【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《中考作文归纳》
2010中考英语作文疏理归纳10大分类)
1突发事件(自然灾害、流行疾病等) 2.身心健康 3.环境保护(水、土、大气等资源保护)
4.语言学习 5.兴趣爱好 6.写人记事 7.旅游和介绍地方
8.新生事物评价(互联网，网上购物，手机等) 9.梦想和未来 10.烦恼
一、突发事件问题 典型例句：
1．one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数 one of the biggest events in China
2. It"s our duty to do sth (我们有责任去做某事)
3. As….as possible （尽可能地…）
4.there be….. There are lots of things we can do.(我们有很多可以做的事情)
5. We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。
6. make +sb+ 形容词 It makes many people homeless.
7. too … to= so … that They are too young to look after themselves
8 Many people lost their relatives and their homes.(失去了亲人和家园)
9 All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. （感到悲伤难过）
10 volunteer to do sth 自愿做某事 … volunteer to help sb.
11 raise money for them, \ …buy something for them,
12…go there to comfort (安慰) the sad children. \ Thousands of soldiers help them to save 13 I am deeply moved by these people. (深受感动)
14 So I’ll use to buy some food and school things for the children 15 I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.（尽力帮他们走出困境）
二、健康问题 典型例句：
1. Here is my advice about how to keep healthy / fit.(以下是我的关于如何保持健康的建议) 2 It is very important to keep healthy. / How can we
3. We can"t go to sleep too late. We can"t stay up too late。
4. We should 5. We should 、running 、swimming and jumping rope(绳子).
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head./ had a headache.(感冒并头疼)
7. I didn"t feel like eating anything.（不想吃东西）
8. In the doctor"s office, the doctor looked over me carefully. (仔细给我做了检查)
9. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told me to take a good rest and drink more water.(好好休息并多喝水)
10 The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。（告诉我每天吃三次药） 11 A few days later, I felt better. (好多了)
12 Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. （注意饮食）
13 Don"t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.（不吃太多的…而是多吃…） 14 Third， you need enough sleep or res
15 …are bad for your health.(对身体有害)
16 Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise,（缺乏运动） eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep.
17vegetables .
18 Secondly, try to sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember to “early to bed early to rise”. （每天尽量睡8小时，记得要早睡早起）
19 inally, stay away from cigarettes / smoking / drugs毒品. （远离。。。）
20 Besides(除此之外), don’t forget to breathe (呼吸)happy every day.（保持心情愉快）
21 We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food
isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something which they like to eat.（因学校的饭不好吃，一些人去校外买吃的）
22 But I"m afraid that it is bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school,(担心去校外吃
对身体有害) because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.（买的食品不健康） 23 In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they
should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger 学校想让更多的学生在校园内吃午饭，那就要给学生多做几种好吃的饭菜供他们选择）
24 That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. （以上是我的建议，祝身体健康、生活愉快）
范文1 All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night.（睡眠要充足） We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should （多吃蔬菜水果少吃肉） We should drink a lot of water.（多喝水） We should have healthy eating 饮食） Third, we 质） Finally, we每天刷两次牙）If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
三、关于环境保护问题 典型句子：水的方面
1. It is very important to take care of our environment （关注环境非常重要）
2. The environment around us is becoming worse and worse（我们周围的环境越来越糟）.
3. But some people don"t care about it (不在乎).
4. As we know , water is very important to man,(水对人类重要)
5. we can"t live without water. （没有水不能生存）
6. is less and less.（适合饮用的水越来越少）
One third of the world"s people don"t have enough clean water.（世界上三分之一的人没有足够的干净水饮用）
7. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. （污染严重）
8. Something must be done to stop the pollution. （必需采取措施制止污染了）
9. 们的责任
垃圾方面现象和具体的做法
10 Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.（城市里人均每天制造垃圾1.8公斤）
11 If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish.
若人人造出那么多的垃圾，早晚有一天我们可能会生活在充满垃圾的世界
12 Some people 13 I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.建议把垃圾放
进分门别类的垃圾箱或纸袋里，We should not throw/ drop litter onto the ground。（扔垃圾） 14 Recycle useful rubbish.（回收有用的垃圾） Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,
paper, bottles, and so on. It helps to protect the environment in this way.（用这种方式有助于环保）. We must pick up some rubbish（捡垃圾）and throw it into a dustbin。扔到垃圾箱里
15 We should not spit （吐痰）in a public place/ cut down the trees。（砍伐树木）
大气/噪音污染现象和具体的做法
16 The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, (最严重的两种污染是。。。) 17 because people can"t live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, neither can animals.
