【 – 小学作文】
篇一:《英语科技作文》
21st century is the century of technology. Today, technology is everywhere. We often use several technologies ,such as computer and phone. These technologies make easier life for us.
With the development of technology and science, people are getting richer. Computer will go into every household. Computer can help us to do many things, such as playing games, designing and making us easier to do things.
With today's technology, the phone can do many things, such as taking photos and sending the e-mail on the phone. We needn’t write a letter. We just need to make a phone call, so you can know more and more from your friends or family.
With better and faster development of science and technology people can live better. If we do not have science and technology, our life will become even worse, the world cannot become beautiful. Without technology, there would be no technology life
篇二:《谈初中英语作文评价》
谈初中英语作文评价
在英语教学中，英语作文的写作是教学的重点和难点。加强对学生作文的批改，并且对该作文进行多次评价在提升英语教学质量方面有积极的意义。本文作者结合自身英语教学工作的实际体验，初中英语作文多次评价的实施步骤及英语作文多次评价对教学质量提升的意义二个方面谈一谈自己粗浅的认识与看法。
英语作文评价
初中阶段要提高学生的英语写作水平，学生应通过大量的专项和综合性语言活动，形成综合语言运用能力，为真实语言交际打下基础。所以，写作既是语言学习的目的，也是语言学习的手段。在现实的教学中，教师必须有针对性地加强训练，有意识地让学生逐步接受英语表达的思维方式，久而久之学生才能提高对英语语言要素综合应用的能力，写出比较地道的英语。加强对学生作文的批改，并且对该作文进行多次评价在提升英语教学质量方面有着积极的意义。
一、初中英语写作多次评价的实施步骤
（一）首批要详
明确圈出语句、词汇错误之处，让学生明白其写作中存在的错误。
1.常见错误
（1）人称代词错误：人称单复数，形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词错误。
（2）主谓不一致。{关于科技的英语作文初中}.
（3）内容不连贯：不会用关联词，语序混乱。读起来相当不顺畅。
（4）大小写、标点符号错误，缺少冠词或用错。
（5）时态混乱，前后不搭或根本不考虑该用何种时态。
教师应将自己对这篇习作的情感与感受融于评价语中。对于学生习作中所反映出来的问题应该进行实事求是的评价，不能总以正面评价或否定态度加以一概论之。
2.及时反馈及订正
（1）反馈时间：教师应尽快完成首次批改，不能拖得太晚，否则会影响再次批改及评价的进度。
（2）反馈内容：选择优秀篇幅进行朗读。可以在很大程度上增加这些学生的信心与强烈的荣誉感，同时对其他学生也能起到很好的促进作用。集中性错误加以集中讲评及订正。通
过教师的及时讲解，可以化解学生心中普遍存在的疑惑，以促进课堂教学内容的巩固与复习，同时能帮助教师开展有效的课后反思工作，提高教学的有效性。
（3）学生订正完以后卷面不太清晰的文章需要抄写清楚。英语作文一般都不会太长，错误太多的作文学生自己看了都会心生厌恶，抄写的过程可以增强学生积极订正错误的信心，为减少文中的错误而开展认真的订正工作，而卷面比较整洁的学生同样受到了鼓励。
（二）复批要简
在复批的过程中，要注意学生是否将发生的错误订正完毕。订正全对的作文与有错的作文需要分开摆放，然后在班内宣读完全正确的学生名单，给予激励。有错的作文需要进行再次订正。{关于科技的英语作文初中}.
