【 – 初中作文】
看图作文看鸟去(一)
看图作文看鸟去(二)
妈妈的爱
天下所有的母亲都爱自己的孩子,我的妈妈也不例外。她和其他的母亲一样,温柔、慈爱。
一次,我在学校里突然感到脚火辣辣地疼,妈妈接到了刘老师打来的电话,啥也没顾,跑到了学校。我的脚疼得厉害,走路已经是不行的了,妈妈什么也没说,背起我就往医院跑。
来到医院,医生给我做了检查、开了药,这时妈妈才发现,我已经在她的怀抱中睡着了。正当妈妈轻手轻脚地准备离开医院时,我醒了。“怎么?睡醒了?在睡一会儿吧?!”妈妈亲切地问。
“没什么!我不睡了。”我回答到。
妈妈听到了这样的回答,才放了心。其实,妈妈知道,我的病还没好,我一直发着高烧。她背上我,艰难地一步一步往前走。汗水湿透了她的衣裳,蚊子围着她打转,妈妈却一直没有停下脚步。
我知道,这么艰苦的事,一个弱女子是做不到的!但是,我的妈妈做到了。回家后不久,我就睡着了。这时的我,高烧还没有退。
妈妈为我熬好了汤、炒好了菜,我却一点儿食欲也没有。妈妈没有生气,只是一口一口地喂我饭吃。 后来,我的病终于好了!妈妈流下了欣慰的泪水。
植 树
一年一度的植树节到了!
老师对小朋友说:“今天,大家一起去公园植树吧!”同学们有的提着水桶,有的扛着树苗,有的拿着铲子,兴高采烈地来到公园。
开始植树了,同学们先用铲子挖了一个又大又深的洞。然后,拿起小树苗小心翼翼地放进泥土里。最后,同学们从小河边提来一桶又一桶的水,让小树喝个够。
小树苗终于种好了。小朋友和小树苗在阳光下快活地成长!
看图作文——给小树穿冬衣
想想说说:1、在寒风中的小树是怎么样的?2、小朋友们怎么给小树穿衣服?3、给小树穿好冬衣后小朋友们心里怎么样
看图作文——跳楼梯
想想说说:1、军军跳楼梯危险吗?2、当你发现有同学在跳楼梯时,应该怎么做? 作文训练:【看图作文二】
看图作文:请同学们认真观察下面的图片,看看图画里的两个小朋友在干什么?写成一个生动的小故事,字数120左右.
作文训练:【看图作文三】
作文要求:仔细观察下面的图,看画面里有谁,他们在干什么?写一篇100字左右的作文.
小学生看图作文:送老奶奶回家
星期天,小刚和小军写完作业出家门玩打仗的游戏。小刚和小军手里拿着棍子正在追跑,前面走来一位刚买菜回来的老奶奶。
看图作文看鸟去(三)
看图作文的方法
看图作文就是根据图画的内容作文。
一、要学会看图,看图的方法是:
1、看“全”,就是统观全画,看图上画了些什么,它们有什么联系;不要遗漏画面的内容。如果话的是一件事,就要看这幅画是不是告诉了事件发生的时间、地点、原因、经过、结果及事件中的人物,从而掌握图画的主要内容。
2、看“细”,就是在看“全”的基础上仔细观察图画的各个局部情况,看图画中有什么物品、人物。这些人物各在干什么,人物的动作、表情怎样,人物之间有什么关系等,从而进一步理解图画的主要内容。
3、看“深”,就是深入理解图画所表示的意思。要根据人物的神态、表情等,设想他们会想些什么,说些什么,把“静”的画面看成“动”的,把画中的事物和人物看成“活”的,从而深刻地理解图画主要内容和它所要表达的中心思想。
在“三看”的同时,还应联系图画的题目或其它的文字说明,把图画和文字结合起来看和想,这样就能更好地理解图画的主要内容,写出符合要求的文章来。
二、写的时候要注意几点:
1、抓住图的中心意思写。
2、看单幅图作文,要合理想象,补充画外情节。单幅图画仅仅反映了整个事情的一个场面,说明了一瞬间的情景,这就得靠想象来补充画面上没有展示出来的情节。应借图画提供的某个场面,想象出事情的发生、经过、结果;借助图画提供的景物,想象出环境、气氛等等,使文章的内容具体、生动。当然,想象必须围绕图画表达的中心进行,必须从生活实际出发,做到自然、合理、得当。
3、看多幅图作文,要进行联系、比较,把事情叙述完整。多幅图的每幅图都表现了一个情节,图与图之间联系紧密,这就需要把一幅幅图串连起来,在头脑中形
成一个完整的故事。要找到事情发生的线索,再按照单幅图的写法,一幅幅地描述,把事情写完整。在写的过程中,要根据画面的特点,分清主次,做到详略得当。还要写好开头、结尾,注意过度、照应,使文章首尾连贯。
看图作文看鸟去(四)
看图作文看鸟去(五)
看图作文看鸟去(六)
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漫画作文讲解
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漫画作文、图片作文写作步骤:
读图—1.仔细观察图片 2. 认真阅读提示句子
解意— 联系生活,辨明褒贬,反映现象
谋篇— Part I —
Part II —
Part III —
图画描写 (4-5句)
(过渡句)反映现象(1句) –原因或后果(4-5句)
个人看法 (解决方法)(2-3点)
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漫画作文谋篇——三步走
拿到漫画类作文,首先精读文字部分,确定写作主题,其次根据中文提示,按照“描
述图片”“联系生活”“个人见解”三步走战略来谋篇。
1.紧扣漫画主题,描述图片
(.抓住画面有效信息,合理发挥想象
尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构
确立人称、时态)
2、由图画到生活
(特点:把握漫画的寓意,揭示事件的本质或分析问题产生的原因) 3.个人见解 提出对策
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Part 1 Describe the picture
As is vividly shown in the picture,
As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above,..