（人类在有污染的大气和水的环境中不能健康的生存，动物也一样）
18 More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.（越来越多的疾病是由于大气污染导致的） 19 I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste
gas. （不应该把脏水直接倒进河里去或产生废气）
20 People are disturbed (或troubled) quite often by kinds of noises.(人们常被各种噪音所干扰) 21 That"s why + 陈述句（那就是。。。的原因） . That"s why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city.（那就是人们宁可住乡村也不愿住城里的原因） 具体该怎样做？
22 rees are very helpful and important for us. We should plant more flowers and
trees。（多栽花植树）
23 We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in
the future.（为了将来生活得更好更健康，我们应该多植树
24 We"d better go on foot or by like instead of by car, （最好以步代 车） because more cars
mean more waste gas. （车辆多意味着产生更多的废气）We should make our world more and more beautiful.
25 I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn"t make terrible noises. （我建议。。。）
若他们非法制造噪音的话）， they will be fined（被罚款）, and we can also produce
26 What"s more, it would be better if,we can go to school on foot or by bike
instead of by car（而且，如果我们以步代车上学就更好了）
27 we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping（ 用布袋
替代塑料袋）and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .(使用纸张的两面)
28 In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment , there will be
less pollution and our lives will be better.（总之，若人人关注环境，污染就会减少，我们生活就会更好）
29 It"s everyone"s duty to love and protect the environment.(关爱环境人人有责) If
everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment,（若人人对环保贡献一份力量）， the world will become much more beautiful.
30 “There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
四．语言学习 典型例句：
1 More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English. (超过4分之3的网络信息是用英文写的) 2 It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.（被…使用） 3 We have a lot of fun in the English class.(愉快) 4 Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。（开心）
5 I hope I can go abroad(出国) one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。
6. My favorite subject is English. But at the very beginning(在最开始的时候), listening
7． So Isuch as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.
8 And I found it really helped a lot. （确实管用）
9 In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. （其实，有更多有用的学好英语的方法）For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.
10 learn English by doing sth.（ 通过…学英语）如：looking up words in a dictionary（查字
典）
11. I know it isn"t easy to learn a foreign language well, but I have some ideas that may help. （学好一门外语不容易，我有一些或许有用的建议）
12 Firstly, it"s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class （课堂认真听讲很重要）and make some notes （做笔记）so that（为了） you can go over your lessons later.（过后复习）
13 Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class.（尽量抓住课堂内外一切机会练习说） Don’t be afraid of making mistakes（别怕犯错误）. What’s more, you’d better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.（安排好时间有规律的学习） 14 Make full use of every chance you have to practice speaking English.(充分利用一切机会说英语)
15 ，and don"t give up(放弃)whenever you meet with difficulty(遇到困难). I"m sure you/I will succeed through(通过…而成功) your/my hard work. （最重要的是，你/我要有自信，无论何时遇到困难都不要放弃。我相信通过你/我的努力一定能成功）
16 I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.（世上无难事只怕有心人）
Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成).
五、兴趣与爱好
1.I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with (或I"m busy with )my study(被…占满了时间，…很忙), I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.
2 .One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years. It can not only kill the time(打发时间), but also, more importantly, help improve my comprehension ability(有助于提高理解能力)and open my eyes. When reading, I canReading Shakespear’s works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.
Reading really
3 Different people, different hobbies. What hobbies do you have? My hobby is singing. It’s a great hobby! . Singing makes me happy when I"m sad. Singing songs can make you clever. I am always singing at home to share each other"s joys and sorrow (悲痛) in our life and to learn many songs. Besides, I can learn English by singing English songs. I really enjoy singing.
It goes without saying that(毫无疑问) there are many different kinds of hobbies and they can not only (不仅) broaden (拓宽) our minds (智力) but also (而且（增加生活的乐趣）
4 My hobby is reading books. When I was seven years old, I books.（对阅读产生了兴趣） I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can 六、写人记事篇 典型例句：
1 …was born in +地点+ in+ 月，年 2…. is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.