（三）多批要细
选取典型错误有针对地进行讲解分析。再次与学生一起订正集中性错误。开展学生互批。让已经全对的学生对这些仍然有错的文章进行批改。 毕竟学生批改的作业不可能都全对，需要教师进行把关核实。在重新检查的过程中，教师对顽固错误会有更加清晰的认识，可以做到适时加以总结再进行反馈。三次批改后对少数仍存在错误的文章进行再次批改，采取面批方式开展。这样可增进师生间的情感交流，扫除学生思想和学习上的障碍，激发求知欲，有利于“转差防差”，从而避免大面积的两极分化。
（四）展示评价成果
展示评价成果（学生作品）是初中英语作文多次评价过程中一个非常重要的环节。学生在多次评价的过程不断自我更新，自我挑战，采用自评、互评的方式来检验对所学知识的掌握程度。
1.注意事项
（1）间隔时间不宜太长也不能太短。间隔太短，教师无法精心准备；间隔太长，复批效果大打折扣。每周进行一次展示，将学生习作从雏形——成品的过程——展示出来。
（2）最好用实物投影仪，如果资源有限，也可利用小黑板进行展出。
（3）选取的展出文章一般以前后对比明显的文章为主。
（4）每次挑选5篇左右。
（5）选取文采比较突出的学生作品印好发给每位学生，供其欣赏和学习。
2.常用方法
（1）举行“五彩”写作比赛，五彩缤纷中感受写作的另类乐趣。 从初一开始起，笔者{关于科技的英语作文初中}.{关于科技的英语作文初中}.
就经常举行“五彩”写作原创比赛：既集绘画、写作于一身的作文比赛。如教师选定“My family”这个题目，学生可以动手绘画家庭成员的图片，也可以采用家人照片与其作品匹配。图片之下为学生的习作文章。学生自己动手创造出充满爱心、新意、五彩斑斓的作品，喜悦之情不溢言表。同学间互相交换欣赏，增加了写作比赛的乐趣。教师组织学生评委对原创作品进行评比，将优秀作品进行展出。展台面前是一片人头攒动，热闹非凡。这种让学生即能自己动手制作又锻炼了英语写作能力的比赛深受学生们的喜爱。
（2）制作优秀作文集锦。教师将优美文章打印成册，制成班级特刊供学生浏览。
（3）举行形式不限的演讲比赛。学生可以个人参加，也可以小组的形式参加。参加稿件必须是亲手书写。这类演讲比赛的宗旨是“人人都能参加”，很能激发学生的学习兴趣与表现欲。{关于科技的英语作文初中}.
（4）开展书写比赛。此类比赛比较容易操作，特别适合初期的英语教学，有助于学生形成清爽干净的卷面和良好的书写习惯。
二、多次评价对教学质量的提升的意义
1.在对学生作文多次评价的过程中，不断强调语言的准确性，注重学生习作中的变化，关注学生的发展，能有效促进学生自主学习和培养积极进取、不断改进的精神风貌。
2.学生通过多次的自我改正与不断提高，最终看到了自己努力的结果，欢喜之情油然而生，学习英语的信心也能得到培养与增强。
3.有助于学生养成良好的学习习惯，形成良好的学风。
4.对于词汇、语句等的熟悉程度有很大帮助。每周成文一篇对于所学内容进行概括与及时复习，同时对作文多次评价的过程与新授课的过程穿插在一起，避免学生喜新厌旧，忘记了“老朋友”，对于前后知识点的融会贯通的运用都能起到良好作用。
5.降低了学生对写作的畏惧程度，增进了师生间的沟通。多次评价的运用使得“写作的征程”并不是那么单调、枯燥、晦涩。征服“写作”的过程在教师、同学的陪同之下平添了许多的乐趣。
在教学的过程中，特别是在多次评价的过程中，我看到了学生身上一点一滴的进步，这种进步就在我的眼前，在一次次的发掘中茁壮成长，让你满心欢喜，就算“小树苗们”长得不是很直，也能让你看到他们清朗的未来，不禁心生期待与敬意。
篇三:《中考英语作文练习：介绍电脑用途》
中考英语作文练习：介绍电脑用途
导语：中考英语作文练习：介绍电脑用途——介绍电脑的用途，字数80字左右。介绍因特网(Internet)的主要用途：信息：看国内外新闻、获取其他信息;通讯：发e-mail、打电话;学习：上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语;
1). 介绍电脑的用途，字数80字左右。
2).介绍因特网(Internet)的主要用途：
信息：看国内外新闻、获取其他信息;
通讯：发e-mail、打电话;
学习：上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语;
娱乐：欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏;
生活：购物、聊天(have a chat)、交友。
On the Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important in our daily life. On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read different kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them. In a word, the Internet has made our life more colourful.
范文1.Computers中考英语作文练习：介绍电脑用途
It is known to us all that the computer is the most important invention in the 20th century. It has been developed a lot since it appeared. Also, our daily life has greatly changed because of it.
