【 – 初中作文】
篇一:《美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模板(第1期)无老师原创》
美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模板（第1期）无老师原创
Barack Hussein Obama 注定是一位传奇的美国总统，在他的任期之内，战争继续，但是却获得了诺贝尔和平奖。在他的任期之内美国经济从重创之中恢复，但是美国人们依旧群情激奋。应该这一切都与Barack Hussein Obama非凡的演讲天赋有着无穷的联系，但是人总是喜欢浅尝辄止，我们总喜欢仰望伟人，但是从来没有想到为人身上其实也有很多我们可以学习与借鉴的。
从今天开始，无老师就带着每一位考友探寻奥巴马演讲深处的秘密。奥巴马的演讲逻辑清晰，排比句众多，用词准确，绝对是我们每一个人作文模仿之佳品。无老师就本着尊重原文本身含义，尽量减少个人对其句意的修饰，同时最大程度上方便每一位考友使用为目的，尽最大努力，对奥巴马的众多演讲稿开刀，直接取出热腾腾的第一手华丽句子，来给我们每一位考友做成模板，直接使用。
今天是第1期，无老师会继续做下去，对于写作的追求是无穷无尽的，因为总有令人感动的句子出现，让我们欲罢不能。文章编辑方式为第一段是原文，第二段是制造完成的模板。为了保证考友们不会把模板理解错误，以及保证句意的理解，无老师把原文也放在了这里，而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的含义，然后再使用模板，绝对是事半功倍的选择！
If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our Founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.
If there is anyone out there who still doubts that XXXXX(论点一) is a XXXXX where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our XXXXX（论点二） is XXXXX in our time, who still questions the power of our XXXXX（论点三）, this essay is my answer.
用于最后一段结尾，进行总结
It’s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled — (cheers) — Americans who sent a message to the world that we have never been just a collection of individuals or a collection of red states and blue states; we are and always will be the United States of America. (Cheers, applause.)
It’s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight,
disabled and not disabled, the people who sent a message to the
questionnaire conducted by the XXXXX team of Stanford university; all of these concluded the same result that XXXXX（观点）.
用于举例
It’s the answer that — that led those who’ve been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about what we can achieve to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. It’s been a long time coming, but tonight, because of what we did on this day, in this election, at this defining moment, change has come to America. (Cheers, applause.)
It’s the answer that — that led those who’ve been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about XXXXX（正面观点） to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. It’s been a long time coming, at this defining moment, change has come to our cultural.
最后一段，正面观点（段落开始结尾均可）
I want to thank my partner in this journey, a man who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets of Scranton, and rode with on the train home to Delaware, the vice
president-elect of the United States, Joe Biden. (Cheers, applause.) People want to thank XXXXX（某人) in their XXXXX（做了什么）, a man/woman who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets, and rode with on the train home to tiny village to XXXXX（做了什么辛苦工作）.
具体例子
And to my campaign manager, David Plouffe — (cheers, applause) — the unsung hero of this campaign who built the best — (cheers) — the best political campaign I think in the history of the United States of America — (cheers, applause) — to my chief strategist, David Axelrod — (cheers, applause) — who has been a partner with me every step of the way, to the best campaign team ever assembled in the history of politics — (cheers) — you made this happen, and I am forever grateful for what you’ve sacrificed to get it done. (Cheers, applause.)
And to my XXXXX, XXXXX（某人） who has been a partner with me every step of XXXXX某个过程, to the best XXXXX（职位，比如说领队啊） ever assembled in the history of XXXXX（某事） who made this happen, and XXXXX（某人）will be forever grateful for what XXXXX have sacrificed to get it done.
描述某特定人或者人群的具体例子
I was never the likeliest candidate for this office. We didn’t start with much money or many endorsements. Our campaign was not hatched in the halls of Washington; it began in the backyards of Des Moines and the living rooms of Concord and the front porches of Charleston. It was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause. (Cheers, applause.) It grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation’s apathy — (cheers) — who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep. It drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of Americans who volunteered and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the Earth. This is your victory. (Cheers, applause.)
XXXXX（某事） was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause.
具体例子
XXXXX（某事） grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation’s apathy who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep.
具体例子
XXXXX（某事） drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of XXXXX（某人） who volunteered and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the Earth. 具体例子
以上的三个例子，一定要单独使用，千万不要放在一段之内使用。
Now, I know you didn’t do this just to win an election, and I know you didn’t do it for me. You did it because you understand the enormity of the task that lies ahead. For even as we celebrate tonight, we know the challenges that tomorrow will bring are the greatest of our lifetime: two wars, a planet in peril, the worst financial crisis in a century. Even as we stand here tonight, we know there are brave Americans waking up in the deserts of Iraq and the mountains of Afghanistan to risk their lives for us. There are mothers and fathers who will lie awake after their
children fall asleep and wonder how they’ll make the mortgage or pay their doctors’ bills or save enough for their child’s college education. For even as all reasons listed, we know the challenges that opponents will bring are the greatest of our front.
最后一段开头
There’s new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.
If XXXXX, there’s new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.