3 ….comes from + 地点
4 … has short hair. … is medium build(中等身材)。/ in fact, I"m healthy and strong. 5 At the age of six, he began to do sth.
6 …is outgoing(外向的). Every one likes to talk with him. He gets on well with us.(与…相处融洽) 7 描述老师：He has been teaching in the school for years. …is knowledgeable. He very hard. (工作努力) All of us love to listen to his class because he has a good way to make his lessons interesting. …is kind to us, but very strict with us in our studies. He is patient, too. He is a good teacher and also a good friend. He teaches us English/maths very well. He loves watching football games after work.(下班后). He often helps me with my English.
8 I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to work as a volunteer for the 16 Asian Games.(想做…的志愿者)
9 I have many hobbies, such as drawing, doing sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English. 10 I am proud that I won the first prize in our city’s English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.I(很骄傲在…中获一等奖)
11 If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well. Please replyto me soon(尽快回复我). My telephone number is 0594—1356666.
Yours sincerely
12 回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习， 生活，爱好等方面作出自我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价) th
I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I
篇二:《中考200日冲刺发言稿》
中考200日冲刺发言稿
各位领导、老师、亲爱的同学们：
下午好！
今天是个特殊的日子，因为再过200天，就要迎来一年一度的中考，接受又一个新的挑战。200天就是200次的冲锋，200天就是200次的搏击！
从现在开始，中考的战鼓已擂响。“人生难得几回搏，此时不搏何时搏”!
或许以往的考试你没有重视，或许以往的成绩不够理想。但那只能说明过去。我相信在这最后的200天里，只要你刻苦，梅花香自苦寒来；只要你努力，宝剑锋从磨砺出。同学们，从现在开始，脚踏实地投入复习，利用好每一分钟，每一节课，每一次考试，不断夯实自己的基础，提高自己的能力，勇敢的迎接明年六月的挑战！
同学们！人生是一场比赛，既要有万米长跑的耐力，又要有百米冲刺的速度，在这仅剩的200天内，让我们只争朝夕，一起见证朝阳，沐浴风雨，以信心，以耐力，以压倒一切的劲头，扬起中考直济沧海的风帆，奋勇地向前冲刺！
我们坚信：明年六月的硕果会更加飘香，明年六月的笑脸将更加灿烂。
曹亮利
2011-11-28
篇三:《中考话题作文范文总结》
中考作文出现的常规错误:
1、卷面出现涂改，字迹不工整。
人是情感动物，卷面整洁从某种意义上讲甚至比内容更重要。
无耐心读下去，势必影响得分。
不超过20秒，评分12以下。 即使有再华丽的辞藻也是徒劳。
2. 中考作文也不是你新句型的练兵场，是关乎你前途命运的一次大考。所以务必确保自己写上的每一句话都是正确的。不拿中考作生僻表达的试验田。
3. 不是语文作文，更不是演讲稿，不需要你自由发挥，感慨万千！
4.细节问题：
1）三无：无段落、无结构、无明显主题
2）语法错误太多
大量明显拼写、语法错误是分数“毒药”
最常出的错误就是：
名词复数、介词缺失、句子结构混乱（单三/时态）。
5. 细节问题：提示词不理解，没有全部用到
2008年是有中考以来第一次出现夹叙夹议的文体，因此出题老师已经尽力将所有能给
之提示悉数奉上，只要按部就班按照中文句子和提示词将句子翻译出来即可。可惜有的同学并不领情，依然故我，舍提示词于不顾，非要尝试长难句。殊不知大智若愚，大巧若拙这个道理
作文提分我能做什么？
明确作文新趋势：
o 提示
o 提示作文也称之为提供材料，它要求根据汉语意思和英语提示词语，写出
意思连贯、符合逻辑的英语文段。这种提示已将所要叙述的事情列出，并且有的提示给出了英语词汇、句型，只是要求学生根据所给的提示，利用合理的想像，运用一定的语言逻辑，使用正确的语法和句法，将整篇的文字用英语表达出来。
o
1.根据题目要求列出写作提纲，打草稿。
切忌直接在卷面上写作文，写作前要先构思文章的主旨，段落，时态。
1）首先，应认真阅读汉语和提示，理解写作要求；将相关组合起来。
2）明确时态，理顺思路，
根据提示的内容，确定时态、人称，在此基础上，确定适当的词汇、句型。
3）写作内容：写人就要从外貌、性格、爱好、年龄、职业、心理活动和人物相关的主
要事件等角度考虑；写事（经历）要交代时间、地点、人物、事情发生的顺序等，提建议用建议句型 另外，注意应用文的格式，如信件E-mail等。
4）写完草稿后，要仔细阅读全文，看文章是否扣题，是否涵盖全部要点，单词拼写是
否准确，有无语法错误，草稿修改好后，抄写在试卷上，抄写时字体要规范整洁。
试卷上务必不要出现大段的涂抹、勾画。
2. 选用自己熟练掌握的句子组织语言。设计好文章的开头和结尾，结构层次要清晰，可按题目的要点分段，并有适当的过渡。
1) 句型为王 句子是表达完整含义的最小单位。
o 自造句+ 模板句
o 考试中尽量使用见过/背过的句式和短语，注意中表达的差异，避免使用中式英
文。我们在课本中学过的句式都可使用在作文中，
o 如：It is … for sb to do sth.
