【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《初二英语作文附答案》
第四板块 书面表达
【2011北京】十、文段表达（15分）
75. 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽的朋友，你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看
1. 回答她的问题
2. 提出建议
3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法
来信内容简要说明：
Alice表示自己的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给她，担心对方可能不能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题？请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。
【解题思路】
依旧牢记"结构、要点、逻辑、语法、亮点"五大要素，审题一定要仔细，看准题目中的要点为：回答她的问题；提出建议；对于此事谈谈你的看法。
1. 结构、要点
文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句" Do you have the same problem?" ，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have the same problem. / I have never met things like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为" I'm so sad."， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 " Don't worry" 或者表示理解对方的感受 "I can understand you."
文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：
If it's not a lot of money, you can lend it to her.（如果钱不多的话，可以借给她）
If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you, you'd better suggest her to ask her parents for help. （如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助）
If you decide to help her, then trust her, because she is your close friend.（如果你决定把钱借给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。）
文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答"why"，即：为什么要给出如上建议的原因。如：
Friendship is more important than money, if your close friend needs help, you are supposed to
give him / her a hand and trust him / her. （友谊和信任比金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮助，你应该帮助他/她，并且给予信任。）
We students don't have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some money, it's always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母要总比问同学借要好。同时，我们应该对父母要保持诚实）
2. 逻辑
如果考生能够找全题目要点，并且按照要点所给顺序写下来，结构清晰，那么逻辑应该是通顺的。因为全文基本是按照如下思路：现身说法，对于对方所遇到的问题表示理解 — 提出建议 — 说明感受，即说明所提建议的原因。其中，可以使用大量的逻辑连词和状语从句表示因果、条件、转折等逻辑关系。
3. 语法、亮点
根据题目要求，回信文体形式大体为说明文，议论参半，所以下笔前首先确定文章时态大体为一般现在时态。由于文章话题属于生活化细节问题，所以文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子，只要句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，语法完全正确，多用词组，向批卷老师呈现出扎实的语法功底和丰富的词汇量，也就是文章的亮点所在。
One possible version:
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.
I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid you may lose the friend.
I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I’ll get it back, or maybe I won’t.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求： 1. 词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
One possible version:
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join
the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as （只要）we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
74. 假设你叫张华，是美国中学生鲍勃的朋友。你收到了他的电子邮件，请给他回复，回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
青少年吸烟问题在我国是个严重的问题。据统计， 12-15岁的中学生约有35%以上的吸烟。一些学生只是好奇，而一些学生已经逐渐上瘾。请你对此谈谈看法同时说说吸烟的危害，并对那些吸烟的学生提出你的建议。
提示语：smoking, serious problem, among teenagers, It is reported, students from 12 to 15, curious(好奇的), used to, difficult, give up, harmful, pollute
One possible version:
Smoking is a serious problem among teenagers in China. It is reported that 35% students from 12 to 15 smoke. Some are just curious about it when they see others smoking. Unfortunately, others fall into the habit. And it is difficult to give up.
I think it is not right for the students to smoke. Smoking is bad for people’s health. Many smokers died of lung cancer. It also harms people’s mental development, especially for teenagers. Smoking pollutes the air around us, and it can even cause fire. Every year, some people die from the fire caused by smoking and at the same time many buildings are destroyed by the fire.
I hope those students who smoke should give up smoking as soon as possible, it is not only good for yourself but also for your family and people around you. You should put your heart into studies, and play ball games with your friends to make yourself a happy and healthy teenager.
75. 今天网络对我们生活和学习的影响无处不在。假设你是网名Free Dove网络冲浪手，Englishlearner.com是你时常浏览的一个网站。这次你在上面看到这样两份留言，请你选择其中一份留言回复，针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，并给出几点建议。
I had the same problem as yours. I don’t think you need to worry too much. I have some good ways for you.
First, why not write down the words on a small notebook and go over them every day? I tried it and now I find it difficult to forget the words. You can give it a try.
Second, try to use them. If you can use them when you speak or write English, you will remember them better.
