要
1. 7月15
2. 3. 停留10天；
4. 何时方便看望
***请注意高分范文在文章逻辑上的处理。
20th June，2015
Dear Sue,
It’s been ages since we last saw each other. I really miss you. How are you doing recently? I am going to Britain for my summer vacation and my flight will arrive in London on 15th in July. I plan to stay in London for ten days. Then I will fly to LA. I have already made reservations at King Hotel.
Hopefully we can find some time to get together. I really miss the time we spent together in Beijing when you came to China. Please tell me in advance when you will be free so that I can
make arrangements to see you.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
假定你是李明。 上周末学生会组织部分学生去附近社区进行了一次义务劳动，受到居民的欢迎。请你给校园英文报写一篇报导。活动内容包括：
1. 打扫卫生；
2. 浇灌花木；
3. 帮老人干家务； 4. 跟小朋友做游戏等；
***这是一篇英文报导。报导是把所获得的信息快而准地用书面形式进行传递的一种形式。文章应该条理清楚，突出重点，表达要准确，勿加太多故事的叙述内容。多使用过去时。巧用简单句和省略句。
plants. Some helped the old do the housework. The others played example, basketball, cards and also hide-and-seek,etc. All of them were moment when the students had to leave, the people there all thanked them and hoped that they would come again.
假定你是李明， 你的美国必有Alex请根据以下要点给他写封信：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 月平均气温20miss作文。
3.
4.
caught in the rain.
Yours Sincerely, Li Min
假定你是李明。你的美国朋友Peter希望暑假来武汉做两个月的志愿者工作，顺便旅游。请你根据以下要点给他写封信，告诉他来汉后的安排。
1. 工作：在打工者子弟小学教英语；
2. 时间：周一至周五，每天3小时，教6周；
3. 旅游：周末游览北京名胜；余下2周去西北地区考察学校。
打工者：migrant workers
***本篇文章一定要避免整篇文章都由简单句构成，要使用多变的句型将要点阐述清楚。 Dear Peter，
Thanks for your last letter in which you mentioned that you wanted to do volunteer work for two months in Wuhan and have a travel.
With the help of my friend, who is an English major, I manage to find you a position in a primary school for children of migrant workers in the suburb of Wuhan. You will teach the kids English from Monday to Friday, three hours per day, six weeks in total. On weekends, you can visit places of interest in Wuhan. And for the rest of two seeks, you can visit schools in the northwestern region of China.
Looking forward to your coming!
下面一篇文章为学生会主席对于英语周活动安排的介绍。
Dear everyone,
like to talk about English activities this week.
plan for all of us. On Tuesday, there is a lecture made by our English dean, Professor Lee. On speak English more fluently.
can speak English very well.
！
第二篇:《2009年中考优秀作文素材：我们的Miss李》
2009年中考优秀作文素材：我们的Miss李
2009年中考优秀作文素材：我们的Miss李
那是开学的第三天，我们31个被分到A班的同学等待着与老师见面。很快，一个穿着紫色连衣裙的年轻女老师快步进了教室。她先在黑板上一挥而就一排大字：李筱曦Tracy.然后她说：黑板上是我的中文和英文名，你们也可以叫我Miss李，我们将一起去学习英语这门有趣的语言。我希望我们能成为好朋友。然后她就开始点名认识同学了。那晚Miss李给人的形象很是凶神恶煞，想着要与这样的老师相处三年，我不禁打了个寒战。
Miss李要求我们不准在英语课上说中文，她也采用全英文教学。我原来从没学过英语，所以上英语课就像坐飞机，云里雾里的。偏偏每天都有两节英语课，我每天只能望着课程表叹气。
但是从那次以后，我就对英语课开始有了兴趣了。
那天，我的姨妈来学校看我，恰好是Miss李守晚自习。我第一次与Miss李单独交流，终于明白了学英语应该大胆地说出来。从此以后，课堂上有我高高举起的一只手，课下团团围住Miss李的人中也多了我一个，平时总会有人见到我手捧课本认真复习的身影和大声练习的声音。
慢慢地，听写本上不再出现70、80分，作业中的B-，B也销声匿迹。我再也不是英语差生了。9月的音标总测试、11月的半期考试、上学期期末考试和这学期开学考试，我都取得了很好的成绩。特别是期末考试，我考了98.8分，全班第一名，让那些曾经嘲笑我发音不准的人大跌眼镜。我被人戏称可以去创造一门语言了。这时，我再回头想想Miss李，不禁为开学时那个奇怪的印象脸红。
我们的Miss李，她总是有办法让课堂充满欢声笑语，让我们快快乐乐地学英语。
我们的Miss李，一点都不古板严肃，她上课时经常和我们一起大笑，下课时遇到某同学问你有男朋友吗之类的问题也毫不避讳。
Miss李，和你在一起，英语课总是飞快地滑过，下课铃总是那么毫不留情地响起。我们喜欢你！
第三篇:《Miss Yu致全体7班Students的作文小贴士part 1》
Miss Yu致全体7班Students的作文小贴士part 1 O(∩_∩)O 满分英语范文（需背诵）
1. 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友上周来信说自己性格内向,不善与人沟通相处,并为此苦恼不已,请你以此为话题给他写一封回信安慰他.
作文要求:1字数100左右 2:可以适当增加细节,以示全文连贯
满分范文:
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.