o It is necessary for us to make a plan for our study.
o It is a good habit for us to exercise every day because it can help us
o keep in good health.
个人观点：I hink…；I believe…;In my opinion，…I prefer to do sth rather than
do sth because…I等，我们可在原句型的基础上举一反三利用所
知识准确的表达出自己的观点。
2）另外在适宜的情况下也可使用一些平时积累的很经典的句子，等起到画龙点睛的作用。
o Do well and have well
o Practice makes perfect
o 但求无过，用熟不用生
3）巧润色，细检查。
学会使用过渡词，避免重复使用同样的短语和句型，在需要的地方加上表示转折、因果、并列、比较、时间顺序的过渡词或短语，使文章更加自然、流畅，也会使文章增色不少。
o 临场检查六注意
o 一篇优秀的应符合以下要求：
o 1.审题争取，要素齐全（不全，降档）
o 2.单词拼写错误，语法时态及句子结构错误是否影响了内容的准确性。
o 3.能否使用恰当的关联词或者复合句使文段内容完整，层次清楚。
o 4.运用丰富的词语和句子，增加句子的多样性
o 5.句子开头大写及句尾的标点符号。{中考小结作文200}.
o 6.卷面是否整洁。
考前总结常犯错误
o 小提示：
o 1.不会表达，另辟蹊径。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办
法，化难为易，化繁为简。
o 2.小词大用。汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在中常可用一些常用词来
表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中有用：take，have，get，make，come，go，do，see，show，happy，nice，kind，help等。
o 3.注意使用复合句。
中考作文归类总结范文：
第一大类提建议：
Beginnings:
i. There are many things you can do to help you…
ii. I’m sorry to hear that. I would like to help you deal with your
iii.
iv.
Engdings:
o 1. In a word, nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
o 2. I hope to receive your good news.
o 3. I hope you can feel better soon.
o 4. Easier said than done. Let’s start from now.
o 5. I am sure you will…
Structures:
1. You should/could + do—You shouldn’t/couldn’t +do
2. You’d better do… You’d better not do…
3. Why not do…? Why don’t you do…?
4. Why not consider doing …?{中考小结作文200}.
5. You are supposed to do…
6. Don’t do…
7. If I were you, I would do…
8. If possible, I would do
（1）学习 problem. There is nothing serious. I’d like to give you some advice. I know it isn’t easy to… But I have some ideas that may help.
A. how to become a good learner
To be a good leaner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.
First, it's important to get ready for our lessons before class and listen carefully in class. After class, we’d better go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Second, we need to help each other and study in groups. It can not only help us solve problems but also provide us the opportunities to learn to work with others.
Above all, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I hope all of us will become good learners.
B. how to study English well
o say something about how I study English.
o first of all, my listening is poor. I can hardly understand when people talk to me.{中考小结作文200}.
I think that doing lots of listening practice is because I can see the actors say the words
o Then I am afraid to speak in class. My English teacher gave me some advice that helped me a lot. She told me not to be afraid of making mistakes and encouraged me to speak a lot. There is an old saying, “Practice makes perfect.” now my speaking English has improved a lot.
o As for grammar, I sometimes make mistakes in grammar, the best way to study grammar is by taking notes carefully in class.
o in a word, as English is getting more and more important, I decide to learn it harder and better by reading English novels. Hope I’ll do better in learning English.