Last but not least(最后), organize a list of words in a song or a story. It will help you remember them better.
I’m sure you’ll find these ways helpful. Hope you’ll have fun memorizing English words. 115 w
Hi! Zhang Hua,
I have a big problem these days. I spend much time watching TV in the evening after doing my homework. So I often stay up and get up late in the morning. As a result, I usually have no time for breakfast and feel tired all day. My parents don’t allow me to watch TV now and force me to go to bed before 10:30. That makes me unhappy. I don’t think they understand me. Do you have the same problem? What should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Bob
Hi! Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I used to have the same problem. Cheer up! I’d like to give you some advice.
First, stop watching TV and go to bed earlier. Watching TV too much is bad not only for your eyes but also for your study. Second, you’d better get up on time and have breakfast. Breakfast is the most important meal of the day. Finally, you should understand your parents. All parents love their children. If you listen to them, I’m sure you will become healthier and won’t often feel tired. I think it’s important for everyone to keep healthy and good living habits help a lot.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
书面表达（9）
假如你是Daniel。请你根据下面的提示内容，给你的笔友Kitty写一封电子邮件，向她倾述你的烦恼，并请求她的帮助。词数要求：80词。
1. 着迷于网上聊天，并花费很多时间；
2. 经常回家很晚，不能按时交作业；
3. 父母和老师不喜欢这样，要我放弃这个爱好；
4. 为此常感到有压力，也不知怎么办才好，希望给出一些建议
Dear Kitty,
How time flies! I haven’t seen you for a long time. I am in trouble now. Could you help me with my problem? I love chatting on the Internet. I spend a lot of time talking with others so I go home late every night. I’m too tired to do my homework and I can’t hand it in on time. Both my teachers and parents don’t like me to do so. They hope I can give it up. I feel stressed and don’t know what to do. Could you give me some advice? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Daniel
74. 某英文报纸的“English Study”专栏向中学生征稿，要求同学们介绍一下自己英语学习的现状，谈谈对英语学习的感受，以及进一步提高英语水平的打算。请你投稿。
提示词语：talk about, learn English, useful, important, work hard, improve
Dear Li Fei,
I’m lucky to have you as my host family. I will stay in Beijing just for two days. I hope to go to your school and study with you. I’m interested in your courses and after-class activities. I also want to know more about Beijing? Could you please show me around Beijing? Would you mind telling me the two-day life and activities? I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours, Jack
某英文报纸就中学生带手机（cell phones）上学话题征文，请你投稿。
手机在人们生活中扮演着重要角色，许多同学带手机上学。请你谈谈同学们经常用手机做什么，你有什么体会，你对正确使用手机有哪些建议。
daily life，convenient， keep in touch， pass notes, during the class， affect
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Cell phones are very important in our daily life. More and more children bring their phones to school. At school, students use cell phones to pass notes, read novels and listen to music. Sometimes cell phones ring during the class. Some people think it’s convenient（方便的） for students to keep in touch with their parents, so schools should allow students to take cell phones to school. In my opinion, with a cell phone to school will affect the student’s attention, students shouldn’t bring cell phones to school. They should focus on the lessons and other activities in the school. ( 98 words )
英语老师要组织一个经验交流会，他要求每位同学写一篇发言稿。内容包括：谈谈你对英语学习的认识，介绍你是怎样学习英语的，你希望英语老师在课外活动方面开展哪些活动。 提示词语：important, useful, read, listen, speak, English film…
English is used widely in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well.
English is one of my best subjects. But at the very beginning, I am not good at it. Then I did a lot to improve my English.
Firstly, it's very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that I can go over my lessons later.
Secondly, I try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class. I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more in English. I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.
I am so interested in English that I hope my English teacher will hold an English party or English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and see interesting English films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in English.
某英文杂志正在举办以“How do you get on well with your classmates?”为主题的征文比赛，
篇二:《三餐的英语作文》
Let me tell you about his meals.
In the morning I alwasy eat at home.it's a good choice to have bread and milk for my Breakfast。Corn Bread is very nice.but it cost me 5 dollors.