A computer can think and remember things like man, but it is millions of times faster than human begins. As a result, computers have been used in the fields of agriculture(农业), industry(工业), education(教育) and so on. For example, we can learn our lessons at home by using a computer instead of going to school.
Computers have entered our daily life. So it is important for us to learn how to use a computer. And we must start right now.
范文2：Computers
The computer is a wonderful machine. They are already widely used in industries and in universities. They are used in many ways.
Computers can do many kinds of work. For example, computers can helps us do maths problems quickly. Some problems are too hard for us to work them out, but computers can. A scientist can ask computers some questions, and the computers can answer on the screen.
In a car-factory computer tells the robots how to do with the cars.
Computers are very useful. So many parents buy computers for their children. They hope computers can help them improve their studies in school, but some children don’t do as what parents want them to do. Because they used the computers for surfing on the Internet and spend too much time playing computer games instead of learning. It does not good for their eyesight. So their parents complain about computers not help children to study but also make them fall behind.
In many companies computers instead of workers to work. So many people lose their jobs. So many workers think computers bring them a lot of trouble.
If computers are good for us or bad for us it’s hard to say so I hope computers will be used in the right way.中考英语作文练习：介绍电脑用途
篇四:《英语作文 科技英语考试答案》{关于科技的英语作文初中}.
We often hear people say, “Never give up.” These can be encouraging words and words of determination. And it is a positive attitude towards life.
It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new, so we should not feel discouraged and should try again. Besides, if we always give up when we fail, we will not be able to develop new skills and grow as people. Furthermore ,we should never give up because as we work to reach our goals, we develop confidence, and this confidence can help us succeed in other areas of our lives.
Opinions are divided,while some people believe that we it is wiser give up under some special situation in order to avoid Unnecessary harm.
From my own perspective, I believe that we should never give up.In short, it is important that we do not give up when working for our goals. Whether we succeed in the end or not, we will learn something, and what we learn will help us to become better, more confident people.
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am responding to your ad in the June 17th，2013，issue of the Sunday Talent Journal for the position of production coordinator. I feel that my background in electronics and manufacturing will fit in well.
I will graduate from the Central South University in June with a Bachelor of Science degree in Manufacturing Engineering. I have had extensive training on computers while at school. In my Production and Inventory class，I have learned about computerized production and material scheduling in a job shop environment.
I passed CET-6 in 2012. Not only do I pay much attention to improving my reading and listening skills，but I also keep practicing oral English.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Would you please call me to set an interview？ I can be reached at my resume address or by phoning 18688888888 after 4 p. m.
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篇五:《英语作文 科学对我们的影响》
Nowadays, there is general trend that people engaging in technological revolutions. Nevertheless, a question has been raised, “how did the science change our living conditions?”
To begin with, the science can help us to relieve excessive stress and tension by providing a temporary escape from a day-to-day life. In a world that has increasingly focused on turning everyone into millionaire, to cope with the current social trend, people crave being actively involved in the larger world and widening circles. Work-related stress, for example, has become a major problem which plagues all of modern people. In the most cases, the TV or computer, which were invented by new technology in the 20th century, can not merely help us lessen stress accumulated from an individual's demanding work life but are also fun to indulge in, is a sound and viable plan.
In addition to eliminating people’s tension, the development of telephone and internet has improved our life styles. In other words, the science can allow us to meet friends of diverse background by an interesting and effective means. Especially, the age of a student or, better yet, the stage of the personal development of a student has to be considered when they have no leisure time and opportunity to widen circles and learn how to interact socially and behave in a group of their peers.
Finally, it is undeniable that continuously developing technologies
have brought tremendous benefits, especially in learning area. Learning has in many ways become easier than has ever been before. Take learning English for example, In the past, few students owned tape recorders, and learning materials were scarce as well. But today, tape recorders get more and more inexpensive, and diversified learning materials are readily available. On the other hand, new devices, such as MP3 or MD players, are offered in market, and relevant learning materials (MP3 files) are easily and freely downloadable from the Internet.
Admittedly, science revolution has some negative effects under certain circumstances. For instance, the new technology can harm our environment. However, after balancing all the pros and cons, the above-mentioned disadvantage seems to be minor.