具体问题：
I can’t understand when people talk to me
I can’t spell some English words.
I read very slowly.
I make mistakes in grammar.
I am afraid to speak in class, because I think my classmates might laugh at me.
I could hardly understand the teacher when she talked in class.
阐述困难的句型：
first of all, My … is poor. /I can hardly do…
Later on, It’s difficult for me to…
Also, I don’t know how to …
Next, I make mistakes in doing…
/ I sometimes worry about making mistakes when I speak English out loud.
And, I find doing… is difficult for me.
补充学习英语的方法：
listen to tapes ,watch English movies,join an English club,speak to friends in English
have conversations with friends,read the textbook,read English newspapers/magazines make flashcards, memorize words of pop songs, find a pen pal, work with friends
ask teacher for help, study with a group, study English by using it.
学习谚语：
o Just as an old saying goes, ‘….’
o Nothing is impossible/difficult if you put your heart into it.
o Where there is a will, there is a way.
o Action speaks louder that words.
o Practice makes perfect.
o No pains, no gains.
o Little by little, one goes far
o The more you learn, the better you will be.
(2) 健康
A. 睡眠方面的建议
Please don’t worry. I’m sorry to hear that you have many problems. I would like to provide you with some suggestions that may help you. goes, “ Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” So that you’ll not only have a good rest but also sleep with a good quality.
a cup of milk before going to bed instead of drinking a cup of tea? In my opinion, it’s good for your health.
I hope you’ll sleep as sweetly as a baby. And I am looking forward to your great changes.!
B. 面对H1N1，我们可以做什么
Please don’t be afraid of H1N1. There are many things we can do to stay away from it. Here are a few. A healthy lifestyle can be very effective. Just as an old saying goes, “ Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” We should have enough sleep because it can give us more energy.
take exercise regularly to make our body strong. having a balanced/ healthy diet? I think we should eat more vegetables and fruits. Just as an old saying goes, ‘An apple a day keeps a doctor away.’ Also, stay away from food with too much sugar or salt! It can not only help us lose weight but also help us keep fit.
we should wash our hands more often and we shouldn’t touch our eyes and noses with our dirty hands. The last but the most important thing is to open the window as often as possible to let fresh air in.
Finally, if we catch a cold or have a fever, go to see a doctor in time and ask him for some useful advice. There is nothing serious. Preventing H1N1 is possible if we put your heart into it.
健康方面的谚语：
Just as an old saying goes, ‘….’
There is nothing more important than health.
The first wealth is health.
An apple a day keeps a doctor away.
Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy wealthy and wise.”
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作, 不玩耍, 聪明小伙也变儍。
(3) 环保
A. save water节水
The earth is so dry that not only the people but also the plants and animals are short of water. It’s very difficult for people to make a living and so it’s dangerous for their lives. Water is important in our life and everyone has the duty to save every drop of water
For example, First, We can take a shorter shower because it is not necessary for us to use so much water. Second,We can turn off the shower when we wash our hair.what’s more, We can collect enough used waste water to sweep the floor or water the flowers.
In a word, If we don’t save water now, the last drop of water in the earth will be our
tear!I’ll keep doing them and try my best to save more water. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.
B. save energy节能、低碳
important
篇四:《中考考场作文指导2》
自负的学生用很“无所谓”态度的默认老师的看法！因为老师不是用“你是不是在哪里抄的？”的疑问
问学生！下课后学生把写作文的那几张稿纸扔进了垃圾堆里。有好几年了。现在这学生在上大学还记得
这件事。老师你或许不记得这事了，但我却未曾忘记。再平凡的人也有艺术细胞，也能写出好的作文。
曾经的学生(2011-05-12)
曾经有个学生很努力很认真的完成了老师布置的作文。他满心欢喜的期待文章能够被录入老师整理的学
生优秀文章小册子！文章确实写得很好，老师在任教的两个班里都当堂念给了学生听。可是由于这学生
从来没有写出这般思想境界的文章，极大的落差让老师觉得这是在哪里抄的并且在课堂上以中等偏上的
确定口吻说那个一定是在哪里抄来的。
任何一个学生的智力都是相当的，任何一个人的潜能都是无可估量的，老师从来不怀疑这一点，对你也
不会例外。
""夏老师回应
【如何让考场作文能得高分】
作文要想得高分，一句话，就得有闪光点。