I ofen have my Lunch in the school.let mee eat American Lunch.
I like eatmeat that comes from any poultry, chicken, duck, geese as well as dairy meat. beef tastes really good. Not only are they delicious and fattening, they are full of nutrition. Also, meat can come in an almost infinite array of
varieties, because they come from a whole range of animals and each can be prepared in many ways. There are many exotic types of meats around the world, hopefully, i will have the chance to sample my favourite food in many different ways.
supper is the best dinner for me.because my mom will do come decious cook for me.Ham Omelet ,ried eggs and so on.i think it will spend 10 dollores.
my family's three meals
There are three people in my family:My father,my mother and I.My father likes eggs,noodles and apples for breakfast. My mother likes eggs,soup and milk. I Iike eating bread,milk and fruit! We usually have French
fries,chicken,tomatoes,rice and porridge for lunch.We have dinner at 18:00. I like eating potapoes,soup,rice and vegetables.But my father doesn't like. He likes broccoli,rice and fruit!We don't have dessert.
We eat lots of food,because My mother think it is good for us to keep healthy
Hello!I am XXX.I am XX years old.I eat lots of heathy food for every day! I like eggs ,milk and apples for breakfast. I have rice ,tomatoes,bananas and beef for lunch! And for dinner, I like rice, fish ,pearand tomatoes. For dessert, ice-cream! Do you like it? If you have them ,you are a heathies people ,too! （自己把第一人称改为第三人称）
hi.LI Hua,for brekfest i like tomatoes and banana ,for lunch i likehamburgers salad and pears,for dinner i like chicken tomatoes,French fries.i wish you come to Chinese buy things,eat delicios food
希望能帮到你
I think breakfast is the most important, because you have nothing to eat during the whole night.Therefore,you must have breakfast every morning,it will be good for your health.Sometimes,lunch time is very short,so you just have something like hamburgers,noodles,rice and some drink,that will be OK.For supper,you have enough time to prepare the supper,then you can have
something delicious for supper.And you can drink some wine or beer during supper.But remember,after each meal,you'd better have some friuts.
For breakfast ，I like eggs，milk and hamburgers.For lunch，I like carrots，vegetables and chlcken.For dinner，I like broccoli，tomatoes and salad. I think I eat well!
I like eating bread and drink milk for breakfast .I think milk is good for my health.For lunch,I like having noodles.And
sometimes I also eat some vegetables .My mother says eating more vegetables is also good for my health.For dinner, I like to eat fish and a bowl of rice.I think my three meals are very healthy.What is your advice .
I ofen have milk and eggs for breakfast.I think it's good for us.I like to have vegetables,fish,chicken,and a bowl of rice for lunch.I like fish very
much,because it's very healthy and delicious for me.I usually have noddles or jiaozi for supper.Sometimes I eat out with my family.Afer supper I ofen go out for a walk.
How about you?
给你多写选择 1.My favorite food is Mabo Tofu. It is spicy, tender, nutritious, and delicious. My mom buys Tofu in the Market every morning, and makes different types of dishes using Tofu for dinner. Everyone in my family enjoys Mabo Tofu very much. 2.My Favorite Food
I like many different kinds of food, eggs is my favorite kind. Egg is contains a lot of essential nutrients needed by the human body, and it's commonly found in almost any part of the world.
Eggs are oval shaped spheres with a light brown color depending on the
egg.Eggs is the basic ingredient to many dishes, like omelet and french toast.{do,yuothink,breakfast,is,important英语作文}.
You can easily get eggs at any supermarkets, and they are sold for a very cheap price too. After the eggs are acquired, it is best to crack it open into a pan or plate and stir it evenly. If the egg is to be pan fried, then just crack the egg into the boiling pan, and remember to flip sides.
Eggs contain lots of nutrients and is a very good source of energy. Soldiers used to carry eggs to the frontline as their food. Egg is my favorite kind of food. 3.My Favorite Food
There are many different kinds of food. My favorite food is fried rice.In China, most of the people in the south eat rice. And I like fried rice best.
It’s really delicious. When I go home from school, I am always hungry. At that t
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