用于新建XXXXX将为我们带来的好处。
MR. OBAMA: There will be setbacks and false starts. There are many who won’t agree with every decision or policy I make as president, and we know the government can’t solve every problem. But I will always be honest with you about the challenges we face. I will listen to you, especially when we disagree. And above all, I will ask you to join in the work of remaking this nation the only way it’s been done in America for 221 years — block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand. There will be setbacks and defect. There are many who won’t agree with every decision in this essay, and, of course, the XXXXX（某人） can’t solve every problem. But XXXXX（某人） will always be honest with you about the challenges you face.
结尾段的开头
篇二:《小学生写人作文：咱们班的“奥巴马”》
小学生写人作文：咱们班的“奥巴马”
小学生写人作文：咱们班的“奥巴马”
“出门一星期啦，同学们想我了没？”
“没有——”齐刷刷的声音透着狡黠，调皮的哄笑声接踵而至。
“你们这帮没良心的！”讲台上是一声无奈的笑骂。
“我们想——奥巴马了！”“哈哈哈""”台上台下笑成一片。
不用说，讲台上这位便是咱们的数学老师——马老师啦！那双炯炯有神的眼睛早已眯成了一条缝，洁白的牙齿与高架在鼻梁上的篮框眼镜在阳光下熠熠生辉。精干的短发，微黑的皮肤，加上厚嘴唇儿，还真与奥巴马有几分神似！
说起咱们的“奥巴马”呀，他从来都是引领我们学校穿衣时尚的“潮男”。T恤配牛仔，毛衣配马夹，随意搭配出一身休闲风格。要是哪天换成衬衫和笔挺的西装，那准是要外出上公开课啦！尽管已是寒冬腊月，但臃肿的羽绒服好像从来都与“奥巴马”无缘。上课铃声响起，进门的总是那个敞开着夹克，露出胸前时尚的蓝绿色格子毛衣的“奥巴马”。虽然帅气“冻人”，但“奥巴马”依然满面红光，拿着粉笔在讲台前“冲锋陷阵”，哈，不折不扣的超级奥巴马！
潮男“奥巴马”不仅穿衣时尚，就连教学方法也力求创新。期末复习了，别的班级在题海中苦战的时候，我们却在跟着“奥巴马”画“大脑神经图”。没搞错吧？但这看似复杂的图上，却蕴含着无穷的奥秘。这回的主题是“分数”，经过四人学习小组的讨论，它被划分为“分数的意义”“分数乘法”“分数除法”“分数四则混合运算”几个知识点，被圈进了一个个“知识泡泡”里，每个泡泡又被细细地划分，百分数、倒数""“大脑神经图”把数学书上的知识点紧密地联系在一起。“奥巴马”胸有成竹地带领我们在这些“知识泡泡”中穿梭，一道道出自他手的“经典习题”在黑板上一字排开，同学们上台板演，“奥巴马”针对错题讲解，一气呵成，让我们豁然开朗。
当同学们的笔尖在课作本上忙完，“奥巴马”不紧不慢地开始讲述数学家的故事，菲尔兹、阿基米德、陈景润""古今中外，数学家那些事儿，“奥巴马”如数家珍。
突然，他像想起了什么似的，收起了刚刚高谈阔论时那得意的笑容，神秘地望着我们：“同学们，你们有谁愿意来做一张手抄报，就用这些数学家的名字来命名，比方
说菲尔兹奖，每次考100分的同学都可以记在手抄报上的获奖名单里，就这么简单！”没几天，教室后面便陆陆续续地贴上了同学们的原创手抄报——鲁班奖、阿基米德奖、陈景润奖""“奥巴马”望着教室后满满的手抄报乐呵呵地露出了大板牙。
咱们班的“奥巴马”，总有数不清的新花招，引领了六4班自主学习的新潮流。“奥巴马”，总是出手不凡嘛！
篇三:《2012年最新版美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模板》
如果谈起来作文，很多名师就会跟你谈一谈“词、句、段、篇、章”，这个时候，你的瞌睡虫也就马上袭来了。太多的理论实在是枯燥不堪，无老师打破传统，直接引取万人瞩目的奥巴马演讲，原汁原味的为各位考友还原英语的真实面貌。把枯燥的理论Pia飞到天边，各位考友可以直接模仿美国总统奥巴马的最新演讲，让自己的作文分数一飞冲天！
无老师文章编辑方式为第一段是原文，第二段是制造完成的模板。为了保证考友们不会把新托福模板理解错误，以及保证句意的理解，无老师把原文也放在了这里，而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的含义，然后再使用模板，绝对是事半功倍的选择！
Think about the America within our reach: a country that leads the world in educating its people; an America that attracts a new generation of high-tech manufacturing and high-paying jobs; a future where we’re in control of our own energy; and our security and prosperity aren’t so tied to unstable parts of the world.
Think about the XXXXX within our reach: XXXXX that leads the world in XXXXX; XXXXX that attracts a new generation of XXXXX; a future where we’re in control of our own XXXXX; and XXXXX.
超棒的用在开头段，表明多方的观点。
They understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to a story of success that every American had a chance to share: the basic American promise that if you worked hard, you could do well enough to raise a family, own a home, send your kids to college, and put a little away for retirement.
