【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《中考英语话题作文复习》
2015年中考话题作文复习
1, 保护环境
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典例剖析(2014贺州)
当前我国政府倡导节约,抵制浪费。作为中学生我们应如何做到节粮、节水、节电呢?请根据以下要求和提示写一篇题为“How To Save”的短文。 提示: 1. 节约用水、用电、用纸; 2. 去超市自备购物袋; 3. 不要浪费食物,乱倒剩饭剩菜; 4. 步行或骑自行车上学。 提示词: tap(水龙头), uneaten food(剩余饭菜), electricity(电)
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1. 文章要求介绍作为中学生我们应如何做到节粮、节水、节电、节纸,可知体裁为说明文;
2. 本文是给大家提的建议,写作时用第一人称较好。建议使用情态动词 must,need,have to或者you’d better等; 3. 介绍日常的事情用一般现在时。
How To Save
①As students, we should do something to help. (①开篇直接讲出主题,建设节约型社会是每个人的责任。) ②take our own bags in shopping instead of using plastic bags from super-markets. we don’t waste food. ( ②第二段为文章的主体,分别叙述如何节约水、食物等。使用了First, Next, Then, Finally等顺序词使文章条理清晰,连贯自然。) eat up all the food when we have meals. And don’t throw the , we’d better go to school on foot or ride a bike (中间使用了We’d better…;instead of 等短语,使行文富
于变化,表达多样)
③In a word, I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter (③总结全文。使用了that引导的宾语从句,同时In a word, no matter what, make a difference短语的使用,增加了文章的亮点。)
2, 规章制度
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开头句: 1. There are many rules in our daily life.
2. In order to grow safely, our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. 中间句:
1. If we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time.
2. We should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight.
3. We must obey traffic rules and mustn’t cross the streets when the traffic lights are red.
结尾句: 1.I think safety comes first.
2. All in all, we should obey the rules above.
人们常说:“没有规矩,不成方圆”,合理的校规对于学生的健康成长至关重要。请你根据以下所给内容要点,以“Our School Rules”为题写一篇英文短文,谈谈你们的校规。
内容要点:
1. 你们学校有哪些校规? 2. 谈谈你对这些校规的看法。 3. 请说说你的好建议。
要求:
1. 文中必须包括所给提示中1-3项内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息; 3. 不少于80词
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1. 这是一篇命题作文,内容主要包括:学校的校规;对这些校规的看法;提出好的建议。
2. 可展开思路,适当发挥,使文章连贯通顺,写作时不要只简单翻译提示要点。
3. 本文要求写出校规,提出看法和建议,写作时主要用第一人称,通常用一般现在时。 4. 词数应不少于80词,且不得出现真实姓名、校名及其他真实信息。
Our School Rules
①get to school before 7:00 in the morning. ( ①用there be句型引出主要话题:校规,点明文章的核心思想是谈论校规。) ②We must wear school uniforms, and 用了省略that的宾语从句,及because引导的原因状语此句,显示了作者深厚的语言功底,增加了文章的可读性。) ③We must listen to our teachers carefully in finish our homework ③and连接的并列句把课堂内外的活动结合起来,in class 和after school短语使文章更加生动。 ) ④We are not and we should follow them. ( ④被动语态的使用丰富了句式结构。) ⑤We have ( ⑤so…that结构的使用强调了这样的校规产生的结果。状语从句使用自如,显示作者较高的语言运用能力)
⑥In my opinion, we should have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities and improve our abilities. ( ⑥In my opinion,take part in, all kinds of等短语的使用彰显了作者词汇之丰富,也是增分的亮点。)
3, 健康与急救
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开头句:
1. It’s easy to have a healthy lifestyle, and it’s important to eat a balanced diet.
2. It is very important for everyone to keep healthy, especially for our students. 中间句:
1. We should eat the food healthily.
2. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks me over carefully.
3. He told me to take a rest and drink more water.
4. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.
结尾句:
1. A lot of vegetables help you to keep in good health.
2. We should do more exercise to stay healthy.
人的生命仅有一次,安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下提示,写一篇关于安全话题的短文。
内容提示: 1. 外出时(be out)要遵守交通规则(obey traffic rules), 上街要走人行道(walk on the pavement)、不闯红灯(traffic lights);
2. 吃健康食物(healthy food)如蔬菜、水果等,不吃垃圾食品(junk food);
3. 不独自下河游泳(swim alone);
4. 当遇到危险(be in danger)时要保持镇定(keep calm), 并且寻求帮助(ask…for help)。
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1. 要注意结合实际,注意逻辑性、合理性。
2. 本文是谈论安全问题,写作时用第一人称。{写作,,,love,around,me,,,,there,is,lots,of,love,around,me,in,my,everyday,life}.