As to your question in your letter. I’d like to tell you it’s common for us students of middle school. I suffer from the same problem at one time. Therefore, you don’t have to worry about it too much. If you want to make a difference, you can do the following things.
Most important of all, you should try to communicate more with your friends and teachers actively to throw light on what you think of. Only in this way can your friends understand you more. And you can talk about what others care about and the things and persons they are interested in. Besides, helping others is of great importance for you, for others can be kind to you if you are friendly to them.
Best wishes to you!
Yours faithfully, Li Hua Miss Yu 范文点评：
高分策略：1：书信格式正确2 ：文章连贯使用了如下经典连接词：As to your question in your letter（对于你信中提到的问题）承上启下的连贯了上下文；therefore（因此）；Most important of all(最重要的是)；Besides(另外)；For 因为
3：使用了经典高中阶段重难点句型，其实这些在我们英语学习中经常遇见，能否让你的作文能够眼前一亮 关键在于是否能在学习中做个有心人 能够在英语作文中学以致用。如下： It’s common for us students…对于我们学生来说这是很普遍的现象。。。。
Suffer from遭受（必修一的短语 你能想到吗？）
Make a difference 做出改变，起作用，有影响；差别对待。。。（英语高考常见短语）
A healthy diet makes a big difference to people's health.健康的饮食对人的健康有重要的影响 We should not make any difference between boys and girls. 我们应该对男孩女孩一视同仁 猜猜：Make no difference是嘛意思捏？\(^o^)/
you should try to communicate more with your friends and teachers actively to throw light on what you think of.你应该积极的与你的朋友和老师交流来去说明你的想法。（这个句子用的非常好 有两个加分点1：throw light on= provide information / knowledge on 说明2：what you think of.运用了名词性从句的宾语从句）
Only in this way can your friends understand you more（only 引导的状语从句的倒装） helping others is of great importance for you帮助别人对于你非常重要（1：动名词短语Helping others作主语， 大家在作文中往往忘记吧动词换成动名词作主语 记住：你的粗心往往会变成你的失分点 2：be of+名词=形容词 be of great importance绝对比very important 来的要出彩）
4：字体潦草会把你的作文拉低到15分以下 。。。⊙﹏⊙。。。
范文二：近来你们学校正努力创建和申报省绿色学校，请你据此给某英语报写一篇短文， 内容包括：1:建设绿色校园的重要性。。。。2：绿色校园不仅仅指绿色环境。。。。3：为了建设绿色校园，我们应该。。。。。
Miss Yu 思路点评：这类作文属于半开放型作文要求
1：围绕题目要求去构思
2：题目内容要求其实提示了我们从：重要性=节能环保；绿色校园=绿色环境+绿色人文（和谐社会=师生 生生之间的和谐共处）；采取的措施（如何绿色校园=植树 节水 如何绿色人文=互相信任 互相帮助 互相尊重 Mutual trust and respect）.
3要总结（Conclusion）这是加分点 可以这样总结：建设绿色校园需要每个人的努力。。。。。。可以这样写：If everyone do his best to build a green campus , it is certain that our school will take on a new look.如果每个人都为建设绿色校园而努力，我们的学校必将会呈出展现的面貌。 4：注意段落安排 语言简洁连贯 可以分条来叙述 这样不至于层次不清 或有重复现象
范文展示：（需背诵）————Miss YU会抽查大家背诵情况的^_^
Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school? It means not only a green campus, but a “green” atmosphere for our study and life. For one thing, a green campus means more plants, less pollution and no waste. Each of us can do something, such as planting trees and flowers or just saving electricity and water in our daily life. It will make a big difference. For another thing, it is necessary for us students to make great efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere of mutual trust and respect between teachers and students. Besides, it is important to keep a friendly and supportive attitude to each other.
Accordingly, if everyone does one thing for our school, we’ll surely turn our school into a better one.
Miss Yu满分范文点评：
1. 条理清晰 符合题目要点要求
2. 行文流畅 使用了经典连接词如：Recently最近 ；not only…but also; For one thing一方面；for another thing另一方面；Besides= what’s more=moreover另外；Accordingly=SO因此；总之= in a word=in brief=all in all=in short
大家要学会使用这些经典连接词呦，有木有记住？( ⊙o⊙?)？
3. 使用出彩的高阶词汇短语 如：
Aim at=target at 把。。。作为目标；瞄准 make a difference做出改变，起作用，有影响；差别对待。。。（英语高考常见短语）；create a harmonious atmosphere创造和谐氛围（这几个单词在作文中出现频率很高 你的作文里有了它们绝对很是出彩） mutual trust and respect互尊互信
keep a friendly and supportive attitude to each other.要友善帮助别人 supportive 支持的
4. 要想把作文写得出彩 来自平时点滴的积累 希望你们在英语学习中做个有心人miss作文。
5. 让你的作文字体给你争光 现在起 开始一点一点的改善你的英语字 别让它给你抹黑哇 议论文常见格式：模版
. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，
它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；miss作文。
其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____ which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）
……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不
利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看
来，……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。miss作文。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈
的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许
多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可
以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in
the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______
while. Obviously，______，but why?
（二）中间段落句
1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的
是……。
But I dont think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。
首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our country’sDevelopment and construction. First，______.What’smore, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______
5. 面临…应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方
面……，另一方面，
Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective
measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定
会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.
7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因
是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……
Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一
面，象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.
9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous
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