As we can see in the picture
The picture is trying to tell us that
In the picture, there are/is (are) doing
The picture above is about
Let’s look at the picture above/first.
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From the picture we can see a cat standing by a water pipe that is pouring waste water into the river. Obviously the cat represents the government official who monitors the
environmental protection. When he is asked why the water is so dirty, he replies that the more developed the economy, the dirtier the water.
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Practise !
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Practise
As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a student is trying his best to
reach the full score of important subjects including English, maths, physics, and Chinese while neglecting the more important aspects such as
psychological quality and moral standards. This drawing mirrors a common social phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact
thought-provoking.
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As is shown in the picture, a woman carrying a child is standing on the bus, struggling to keep a balance. The people sitting on the seats pretend to look out of the windows, wearing an indifferent expression on the face, which leaves the woman helpless.
As is betrayed in the drawing above, standing in the middle of the bus is a mother carrying a child, who is ignored by the other passengers seated on their own seats.
There is a picture which shows us a true scene on a bus.What we can see from the picture is that a mother with a baby in her arms is standing dangerously while all the people on the bus ignore her as if nothing is associated with themselves.
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In the picture, all the seats are ________. A mother carrying her litter baby ___________ unsteadily, _______ to keep her balance. _____________, a young girl is sitting and looking out of the window, __________not to see them.________________, all the other passengers alike are __________________to such a scene.
occupied
is standing
trying
Beside her
pretending
At the same time
turning a blind eye
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Part 2 Interpret the picture
必背常用过渡句
It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed
everywhere.
The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of
The picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common
phenomenon among
This picture reflects a common phenomenon that
This phenomenon is especially common in
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The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thought-provoking.
What the picture wants to stress is that some people in society are —–.
There’s no denying that the picture shows a real phenomenon in society.
This picture is thought-provoking and what it reflects is an increasing phenomenon in our society, one that should be given serious thought to.
This has become a common phenomenon in our country, which we should give serious thoughts to.
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Part II : 反应现象,原因
看图作文看鸟去(七)
四级看图作文模版
模板一:
As what is vividly shown in the picture,…/It is vividly depicted/described in the cartoon/picture/chart/pie chart/table that …
The cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that quite a few students undervalue the importance of learning basic skills these days. Does that mean … are useless? Definitely not…As an old saying goes like this,…Only if…As an ancient Chinese saying goes,……
With all was said above, we can draw a conclusion that…Thus…
范文: The Importance of the Basic Learning Skills
many college students have the same doubt as the one in the picture that is whether that stuff will be outdated when they graduated and began to work. That stuff, as we can see from the picture, refers to the basic learning skills such as mathematics we learned when we were in primary school. It also reveals a phenomenon in the college that there are a great number of students, who question the practicability of their subjects because they are too simple to be helpful with their occupation afterwards. ,which are of vital importance. Mastering these basic skills we can grasp the fundamental
another word, do you think it is feasible to let a person learn English without learning
a, b, c?“ A road of thousand miles towards the success begins with the first step.”
are quite essential to both our whole study and the work we will take after graduation. we should pay more attention to the basic subjects and master the ability required at the further career.
模板二:
From the cartoon, we can clearly see that…This cartoon reminds me of a Chinese saying:…However, most people always attach great importance to…
As far as I am concerned, it is necessary and important to…On the one hand,…. On the other hand,…
Taking all these into account, we can easily notice that it is reasonable to do…“…” … once said.
范文: The Importance of Doing Small Things
the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. If you don't clean your room, then how can you big, but neglect small things. foundation for our future development. There is no doubt that one of the greatest differences between success and failure is the importance placed on little things.
can be big.
things before big ones. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle 模板三:
It should be generally acknowledged that……Just as the drawing shown above,… There is no denying that people can get a lot benefits from…To begin with,.. …What is more,……In addition,……
In brief /In short, …is indispensable in…, therefore,…Facing the coming challenges in the days ahead, we need to……
范文: The Importance of Reading Literature
human civilization and wisdom, especially by our teachers who always ask their gives a literary work to her student, saying: “Just think of it as if you’re reading a long text-message.” 经典. Classic literature plays a significant role not only in preserving the essence of great minds but also in enhancing the quality of one’s life. experiencing things we won’t have the chance to do as well as lives we won’t be able to enjoy. happened in the past, still carry some useful information and implication for our daily literature can greatly ease our tiredness, making us feel easy and quiet. ,it is wrong to consider classics as an outdated matter because it still has many important functions and influence on our society and our lives. Classics are a kind of treasure财富
should give enough attention to them. And I advocate that all of us should try our best to read some of them. 模板四:
As is clearly shown in the chart,…It is obvious that…we can observe that…
Several reasons can account for this phenomenon. To begin with, compared with those who have comparatively lower education degree,…In addition,…For example,…
As for me,…On the one hand,…On the other hand,…In brief,…
范文: to each other. well-educated people owning Doctoral degree and Master's degree have a higher salary than those who have a relatively lower degree. level of education you receive, the higher income you get.
people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and resourceful social network, all of which are essential to a high-income job. the higher one’s education degree is the bigger