They understood they were part of something larger, that they were
contributing to a story of success that XXXXX: the basic XXXXX promise that if XXXXX, you could do well enough to XXXXX, XXXXX, XXXXX, and XXXXX. 表明XXXXX的作用，以及好处。{奥巴马作文}.
We can either settle for a country where a shrinking number of people do really well, while a growing number of Americans barely get by, or we can restore an economy where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.
We can either settle for a country where XXXXX, while a growing number of XXXXX, or we can restore an society where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.
【超好的用于公平的主题】用于论证段，谈及这么做的好处。
And it plunged our economy into a crisis that put millions out of work,
saddled us with more debt, and left innocent, hard-working Americans holding the bag.
And it plunged our XXXXX into a crisis that put millions XXXXX, saddled us with more XXXXX, and left innocent, hard-working XXXXX in the depth of despair.
用于论证段，将主题进行扩展，论证做XXXXXX的坏处
Building a world-class transportation system is part of what made us an economic superpower.
Building a world-class XXXXX is part of what made us an XXXXX superpower. 写得十分到位的，用句论证段或者首尾段，讲做XXXXX的好处
And I want to cut through the maze of confusing training programs so that from now on people like Jackie have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.
And XXXXX want to build up the plan of XXXXX so that from now on people like XXXXX have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.
太赞了，简单易用，用于论证段，将主题进行扩展，讲做XXX的好处。
For less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on education each year, we’ve convinced nearly every state in the country to raise their standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.
For less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on education each year, we’ve convinced nearly every XXXXX in the country to raise their standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.
【用于教育主题】令人感动啊！无老师超喜欢的！只需修改一处！讲发展教育的好处 We also know that when students don’t walk away from their education, more of them walk the stage to get their diploma.
XXXXX also know that when XXXXX don’t walk away from their XXXXX, more of them walk the stage to get their XXXXX.
用于任意一段，将做XXXXX事情带来的好处。
After all, innovation is what America has always been about.
After all, XXXXX is what human has always been about.
用于3-4段，提出自己的分论点。
And, by the way, it was public research dollars — over the course of 30 years — that helped develop the technologies to extract all this natural gas out of shale rock, reminding us that government support is critical in helping businesses get new energy ideas off the ground.
And, by the way, it was XXXXX — over the course of 30 years — that helped develop the technologies to XXXXX, reminding us that XXXXX is critical in helping XXXXX.
很有历史感的一句话，用于任意一段，讲做XXXXX的事情的长期的好处
But I will not walk away from the promise of clean energy.
But I will not walk away from XXXXX.
用于任意一段，表示坚决支持XXXXX
It’s time to end the taxpayer giveaways to an industry that rarely has been more profitable and double down on a clean energy industry that never has been more promising.
It’s time to end the XXXXX to XXXXX that rarely has been more profitable and double down on XXXXX that never has been more promising.
太赞了！亲一口先！用于最后一段，表明反对XXXXX。
在这里，无老师请各位考友注意，这些内容是特别为23分以上，有很好的鉴赏能力，准备冲击作文满分的考友准备的素材，当你在20分以下的时候，请在专人指导下使用，否则很容易强撸灰飞烟灭！
篇四:《托福独立写作模板：奥巴马的演讲》
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托福独立写作模板：奥巴马的演讲
摘要： 托福独立写作模板：奥巴马的演讲，如果谈起来作文，很多名师就会跟你谈一谈“词、句、段、篇、章”，这个时候，你的瞌睡虫也就马上袭来了。太多的理论实在是枯燥不堪，打破传统，直接引取万人瞩目的奥巴马演讲，原汁原味的为各位考友还原英语的真实面貌。把枯燥的理论Pia飞到天边，各位考友可以直接模仿美国总统奥巴马的最新演讲，让自己的作文分数一飞冲天!
文章编辑方式为第一段是原文，第二段是制造完成的模板。为了保证考友们不会把新 托福 模板理解错误，以及保证句意的理解，把原文也放在了这里，而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的含义，然后再使用模板，绝对是事半功倍的选择!{奥巴马作文}.
Think about the America within our reach: a country that leads the world in educating itspeople; an America that attracts a new generation of high-tech manufacturing and high-payingjobs; a future where we’re in control of our own energy; and our security and prosperityaren’t so tied to unstable parts of the world.
Think about the XXXXX within our reach: XXXXX that leads the world in XXXXX; XXXXXthat attracts a new generation of XXXXX; a future where we’re in control of our own XXXXX;and XXXXX.{奥巴马作文}.
超棒的用在开头段，表明多方的观点。
They understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to astory of success that every
American had a chance to share: the basic American promise that ifyou worked hard, you could do well enough to raise a family, own a home, send your kids tocollege, and put a little away for retirement.
They understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to astory of success that XXXXX: the basic XXXXX promise that if XXXXX, you could do wellenough to XXXXX, XXXXX, XXXXX, and XXXXX.
表明XXXXX的作用，以及好处。
We can either settle for a country where a shrinking number of people do really well, while agrowing number of Americans barely get by, or we can restore an economy where everyonegets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set ofrules.
We can eith