3. 描述安全问题及采取的措施,通常用一般现在时。
4. 词数应不少于80词,不得出现真实姓名、校名。
How to be safe
Safety is very important to everyone. But how to be safe? Let me tell you about it. ①①用First引出第一个要点——交通安全。描述时使用了when和while引导两个时间状语从句,) (同时长短句式的交叉使用以及适当的发挥增强了文章的可读性并丰富了文章内容。) ②Second, it’s important for us to ( ②用Second引出第二个要点——食品安全。本要点使用了it’s + adj.+ for sb. + to do sth.这个句型,并运用了such as和instead of短语,使文章的可读性进一步加强。) ③Third, we can’t ( ③用Third引出了一个简单句,引出第三个要点——游泳安全。这使得文章上下文错落有致。) ④Last but not least, when we ( ④用Last but not least引出第四个要点——遇险时该如何自救。这个短语的使用,不但强调了第四点的重要性,而且与文章开头First遥相呼应。从而使得文章重点突出、层次分明。)
If we can follow these suggestions, we’ll be safe.
4, 人际沟通
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开头句:1. There are a lot of/lots of love around us.
2. Life is full of love around us.
3. I am writing to express my thanks for my parents/teachers/classmates/friends.
4. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
5. Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It’s one of the most wonderful gifts I ever got.
中间句:1. My lovely mother cooks delicious food for me.
2. All the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge.
3. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. 结尾句:
1. Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories,we will nurture them forever.
2. My true gratitude is beyond any words description.
3. Your help is very much appreciated by each one of us.
我们的生活中处处充满着爱,有父母的爱,有老师的爱,有同学的爱,有朋友的
篇二:《作文English》
1. Thank you I really want to thank Mary for her kindness and warm help when I was in Hangzhou.. I am very sorry to cause her so much trouble. During the vacation, she took me to so many places of interest. She also showed me around the city. Hangzhou is a beautiful city, especially the West Lake. Now I know a lot of histories stories about this ancient city. I am very thankful to her for doing so much to make my trip si interesting. I will remember it forever.
2.My favourite book
I like reading very much. My favourite book is Jane Eyre. It was written by Charlotte Bronte. She was born in Britain. She was a famous writer in the world. She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best. In this book, she wrote about a woman named Jane Eyre. Jane Eyre wasn’t pretty, but she had a strong idea of self-respect. She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life. I was deeply moved by her story. I like this book very much.
3.How to learn English well
English is the most widely used language in the world. So it is necessary for us to learn it.. But how can I learn it well? As the saying goes: Practice makes perfect. I listen to tapes, watch English programs every day in order to understand what foreigners say. I speak English as often as I can and I am never afraid of making mistakes. I think reading English newspapers and writing English compositions are also very helpful. I believe if I practice listening, speaking, reading and writing, I will make great progress in English.
4.Reading is helpful
Reading is a good way to learn and relax because it will take you to everywhere in the world and tell you the different customs and culture of that country. You will learn anything you want to know from reading. If you read widely, you’ll be rich in knowledge. And it will be helpful to your work or study. Reading can also make you feel relaxed. When you spend hours studying or doing homework, you’ll be tired. Read some interesting stories and you will relax yourself soon. Sometimes when you meet something unhappy, you’ll forget it after reading.
5.Your opinion on students doing housework
Is it necessary for students to do housework at home? We did a survey about this. According to the result, we knew most of the students(70%) thought it was not necessary for students to do housework. They thought it was the job of their parents. As students, their duty was to study hard. They had no time to do housework because of their heavy homework. On the other hand, some students(about 30%) thought it was good for students to do housework. Because they could learn a lot by doing it, and knew how hard their parents were. In my opinion, we students should spend some time on housework, no matter how busy we are. It can make us be responsible.
6.The pollution around us.
Our environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about.The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can’t live healthily with dirty water and polluted air.,nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air. I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We’d better go on foot or by bike instead of by car,because more cars mean more waste gas.We should take actions to make our world more beautiful.
Another possible version:
The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can’t sleep well if there’s too much noise.That’s why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city.
I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn’t make terrible noise. If they make terrible noise that isn’t allowed,they will be fined,and we can also produce the cars which can’t make terrible noise. The other pollution is rubbish pollution.If everyone makes so much rubbish,one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish.Some people throw the waste paper about.I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.
7.Sports
Almost everyone enjoys sports.If we want to keep healthy and happy and live longer, we must take an active part in sports. We cannot work all the time because all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Some of us like to take part in sports. Some like to watch others play games. They prefer to be spectators. Everybody has his own way of relaxing. Perhaps to take part in sports is the most popular way.
8.I believe I can fly
I believe I can fly is a song by R.Kelly. This song tells us that confidence is very important. When a person has confidence,he believes in himself. He believes that he can and will succeed,and this gives him the courage to try new things.Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties.No one can achieve success without them.If you believe you can fly,then you can flysomeday.
I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties.I’ll remember confidence is the promise for achieving success.
9.How I change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years.I was fat and short when I came to the middle school.At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of my time on it.My parents were worried about me. Now I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading,too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and effencially and still keep me healthier
10.Love around me
There is lots of love around me in my daily life.Everyday I can receive love from my parents, my teachers and my friends. In the morning,my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me.Then my father drives me to school.At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge.When I’m sad,my friends will come to me and talk to me. They often share my joy and sadness. I often feel happy and excited when I got love from them.I make up my mind to study hard and devote myself to the society.
11.Cheating in the exams
At present,a number of students have picked up a bad habit__cheating in exams.There are three main reasons.First,schools have given students too many exams,some of which are too difficult. Second,some students are not hardworking and they don’t work hard at their lessons.Third,they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet,so they haven’t enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion,cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and deligent,and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides,our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.
12.Learn to smile
Smile is an attitude to life.In our life,there may be something unpleasant.For example,you fail in an exam; or another time,you are misunderstood by your friends.These unpleasant things may make you feel bad.Then what will you do?Why not learn to smile? Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is yourself. We should also learn to smile to others. It will help us to get closer to others. So smile is the most widely understood language.
13.How to be a good learner?
As a good learner,we should have good habits and ways in learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class,we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems, we’d better ask others for help. I hope all thest will be helpful to us.
14.Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful{写作,,,love,around,me,,,,there,is,lots,of,love,around,me,in,my,everyday,life}.
While we are sitting in our bright classrooms, remember there are a lot of children in the poor and disater areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
As students, we can give away our pocket money, school things, some of our clothes or toys. We can also donate some books to them in order to open their eyes to the outside world. We may raise money for charity by collecting used bottles,plastics,waste paper and so on, or by doing part-time job, such as handing out advertisement, selling newspapers. We can also help deal with problems in the study by making pen friends. All in all, the more we do, the better our world will be. Let’s start to help each other.
15.How to Behave Well?
As a student, we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules. Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.
19.Announcement
1.Time 2.Place 3.What’s the lecture about? 4.Invite everyone to attend
Girls and boys:
Attention please. I’m very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be given in the lecture hall from 3p.m. to 5p.m. on Friday, March 1st. It will be given by Professor Li. The topic is “How to learn English well?” You may take notes if you like. And you may ask ask any questions on English learning after the lecture. Please attend the lecture on time.
That’s all, thank you.
20.My favourite invention
Among all the modern inventions, laptop is my favourite. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. Laptops are light and small. They are easy to carry. With a laptop, we can work, study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can get to the internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop, I can keep in touch with my
friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.
21.A new term, a new beginning
A new term again! I am now a Grade Nine student and I will be faced with many new chances. My junior middle school will be finished and I should choose my future. My parents and my teachers have told me many times that I should study harder than ever. I really have wasted too much time in the past few years. I ,however, believe that I will be able to catch up with my classmates as the saying, “Where there is a will, there is a way. I am sure I’ll be successful.
22.Do something to fight against pollution
Nowadays we have different kinds of pollution. When people throw rubbish everywhere they make land pollution. When factories give out waste smoke, they pollute the air. If we breathe such air, we’ll die. And because of these, our earth is in danger. We have to protect the earth. We can’t leave rubbish everywhere. Factories must clean the smoke before they send it out. Still we can’t throw rubbish into the river to pollute the water. All in all, let’s start to do something to fight against pollution and protect ourselves.
23.What’s a nice holiday like?
There are many holidays in a year. Some people just play during the holidays. Others work and study as usual. I don’t think they are what nice holidays are like. I have my own ways to have a nice holiday.
On one hand, we should relax ourselves during a holiday. As an old saying goes, ”All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
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